2024年高考英语读后续写提分技巧ppt课件 专题1 巧用副词助力读后续写

这是一份2024年高考英语读后续写提分技巧ppt课件 专题1 巧用副词助力读后续写，共20页。PPT课件主要包含了silently，asleep，However，Sadly等内容，欢迎下载使用。
副词有修饰性副词和连接性副词(句子副词)两类，可用于修饰动词、形容词、句子等。修饰性副词可表示程度、方式等，使所要表达的情感更加鲜明、强烈，使句子更具表现力和感染力。连接性副词的运用，能使句间的衔接更紧密，逻辑更清晰，所表达的含义简洁明了。掌握以下3个副词使用的技巧，能给读后续写增添亮点。
技巧一：副词赋能动作描写，使表达更具活力1. Arriving at Scut's hme, the ld wman eagerly rang the drbell. 一到达Scut家, 那个年老的女人就急切地按门铃。2. “My mther has taught me never t accept pay fr a kindness,” he said sincerely. 他真诚地说: “我母亲教导我，施以爱心，不图回报。”
3. “If I had listened t my parents, this wuld never have happened,” I thught silently. 我默默地想：如果我听父母的话, 这就不会发生了。
4. Anxiusly lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. 简在黑暗中不安地躺着, 非常想和汤姆还有她的家人在一起。5. Warmly welcmed by ther classmates, she felt relieved. 当被其他同学热烈地欢迎时, 她松了一口气。
点拨：①用情感副词或方式副词修饰动词，如：gratefully, hpefully, sadly, curiusly, gently, quietly, hurriedly, tightly等，这类副词不仅修饰普通动词，还能修饰描写动作的现在分词和过去分词(例4和例5)。②副词常修饰一些对话和心理动词(例2和例3)，这类动词有：say, shut, ask, think, remind等。
1. Terribly/Quite/Extremely wrried, Mary felt like sitting n pins and needles. 玛丽十分担忧，如坐针毡。2. The ther tw cyclists saw three men threatened by a fierce wlf, abslutely/ cmpletely/ ttally shcked. 另外两个骑行者看到三个男人被一只凶猛的狼威胁着，完全惊呆了。
技巧二：副词增强情感输出，突出画面感
点拨：续写中, 常用程度副词修饰表达人物感受的形容词。
1. But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. 但是再也没有直升机到来，而且天又变黑了。顷刻之间，一阵漆黑笼罩了整个森林。
技巧三：用句子副词衔接,增强行文连贯性
2. When the peple crwded arund Arthur, he seemed quite wrried. Finally, he realized that he had made a mistake. 当所有人围着亚瑟时，他似乎十分担忧。最终，他意识到自己犯了错误。
3. The nearer the helicpter gt, the mre Jane flagged the yellw bluse. Luckily, the helicpter didn't miss her this time. 直升机靠得越近，简挥黄色衬衣挥得越起劲。幸运的是，这次她没有错过这部直升机。
点拨：“时间副词+环境描写”可用于衔接续写的首句，如例1。情感副词也能用于衔接句子，如例3。
拓展：句子副词有表示时间 (immediately, meanwhile, then…)、 顺序 (firstly, finally, eventually, etc.)、递进(mrever, besides, additinally…)、让步(still, anyway…)、转折 (hwever, instead…)、 因果 (therefre, thus, cnsequently…)等意义的副词。
一、用以上所学知识补全或翻译句子。
1. Tears f jy flded her eyes as __________________ (她默默地祈祷), “Thank Yu, Gd.” 2. “She's stlen my watch!”______________(Lee愤怒地说), “It went missing at schl yesterday.”
she prayed
Lee said angrily
3. ______________ (深深地被感动), we appreciated him and felt a sense f warmth. 4. _________________________________ (绝望地站在路边), I was s sad that tears were filled with my eyes.
Deeply mved
Hpelessly standing n the radside
5. My parents sclded me fr _______________________________ (偷偷地跑出房间) but wereals glad that _________________________ (我受伤并不很严重).6. _____________________________________ (完全被吓着), Mac rde his bike as quickly as he culd.
Ttally/Abslutely/Cmpletely frightened
running ut f
the huse secretly
I was nt seriusly injured
7. 我慢慢地走下楼，然后试着漫不经心地走进厨房。8. Desiree激动地挥着双手，她跑向妹妹并紧紧地抱住她。
I went dwnstairs slwly and tried t walk casually int the kitchen.
Excitedly waving her arms, Desiree ran t her yunger sister and hugged her tightly.
9. 突然，天空被乌云笼罩着，就在刹那间, 我们被卷入了可怕的暴风雨中。10. 最终，Kate获得了一等奖。这时, 她感觉阳光亲吻着她的每一寸(inch)肌肤。
Finally, Kate wn the first prize. Meanwhile, she felt the sunshine was kissing every inch f her skin.
Suddenly, the sky was cvered with dark cluds. Immediately, we were caught in a terrible strm.
二、根据情景补全句子或填上恰当的衔接副词。
故事梗概：Jane and her husband, Tm, were ging t chse a spt t camp vernight in the frest. Hwever, Jane had a quarrel with Tm and she walked alne in the frest t find a better spt. Unluckily, she gt lst and missed the helicpter that may rescue her.
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Jane tried t find shelter frm the cld night. But ______________________, she slipped ver and brke her leg. ____________________________(痛苦地行走在森林中), Jane managed t make her way t a rck fr shelter. _______________________(感到十分害怕), Jane stayed wide awake, knwing she might nt be able t get t the lake with a brken leg. “Dn't be afraid. Tm must be searching fr me. And the helicpter will cme back tmrrw,” ___________ _____________ (她坚定地想). __________________ _______(渐渐地，Jane睡着了).
unfrtunately/unluckily
Painfully walking in the frest
Extremely scared/afraid
she thught
determinedly
Gradually, Jane fell
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. She struggled t her feet and headed fr the stream. After having sme berries and stream water, Jane walked slwly t an pen area t wait fr her rescue. ________________________________________________(令她开心的是, 她很快听到直升机的声音). ________________ _________________ (Jane疯狂地挥着她的黄色衬衫) when it came int sight. _______ (令她伤心的是), the helicpter flied away again. __________, sn came the rescue team, tgether with Tm, wh had fund Jane's lcatin frm the helicpter. Jane was saved.
Delightedly/
Jyfully, she sn heard the helicpter
Jane madly waved
her yellw bluse