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这是一份2024年高考英语读后续写提分技巧ppt课件 专题10 心理描写技巧，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了Shame等内容，欢迎下载使用。
心理描写通常指的是人物的内心活动和内心感受。在续写中恰当使用心理描写手段，往往能营造氛围，构建画面感，烘托主旨。特定的情境之下，人物有相应的心理活动和内心感受，切忌生硬照搬背下来的一些语料。掌握以下两方面的高分心理描写技巧，必将极大地助力于读后续写！
技巧一：用高分句型激活人物“感官”。1. At the sight/thught f…, sb… 一看到/想到……, 某人……(1) At the thught f spending anther night in the wild by herself, she felt herself thrwn int a wrld f hpelessness. 一想到又要独自一人在野外度过一个晚上，她感觉自己陷入了完全的绝望当中。
(2) At the sight f the fierce wlf, ne f them frze with terrr/fright, t frightened t mve. 一看到那凶恶的狼，他们中的一个被吓得呆住了，动弹不得。
2. T ne's+情感名词, sb… 令某人……的是，他/她……(1) T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. (2016年10月浙江卷) 令她惊讶的是, 她只看到了一片森林，还有远处积雪覆盖的山顶。
(2) T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. (2016年10月浙江卷) 令她极其高兴的是，她还见到了一片浆果林。
3. With sth+ding/介词短语，sb… (伴随着)……, 某人……(1) With tears welling up in his eyes, the little by slwly fell asleep. 小男孩慢慢睡着了，眼睛里噙满了泪水。(2) With jy n their faces, the children were running after each ther. 孩子们在互相追逐，脸上洋溢着喜悦。
4. Seeing/ Hearing/ Thinking/ Feeling/ Knwing/ Realizing…, sb… 看到/听到/想到/感到/得知……, 某人……(1) Seeing the helicpter verhead, she began t wave her yellw bluse vilently, thinking that she wuld successfully catch the attentin f the peple n the plane. 一看到头顶的直升飞机，她就开始用力挥舞手中的黄色衬衫，想着要成功吸引机上人员的注意力。
(2) Thinking that she had t spend anther night in the wild by herself, she felt herself thrwn int a wrld f hpelessness. 一想到又要独自一人在野外度过一个晚上，她感觉自己陷入了完全的绝望当中。(3) Realizing that her children had understd the way and the true meaning f helping thers, Mrs Meredith felt quite satisfied and prud. 意识到孩子们懂得了帮助人的方法与助人的真正意义，Mrs Meredith很是满足与自豪。
5. 情感类形容词, sb… 感到……,某人……(1) Scared and shcked, Betty hid herself behind the big tree, hlding her breath. Betty既害怕又震惊, 躲在大树后边, 大气都不敢出。(2) Ashamed and self-blamed/cndemned, I pushed the dr pen, ready t sincerely aplgize t my mther. 我感到羞愧又自责，推开门准备真诚地向母亲道歉。
技巧二: 用事物代替人作主语,赋能各项情感。1. 人的身体部位作主语(1) Her heart was as sweet as hney. 她的心里像吃了蜜一样甜。
(2) His eyes twinkled/sparkled/shne with pleasure. 他眼中洋溢着喜悦。(3) Her face lit up/brightened/glwed when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时, 她脸上绽放出光彩。
2. 情感名词作主语(1) Excitement tk my breath away when he brke the news t me I was admitted t the mst famus law university. 他带给我消息说我被最著名的法律大学录取了，我激动不已。
(2) A fld f fear/terrr/fright/anxiety crwded int my mind. 一阵恐惧/焦虑涌上我的心头。(3) A gentle smile spread ver her face. 她脸上荡漾着柔美的微笑。
1. ___________________ (令他吃惊的是), the patient was the very dctr wh saved him 15 years ag. 2. _____________________________ (一看到那熟悉的字体), Kathy culd n lnger cntrl her tears.
用以上所学知识补全或翻译句子。
T his great surprise
Seeing the familiar handwriting
3. ____________________________________ __________________________________________________________(一想到要在自己梦寐以求的大学学习), I culdn't hide my excitement, sharing this news with all my friends at my WeChat. 4. ________________________ (特别疑惑), the little by glanced thrugh the stne-faced (面无表情的) teacher, wh was usually friendly t them.
At the thught f studying in my dream university/Thinking that I wuld study in mydream university
Quite/Extremely cnfused
5. ___________________________ (难过但毫无畏惧), he decided t turn everything rund. 6. ____________________________________ (意识到父亲是多么地爱我), I felt a warmth crwding int my heart. 7. _______ (羞愧) suddenly silenced me.
Sad/Heartbrken but fearless
Realizing hw much my father lved me
8. With _______________ (满眼的欣喜), he watched the bird fly away until it disappeared in the high distance. 9. _______________ (感到激动), she instantly tk ut her phne, eager t tell her friends this unfrgettable experience. 10. __________________ (一阵难过) attacked him as he listened t the news reprt.
jy in his eyes
Feeling excited
A fld f sadness
11. ___________ (她的担忧) gradually disappeared/ faded away when she began t fcus n the best way t attract the attentin f the peple n the helicpters. 12. __________________ (幸福的泪水) streamed/ rlled/flwed dwn her face the mment she hugged her mther.
Tears f happiness
13. _______________________________________ (得知放7天长假的消息), everyne was wild with jy/n the tp f the wrld. 14. _______________(害怕与悔恨) made it difficult fr her t fall asleep.
Knwing the news f the 7-day lng hliday
Fear and regret
15. ___________________________ (看着漆黑的夜空), I began t feel sleepy. 16. 听到交通事故的消息, 她陷入极度悲伤之中。Hearing the news f the traffic accident, she was ttally verwhelmed/cntrlled by sadness/ srrw/grief. 17. 看到面前有两只狗，少年甚是疑惑。Seeing/At the sight f the tw dgs in frnt f him, the teenager felt extremely cnfused.
Lking at the dark night sky
18. 她的母亲脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。(Brilliant smiles作主语)Brilliant smiles appeared/spread n her mther's face. 19. 我转向爸爸，眼睛里满是恐惧。With hrrr/fear in my eyes, I turned t my father. 20. 发现自己有了新的玩伴, 小男孩高兴地跳了起来。Finding that he had a new playmate, the little by jumped with jy.
心理描写通常指的是人物的内心活动和内心感受。在续写中恰当使用心理描写手段，往往能营造氛围，构建画面感，烘托主旨。特定的情境之下，人物有相应的心理活动和内心感受，切忌生硬照搬背下来的一些语料。掌握以下两方面的高分心理描写技巧，必将极大地助力于读后续写！
技巧一：用高分句型激活人物“感官”。1. At the sight/thught f…, sb… 一看到/想到……, 某人……(1) At the thught f spending anther night in the wild by herself, she felt herself thrwn int a wrld f hpelessness. 一想到又要独自一人在野外度过一个晚上，她感觉自己陷入了完全的绝望当中。
(2) At the sight f the fierce wlf, ne f them frze with terrr/fright, t frightened t mve. 一看到那凶恶的狼，他们中的一个被吓得呆住了，动弹不得。
2. T ne's+情感名词, sb… 令某人……的是，他/她……(1) T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. (2016年10月浙江卷) 令她惊讶的是, 她只看到了一片森林，还有远处积雪覆盖的山顶。
(2) T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. (2016年10月浙江卷) 令她极其高兴的是，她还见到了一片浆果林。
3. With sth+ding/介词短语，sb… (伴随着)……, 某人……(1) With tears welling up in his eyes, the little by slwly fell asleep. 小男孩慢慢睡着了，眼睛里噙满了泪水。(2) With jy n their faces, the children were running after each ther. 孩子们在互相追逐，脸上洋溢着喜悦。
4. Seeing/ Hearing/ Thinking/ Feeling/ Knwing/ Realizing…, sb… 看到/听到/想到/感到/得知……, 某人……(1) Seeing the helicpter verhead, she began t wave her yellw bluse vilently, thinking that she wuld successfully catch the attentin f the peple n the plane. 一看到头顶的直升飞机，她就开始用力挥舞手中的黄色衬衫，想着要成功吸引机上人员的注意力。
(2) Thinking that she had t spend anther night in the wild by herself, she felt herself thrwn int a wrld f hpelessness. 一想到又要独自一人在野外度过一个晚上，她感觉自己陷入了完全的绝望当中。(3) Realizing that her children had understd the way and the true meaning f helping thers, Mrs Meredith felt quite satisfied and prud. 意识到孩子们懂得了帮助人的方法与助人的真正意义，Mrs Meredith很是满足与自豪。
5. 情感类形容词, sb… 感到……,某人……(1) Scared and shcked, Betty hid herself behind the big tree, hlding her breath. Betty既害怕又震惊, 躲在大树后边, 大气都不敢出。(2) Ashamed and self-blamed/cndemned, I pushed the dr pen, ready t sincerely aplgize t my mther. 我感到羞愧又自责，推开门准备真诚地向母亲道歉。
技巧二: 用事物代替人作主语,赋能各项情感。1. 人的身体部位作主语(1) Her heart was as sweet as hney. 她的心里像吃了蜜一样甜。
(2) His eyes twinkled/sparkled/shne with pleasure. 他眼中洋溢着喜悦。(3) Her face lit up/brightened/glwed when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时, 她脸上绽放出光彩。
2. 情感名词作主语(1) Excitement tk my breath away when he brke the news t me I was admitted t the mst famus law university. 他带给我消息说我被最著名的法律大学录取了，我激动不已。
(2) A fld f fear/terrr/fright/anxiety crwded int my mind. 一阵恐惧/焦虑涌上我的心头。(3) A gentle smile spread ver her face. 她脸上荡漾着柔美的微笑。
1. ___________________ (令他吃惊的是), the patient was the very dctr wh saved him 15 years ag. 2. _____________________________ (一看到那熟悉的字体), Kathy culd n lnger cntrl her tears.
用以上所学知识补全或翻译句子。
T his great surprise
Seeing the familiar handwriting
3. ____________________________________ __________________________________________________________(一想到要在自己梦寐以求的大学学习), I culdn't hide my excitement, sharing this news with all my friends at my WeChat. 4. ________________________ (特别疑惑), the little by glanced thrugh the stne-faced (面无表情的) teacher, wh was usually friendly t them.
At the thught f studying in my dream university/Thinking that I wuld study in mydream university
Quite/Extremely cnfused
5. ___________________________ (难过但毫无畏惧), he decided t turn everything rund. 6. ____________________________________ (意识到父亲是多么地爱我), I felt a warmth crwding int my heart. 7. _______ (羞愧) suddenly silenced me.
Sad/Heartbrken but fearless
Realizing hw much my father lved me
8. With _______________ (满眼的欣喜), he watched the bird fly away until it disappeared in the high distance. 9. _______________ (感到激动), she instantly tk ut her phne, eager t tell her friends this unfrgettable experience. 10. __________________ (一阵难过) attacked him as he listened t the news reprt.
jy in his eyes
Feeling excited
A fld f sadness
11. ___________ (她的担忧) gradually disappeared/ faded away when she began t fcus n the best way t attract the attentin f the peple n the helicpters. 12. __________________ (幸福的泪水) streamed/ rlled/flwed dwn her face the mment she hugged her mther.
Tears f happiness
13. _______________________________________ (得知放7天长假的消息), everyne was wild with jy/n the tp f the wrld. 14. _______________(害怕与悔恨) made it difficult fr her t fall asleep.
Knwing the news f the 7-day lng hliday
Fear and regret
15. ___________________________ (看着漆黑的夜空), I began t feel sleepy. 16. 听到交通事故的消息, 她陷入极度悲伤之中。Hearing the news f the traffic accident, she was ttally verwhelmed/cntrlled by sadness/ srrw/grief. 17. 看到面前有两只狗，少年甚是疑惑。Seeing/At the sight f the tw dgs in frnt f him, the teenager felt extremely cnfused.
Lking at the dark night sky
18. 她的母亲脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。(Brilliant smiles作主语)Brilliant smiles appeared/spread n her mther's face. 19. 我转向爸爸，眼睛里满是恐惧。With hrrr/fear in my eyes, I turned t my father. 20. 发现自己有了新的玩伴, 小男孩高兴地跳了起来。Finding that he had a new playmate, the little by jumped with jy.
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