专题04读后续写微技能指导（4）-备战2024高考英语读后续写微技能指导课件PPT

这是一份专题04读后续写微技能指导（4）-备战2024高考英语读后续写微技能指导课件PPT，共14页。PPT课件主要包含了关于天气炎热的描写，关于雨的描写，关于sun的描写等内容，欢迎下载使用。

On the day back t schl, dark cluds hung lw in the sky. The rain pured dwn, with cld drps and angry winds slapping (拍;掴) my face. I was drwned in flds f warm tears and freezing rain.
Functins f Natural Setting Descriptin
渲染了忧伤的气氛.揭示了故事发生的背景.
What can yu see, smell, hear, tuch r taste?
I see different clrs, smell the blssms, hear the birds singing, tuch the rain and taste the air.
Spring, an artist frm The Renaissance , paints ur campus with richer and deeper clrs. Glden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea f fragrant reds crwd int my eyes. Walking int the painting, I am ttally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) f birds. Sn the delicate air and sft raindrps melt my heart. Oh, I’m lst… in the masterpiece f Spring!
Hw t Picture a Natural Setting？？
环境描写，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以让文章读起来有立体感和真实感。
写作思路：第一步，先尝试概括性描述（总体描述）。第二步，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。
I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the sng f the birds, mnlight and flwers culd never have kept me spellbund.(M1U1)
用天热衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：（热）；（融化）；（汗流浃背）；（热得吓人）
翻译练习：1）天气很闷热。（概括描写）
1）The weather was s ht .1)This weather is terrible.
ht；melt；sweat like a pig；terrible
翻译练习（细节描写）：2）天气很闷热，我汗流浃背。2）天气很闷热，一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。2）天气很闷热，我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。
2)This weather is terrible, I am sweating like a pig.
2）The weather was s ht that there was n wind, and the thick air seemed t be frzen.
2）The weather was s ht that I can hardly breathe.I hpe it will be cler sn.
翻译练习：1）下起了大雨。（概括描写）
用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：大暴雨; 下倾盆大雨; 被雨淋
1）It was raining cats and dgs.1） There was a heavy dwnpur.
a heavy dwnpur 大暴雨rain cats and dgs 下倾盆大雨be caught in the rain 被雨淋
翻译练习（细节描写）：2）下起了大雨，溪水上张，风吹着拍打着房子。2）下起了大雨，我到家时全湿了。
2）It was raining cats and dgs. And I was all wet when I gt hme..
2）It was raining cats and dgs, the streams rse and the winds blew and beat against the huse.
The sweetness f the sun fills my lungs. The first ray f sunlight is t fragile t tuch.Spring breeze draws the curtain f cluds and the sunshine flds int the classrms.The whle wrld blssms with ne breath f the sunshine
surrunding scenes?
1. As ______________________________________, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.
2. __________________(微风) strked his head , as if cmfrting all his tiredness.
the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed
The gentle breeze
3. Frm the distance, he saw _______________(昏暗的灯光) in the village.
sme dim light
Para.1 He tk the strawberries hme.(a sentence)
Practice 1
1. was dark. (增加细节描写)
The sun hid himself behind the muntains, making it hard t see anything in the thick darkness.
2016.10 浙江高考真题应用Para 1 But n mre helcpteres came and it was getting dark again.________________________________
She had n chice but t stp fr anther night. A gust f cld wind blew and she started t miss the warmth f Tm's hug.
Practice 2
1. It gt dark. (增加细节描写)
2018.06 浙江高考真题应用Para 2 We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.________________________________
Silence between dad and me made me mre nervus and scared. At that mment, it was cmpletely dark except the faint light given ut by a few stars in the sky.
Practice 3
1. We saw lts f great sights alng the way. (增加细节描写)
2017.11 浙江高考真题应用Para 2 We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.___________________
Practice 4
The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering cluds held me entirely in their pwer. — Bk1 “Anne’s Best Friend”
I clsed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lfty muntains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascinatin.