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一、书面表达
1．（2023·江苏常州·中考真题）当前，有些学生忽视倾听的作用，针对该情况，请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。
要点：
1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Listening carefully plays an imprtant rle in ur life.
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【参考范文】
Listening carefully plays an imprtant rle in ur life.
In class, we shuld listen t teachers carefully. It can nt nly help us have a better understanding f what the teachers say, but als it can imprve learning efficiency. What’s mre, we shuld listen t ur classmates carefully. It can shw that we are listening t ur classmates and we care abut them s that it can strengthen ur relatinship.
We shuld be gd listeners at hme. We shuld listen t ur parents carefully in rder t knw abut ur parents’ ideas and avid arguing with each ther.
In a wrd, listening t thers carefully is imprtant in ur daily life, s we shuld learn t becme gd listeners.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
第三步，介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
nt als 不但……而且
care abut 关心
in rder t 为了
[高分句型]
It can shw that we are listening t ur classmates and we care abut them s that it can strengthen ur relatinship. (that引导的宾语从句，以及s that引导的目的状语从句)
We shuld listen t ur parents carefully in rder t knw abut ur parents’ ideas and avid arguing with each ther. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2．（2023·江苏徐州·二模）换位思考是实现高效沟通的重要方法。为了促进同学、师生间的交往，建立与维护和谐的人际关系，你校英语报开展了以“Put yurself in thers’ shes”为主题的征文活动。
请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述一段涉及换位思考的经历与体会。
写作要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
It is imprtant t put neself in thers’ shes because it helps peple understand each ther and develp gd relatinships.
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【参考范文】
It is imprtant t put neself in thers’ shes because it helps peple understand each ther and develp gd relatinships. I learned this lessn in a hard way, and I’d like t share my stry with yu.
One day last year, my friend Lucy and I had an agreement t meet at three p.m. in the park. Hwever, Lucy didn’t shw up until it was already fur, which made me sad and angry. I thught she must have frgtten ur plans. S I refused t answer her phne calls. And fr the next few days, I avided her n purpse. A week later, I was tld that Lucy lst her grandmther that afternn. I felt shcked and terribly srry. I shuld have helped her thrugh the hard days instead f misunderstanding her.
Frm then n, I began t put myself in thers’ shes and think twice.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中“换位思考经历”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。阐明我要与大家分享一个换位思考的经历；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述自己换位思考的整个故事，从误会朋友露西忘记两人的计划，到得知真相之后的愧疚；
第三步，书写结语。我学会了换位思考，三思而后行。
[亮点词汇]
shw up出现，露面
refuse t d sth.拒绝做某事
n purpse故意
think twice再三考虑
[高分句型]
Hwever, Lucy didn’t shw up until it was already fur, which made me sad and angry.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
A week later, I was tld that Lucy lst her grandmther that afternn.（that引导宾语从句）
3．（2023·江苏宿迁·三模）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德，也是推动人类进步的源动力。然而劳动教育往往被忽视。请你根据一下提示，以Enjy Labr, Enjy Life为题写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。
要求：
1. 包含表格中提示信息，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥；
2. 词数90个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名等信息。
参考词汇：劳动 labr
Enjy Labr, Enjy Life
Labr is the traditinal Chinese virtue f lve. Hwever, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Enjy Labr, Enjy Life
Labr is the traditinal Chinese virtue f lve. Hwever, sme students are rarely given the pprtunity t enjy labr, while thers are t busy with their studies t labr. There are als sme students wh are unwilling t labr because they are lazy.
Therefre, I advise yu t participate in labr activities bth at schl and at hme. At schl, yu can clean the classrm with yur classmates every week. At hme, yu can help yur parents d husewrk. Besides, yu can als visit the nursing hmes and help take care f the elderly.
In cnclusin, I believe that labr educatin is imprtant fr ur develpment and I encurage all my fellw classmates t actively engage in labr activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏主要信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题并表明劳动教育这一现状；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点从“在家、在学校、在社区”三方面提出建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对劳动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
be unwilling t d sth.不愿意做某事
encurage sb. t d sth.鼓励某人做某事
take care f照顾
[高分句型]
There are als sme students wh are unwilling t labr because they are lazy.（wh引导的定语从句）
In cnclusin, I believe that labr educatin is imprtant fr ur develpment and I encurage all my fellw classmates t actively engage in labr activities.（宾语从句）
4．（2023·江苏苏州·一模）在初中三年的学习生活中，一定有许多事情（如运动会、艺术节、演讲比赛、班级出游等）给你留下了深刻的印象，成为你美好的记忆。请以“A Great Memry”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享一件你记忆中美好的事及你的感悟。
注意事项：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A Great Memry
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【参考范文】
A Great Memry
Hw time flies! My clrful schl life is cming t an end. During the three years, there are many sweet and unfrgettable memries. And I’ll share ne f them with yu.
Last winter, we left hme fr a muntain t have a ten-day winter camp. Everything was great fr me except ne. I had t spend the Lantern Festival utside. Withut my family members, l thught I wuld feel lnely. But t my surprise, I had a great time n that day. There were s many interesting activities. I made dumplings and lanterns tgether with my classmates. Besides, I wrte Chunlian with the guide f the teacher. It was the first time fr me t celebrate the festival like this and I had much fun.
On that day, I felt a different lve and warmth frm my teachers and classmates. What a great memry it was!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏描写事件引发的感悟，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，“分享一段甜蜜又难忘的记忆”。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“在十天的冬令营里，和老师同学一起过元宵节”进行展开描写。
第三步，书写感悟，“从老师和同学身上体会到了爱与温暖”，再次强调“这段记忆很棒”。
[亮点词汇]
many sweet and unfrgettable memries许多甜蜜有难忘的记忆
left hme fr a muntain离开家前往一座山
t my surprise令我惊讶的是
with the guide f the teacher在老师的指导下
[高分句型]
Withut my family members, l thught I wuld feel lnely.（thught后接省略that的宾语从句）
It was the first time fr me t celebrate the festival like this and I had much fun.（固定句式：It is/was +名词/名词短语+fr sb. t d sth.“对某人来说做某事是……”）
5．（2023·江苏南通·二模） 让人成长的不是年龄，而是阅历。看过的电影，读过的书，交过的朋友，游览过的风景，做过的难题，和我们促膝交谈的师长……都是我们成长过程中不可或缺的部分。丰富多彩的初中生活充满了苦辣酸甜，让我们哭，也让我们笑。请你描述印象最深刻的一次情感经历，并将“It makes me ________”这一题目补充完整，写一篇英语作文。
要求：1．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
It makes me ________
It’s nt age that makes peple grw up, it’s experience. Rich and clrful junir high schl life is full f ups and dwns.
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【答案】Pssible versin ne:
It makes me happy
It’s nt age that makes peple grw up, it’s experience. Rich and clrful junir high schl life is full f ups and dwns.
When I started middle schl, I had n idea hw t talk t my classmates. I ften felt lnely. But an unexpected small thing happened and ended my bring schl life. One f my classmates invited me t her birthday party. I was s surprised because we were nt familiar with each ther at all. But I accepted the invitatin. On her birthday, I gave her flwers and a birthday card as presents. We watched a mvie tgether and talked abut it. Sharing the same views with her made me feel excited. I regretted that we culd nt be friends earlier. It ended just as yu’d expect, we became best friends. I dn’t feel bred at schl anymre.
I always remember that day and I realize what best friends mean t my life.
Pssible versin tw:
It makes me grw up
It’s nt age that makes peple grw up, it’s experience. Rich and clrful junir high schl life is full f ups and dwns.
I didn’t realize that teamwrk is much mre imprtant than persnal perfrmance until I lst the sccer match.
Last week, ur team lst the game in the “City Mayr Cup”. I still remember clearly when I had the ball n the field, cming up t the gal. I was in a better psitin t pass the ball instead f shting. One f my teammates was in the best psitin t sht and scre. But I really wanted t scre the gal myself and win the match. I wanted t be the her. I sht but failed. I was s upset and it felt like a big black clud was hanging ver my head.
After the match, I said srry t my teammates and my cach. They weren’t angry with me. But my cach’s wrds stayed with me. He said, “The game is nt all abut winning r lsing.” The experience made me grw up and taught me the imprtance f teamwrk.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，确定题目并总起文章；
第二步，叙述难忘的事发生的过程；
第三步，总结并书写感想。
[亮点词汇]
lnely孤独的
familiar with熟悉
view观点
[高分句型]
Sharing the same views with her made me feel excited. （动名词作主语）
I was s surprised because we were nt familiar with each ther at all. （原因状语从句）
6．（2023·江苏盐城·二模）学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“I am prud f ________!”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你所感到自豪的人或事。
注意事项：（1）补全题目，如“my cuntry, my parents, my schl”等；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
I am prud f ________!
I’m prud f ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I am prud f China!
I am prud f China, nt nly because I am a Chinese, but als because f sme great reasns.
In the past few years, great changes have taken place in China. We Chinese peple have thrw pverty away and have meat t eat every day. S all f us are prud f China, because ur great China can give s many peple fd t eat. Students have chances t g t schl, and we can learn sme useful skills t make cntributins t ur cunty. At present, China has a much strnger vice in the wrld and plays an imprtant rle in the internatinal stage.
As we can see, ur mtherland is getting much strnger every day, s I am prud f China.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇征文，为话题作文。
时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。
提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己感到骄傲的事物或人，把题目补充完整，回答完整题目中所提的问题，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补充完整题目，介绍自己骄傲的事物；
第二步，具体介绍自己为什么为中国感到骄傲，阐述其做了哪些事情；
第三步，再次点题为中国感到骄傲。
[亮点词汇]
nt als不仅……而且
taken place发生
thrw away扔掉
At present目前
play an imprtant rle in扮演重要的角色
make cntributins t做贡献
[高分句型]
At present, China has a much strnger vice in the wrld and plays an imprtant rle in the internatinal stage.（并列句）
S all f us are prud f China, because ur great China can give s many peple fd t eat.（原因状语从句）
As we can see, ur mtherland is getting much strnger every day, s I am prud f China.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．（2023·江苏盐城·一模）学校英文网站正在开展“邂逅中国传统文化”为主题的征文活动。请根据提示，以Traditinal Chinese Culture and I为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你参加一次中国传统文化活动的经历和感受。
提示问题：
●What cultural activity did yu take part in?
●What did yu d during the time?
●What have yu learned frm the experience?
注意事项：
1. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
As a lver f culture, I have been interested in traditinal Chinese culture.
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【参考范文】
As a lver f culture, I have been interested in traditinal Chinese culture.
My favrite traditinal Chinese cultural activity is the lantern shw which is during the Lantern Festival. Last year I tk part in the lantern shw rganized by ur schl. It was amazing. At the beginning, ur histry teacher intrduced the histry f the festival and the activity t us. Then we learnt hw t make traditinal lanterns. After that, we were allwed t take the lanterns hme and hung them with ur families.
Thrugh this activity, I nt nly learned the histry f the lantern shw and hw t make traditinal lanterns, but had a wnderful time with my family as well. I hpe t participate in mre traditinal Chinese cultural activity.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
提示：话题和方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的传统文化活动和经历；
第三步，谈谈自己的感受，并希望参加更多的活动。
[亮点词汇]
be interested in对……感兴趣
take part in参加
intrduce sth t sb向某人介绍某物
be allwed t d被允许做某事
nt well不仅……而且……
hpe t d希望做某事
participate in参加
[高分句型]
My favrite traditinal Chinese cultural activity is the lantern shw which is during the Lantern Festival.（定语从句：由which引导定语从句）
Last year I tk part in the lantern shw rganized by ur schl.（非谓语动词：rganize和shw之间为被动关系，因此用过去分词形式）
8．（2023·江苏泰州·二模）九年级生活对我们而言无疑是值得回忆与展望的，欢笑与泪水，希冀与不舍，挣扎与拼搏，都将凝成人生中一个个饱含深情的感叹号！如果用一个关键词来定义你的九年级生活，会是什么？某英语网站正以“Key Wrd fr My Grade-9 Life”为主题发起征文活动，请用英文分享你的关键词背后的故事和感悟。
要求：
1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Key Wrd fr My Grade-9 Life--________
I’m glad t share with everyne the key wrd fr my Grade-9 life--______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Pssible versin 1
Key Wrd fr My Grade-9 Life--Bravery
I’m glad t share with everyne the key wrd fr my Grade-9 life--bravery.
I used t be very shy and was always afraid t speak English alud. After entering Grade 9, I made up my mind t make a change. I decided t take the first step bravely, s I asked my teacher and classmates fr help. They ffered me a lt f valuable advice. After that, I encuraged myself t express my thughts in English as much as pssible. Last mnth, I even made an English speech successfully in frnt f the whle class. Because f my bravery, I became mre and mre cnfident in speaking English.
Thrugh this experience, I realize that it’s cmmn t meet with difficulties. But if we take n new challenges bravely, we’ll be sure t achieve success in the end. (128 wrds)
Pssible versin 2
Key Wrd fr My Grade-9 Life--Lve
I’m glad t share with everyne the key wrd fr my Grade-9 life--lve.
After I entered Grade 9, I was always nervus because I was nt gd at my study. Luckily, my teacher Miss Ga nticed my prblem. She is a wman full f lve. She talked with me and ffered t help me with my study. When I was t busy t have breakfast, she handed me milk and bread. When I wanted t give up, she always cheered me up. It was her lve that changed me a lt. I started t study harder and became mre cnfident. And nw I have becme a tp student in my class.
I believe lve can make a great difference t everyne’s life. I’d like t share lve with thers and d my best t help thers. (129 wrds)
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
提示：写作内容已给出，考生选取其中一个关键词并介绍其背后故事及感悟，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出自己九年级生活的关键词；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述关键词背后的故事；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己对关键词的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
made up my mind t make a change下定决心做出改变
made an English speech做英语演讲
Because f因为
meet with difficulties遇到困难
[高分句型]
But if we take n new challenges bravely, we’ll be sure t achieve success in the end.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．（2023·江苏盐城·二模）让人成长的不是年龄，而是阅历。看过的电影，读过的书，交过的朋友，游览过的风景，做过的难题，和我们促膝交谈的师长……都是我们成长过程中不可或缺的部分。丰富多彩的初中生活充满了苦辣酸甜，让我们哭，也让我们笑。请你描述印象最深刻的一次经历，以“It makes me ”为题写一篇作文。
注意事项：
1.补全题目；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等；
3.词数100词左右；4.语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。
It makes me _________
Our junir high schl life is full f sweetness and bitterness. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】

It makes me grw up
Our junir high schl life is full f sweetness and bitterness. I didn’t realize that teamwrk is much mre imprtant than persnal perfrmance until I lst the sccer match.
Last week, ur team lst the game in the “City Mayr Cup”. I still remember clearly when I had the ball n the field, cming up t the gal. I was in a better psitin t pass the ball instead f shting. One f my teammates was in the best psitin t sht and scre. But I really wanted t scre the gal myself and win the match. I wanted t be the her. I sht but failed. I was s upset and it felt like a big black clud was hanging ver my head.
After the match, I aplgized t my teammates and my cach. They didn’t blame me. But my cach’s wrds stayed with me. He said, “The game is nt all abut winning r lsing.” The experience made me grw up and taught me the imprtance f teamwrk.
例文：
It makes me happy
Our junir high schl life is full f sweetness and bitterness. When I started middle schl, I had n idea hw t talk t my classmates. I ften felt lnely.
But an unexpected small thing happened and ended my bring schl life. One f my classmates invited me t her birthday party. I was s surprised because we were nt familiar with each ther at all. But I accepted the invitatin. On her birthday, I gave her flwers and a birthday card as presents. We watched a mvie tgether and talked abut it. Sharing the same views with her made me feel excited. I regretted that we culd nt be friends earlier. It ended just as yu’d expect-we became best friends. I dn’t feel bred at schl anymre.
I always remember that day and I realize what best friends mean t my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
时态：时态主要用“一般过去时”；
提示：以“It makes me…”为题写一篇有关你初中生活中印象最深刻的一次经历的作文，注意叙述完整，语句通顺，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述初中生活中印象最深刻的一次经历；
第二步，简要介绍事情的经过；
第三步，总结全文并叙述自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
be familiar with熟悉
each ther互相
make sb. d sth.让某人做某事
[高分句型]
I was s surprised because we were nt familiar with each ther at all.（because引导的原因状语从句）
I always remember that day and I realize what best friends mean t my life.（含and的并列句；what引导的宾语从句）
10．（2023·江苏无锡·三模）成长的历程多姿多彩，但总也伴随着诸多的不解与困惑。每每这时，年少的我们总希望得到别人的帮助与支持。学校心理辅导中心（schl psychlgical service centre）便在这种情况下应运而生。请根据以下的提示，选择一种你更喜欢的交流方式，谈谈理由，并提供1—2种合理的减压方式。
注意事项：
1.短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.文章中不得出现真实姓名或校名等信息。
3.词数在100个左右，短文已给出部分内容，不计入总词数；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Our schl psychlgical service centre has been pen since last mnth. I think if I have prblems, I prefer __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
:
Our schl psychlgical service centre has been pen since last mnth. I think if I have prblems, I prefer the face-t-face cmmunicatin.
The centre prvides face-t-face cmmunicatin service frm 8 a.m. t 5 p.m. every day. During that time I am right at schl, s I can get enugh time t have face-t-face cmmunicatin with experienced experts and tell them my wrries. Befre I leave, I can receive a reprt with their advice. I’m sure it’ll be valuable t me. The suitable time and experienced experts make me feel it is a wiser chice when I feel blue.
In additin, when I feel stressed, I usually listen t light music r g running. I think music and sprts can make me relax and calm me dwn.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：选择表格中给出的其中一种交流方式，说明理由，理由在表格中已经给出，需要表达成句子，且体现“心理辅导”，可适当添加细节；还需描述自己的减压方式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明要选择面对面交流方式；
第二步，讲述选择面对面交流方式的理由；
第三步，介绍自己的减压方式。
[亮点词汇]
tell them my wrries 告诉他们我的忧虑
in additin 另外
be valuable t me 对我来说有价值
feel blue 闷闷不乐
have face-t-face cmmunicatin with 和……面对面交流
[高分句型]
The suitable time and experienced experts make me feel it is a wiser chice when I feel blue.（省略了that的宾语从句）
In additin, when I feel stressed, I usually listen t light music r g running.（when引导时间状语从句）
I think music and sprts can make me relax and calm me dwn.（省略了that的宾语从句）
11．（2023·江苏泰州·二模）随着智能手机的普及以及网络的快速发展，观看短视频成为人们的热门消遣方式。假如你是某中学九年级的一名学生，你班进行了主题为“Are shrt vides gd fr teenagers?”的英语辩论。请你根据正、反方的观点及提示写一篇总结报告。
写作提示：
1. 同学们对青少年观看短视频的看法；
2. 你的看法及建议。
注意事项：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Nwadays, shrt vides have becme mre and mre ppular in ur daily life. Are they gd r bad fr teenagers? The students have different pinins.
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【参考范文】
Nwadays, shrt vides have becme mre and mre ppular in ur daily life. Are they gd r bad fr teenagers? The students have different pinins.
Sme students think watching shrt vides is helpful t teenagers, as it’s a gd way t get knwledge as well as relax. Hwever, thers disagree. In their eyes, watching shrt vides is a waste f time. What’s wrse, spending t much time n screen may cause pr eyesight.
In my pinin, we can watch shrt vides, but we had better make a gd chice first. We shuld chse vides that can help imprve urselves. Besides, we need t cntrl the time that we spend n them. Half an hur each day is enugh. As lng as we use shrt vides prperly, we can nt nly have fun but als learn smething useful frm them.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中关于正反方的观点的内容，需补充不同观点所对应的理由，以及个人看法与建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明主题，不同人对短视频的看法不同；
第二步，阐述正反两方对“短视频是否对青少年有益”的不同看法及理由；
第三步，表达个人看法及“看或不看短视频”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
as well as 以及
in ne’s eyes 在某人看来
what’s wrse 更糟糕的是
in ne’s pinin 在某人看来
had better d sth. 最好做某事
as lng as 只要
[高分句型]
Sme students think watching shrt vides is helpful t teenagers, as it’s a gd way t get knwledge as well as relax.（省略that的宾语从句）
What’s wrse, spending t much time n screen may cause pr eyesight.（动名词作主语）
We shuld chse vides that can help imprve urselves.（that引导定语从句）
As lng as we use shrt vides prperly, we can nt nly have fun but als learn smething useful frm them.（“nt als...”句型）
12．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）资料展示；
时间是一笔贷款，即使再守信用的借贷者也还不起。我们看到的，都只是过去，只是这个过去，离我们很近很近而已。时间乃是最大的革新家。指缝很宽，时间太瘦，悄悄从指缝间溜走。
通过三年的学习，这段美好之旅即将到站，请以Bye, n Bye为题目，写一篇英语作文。
注意事项：
1．词数90左右。
2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息．
Bye, n Bye
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【参考范文】
Bye, n Bye
Our life in middle schl will cme t an end sn. Our schl is very beautiful. I have spent my happiest three years here. I will never frget my English teacher wh helped me imprve my English greatly. I will never frget my classmates and my friends wh are very hardwrking. I will never frget ur different kinds f schl activities thrugh which we nt nly relaxed urselves, but als learnt a lt.
Thugh we have t say gdbye nw, I will never frget the happy mments we have spent in the last three years.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为 “一般将来时” 和 “一般过去时”；
提示：本文主要是回忆三年的初中生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示初中生活要结束了；
第二步，介绍初中时的美好生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
different kinds f 各种各样的
nt als 不但……而且
[高分句型]
I will never frget my English teacher wh helped me imprve my English greatly. (定语从句)
Thugh we have t say gdbye nw, I will never frget the happy mments we have spent in the last three years. (thugh引导的让步状语从句)
13．（2023·江苏连云港·一模）十里春风拂过，人间芳菲未落。回想这三年的初中生活真是感慨万千。在即将到来的青春仪式上，学校将举行“感恩教育仪式”。请你根据以下提示，用英语为该活动写一篇短文， 简述这三年来要感恩的人和事，以及你的感想和未来打算。
要求：1、语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整；
2、举例证明你的观点，适当拓展；
3、100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4、不得透露真实的个人信息。
Hw times flies! Three years has passed since I came t the secndary schl. During the past three years, I have gained a lt and grwn a lt.
First, I shuld say thanks t my dear parents.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Hw times flies! Three years has passed since I came t the secndary schl. During the past three years, I have gained a lt and grwn a lt.
First, I shuld say thanks t my dear parents. They take gd care f me withut any cmplaint. They wrk hard t supprt the whle family. They are always trying their best t make me live a better life.
Secnd, I’m thankful t all my teachers fr their great help and supprt. They are patient enugh t spend lts f time explaining prblems t me. Besides, they always encurage me when I am in truble. It’s unselfish f them t devte their time t educatin.
Finally, I als feel very grateful t my classmates. We wrk tgether and share things with each ther. We ften help each ther and learn frm each ther. As a result, we have made great prgress.
I think I am lucky t have s much lve and care. I will never frget these happy days tgether. I am ging t d well in the future s that they can be prud f me.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“未来的打算”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接点明下文内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“父母、老师到同学”三个方面表达谢意；
第三步，书写书面结语，表达自己的感想和未来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
take gd care f好好照顾
devte their time t奉献……
feel very grateful t感激
As a result结果
[高分句型]
They wrk hard t supprt the whle family.（动词不定式作目的状语）
It’s unselfish f them t devte their time t educatin.（It’s adj. f sb. t d sth.结构的使用）
I am ging t d well in the future s that they can be prud f me.（s that句型的使用）
14．（2023·江苏苏州·一模）在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，比如父母、老师、学习、爱好等。他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长，丰富我们的生命。请你以________Help(s) Me Grw为题写一篇文章，谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。
内容包括：1.你过去的状态；
2.你发生的变化；
3.变化对你的意义。
注意：1.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.需先把标题补充完整，文章内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
________ Help(s) Me Grw
As we prgress thrugh life, a variety f things r peple cntribute t ur persnal grwth and develpment.
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【参考范文】
Writing Help(s)Me Grw
As we prgress thrugh life, a variety f things r peple cntribute t ur persnal grwth and develpment.
I used t be a shy persn wh never felt cmfrtable speaking in frnt f a crwd and I ften felt like my vice didn’t matter. Grwing up, I was ften verlked and felt like I was nbdy.
But all f this changed when I discvered my true lve fr writing. It helped me find my vice. I started t express my thughts and feelings thrugh my writing freely, which helped me grw mre cnfident. Thrugh writing, I was able t learn mre abut wh I was and what I wanted in life.
My grwth and cnfidence have changed my life fr the better. I have been able t realize my dreams with curage and faith. Writing has pened up many new drs fr me and has made me int the persn I am tday.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和”现在完成时“ ；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注心不要遗漏“信息提示”中帮助我们成长的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“随着我们在生活中的进步，各种各样的事情或人对我们的个人成长和发展做出了贡献”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“你过去的状态、你发生的变化、变化对你的意义等”几个方面重点介绍写作帮助我成长具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“写作为我打开了许多新的大门，使我成为今天的我”的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
a variety f 各种各样的
cntribute t 贡献
be able t 能够
[高分句型]
I started t express my thughts and feelings thrugh my writing freely, which helped me grw mre cnfident.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
I have been able t realize my dreams with curage and faith.（现在完成时，表达对现在的影响）
15．（2023·江苏常州·二模）There are many ways fr everyne t imprve themselves, whether by learning frm their mistake r by realizing their respnsibilities(责任) as they grw. In shrt, the mments that make yu imprve are the mments that make yu grw. Yur schl English newspaper is rganizing an essay(短文) cmpetitin n the tpic f ‘‘My Self-imprvement.” Please write a shrt essay t take part.
注意：
1.内容必须包含上述要点，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.不少于100字(开头已给，不计入词数)。
My Self-Imprvement
Self imprvement is very imprtant fr each f us.
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【参考范文】
My Self-Imprvement
Self imprvement is very imprtant fr each f us. Everyne may have sme experiences that make them grw up. Fr me, mistakes make me grw.
There was nce a time when I made mistakes in math. Because f carelessness, I failed the exam. When I was depressed, it was my math teacher wh gave me a hand and tld me that mistakes culd als teach us a lessn. What she tld me encuraged me t face with my math prblem bravely. Finally, my math grades imprved.
Taking my experience int cnclusin, if we learn frm ur mistakes, we will have learnt anther secret t success. Treasure the mistakes, and yu will win the treasure.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，讲述自己的经历；
第三步，发表感悟。
[亮点词汇]
grw up成长
because f因为
encurage sb t d sth鼓励某人去做某事
[高分句型]
When I was depressed, it was my math teacher wh gave me a hand and tld me that mistakes culd als teach us a lessn.（when引导时间状语从句）
Taking my experience int cnclusin, if we learn frm ur mistakes, we will have learnt anther secret t success.（if引导条件状语从句）
16．（2023·江苏泰州·三模）种子长成参天大树，是梦想的力量；星星之火可以燎原，是真理的力量；溪流汇成江海，是坚持的力量；蚂蚁穿越沙漠，是团队的力量；朴实的文字震撼心灵，是知识的力量；失败走向成功，是支持的力量。请从以上提示中，选取其中一种力量进行讲述，并发表你的看法。
请以“The Pwer f ________”为题，写一篇作文。
要求：
1.120词左右。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【参考范文】
The Pwer f Persistence
There are many prblems in ur life. Sme peple give up halfway, sme peple keep ging. I want t share my experience with yu.
When I entered junir high schl, my English was pr. I was afraid f answering questins in class. When my English teacher Mrs Hu nticed my truble, she talked t me fr a lng time. She gave me sme advice n hw t imprve my English. She als encuraged me t keep studying. With her help, I kept studying and speaking English every day. After several mnths, I made great prgress in the final exam. And my spken English has imprved a lt.
I knw that it is the pwer f persistence. If yu face sme prblems, dn’t give up. Keep ding, and yu will lead t success.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，讲述自己“坚持”的经历；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
give up放弃
be afraid f害怕
make great prgress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
There are many prblems in ur life. （there be句型）
When I entered junir high schl, my English was pr.（when引导时间状语从句）
17．（2023·江苏宿迁·一模）习近平在讲话中引用李大钊的话说， “青年者，国家之魂”，“一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能兴旺发达。” 作为青少年的我们，现行之重是当好学生。请以“Hw t Be a Gd Student”为题，谈谈我们应该怎样做，才能不负自己，不负时代赋予我们的责任。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的提示，可以自由发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，合理展开想象；
2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Hw t Be a Gd Student
As teenagers, we shuld be gd students at present. Then what shuld we d? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Hw t be a gd student?
As teenagers, we shuld be gd students at present. Then what shuld we d?
First f all, listen t the teachers carefully in class. We can g ver what we have learned as ften as pssible and prepare fr the new knwledge in time. Als, We can read different kinds f bks in ur free time.
Secndly, it is imprtant fr us t d sme exercise and have a healthy diet. We shuld g t bed early and get up early. Thirdly, We must bey schl rules and traffic rules. Besides, we shuld behave plitely in public. We shuld always respect the ld and care fr the yung.
What’s mre, we shuld d sme husewrk at hme. And it is meaningful fr us t wrk as vlunteers in ur cmmunity.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为一般现在时；
提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，表述在学习方面我们应如何做好；
第二步，表述在运动、个人安全及行为表现方面我们应该如何做好；
第三步，表述在其他方面我们应该如何做好。
[亮点词汇]
at present目前
different kinds f不同种类的
What’s mre此外
[高分句型]
It is meaningful fr us t wrk as as Vlunteers in ur cmmunity.（it作形式主语）
现状
◆父母很少给予劳动机会
◆忙于学业，无暇劳动
◆懒惰不愿劳动
建议
◆在家：学做家务，如……
◆在校：……
◆在社区：……
你对劳动的看法
……（至少一点）
1. What/Wh are yu prud f?
2. Why d yu feel prud f
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