2025版高考英语一轮总复习写作培优第1部分第1章第1讲邀请信建议信和申请信课件

这是一份2025版高考英语一轮总复习写作培优第1部分第1章第1讲邀请信建议信和申请信课件，共60页。PPT课件主要包含了评分标准，第一章　书信，文体一　邀请信，Dear Jim等内容，欢迎下载使用。
宏观感知[写作特点]应用文是人们日常生活和工作中广泛使用的一种文体，也是高考写作的文体之一。命题形式多为文字提示，写作形式有书信(建议信、投诉信、邀请信、道歉信、感谢信、询问信、推荐信、祝贺信、求职信等)、电子邮件、日记、通知、报道、启事和发言稿、图表图画作文等。
[评分原则]1．本题总分为15分，按5个档次评分。2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后按该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3．词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。
5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6．如书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
第一讲　邀请信、建议信和申请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。邀请信的写作对象一般是朋友、熟人，内容要逻辑清楚、要点明晰，能够表明邀请的意图，说明活动的相关信息。写作时，需要对题干提供的背景信息及活动安排等要点进行必要的整合，同时对要点进行适当的拓展，以求在内容和语言表达上更加丰富。具体写作结构为：
1．吸引眼球开头句①It's my pleasure/a great hnur fr me t invite yu t participate in/attend/jin us in...我非常高兴/荣幸地邀请您参加……/和我们一起……②Knwing/Learning that yu're interested in..., I'm delighted t invite yu t...得知您对……感兴趣，我非常高兴地邀请您……
③We are it wuld be great if yu culd jin us.我们将于……(日期)……(活动)，如果你能加入我们就太好了。④It is a great privilege/hnr fr me t invite yu t take part in/participate be held 我很荣幸邀请你参加……在……举行的……
⑤I feel it a great hnr n behalf invite yu t take part in/participate in...我很荣幸代表……邀请你参加……
2．亮点出彩篇中句①The fllwing are sme details are sme details details as fllws.……的细节如下。②T begin with, we will... Besides, there will be a number f/varius activities such as..., which will...首先，我们将……；此外，将会有许多/各种各样的活动，例如……，这将……
③This is such a glden pprtunity t first hand that it can't be missed.这是亲身体验……的绝佳机会，不容错过。④I'm cnvinced that yu will enjy yurself there.我相信你会在那里玩得很愉快。⑤If interested in..., please register fr/sign up 如果(你)对……感兴趣，请在……前报名参加……
3．韵味无穷结尾句①I d hpe yu will accept ur/my invitatin if it is cnvenient t yu.我真心希望，如果您方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。②We/I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnfirm yur participatin at yur earliest cnvenience.如果您能尽早在您方便时确认参加，我们/我将不胜感激。③We/I wuld feel much hnured if yu culd cme.如果您能来，我们/我将倍感荣幸。
④We'd be delighted if yu culd cme and share the unfrgettable mment with us.如果您能来和我们共度这难忘的时刻，我们将十分高兴。⑤Wuld yu please let me knw as early as pssible if yu can accept my invitatin?如果您能接受我的邀请，能否尽早让我知道？
Dear________ , _______ (开门见山点明活动、时间)．It wuld be pleasant __________ (表达邀请愿望). Will yu __________________ (正式发出邀请)?
During the party/cnference, we will______________________ (开始介绍活动内容)．First, ______(介绍举行的活动一)．Secnd, ______ (介绍举行的活动二)．I knw/believe yu are very interested in ______ (引出被邀请人参加的理由)．First/Fr ne thing, ______ (希望受邀人参加的理由一)．Secnd/Fr anther, ______(希望受邀人参加的理由二)．The party/cnference ______________________(阐述受邀人参加的必要性).
The party/cnference will begin at________ (提出活动的地点)．It is pssible fr us t meet at ____________(提出具体约定的时间和地点)．We d hpe yu can cme ______(再次发出邀请).
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1．节目介绍；2．访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Carline，
Yurs sincerely，Li Hua
【满分范文】Dear Carline，I am Li Hua frm the campus radi statin，writing t invite yu t be the guest f the English prgram “Talk and Talk”．
The prgram invites guests t talk n certain tpics, aimed at bradening students' hrizns. If it is cnvenient fr yu, please cme t the statin studi at 19：00 n Thursday. Yu are expected t talk abut independence f the yuth in the West. A 20-minute talk fllwed by 10 minutes' questin answering wuld be appreciated.Please let me knw if yu culd cme. Lking frward t yur jining.Yurs sincerely，Li Hua
【名师点评】1．文章开头做了自我介绍，并表明写信目的：邀请外教参加访谈节目，言简意赅。2．范文中使用了大量亮点词汇(aimed at, bradening students' hrizns, cnvenient, appreciated等)。在句式方面，既有动词-ing短语(writing t invite yu t be the guest f the English prgram “Talk and Talk”)作状语，又有过去分词短语(aimed at bradening students' hrizns和fllwed by 10 minutes' questin answering)作定语等，显示了较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的亮点。
(2023·广东佛山禅城区调研) 假定你是李华，中国国际展览中心(China Internatinal Exhibitin Center)最近正在举办智能机器人展览。请写信给你的英国交换生朋友Arthur，邀请他一起去参观。内容包括：1．时间和地点；2．展览的相关情况。注意：1.词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Arthur，
【参考范文】Dear Arthur，Hw have yu been recently? There is an impressive cllectin f smart rbts n display at the China Internatinal Exhibitin Center.I am writing t invite yu t g with me next Friday afternn.
The exhibitin shws the latest technlgy and trends in AI rbts frm hme and abrad，including thse fr smart business，hme，educatin and entertainment.T give visitrs a wnderful visiting experience，it ffers yu many fun interactins with varius rbts，sme f which have appeared in science fictin and mvies.I am sure yu will enjy it.
Please let me knw if yu will g with me s that I can buy the tickets in advance.Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs sincerely，Li Hua
文体(二)　建议信 建议信是就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构为：
1．吸引眼球开头句①I am writing t give yu sme suggestins/ffer yu sme advice.我写信给你一些建议/忠告。②I am writing t express my views cncerning...我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
③Yu have asked fr my advice I will try t make sme useful suggestins here.关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。④Here are sme tips/suggestins fr yu.这些就是给你的建议。⑤I think yu can make it if yu fllw the fllwing advice/the advice belw.如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
2．亮点出彩篇中句①I think the mst yu is...我认为对你来说最适合的……是……②I wuld like t suggest that...我想建议……③Yu'd 's best t...你最好……/最好是……
④As far as I am cncerned/In my pinin/As fr me/Frm my pint f view，it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。⑤I think it wuld be mre beneficial if yu culd...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3．韵味无穷结尾句①I hpe yu will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。②As time ges n, peple will knw yu better and will like t make friends with yu if yu can fllw the advice abve.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。
③I am certain that if yu fllw my advice, yu'll get alng well with yur classmates.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处得很好。④I believe, with yur effrt, yu can manage t get ver/vercme these difficulties.我相信，通过你的努力，你会成功克服这些困难。⑤The situatin is easy t change if yu take/fllw/accept my advice.如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境是很容易的。
Dear________ , I am writing t draw yur attentin t the fact that______ (具体事情)/I am writing t express my views/pinins cncerning______ (具体事情).
In rder t slve the prblem, varius things can be dne.T begin with, why nt____ (建议一)? If yu d this, ______ (结果)．In additin, yu shuld/can/had better ______ (建议二)．Then/That way, ______ (结果)．Last but nt least, it wuld be a gd idea if ______ (建议三)．By ding this, ______ (结果). I hpe yu will find these ideas useful and I wuld be ready fr further discussin.Yurs sincerely，______ (署名)
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1．说明问题；2．提出建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ryan，I'm Li Hua frm Class 3.
【满分范文】Dear Ryan，I'm Li Hua frm Class 3. I dn't think it a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class.The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with，randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups.This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin，leaving little rm fr the ther ne t imprve. Besides，students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn't get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.
My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.This way，everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether.Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin. Yurs sincerely， Li Hua
【名师点评】1．文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的，使用表达建议的否定前置表达(I dn't think it a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class.)。
2．书信的主体部分提出了自己的建议，使用了过渡性词语(T begin with，Besides)、高级词汇(unbalanced, grup)、还使用了复杂结构：非谓语动词作结果状语(leaving little rm fr the ther ne t imprve)以及定语从句(wh they dn't get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with)。
(2023·北京卷，改编)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Yurs，Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Jim，Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”．Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.Yurs，Li Hua
文体(三)　申请信 申请信通常用于向某单位或组织提出请求或申请等。申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等，所以对个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能地向对方说明个人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得机会。具体写作结构为：
1．吸引眼球开头句①Learning yu are lking fr a(n)．..，I wuld like t apply fr the psitin/jb.从……那里得知您需要一名……，我想申请这个职位/这份工作。②I'm writing t yu in the hpe that I may btain an pprtunity t...我写信给您是希望我可以获得一个……的机会。
③I have read yur advertisement n the Internet/in the newspaper. I feel quite qualified fr the psitin yu advertised.我在网上/报纸上读了你们的广告。我觉得我非常适合你们在广告中所招聘的职位。④I saw yur advertisement n the Internet/in a newspaper and I shw great interest in...我在网上/报纸上看到你们的广告，而且我对……极感兴趣。
⑤I'm extremely pleased t see yur advertisement 'm writing t apply fr...看到您要……的广告，我非常高兴。我写信申请……⑥I'm writing t apply t be... The fllwing are my advantages.我写信申请做……我的优势如下。
2．亮点出彩篇中句①I wuld like t apply fr the part-time jb during this summer vacatin because I think it is very useful t me.我想申请在暑假期间做这份兼职，因为我认为这对我很有用。②I have teamwrk spirit and can get n well with ther peple.我有团队精神，善于和别人相处。
③Nt nly am I gd I am als experienced in...我不仅擅长……而且在……方面有经验。④I have been wrking , and have therefre gained rich knwledge and experience in this field.自从……后，我一直从事……，因此在这个领域获得了丰富的知识和经验。
3．韵味无穷结尾句①I am sure I will d it well if I'm given the chance t be a member f yur cmpany.如果我得到机会成为贵公司的一员的话，我相信自己会做得很好。②If yu think I am the perfect persn fr the jb, please cntact me at yur earliest cnvenience.如果您认为我是这份工作的最佳人选，请您在方便时尽早和我联系。
③I am cnfident that I'm suitable 'm qualified t 'm equal t ding...我确信，我适合……/有做……的资格/能胜任做……④I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me the chance f ding/t d...如果您能提供给我做……的机会，我将不胜感激。⑤I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin.如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
Dear______, I'm ______ (简单自我介绍)．When I was reading the advertisement, ______ (表达看到广告后的感受)．I think it's a gd pprtunity fr me t ______ (应聘的原因)．Therefre I recmmend myself t yu withut hesitatin. I ____ (陈述本人的优势)．Fr ne thing, I can ____ (陈述本人特长一)．Fr anther thing, I can ______ (陈述本人特长二).
Please cntact me at__________ (本人的联系方式一：电话号码)．Or e-mail me at __________ (本人的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址). I am lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs sincerely，______ (署名)
假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请你给美术馆负责人写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的；2．个人优势；3．能做的事情。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【满分范文】Dear Sir r Madam，I'm Li Hua, a student studying in Lndn. I'm writing t apply fr being a vlunteer fr the Chinese painting exhibitin t be held in yur art gallery.I think I am qualified fr this jb, because I have learned Chinese paintings since my childhd. In additin, I am fluent in bth Chinese and English, which cntributes t intrducing Chinese paintings. If lucky enugh t be chsen as a vlunteer, I can shw visitrs arund the gallery and get them t knw mre abut Chinese paintings.
I wuld be very grateful if yu culd ffer me the pprtunity. Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs，Li Hua
【名师点评】1．文章开门见山说明自己写信的目的；然后详述自己的优势，简洁明了，不拖泥带水；最后表达感谢和期盼。
2．范文通过使用高级词汇(be qualified fr, be fluent in)、动词不定式(t be held in yur art gallery)、省略句(If lucky enugh t be chsen as a vlunteer)、定语从句(which cntributes t intrducing Chinese paintings)、状语从句(because I have learned Chinese paintings...)和虚拟语气(I wuld be very grateful if yu culd ffer me the pprtunity.)丰富了句式，显示了较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的得分点。
假设你是一所英国高中的中国交换生李华。学校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑假到社区为学生辅导汉语。你希望参加此活动。请给校评选组写一封申请信，主要内容：1．个人优势；2．你的计划。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam，I'm Li Hua wh is an exchange student frm China.I'm writing t apply fr the pprtunity t help the students in cmmunities with their Chinese.