高中英语学业水平测试复习题型Ⅵ书面表达课件

这是一份高中英语学业水平测试复习题型Ⅵ书面表达课件，共27页。
题型Ⅵ　书面表达广东省高中英语学业水平考试，要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：(1)清楚、连贯地获取信息、传递信息、表达意思。(2)有效运用所学语言知识，写出90词左右的短文。[方法技巧](1)认真审题，确定写作的体裁与题材。(2)记叙文明确五个“W”和一个“H”。即what(什么事)，wh(什么人)，when(什么时候)，where(什么地点)，why(什么原因)，hw(怎么样)，要清楚地知道表达什么。(3)所给提示内容一般都可以按其顺序表达，但要注意叙事的角度、采用的人称形式、时态与语态的形式。
(4)正确使用各种句式、句型，恰当地使用简单词汇，适时运用高级词汇，在此基础上，正确地运用连接词，像转折、并列、递进、条件关系等。(5)成文后注意修改，润色，更要注意书写，力求工整、美观。[高分策略]策略1　词汇高级，“语”众不同高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠，为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两点：1．不“人云亦云”原则。写作时恰当使用其他考生可能想象不到的词汇会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。如：
①tell→infrm告诉I'm writing t infrm yu that we will have a vlleyball match next mnth.我写信告诉你我们下个月将有一场排球赛。②lie in→be lcated at位于Surrunded by green trees，the farm is lcated at the ft f the hill near ur schl.农场位于我们学校附近的山脚下，四周绿树环绕。③many→varius各种各样的There will be varius fantastic perfrmances given by talented students.多才多艺的学生们将进行各种精彩的表演。
2．短语优先原则。短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，因此考生宜利用短语巧妙表达文章的意思。如：①realise→becme aware f意识到Thrugh participating in this picking activity，I have becme aware f the significance f wrk.通过参加这次采摘活动，我意识到了劳动的重要性。②plan→make a plan计划Finn and his friend Tm Sawyer made a plan t save Jim frm the farm.费恩和他的朋友汤姆·索亚计划把吉姆从农场里救出来。
③many→a large number f许多There stands a big stadium in ur schl，where a large number f sprts activities are held there.我们学校有一个大体育馆，很多体育活动在那里举行。策略2　句式丰富，彰显能力一篇书面表达中的句子如果都采用简单句，肯定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式和复合句，让句子“高人一筹”，亮点纷呈，彰显考生的写作能力。
1．精彩的复合句。a．增加亮点的定语从句。Paper­cutting is a traditinal art frm in China.It has a histry f mre than 1，500 years.→Paper­cutting is a traditinal art frm in China，which has a histry f mre than 1，500 years.b．吸引眼球的状语从句。①Since yu have lng been interested in Chinese culture (原因状语从句)，I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place fr yu.②If yu're interested in the Chinese flk art(条件状语从句)，please e­mail me.
c．提升档次的名词性从句。①That's why I think the trip alng the Yangtze River is a better chice (表语从句)．②I hpe these suggestins wuld be helpful t yu(宾语从句)．2．新颖的强调句和省略句。①It is the spirit that the stry cnveys that really matters.②As scheduled，an art exhibitin will be held next Sunday in the lcal museum.3．传神的被动结构。Yur timely help will be very much appreciated by me.
4．言简意赅的非谓语动词结构。T get admitted，I have made gd preparatins，trying t knw as much as I culd abut my city.策略3　过渡巧妙，完美文章过渡词语就像纽带一样把文章紧紧连接起来，更像润滑剂，使文章衔接流畅。1．文章或段落起始常用的过渡词语。t begin with(首先)，first f all(第一，首先)，in the first place(首先)，as yu knw(如你所知)，as is knwn t all(众所周知)，as is shwn in(正如在……显示的那样)
2．文章或段落结尾常用的过渡词语。therefre/thus(因此)，in cnclusin(总之，最后)，in brief(简言之)，t sum up(总而言之)，in a wrd(总之)，generally speaking(总体上讲)，n the whle(总的说来)3．常用的表示先后次序的过渡词语first(第一)，secnd(第二)，next(其次，然后)，last but nt least(最后但同样重要的)，after that(之后)，eventually/finally(最后，最终)，since then(从那以后)，afterwards(以后，后来)，meanwhile(同时)，immediately(立刻)强烈推荐以下组合：适用于两点的情况：n the ne hand，n the ther hand；fr ne thing，fr anther (thing)
适用于三点或以上的情况：t begin with，then，furthermre，finally；t start with，next，in additin，last but nt least；mst imprtantly，mrever/furthermre，finally4．常用的表示因果关系的过渡词语。accrdingly/cnsequently(因此，所以)，fr this reasn(由于这个原因)，as a result f(作为……的结果)，due t/thanks t(由于……)，therefre/thus(因此)，because f(由于)
5．常用的表示比较和对比的过渡词语。in cntrast with/in cmparisn with(与……相比)，similarly(同样)，n the cntrary(相反)，different frm(与……不同)，n the ther hand(另一方面)
6．常用的表示举例的过渡词语。a case in pint(恰当的例子)，that is t say(也就是说)，fr instance/example(例如)7．常用的表示强调的过渡词语。furthermre/mrever(而且)，besides(此外)，actually/in fact(实际上)，als(而且，也)，indeed(的确)，in particular(尤其，特别)，naturally(当然)，hpefully(有希望地)
(一)现代技术通讯现在，越来越多的学校推行使用iPad上课，引起了社会上对用iPad上课的热议。请根据写作要点和要求完成作文。
注意： 1.文章必须包含表格所有的内容，并适当发挥。2．词数90左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)。Recently，the iPad has been widely used in class in China.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I dn't think we shuld use the iPad fr a lng time because it's bad fr ur eyes.And we must use them in a crrect way.
参考范文：Recently，the iPad has been widely used in class in China.There are a lt f advantages in using the iPad fr study.Fr example，the iPad can prvide many phts，stries and s n.It is small enugh fr us t carry and we can use it t study all the time.But there are als many bad things in it.With the iPad，sme students may nt listen carefully in class and they may use the iPad t d smething else.Besides，using the iPad fr a lng time is bad fr ur eyes.We may depend n them t find sme infrmatin and dislike thinking abut the study by urselves.I dn'tthink we shuld use the iPad fr a lng time because it's bad fr ur eyes.And we must use them in a crrect way.
(二)语言学习假设你叫李华，英语成绩一直不错，但是你的朋友小玲英语有点薄弱，请根据提示给她写一些学习建议。字数要求90词左右，不要出现真实姓名，校名。1．上课专心听课，作业细心做。2．大声朗读，要多练，不怕讲错。3．经常听英文歌或看英文电影。4．其他做法。注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Learning English is fun and easy.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If yu d nt give up，I am sure yu will make prgress.
参考范文：Learning English is fun and easy.S，let me give yu sme advice.First，it is very imprtant t listen t yur teacher and d hmewrk carefully.Then，read alud and speak English with yur friends as much as pssible.Dn't be afraid f making mistakes because we ften learn frm mistakes.Third，singing English sngs and watching English mvies are als interesting ways.Yu can nt nly learn English but als have fun at the same time.Last but nt least，I keep writing English dairy in English.In fact，it really helps a lt.If yu d nt give up，I am sure yu will make prgress.
(三)天气和环境“绿水青山就是金山银山”，坚持节约资源和保护环境是我国的基本国策。请以“共建绿色家园”为主题，根据以下文字提示，请你写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，并适当发表自己的观点。
注意：(1) 短文应包括所有要点。(2)词数90左右(开头已给出，不计入词数)。(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Let's build a green hme tgether!As we all knw，the envirnment arund us is getting wrse and wrse.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：Let's build a green hme tgether!As we all knw，the envirnment arund us is getting wrse and wrse.Waste and pllutin becme mre serius and serius，which has a bad effect n ur earth.As a middle schl student，it's time fr us t help build a green hme.We must take sme actin.Firstly，we shuld ften g utside n ft r by bike.Therefre，we can avid the traffic jams and reduce the air pllutin.Secndly，we had better use clth shpping bags rather than plastic bags when we g shpping.Thirdly，turn ff the light when we leave.Last but nt least，it is a gd way t plant mre trees，which can make ur earth becme greener and beautiful.
(四)饮食与健康适当的饮食习惯是健康成长的保证。请你以Gd Eating Habits，Gd Health为题，并根据下表提示(可适当补充内容)，用英语写一篇不少于90个词的作文谈谈你的看法(开头已经给出，字数不计算在内)
注意：1. 词数90个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。2. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Gd Eating Habits，Gd Health“Gd Eating Habits lead t Gd Health.”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：“Gd Eating Habits lead t Gd Health.”S it's very imprtant fr us t frm healthy eating habits.Hwever，many students still have bad eating habits.Sme g t schl withut breakfast；sme like t eat snacks all the time; sme always like t the same fd; and still sme eat r drink t much.All these habits are bad fr ur health.T keep fit，we shuld eat all kinds f fds.Such as rice，fish，meat，vegetables and fruit.Besides，we'd better have meals at the right time.In my pinin，we shuld develp healthy eating habits t make urselves strnger.
(五)旅游购物广州某电台英文频道将开设 Welcme t Guang zhu栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“广州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意：1.词数90词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Anyne cming t Guangzhu is sure t have a gd time.Here is the intrductin t Guangzhu.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Guangzhu is waiting fr yu.