初中英语2024届中考建议信写作讲解练习

这是一份初中英语2024届中考建议信写作讲解练习，共6页。试卷主要包含了写作模板，方法讲解，押题练习等内容，欢迎下载使用。
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Dear________,
Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t________________, and I will try t make sme cnducive suggestins here.
In my pinin, yu wuld be wise t take the fllwing actins: ________________(建议的内容).
I hpe yu will find these prpsals useful, and I wuld be ready t discuss this matter with yu t further details.
Gd luck with yur________________(祝愿).
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear_______,
I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestin(引出作者的建议).First , It is imprtant t ______________.Then, it als helps t ___________.Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t __________.Yu can als ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As t __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面).In additin, _________(其他的建议).I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hpe ____________(表达愿望)。
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
二、方法讲解
【篇首句】说明写信目的。
1.I’m srry t hear that yu are having truble fitting in yur new schl.Such prblems are quite nrmal.Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2.I have received yur letter saying yu plan t play a visit t China fr ten days next mnth.Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful t yu.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3.I’m writing t yu t present what I think n the further imprvement f ur htel s as t attract mre clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。
4.Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t hw t learn Chinese , and I will try t make sme suggestins here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5.I’m very glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t fit in the new schl life.Here are a few suggestins.很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6.I’m very glad t have received yur e-mail.Nw I’m writing t give yu sme advice n hw t learn English well in high schl.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
1.I’d like t suggest that...我想要建议
2.In my pinin,...在我看来,
3.If I were yu, I wuld...如果我是你,我会
4.Yu’d better d...你最好/最好不
5.It’s necessary fr yu t read sme bks abut these places befre yu cme t see them with yur wn eyes.With mre knwledge abut these places, yu will have a better understanding f Chinese histry and culture.在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前,你 有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识,你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。
6.First f all, yu shuld listen t the teacher carefully and take ntes in class s that yu can g ver yur lessns as sn as yu can after class.首先,你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记,以便下课后可以及时复习。
7.As is knwn t all,vcabulary is f great imprtance.Yu shuld spend half an hur in the mrning reciting wrds and reading texts alud.众所周知,词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。
8.What’s mre, try t cmmunicate with yur classmates in English ut f class.Only in this way can yu imprve yur listening and spken English quickly.还有,试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样,你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。
9.Last but nt least, yu shuld develp the habit f keeping a diary, which helps imprve yur written English and helps yu g ver/review the wrds and expressins that yu have learnt.最后但也是很重要的一点是,你应该养成记日记的习惯,这会帮助你提高英语写作,也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。
【篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议,并祝福。
1.I hpe these suggestins will be f use t yu.Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2.I hpe these suggestins will be f use t yu.Remember:The man wh has made up his mind t win will never say “impssible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3.Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4.I hpe that my suggestins are helpful fr yu anyway.I wuld be mre than happy t see imprvement.无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5.I believe that yu will take my suggestins int serius accunt.Whatever yu decide t d, gd luck with yur studies/wrk！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。
6.I sincerely hpe my advice will be sme help fr yu.If there is mre I can d t help, please let me knw.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。
7.I hpe yu can take gd cnsideratin f my advice.I wuld be ready t discuss abut this matter with yu t further details.我希望你可以好好考虑我的建议。我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
8.I sincerely hpe my advice will be sme help fr yu.I’m eager t see yu sn in Beijing.Wish yu in advance a pleasant trip t Beijing.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。很希望早点在北京见到你。提前祝你来北京之行愉快。
三、押题练习
1．假设你是李华，你在Yuth杂志上看到了一个叫Tny的男孩的烦恼：他因为长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛，腰酸背痛；而且父母要他做家务，他感觉很累，和父母沟通不畅。请你根据他的情况一一给出恰当的建议。
要求：
(1)内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
(2)书写认真，语句通顺；
(3)词数不少于70词(开头不计入词数)。
Dear Tny,
I’m srry t hear that yu have lts f prblems and wrries.
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【参考范文】
Dear Tny,
I’m srry t hear that yu have lts f prblems and wrries.Firstly, yu have a headache and a sre back because yu play cmputer games fr t lng.We knw that playing cmputer games fr a lng time is als bad fr ur eyes.I think yu shuld take breaks away frm the cmputer and d exercise mre.Secndly, yur parents always ask yu t d chres.Yu feel s tired that yu can’t get n well with them.In my pinin, ding chres can help t develp ur independence.Yu’d better sit dwn and cmmunicate with yur parents well.All family members need t play a rle in keeping the hme warm and full f jy.
Hpe things can wrk ut and yu can have a gd time at hme.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2．勤劳是中华民族的传统美德。假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jimmy认为孩子们不应该做家务，就此与他的父亲发生了争执，因此写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点给Jimmy写一封信，告诉你的建议和想法。
要点：
1.你认为孩子是否应该做家务；
2.你的理由：做家务是愉快的；有助于培养独立性；不能过分依赖父母；有义务分担家务；
3.你的建议：倾听父母，了解他们的想法，需要时共同分担，增进亲子关系……（至少两点）。
要求：
1.参考以上提示信息，要点全面；
2.用词恰当，层次清晰，书写规范；
3.可适当发挥，80词左右；
4.严禁出现自己的真实姓名学校名称等相关信息。
Dear Jimmy,
I’m srry t hear that yu had an argument with yur parents.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Lihua
【参考范文】
Dear Jimmy,
I’m srry t hear that yu had an argument with yur parents.But I think it is necessary fr us t d sme husewrk.
Firstly, chres can bring us much fun.It is a gd chance t enjy a weekend with ur busy parents.Secndly, it can als make us understand each ther better and prvide help in time.
Here is sme advice fr yu.The first thing is t listen t yur parents and knw abut their ideas.Then, shw yur lve t them and try t d smething fr the family.Finally, ask them fr help if yu meet difficulties when ding husewrk.Hpe yu will feel better.
Yurs,
Li Hua
3．由于2023年4月28日和29日，长春博硕学校将要进行期中检测，你（Jimmy）和Mike是同班同学，Mike最近心情很不好，他很担心即将来临的考试，感到压力很大，作为他的朋友应该怎样安慰他呢？请根据以下提示，写一封信并给他建议。
要点提示：1.4月17日—21日举办初中部拔河比赛，多参与集体活动和体育锻炼；tug-f-war cmpetitin (拔河比赛)
2.4月份为本校读书月，多读书也能减少压力；
3.五一即将来临，马上可以利用假期放松心情；
4.多与父母或朋友们聊天；
5.看电影，听音乐……
要求：1.内容必须包括以上提示的信息，可适当发挥，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总字数）；
2.逻辑通顺，表达得体，书写工整。
Dear Mike,
I’m srry t hear that yu are unhappy these days.Yu are wrried abut the cming exam.Here is advice fr yu.
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Jimmy
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m srry t hear that yu are unhappy these days.Yu are wrried abut the cming exam.Here is advice fr yu.
First, The tug-f-war cmpetitin in ur schl will be held frm April 17th t 21st.Yu shuld participate in grup activities and d physical exercise mre ften.Secnd, we have activities abut reading in April.Reading mre can als reduce pressure.What’s mre, Labur Day is cming, s yu can use the hliday t relax.Yu can chat with yur parents and friends.Yu can listen t music and watch films with yur friends and s n.I hpe yu can be better.
Jimmy
4．中学生活总伴随着各种大大小小的考试。假设你是李华，最近你的朋友王康因考试压力过大，时常感到焦虑。请根据下图提示给他写一封信，给他一些考前调节情绪的建议，鼓励他以最佳的状态温书迎考。
写作要求：
1.内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范；
2.字数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.不能使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Wang Kang,
I’ve heard that yu are s wrried because f the cming exams these days.Mst f the students may get a little nervus befre exams._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Gd luck t yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Kang,
I’ve heard that yu are s wrried because f the cming exams these days.Mst f the students may get a little nervus befre exams.Here are sme suggestins fr yu t reduce the pressure.
Firstly, yu shuld make a study plan fr yurself in rder t review efficiently.Pay mre attentin t the basic and key pints.Secndly, ask thers fr help when yu have prblems with yur study and life.Yur teachers, parents and classmates are all helpful t yu.Thirdly, a healthy bdy is imprtant t yur study, s eat healthily and exercise prperly.Furthly, relax yurself and keep enugh sleep s that yu can listen t teachers in class mre efficiently.At last, yu must be cnfident.I believe that yu are the best.
Gd luck t yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
5．假如你是 Linlin ，你的好友 Peter 向你询问了学校即将举办的夏令营活动 (Summer Camp fr Teenagers)的情况，并针对如何在新的环境中结识新朋友，征求你的建议。请你根据以下信息， 给他写一封回信。
写作要点：
1.鼓励他积极参加。
2.介绍活动内容：
(1) 开英语晚会：唱英语歌，跳舞……
(2) 参观北京名胜；
(3) 参加读书活动，并和伙伴交流
3.针对如何在新的环境中结识新朋友，给他提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少 80 词。
Dear Peter,
Hw is everything ging?
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I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Linlin
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
Hw is everything ging? Our schl will have Summer Camp fr Teenagers next week.I think it’s a gd chance t make friends.S yu shuld take an active part in it.During the activity, the schl will arrange fr all the peple t live and eat tgether.We will have an English party.In the party, we will sing English sngs, are ging t visit the places f interest in Beijing.Then we will attend a reading activity.After the activity, we will discuss in grups and hand in written reprts.Als, I’d like t give yu sme advice n hw t make new friends.First, yu can chat with thers and yu can talk abut smething like hbbies, fd and s n.And yu shuld be friendly t thers.I think they’ll be nice t yu, t.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Linlin