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写作方法指导
咨询建议类书面表达四步法：
1. 首先要知道给出建议的格式：常用书信格式；
2. 然后写出提建议的原因；
3. 最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议；
4. 写出希望。
写作模板
In recent days, we have t face the prblem____________A, which is becming mre and mre serius. First, ____________（说明A的现状）. Secnd, ____________（举例进一步说明现状）.
Faced with A, we shuld take a series f effective measures t deal with the situatin. Fr ne thing, ____________（建议一）. Fr anther ____________（建议二）. Finally, ____________（建议三）.
常用表达
首段：
I’m srry t hear that yu have difficulty in ding ... .Dn’t wrry abut it! Here are sme useful suggestins I’d like t share with yu.
主体段：
1.主题句：Actually, if yu are careful, yu’ll find varius simple ways t help yu slve the prblem.（其实，如果你细心，你会找到各种简单的方法来帮助你解决问题。）
2.要点：
First and fremst,It’s +adj/n.+fr/f sb. t d ... .S that...（首先也是最重要的，是）
In additin,yu are suppsed t d ... ,which can nt nly ... but als ...(此外，你应该做... ，这不仅可以... 而且...)
What’s mre,yu had better (nt) d ... ,because ...(更重要的是，你最好（不）做……，因为……)
Last but nt least,I suggest yu (shuld) d ... ,frm which,yu’re able t d ...(最后但并非最不重要的一点是，我建议您（应该）做，从中，您可以做到)
尾段：
With these suggestins carried ut,I firmly believe yu will imprve ... a lt.(有了这些建议，我坚信你会进步很多。)
I sincerely hpe that my suggestins can be f great help.Lking frward t yur earliest reply.(衷心希望我的建议能对您有所帮助。期待您的早日回复。)
中考真题精讲
（2023·湖北恩施·中考真题）
自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023—2025）》以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要求：
（1）文中必须包含表格中所给的要点，另对任意一方面补充一条你自己的观点；
（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：physical health 身体健康 psychlgical health 心理健康
Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Nwadays, mre and mre peple have cme t fcus n teenagers’ health. The fllwings are my pinins abut hw we teenagers live a healthy life.
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Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Nwadays, mre and mre peple have cme t fcus n teenagers’ health. The fllwing are my pinins abut hw we teenagers live a healthy life.
Firstly, we must keep healthy. We shuld have a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds f fd and lts f fresh fruit and vegetables. We’d better play sprts at least ne hur every day. Exercise makes us strnger and helps us relax. We shuld get at least eight hurs’ sleep at night, s that we can have enugh energy t study.
Secndly, we have t be mentally healthy. We must be cnfident and have gd mds every day.
Finally, be happy. Happiness is imprtant fr ur health. If yu are wrried abut smething, try t slve it as sn as pssible.
T sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very imprtant fr us. I hpe everybdy can live a healthy life.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②different kinds f不同种类的
③be wrried abut担心
④sum up总结
[高分句型]
①We shuld get at least eight hurs’ sleep at night, s that we can have enugh energy t study.（s that引导的目的状语从句）
②If yu are wrried abut smething, try t slve it as sn as pssible.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·四川雅安·统考中考真题）
自从国家推行“双减”政策（“Duble Reductin” plicy）以来，学生有了更多的课余时间开展课外活动。你校英语社团将举办“怎样让我们的课余生活更有意义？”的演讲比赛，请你以“Hw t make ur spare time mre meaningful?”为主题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你的课外活动和感受。
内容要点：
1.参加志愿者活动，如：看望老人，……；
2.参加俱乐部，如：音乐俱乐部，……；
3.……（至少补充两项活动）；
4.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数80-100，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；
2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear friends,
Since the “Duble Reductin” plicy was carried ut, we have had mre spare time t enjy after-schl activities. Nw let me tell yu hw I make my spare time mre meaningful.
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That’s all. Thank yu.
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Since the “Duble Reductin” plicy was carried ut, we have had mre spare time t enjy after-schl activities. Nw let me tell yu hw I make my spare time mre meaningful.
First, we can take part in mre vluntary wrk, such as visiting the ld and chatting with them. Secnd, we can jin different clubs because different kinds f activities can enrich ur spare time. Third, it’s gd t help ur parents d sme husewrk t shw ur lve fr them. Furth, it is a gd chance fr us t get clse t nature and relax urselves.
In my pinin, we can d sme sprts t make us strnger and healthier. In a wrd, let’s make full use f ur spare time and prmte ur literacy.
That’s all. Thank yu.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Hw t make ur spare time mre meaningful?”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对下文业余时间的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“参加志愿者活动、参加俱乐部、帮助父母、亲近自然”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，介绍自己的观点和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②such as例如
③different kinds f不同种类的
④make full use f充分利用
[高分句型]
①Secnd, we can jin different clubs because different kinds f activities can enrich ur spare time.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②In a wrd, let’s make full use f ur spare time and prmte ur literacy.（let’s d sth句型）
（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than ther girls since I was little. Fr a lng time, this really trubled me. I feel mre wrried because I will start my senir high schl life sn! I am afraid that the students in the new schl will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide t lk mre beautiful, s I want t lse weight by dieting. What d yu think f my plan? Can yu give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting. As yu mentined in the letter, I have sme advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident and psitive, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than appearance. Secndly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, ding prper exercise is necessary. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly.
The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be. I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is n need t d sth没必要做某事
②stay away frm…与……保持距离
③have curage t d sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.（宾语从句）
②Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
（2023·江苏苏州·统考中考真题）
Happy Hme Club本期的主题是“Hw t make Suzhu mre beautiful”，你打算以“Starting frm me and nw”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 触动你的一件事情；
2. 这件事给你的启示；
3. 你的倡议。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting frm me and nw
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【答案】例文
Starting frm me and nw
Last weekend, I went t the city park with my classmates. When we gt there, we were amazed that there were different kinds f rubbish n the grund. We felt very sad abut that. The city is ur hme, s we shuld try ur best t keep the city clean.
First f all, we shuld prtect ur envirnment. Dn’t thrw rubbish arund r spit anywhere. We’d better plant mre trees t make the air clean. Secnd, we are suppsed t be friendly and helpful t thers. Third, we ught t bey the traffic rules. Dn’t ride t fast r play n the street. Last but nt least, remember t save energy. Turn ff the lights and taps in time.
As lng as we try ur best and starting frm me and nw, I believe Suzhu will becme mre and mre beautiful.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；
第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds f 各种各样的
②be suppsed t d sth. 应该做某事
③remember t d sth. 记得做某事
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①When we gt there, we were amazed that there were different kinds f rubbish n the grund.（when引导时间状语从句）
②We’d better plant mre trees t make the air clean. （“sb. had better d sth.”表建议的句型）
③I believe Suzhu will becme mre and mre beautiful.（宾语从句）
（2022·吉林·中考真题）
随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力，以便在衣、食、住、行等方面更好地管理自己。请以“Learning t Manage Our Own Lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.结合实际，谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性。
2.列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。
3.发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。
写作要求：
1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。
2.词数80-100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写规范，卷面整洁。
4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Learning t Manage Our Own Lives
These days, we Chinese teenagers ften depend n ur parents in ur daily lives. _______________________
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In shrt, the earlier we manage ur wn lives, the better it is fr ur future.
【答案】例文
Learning t Manage Our Own Lives
These days, we Chinese teenagers ften depend n ur parents in ur daily lives. we can’t deal with difficulties by urselves. S it’s imprtant fr us t learn t manage ur wn lives.
I think ur parents shuld believe in us and never d everything fr us. Smetimes it’s OK t give us prper advice and they shuld allw us t make ur wn decisins. Als, I think parents shuld encurage us t face the prblems bravely and try t slve them.
Fr me, I seldm did husewrk in the past, because I thught it is ur parents’ wrk. This is a wrng pinin. We shuld learn t d husewrk like sweeping the flr and taking ut the rubbish. I hardly cked either. When my mther was n business, I realized I must learn t ck by myself. After that, I find that cking is nt as difficult as it seems.
In shrt, the earlier we manage ur wn lives, the better it is fr ur future.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学习管理我们自己的生活”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性；第三段列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象；第四段发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）
中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“Hw t Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；
3.词数：80-100词。
Hw t Make Myself Better
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Hw t Make Myself Better
As a teenager, I think I shuld wrk harder t make myself better.
First f all, it is imprtant t live healthily. I will eat mre fruit and vegetables. I will als take exercise every day and get enugh sleep. What’s mre, I shuld wrk hard at all my subjects. I’ll nt be afraid t face challenges any mre and try my best t slve the prblems. Besides, it is necessary t have a gd relatinship with family and friends. Last but nt least, it’s ur respnsibility t take care f ur parents. I’ll als d what I can t help ther peple.
By ding these, I will make myself better and better.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Hw t Make Myself Better”并结合思维导图中的提示词写一篇文章，介绍如何成为更好的自己。
2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从不同的方面介绍如何成为更好的自己；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2022·四川南充·中考真题）
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点：
（1）给出你的建议；
（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；
（3）结合自身经历，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tracy,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. Knwing yu have an interest in Chinese, I suggest yu chse the Chinese curse. With the develpment f China, Chinese is becming mre and mre ppular. Learning Chinese is nt nly a way t cmmunicate, but als a chance t admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese fr many years. I have much experience t share with yu. In my pinin, there are many ways t learn Chinese. It’s useful t read Chinese bks and listen t Chinese sngs. What’s mre, yu are suppsed t jin a Chinese club t practice yur spken Chinese. Learning is a lifelng jurney. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring smething new.
I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Tracy是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性；第二段结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（2021·辽宁中考真题）
作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。
提示：
1、表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常……
2、建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少四条缓解考试压力的具体建议。
要求：
1、观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥；
2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3、词数：80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hw t Deal with the Exam Stress
We students are very busy with schlwrk and in the face f many exams every schl day. Sme f us ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hw t Deal with the Exam Stress
We students are very busy with schlwrk and in the face f many exams every schl day. Sme f us are s wrried abut exams that it’s hard t fall asleep befre them. When we pay much attentin t the exam, the test results wn’t be gd. Parents and teachers will blame them, they will als lse cnfidence. If we have prper stress, we can wrk harder, but if we have t much pressure, it may have a bad effect n ur study. We shuld learn t release pressure.
First f all, we shuld review carefully and make full preparatin befre the exam. Secnd, we shuldn’t stay up late t review fr the exam. Third, after reviewing fr a perid f time, we shuld als relax urselves apprpriately. In additin, if we d well in the exam, we will give urselves apprpriate rewards.
S I hpe everyne can deal with the exam stress prperly and get gd grades.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出考试压力的表现，提出自己的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，多用情态动词shuld提出建议，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2021·重庆中考真题）
教育部近日印发通知，要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以 “My Creative English Hmewrk”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。
要求：1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：1. 做过的最有创意的英语作业（内容、收获……）；
2. 更多有创意的英语作业建议（形式、理由……）；
3. ……
My Creative English Hmewrk
Ding English hmewrk helps us t practice and use what we’ve learned in class.______________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My Creative English Hmewrk
Ding English hmewrk helps us t practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Ding creative hmewrk makes us mre interested in English.
Once ur teacher asked us t write a letter t a freigner. We were tld t intrduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It nt nly helped me imprve my written skills but als prvided a gd chance t spread Chinese traditinal culture.
In my pinin, it’s als a gd chice t draw mind maps. It helps us t have a better understanding f the lessns. Besides, we can learn t sing English sngs, since mst f us lve singing. In this way, ur English as well as hbbies develp.
I hpe we’ll have mre creative English hmewrk in the future.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所给的参考信息以 “My Creative English Hmewrk”为题写一篇征文，从自身经历来谈谈自己的有创意的英语作业，并提出合理的建议。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：审题可知，本文写自身经历时用一般过去时，提建议时可采用一般现在时，人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出，第一段点题；第二段写自身经历，第三段提出建议；第四段总结。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩，如：nt als...，It固定句型等。注意保证上下文语句通顺，条理清晰，文中无单词和语法上的错误。
名校模拟题提升练
（2023·河北唐山·期中）
假如你是李亮，你的朋友Mike发来一封邮件向你询问一些有关健康的建议。下面是邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，给Mike回复一封邮件。
注意：
（1）请认真阅读邮件并回答邮件中的所有问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi Mike,
I’m srry t hear that yu dn’t feel well these days.______________________________________________
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I hpe yu will get better sn.
Li Liang
【答案】例文
Hi Mike,
I’m srry t hear that yu dn’t feel well these days. I’d like t share sme gd ways t keep healthy with yu.
First, eat mre fruit and vegetables. Say n t fast fd such as hamburgers and chips. Eating t much f them may be harmful t yur health.
Secnd, d mre exercise every day. Find ut yur favrite sprt and keep ding it. But remember nt t d t much at ne time.
Third, get enugh sleep. As a teenager, yu shuld sleep at least 8 hurs every day. Never stay up t late.
Finally, try t d things that make yu happy such as talking with yur friends and enjying a relaxing mvie.
I hpe yu will get better sn.
Li Liang
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏回答邮件中所提出的问题，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，表示很愿意提供帮助；
第二步，给出具体的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
say n t 对……说不
be harmful t 对……有害
keep ding sth.继续做某事
stay up t late熬夜
[高分句型]
①Say n t fast fd such as hamburgers and chips.（祈使句）
② Finally, try t d things that make yu happy such as talking with yur friends and enjying a relaxing mvie.（定语从句）
（2023·河北秦皇岛·期中）
每个人的生命只有一次，所以我们一定要珍爱自己的生命。那么在遇到危险时，我们该怎样保护自己呢？请根据以下提示，以Hw t Prtect Ourselves为标题写一篇英文发言稿。
要求：1．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；2．词数80左右，要适当运用连接词语，使句子通顺、连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：self-preservatin（自我保护），keep calm
Hw t Prtect Ourselves
Dear friends,
Everyne has nly ne life. We shuld treasure ur lives. But hw can we prtect urselves? Here are sme suggestins. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank yu!
【答案】参考范文
Hw t Prtect Ourselves
Dear friends,
Everyne has nly ne life. We shuld treasure ur lives. But hw can we prtect urselves? Here are sme suggestins.
Firstly, we shuld realize the imprtance f safety. We shuldn’t break the traffic rules when we g ut. As fr fd, we shuld eat mre healthy fd and less junk fd. We shuld make sure we dn’t hurt urselves when we play sprts r games. By the way, even thugh it’s getting clder and clder these days, we mustn’t g skating utdr withut permissin.
Secndly, self-preservatin is ne f the key skills. If we are in danger, we shuld keep calm first. Then call the plice at 110 r ask the teachers r parents fr help. We shuld avid injuries as much as pssible and keep urselves safe.
In a wrd, we shuld try ur best t prtect urselves and value ur lives.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以Hw t Prtect Ourselves为标题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出如何保护自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“安全”和“自我保护”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①realize the imprtance f safety意识到安全的重要性
②as fr关于
③by the way顺便
④in a wrd总之
[高分句型]
①We shuld make sure we dn’t hurt urselves when we play sprts r games.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If we are in danger, we shuld keep calm first.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·湖北恩施·期中）
保护环境，从我做起。作为一名中学生，我们如何用实际行动来保护我们城市的环境呢？请以“Hw t make ur city greener?”为题，根据以下要点提示写一篇文章。要求：80-100词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
As a middle schl student f Lichuan, it’s ur duty t help build a greener city. ________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
As a middle schl student f Lichuan, it’s ur duty t help build a green city. Hw t build a greener city? Here are my suggestins.
First f all, we had better cycle r take a walk in rder t save energy and reduce air pllutin. Secnd, it’s imprtant t keep ur city clean, s we shuld nt thrw litter arund and spit in public. Third, we ught t plant mre trees s that we can keep ur city clean and beautiful. Last but nt least, it’s necessary fr us t save fd, water, electricity and s n.
I hpe everyne can jin us and try ur best t make ur city greener.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出“如何让我们的城市更环保”的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“方式、益处、建议”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，呼吁大家一起保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①in rder t为了
②in public公开地
③try ne’s best t d sth.尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①Last but nt least, it’s necessary fr us t save fd, water, electricity and s n.（it固定句式）
②I hpe everyne can jin us and try ur best t make ur city greener.（省略that的宾语从句）
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年份
地区
话题
命题形式
2023年
湖北恩施
以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛
提纲作文
四川雅安
以“Hw t make ur spare time mre meaningful?”为主题，用英语写一篇演讲稿
提纲作文
山东滨州
你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
提纲作文
江苏苏州
主题是“Hw t make Suzhu mre beautiful”,以“Starting frm me and nw”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法
提纲作文
2022年
吉林
以“Learning t Manage Our Own Lives”为题写一篇短文
提纲作文
黑龙江齐齐哈尔
以“Hw t Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
提纲作文
四川南充
的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。
提纲作文
2021年
辽宁
简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。
提纲作文
重庆
以 “My Creative English Hmewrk”为主题的征文活动，提出合理建议
提纲作文
身体健康
心理健康
坚持锻炼
拥有自信
保证睡眠
保持好心情
……
……
I ften get sick these days. My dctr tld me that I ate t much meat and chclate. And he advised me t take sme exercise in my free time. But I dn’t knw hw t eat prperly and exercise every day. Can yu give me sme suggestins?
安全对每个人都很重要
交通：外出时遵守交通规则；
食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品。
自我保护是重要技能之一
遇到危险要保持冷静；
要及时报警或向老师、家长求助；
尽可能避免受伤，保证自己的安全。
主题
Hw t make ur city greener
具体做法
方式
益处
(1) 绿色出行，短距离选择骑车或者步行
节约能源，减少空气污染
(2) 不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰
让城市变得干净舒适
(3) 不踩踏草坪和摘花，植树造林
美化城市
你的建议
联系自己的生活实际，提出1-2条具体的合理的建议。