09 开放作文之考前必背-2024年中考英语写作常考话题技巧和范文

这是一份09 开放作文之考前必背-2024年中考英语写作常考话题技巧和范文，共12页。试卷主要包含了外貌，性格，爱好，事例等内容，欢迎下载使用。

必背高分表达
写人叙事类
首段：
(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that wh ften ffers me much warmth in my life. Let me intrduce him t yu.
（ 朋友：患难见真情。我有这样一个朋友，他常常给我温暖。让我把他介绍给你。）
(2) 父母：If yu ask me wh is the mst imprtant ne t me,withut dubt,the answer is my ... . Let me intrduce him t yu .
（如果你问我谁对我来说最重要，毫无疑问，答案是我的……。让我把他介绍给你。）
(3) 老师：In bth my life and study,my ... teacher is special t me because he is nt nly my teacher but als my friend wh has made a great difference t my character.
（在我的生活和学习中，我的……老师对我来说很特别，因为他不仅是我的老师，也是我的朋友，他对我的性格产生了很大的影响。）
主体段：
1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with lng hair and big eyes.
（非常漂亮，但是有点胖，长头发，大眼睛。）
2.性格： an utging wman wh always gets alng well with peple arund her./ ... is very kind t thers and easy t get n with./is s ready t help thers that we all like t make friends with him.（是一个外向的女人，总是与周围的人相处融洽。/ ...对他人非常友善，容易相处。/乐于帮助别人，我们都喜欢做和他做朋友。）
3.爱好：She is especially gd at cking and ften cks different delicius fds fr me.（她特别会做饭，经常给我做各种好吃的。）
4.事例：
（1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet truble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encurages me t face the fact bravely and then tries t help me t check the reasn why I fail. At the same time, she shares her gd ways f studying with me.
（琳达就像一个天使。每当我遇到麻烦，她都会一直在。当我考试不及格时，她总是鼓励我勇敢地面对事实，然后帮助我检查失败的原因。同时，她也和我分享了她学习的好方法。）
（2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, nt nly teaches us hw t learn, but als teaches us hw t be a persn. I remember I made a serius mistakes in Grade seven, that was t cpy thers’ hmewrk. Ms Li knew that. Instead f being angry with me, she tld me the imprtance f study and encuraged me t study hard t becme a talented persn in the future.
（我的语文老师李老师不仅教我们如何学习，还教我们如何做人。我记得我在七年级时犯了一个严重的错误，那就是抄别人的作业。李女士对此心知肚明。她没有生我的气，而是告诉我学习的重要性，并鼓励我努力学习，将来成为一个有才华的人。）
（3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was s that that I cried sadly in my rm. When my mther came frm wrk late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I wke up at night, my mther was still wrking. I was deeply mved. Then I made up my mind t study harder than befre.
（上学期，我考试不及格，以至于我在我的房间里伤心地哭了。妈妈下班迟到了，她耐心地跟我说话，给我打气。那天晚上，当我半夜醒来时，妈妈还在工作。我深受感动。然后我下定决心比以前更努力地学习。）
尾段：
As a sunshine teenager, Xia Hui is a gd example fr us t learn frm./I will treasure the friendship frever.
（作为一个阳光少年，小辉是我们学习的好榜样/我会永远珍惜这份友谊。）
Nw I understand my father’s lve t me. I will never frget what my father did fr me and try my best t make him pleased.
（现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记父亲为我所做的一切，并尽我所能让他高兴。）
He is an excellent teacher I will never frget and lve him frever.
（他是一位优秀的老师，我永远不会忘记和永远爱他。）
必背满分范文
（一）
东京奥运会上跳水小将全红婵一战成名，给全世界留下了深刻印象。假设你是Mary，你的笔友Jhn想多了解一些全红婵的相关情况。请你给Jhn写一封信，介绍一下这位奥运小明星并表达你对她的祝愿。要点如下：
注意事项：
1. 信件必须包括以上要点信息，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数60个左右，信件的开头和结尾部分已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数；
3. 信件必须写在答题卷的指定位置上。
Dear Jhn,
I am happy t tell yu smething abut Quan Hngchan.
_________________________________________________________________________________All the best,
Mary

范文
Dear Jhn,
I am happy t tell yu smething abut Quan Hngchan.
She’s 14. She cmes frm Guangdng. She’s in Chinese diving team. Quan’s parents are farmers. She’s the secnd child in her family. She’s shrt and thin. She lks cute. She lves diving and practises it every day. In her free time, she likes playing cmputer games. Her dream is t get mre champins fr China. I hpe her dream cmes true.
All the best,
Mary
（二）
Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic“I can be better”【以“我可以更好”为题】
提示：校园吉尼斯纪录创造者的经历告诉我们：每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好。请结合自己的具体经历谈谈你对这一观点的认识。
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不子评分。照抄语篇不得分
范文
I can be better
Everyne can change themselves and becme better thrugh hard wrk.
At the beginning f learning English, I felt it was very difficult. I dared nt speak English because my prnunciatin was nt standard. I als thught my classmates wuld laugh at me. It wasn't until I learned abut Guinness Campus" that I realized I culd wrk t change that. I began t get up early every day t read English. I tried my best t imitate the prnunciatin by listening t English sngs and watching English mvies. Finally, I gt an A in the final speaking test.
I believe that as lng as I persist, my spken English will be better and better. Nthing is difficult if yu put yur heart int it.
（三）
每个人的成长，都经历过很多次尝试，有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“My First Try”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。
要求：
语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
词数80-120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
范文
My First Try
When it cmes t the tpic f "My First Try", I’ll never frget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7.
It was my first time t be a vlunteer. As a member f Animal Helpers, I vlunteered t be respnsible fr washing, feeding and playing with hmeless dgs. At the same time, I tk sme phts f them and made psters nline t call n mre peple t give a hand. Thrugh my effrts, ver eight dgs were lucky t find their new hmes. When I saw them taken gd care f and they brught the peple much fun, I gt such a strng feeling f pride.
I realize that each life is imprtant and the tiny things I d can make a difference.
（四）
Write a passage f at least 60 wrds n the tpic“Life is full f beauty”( 根据中文提示，以“生活中充满了美”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
生活并不是缺少美，而是缺少一双发现美的眼睛。只要我们用心感受生活，就能发现身边的美好，也许它只是一个平凡人，一件平常事，一个普通物品，也会给我们的生活增添光彩。请根据自己的经历或者见闻，和同学们分享你在生活中发现的美及感受。
范文
Life is full f beauty
Life is full f beauty. I will never frget the day which makes me feel meaningful. My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes tgether after schl. One day,I waited a lng time but didn't see her. Then I searched fr her in the crner f ur schl. She was crying at that time. She tld me that she was nervus because she wuld have an English test. I decided t help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key pints and ntes. Tw days later, she tld me that she passed it. I felt s happy.
Helping thers is the beauty f life.
（五）
Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗? 你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗? 请以“Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：
根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
范文
Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life
As a saying ges, knwledge makes a wiser man, and sprts make a strnger man. Sprts benefit us a lt in ur life. First f all, ding sprts can make us feel relaxed and energetic after a tiring day. What's mre, it can help make ur bdy strnger and strnger. In additin, we can als learn hw t cperate with thers by ding sprts. Further mre, ding sprts teaches us that patience and perseverance are imprtant in ur lives.
Let's take part in ding sprts! Only by ding sprts, can we live a healthier and happier life.
（六）
水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。
范文
As we knw, water is very imprtant t man, we can’t live withut water. The amunt f water which is suitable t drink is less and less. But sme peple dn’t care abut it. They waste a lt f water in their daily life. Even wrse, they pur dirty water int rivers. They thrw rubbish int rivers, t. Many rivers and lakes are seriusly plluted. Smething must be dne t stp the pllutin. And I think it’s a great shame t waste while millins are in great need f water. I think what we can d is that we have t save every drp f water as pssible as we can. Fr example, we must turn ff the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin t wash ur hands and faces. It’s als a gd idea t encurage my friends and family members t jin me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we dn’t save water, the last drp f water will be a tear-drp f us. I believe if everyne makes a little effrt, we can make a big difference.
（七）
幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80-100词。
范文
Happiness is imprtant in ur life. In fact, happiness is always arund yu if yu put yur heart int it.I will never frget ne thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid t meet my parents. But when I gt back hme late, my parents knew what happened, they said t me: “It desn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside yu when yu need help. We believe yu can be better next time. Never give up!” I was mved and made up my mind t wrk harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in truble, I can feel my parents’ lve. I want t be a gd child fr my parents.
（八）
你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special _______”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
要求：
1. 在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象，如teacher或friend等；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。
范文
My special friend
D yu knw Mr.Smith? He is my English teacher.
He is special t me because he treats me as a gd friend. He always wears a smile and gives me the impressin that he can help me ut whenever I am in difficulty.
He has a gd sense f humr and likes making friends. His classes are very interesting. After class, he ften helps me with my English. He never smkes. He likes playing ftball. He likes China s much that he is planning t live in China in the future.
He is my special friend wh l like very much, and I hpe I can keep in tuch with him.
考前模拟预测
（一）
请以“He/She Has Changed a Lt”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。要求：1. 至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥；2. 80词左右。
范文
He Has Changed a Lt
My friend Jimmy has changed a lt in the last few years.
Jimmy used t be fat and eat a lt f unhealthy fd. Three years ag, his dctr tld him that he shuld d mre exercise and eat healthily. S he tk dctr’s advice and did mre exercise t lse weight. Nw he is thinner and healthier.
Jimmy used t hate the schl life. One year ag, he and his parents had a lng talk. That’s when he decided t change. Nw he studies harder than he used t. He knws that his parents lve him and they are prud f him.
Jimmy used t be shy. His face wuld turn red when he talked t peple. Nw he is mre utging and can give speeches in public. That makes him mre ppular.
Peple sure change! I’m glad t see my friend’s great change.
（二）
用英语讲好中国故事！提升语言能力，传播中国声音。假设China Daily网站中的Culture版块中有一项 “Tell a Chinese traditinal stry” 征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以 “My favrite Chinese traditinal stry” 为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。提示：1. 描述故事内容。2. 故事带给你的影响和启发。要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，字数100词左右。
范文
My favrite Chinese traditinal stryThere are many traditinal stries in China. Amng all f the stries, I like YuGng mves the muntains best.Once upn a time, there was an ld man called YuGng. There were tw high muntains near his hme. They were s high that it tk him a lng time t walk t the ther side. S he decided t mve the muntains. YuGng and his family began t mve the muntains. They kept mving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a gd was s mved that he tk the muntains away.The stry reminds us that nthing is impssible as lng as we wrk hard. We shuld nt give up.
（三）
假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Tm要到中国来，他想了解中国的风俗习惯，请你写一篇短文向他介绍中国的风俗习惯。包括：表达问候，与人就餐，参加聚会等。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文
Dear Tm,I’m glad t hear that yu’ll cme t China. Yu said yu wanted t learn abut the custms in China. Nw, let me tell yu smething abut them.China is a cuntry with a lng histry and there are many custms in China. Nw let me intrduce sme t yu.When yu meet friends, yu shuld greet each ther and just say “hell”, instead f shaking hands frequently. When yu eat at a friend’s hme, yu shuld use yur right hand t hld chpsticks. It is best nt t make nise when eating. It’s plite t eat all the fd in yur bwl. Dn’t knck bwls r plates with chpsticks. This is implite. After dinner, the hst usually makes tea fr the guests. When yu leave, yu shuld say gdbye t the hst plitely. If yur friends invite yu t the party, yu’d better arrive a little earlier, 5 t 10 minutes in advance. Yu can bring a small gift t yur friends. But yur friends wn’t pen presents immediately. This is different frm ther freign cuntries.When in Rme, d as the Rmans d. If yu bey these, I think yu’ll have a great time in China.
（四）
奋斗的道路不会一帆风顺。我们每个人在生活和学习上都会遇到这样那样的困境。你遇到困难时是怎样解决的呢？请以"Hw t get ver difficulty"为题写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1.你遇到了什么困难；
2.你是怎样克服困难的；
3.你的感受。
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和人名；
2.短文词数80左右。...
范文
Hw t get ver difficulty
In ur daily life,we ften maeet different kinds f difficulties.But hw can we get ver them? Here is ne f my experience.When I was in Grade 7, I didn't d well in my lessn first.Exams always brught me endless sadness.As a result, I was afraid f study and I became very lnely.I turned t my teachers fr help,they gave me sme useful advice. They tld me nt t give up because nthing is impssible fr a willing heart. I was mved and wrked harder and harder than befre.Finally, I succeeded.
Nw I understand that I shuld learn t get ver difficulty by meself with cnfidence and hard wrk.
（五）
初中三年，或兴奋，或失落，一切过往，皆为序章。毕业之际，学校将举办以“Sharing”为主题的演讲活动。请根据下面的要点提示，与一篇演讲稿：1.分享心情：高兴、激动、不舍；2.分享心得：在学习、人际交往、克服困难方面的心得；3.分享未来：暑假安排、未来目标。注意:1、文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
Sharing
Gd mrning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great hnr t make a speech here. I will graduate frm my schl sn.
_____________________________________
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening!
范文
Sharing
Gd mrning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great hnr t make a speech here. I will graduate frm my schl sn.
It’s hard t say farewell t all f yu. During the past three years, I realize that we shuld take study seriusly. Fr myself, I always wrk hard in class. I listen t teachers carefully and take ntes. I finish hmewrk n time. My classmates ften help with my schlwrk. With their help, I vercme lts f difficulties and becme much better. I want t say thank yu t all the peple wh have helped me.This summer hliday, I plan t visit my grandparents in anther city. And in the future, I’ll keep n studying hard and stick t my dream. I will never give up n my new jurney.
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening!
Age
14
Frm
Guangdng
Team
Chinese diving team
Family
Parents (farmers);
the secnd child
Lks
Lve
diving (every day)
Like
cmputer games
(free time)
Dream
mre champins (冠军)