专题09 书面表达16篇(最新一模真题)-冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（山东专用）

这是一份专题09 书面表达16篇(最新一模真题)-冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（山东专用），共26页。试卷主要包含了阳光，照亮大地，温暖人心，勇敢是一种可贵的品质，“投我以桃, 报之以李等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1. 要点:(1) 是什么事情让你感受到生活是美好的；
(2) 这件事的经过是什么；
(3) 经历了这件事后你的感受是什么。
2. 要求:(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数 100 左右。
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2．（2024·山东济南·一模）近年来，环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。请你写一篇演讲稿向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起。为保护环境尽一份力。
注意
(1)100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数：
(2)参考表格提示，可适当增加内容，行文连贯，字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Fellw students ,
The envirnmental prblems are getting mre and mre serius nwadays. As students, we shuld d smething t prtect the envirnment. _______________________________________________________________________
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3．（2024·山东济南·一模）读书改变人生，2024年世界读书日的主题是“阅读推动未来”。学校英语社团在社区开展了以Peple’s Favrite Bk-reading Ways为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述并评价调查结果；
2. 陈述你的选择并说明理由。
人们最喜欢的阅读方式调查结果（人数百分比）
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Fr peple, there are many bk-reading ways.
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4．（2024·山东济南·一模）教育部提出劳动教育是义务教育的重要组成部分。劳动有助于我们提升生活技能，创造美好生活，也有助于培养我们的精神品质。你校将开展以“劳动最光荣”为主题的英文征文活动，请你写一篇文章投稿，谈谈你对劳动的看法，平时参与了哪些劳动，有什么收获。
内容包括：
1. What d yu think f labr?
2. What kind f labr d yu ften d?
3. What have yu learned frm ding s?
参考词汇：labr 劳动；glrius 光荣的
写作要求：
1.文中须包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3. 表意清晰、流畅，行文连贯，书写规范;
4. 词数100左右;
5. 文章开头第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Labr is a very imprtant part f ur life.
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5．（2024·山东济南·一模）勇敢是一种可贵的品质。每个人都应该勇敢地面对困难、挑战新事物。某英文网站正在开展以 “勇往直前”为主题的征文活动。请你以 Braveness Makes a Difference 为题目， 用英文写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1. 谈谈你曾经做过的一件勇敢的事；
2. 谈一下这件事情对你产生的影响。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 100 词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Braveness Makes a Difference
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6．（2024·山东济南·一模）生活在变化，社会在进步，我们的家乡也越来越好。你学校英语俱乐部本周日将在你的家乡举办“走进秀美乡村一日游”研学活动。请你以“Changes in My Hmetwn”为题写一篇英语短文，届时介绍一下你的家乡。
内容提示：
1. 过去几年你家乡的变化；
2. 你的感想和对未来的展望。
写作要求：
1. 100词左右；
2. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。
I’m glad t hear that a study trip t my hmetwn will be rganized this Sunday.
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7．（2024·山东济南·一模）中考即将到来，有一小部分同学感到焦虑。学会放松，保持阳光健康的心态，有助于同学们愉快学习。最近，学校英语广播站举行以“健康成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。提示如下：
要求：1. 必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
4. 词数100词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
8．（2024·山东济南·一模）假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Mike给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。
要求：
1. 应回复所有问题，可适当发挥：
2. 词数100 左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Mike,
It’s fantastic that yu will cme t China and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.
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Enjy yur stay in China.
Li Ming
9．（2024·山东济南·一模）“投我以桃, 报之以李。”感恩他人是中华民族的一种传统美德。Teens 杂志社现为中英文化交流活动征稿。无论是受人之恩还是伸出援手，一定有很多故事令你铭记于心。请用英语完成这篇稿件。
内容包括：
1. 讲述你和他人之间发生的感恩故事；
2. 我们为何要常怀感恩之心？
注意：
1. 词数不少于100词；
2. 文章不得出现真实的人名校名等信息。
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10．（2024·山东淄博·一模）某英语杂志“青春专栏”向广大中学生征稿，畅谈青春，展望未来。假设你是李华，打算投稿，请你以“My favrite birthday present—________”为题，根据以下内容提示用英文从拥有此生日礼物的时间、喜欢的原因、它对你的意义等方面写一篇短文投稿。
内容提示：1. Hw lng have yu had it?
2. Why d yu like it?
3. What des it mean t yu?
4. Smething mre abut it.
要求：1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，字数100词左右。
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11．（2024·山东枣庄·一模）许多学生学习成绩不佳，往往与学习效率不高有关。不良的学习习惯，比如注意力不集中或不合理的时间安排等很多因素都可能导致学习效率不高。在学习与生活中，你或你周边的朋友是否存在学习效率不高的问题？请结合自身情况分析原因，给出应对的策略，并以Hw t imprve learning efficiency为题，写一篇英语作文。
要点：
1.说明是否存在学习效率不高的问题；
2.分析自己或他人出现学习效率不高问题的原因，并举例说明；
3.根据你所给出的原因，给出相应的建议。
注意：
1.短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
3.词数 80~100。
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12．（2024·山东枣庄·一模）随着时代的变迁，青少年的娱乐方式也在发生着变化。某英语报社就此话题进行了征稿。请你参考下列表格给报社投稿，谈谈发生的变化以及你的观点和倡议。
注意：1. 80—100词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Nwadays, teenagers have different ways fr fun frm the past.
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13．（2024·山东东营·一模）艺术总是伴随着人的成长，无论是当我们沉浸在幸福中，还是面临困难挫折，它总能给人带来温暖、勇气和力量。在你成长过程中，是不是也有这么一本书、一首歌或者一部电影，对你有特别的影响和意义呢？请你以 My favrite _________为题，介绍一本书、一首歌或者一部电影。
注意事项：
1）字数：100 词左右；
2）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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14．（2024·山东济宁·一模）随着校园 “快乐生活，快乐学习” 活动的开展，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？请你以 “Hw t Be a Happy Student” 为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1.根据下面的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
3.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
4.词数不少于100词。
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15．（2024·山东济宁·一模）运动可以让我们增强体质(imprve health)，树立信心(build up cnfidence)，享受乐趣，获得健康，青少年应该积极参与体育运动。某报刊英语专栏以“Tgether fr a Healthy Future”为题向中学生开展征文活动。请结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
要点：你的运动习惯、经历、运动对你的影响……
要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.80~100 词。
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16．（2024·山东济宁·一模）某报社英文专栏组织初三学子开展“我想对你说”主题征文活动，这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”或许是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢您”或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want t say ______ t ______ ” 补充完整，并以此为题写一篇不少于100 词的短文。
要点：
1. 阐述你说这句话的原因或描述背后发生的故事；
2. 谈谈你的感受。
I want t say ________ t ________
Hw time flies! My junir schl life will cme t an end. When I lk back at thse days, I want t say
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参考答案：
1．
例文：
Sunshine in my life
Everyne has different ideas abut life. In my pinin, life is beautiful and full f sunshine.
Several weeks ag, ne f my classmates Sun was badly ill. He had t be in hspital fr a lng time. But his family was t pr t affrd it. What culd we d? We decided t cllect mney fr him. Everyne in ur class tk ut ur pcket mney. Then, we went t the street n Sunday t cllect mney frm thers. When we sent all the mney t him, he and his parents were deeply mved.
Maybe smetimes we feel unlucky, but we shuld believe life is beautiful. Help and lve will be arund us frever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：在写作时注意阅读题目要求，学生应根据所给提示并结合事件进行描述，适当使用副词和连词等和一些名言警句来增加亮点，保证条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，生活中感受到温暖的事件；
第三步，书写事后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin在我看来
②be full f充满
[高分句型]
①When we sent all the mney t him, he and his parents were deeply mved. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Then, we went t the street n Sunday t cllect mney frm thers. (不定式表目的)
2．例文
Fellw students ,
The envirnmental prblems are getting mre and mre serius nwadays. As students, we shuld d smething t prtect the envirnment.
First, it’s very imprtant t save water and energy in ur daily life. Dn’t frget t turn ff the lights when we leave the rm. Secnd, we are suppsed t reuse the plastic bags when shpping. What’s mre, we shuldn’t thrw rubbish everywhere. Third, we’d better walk, ride a bike r take the bus when we g t schl r g shpping. Last but nt least, we need t plant mre trees and flwers t make the envirnment mre beautiful. Hw imprtant it is fr us t prtect the envirnment! If we keep ding these things, I believe the envirnment will be better and better.
Let’s d it tgether frm nw n.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意文章必须包括所给提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借由说明环境的问题号召大家为环保尽一份力；
第二步，具体阐述保护环境的建议和措施；
第三步，书写结语。希望大家从现在就做起。
[亮点词汇]
①thrw rubbish everywhere乱扔垃圾
②daily life日常生活
③turn ff关掉
④be suppsed t应该
[高分句型]
①It’s very imprtant t save water and energy in ur daily life.（it固定句型）
②Dn’t frget t turn ff the lights when we leave the rm.（祈使句、when引导时间状语从句）
③If we keep ding these things, I believe the envirnment will be better and better.（if引导条件状语从句）
3．例文
Fr peple, there are many bk-reading ways.
Recently, the schl’s English club cnducted a survey in the cmmunity n the theme f Peple’s Favrite Bk-reading Ways. Different peple have different views abut them. Nw here are the results.
As the e-bks becme mre and mre ppular, abut 51% students like e-bks. They like reading n the phne. 21% students like reading nline. 18% students like listening t e-bks. Hwever, nly 10% students like reading a physical bk.
In my pinin, bth e-bks and paper bks have advantages and disadvantages. I prefer e-bks, because I can read bks n the phne n matter where I am. And I think what we shuld d is t use e-bks wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述并评价调查结果；
第二步，陈述你的选择并说明理由。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin按我的观点
②n matter where无论在哪里
[高分句型]
I prefer e-bks, because I can read bks n the phne n matter where I am.（because引导原因状语从句）
4．例文
Labr is a very imprtant part f ur life. I think it is very glrius fr everyne t take part in labr. At hme I ften d sme chres, such as cleaning the flr, washing the dishes, making the bed, cking meals and s n. At schl, I ften help teachers r ther classmates d sme cleaning. Besides these, I still take an active part in sme garbage srting activities in the cmmunity. By ding s, I can nt nly keep my bdy strng but als get a lt f new knwledge. The mst imprtant thing is that I imprve my life skills fr my future. Labr makes me feel very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，谈谈自己对劳动的看法；
第二步，具体介绍自己经常做的劳动；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在劳动中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①The mst imprtant thing is that I imprve my life skills fr my future.（表语从句）
②I think it is very glrius fr everyne t take part in labr.（宾语从句）
5．例文
Braveness Makes a Difference
Braveness is a valuable quality that can help us vercme many challenges and difficulties in life. It is the curage t face ur fears, the determinatin t push thrugh bstacles. I wuld like t share ne f my experiences.
It was a cld winter mrning, and I was standing at the tp f a muntain, lking dwn at the treacherus descent ahead f me. I had cme t hike this muntain with my friends, and while they had all made their way dwn safely, I had frzen in place. Then, I remembered what my grandfather had tld me abut braveness. He said that braveness wasn’t abut being fearless, but abut facing ur fears and mving frward despite them. S, I tk a deep breath, squared my shulders, and began t carefully pick my way dwn the muntain. I fcused n each step, ne by ne, and I didn’t lk dwn r ahead, nly at the grund in frnt f me. I kept ging, and eventually, I made it dwn the muntain.
I still feel prud that I finish the trip. Facing bravely makes me want t d everything better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出“勇敢”这一话题；
第二步，具体介绍自己经历；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①lk dwn向下看
②fcus n专注于
[高分句型]
①Braveness is a valuable quality that can help us vercme many challenges and difficulties in life.（定语从句）
②Then, I remembered what my grandfather had tld me abut braveness.（宾语从句）
6．One pssible versin:
I’m glad t hear that a study trip t my hmetwn will be rganized this Sunday. The past ten years witnessed great changes in my hmetwn.
In the past, peple lived in ld and brken huses. But nw lines f beautiful tall buildings can be seen everywhere. Besides, there are nt nly mre private cars but als wider streets. The envirnment arund my hmetwn als takes n a new lk. All these surprising changes bring us much cnvenience and cmfrt. Peple are living a much richer and happier life than befre.
I am prud f the rapid develpment f ur cuntry. And I am sure that my hmetwn will be mre and mre liveable in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表达对在自己家乡举办研学旅行的开心；
第二步，介绍家乡过去和现在的变化对比；
第三步，表达自己的感想以及对家乡未来的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①witness great changes 见证了巨大的变化
②take n a new lk 焕然一新
③be prud f 以……为傲
[高分句型]
And I am sure that my hmetwn will be mre and mre liveable in the future.（宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
The high schl entrance examinatin is cming sn, and a small number f students are feeling anxius. They are unable t study with peace f mind and wrried abut grades. I have a gd mind t ffer them sme advice n hw t study effectively. It is imprtant t have a sunny attitude. It is gd fr ur mind and bdy. It is als helpful fr us t study.
First f all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remve ur pressure. One way t keep up ur spirits is t take part in sprts. Nt nly des exercise build up the bdy, but als it prvides us time t relax and fresh ur mind. In this way we can memrize things faster and lnger. Resting n time is anther effective means f refreshing and helping us cncentrate better. Last but nt least, we shuld exchange ideas with ur classmates. Thrugh the cmmunicatin we can find supprt, which will encurage us t vercme difficulties in ur study. Keep trying, and we will make it.
I hpe all these can benefit them.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文的要点已给出，注意要点的衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述部分学生的焦虑表现；
第二步，讲述要保持阳光心态的的重要性；
第三步，具体建议如何做。
[亮点词汇]
a small number f少量
Nt als不仅……而且
effectively有效地
[高分句型]
Thrugh the cmmunicatin we can find supprt, which will encurage us t vercme difficulties in ur study.（定语从句）
Keep trying, and we will make it.（祈使句）
Nt nly des exercise build up the bdy, but als it prvides us time t relax and fresh ur mind.（nt als）
8．例文：
Dear Mike,
It’s fantastic that yu will cme t China and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is n August 15 f the lunar calendar. It is in the middle f the fall f the year, s it is called the Mid-Autumn Festival.
On that day, all ur families get tgether and have a big dinner. We als eat mncakes and admire the full mn.
As a guest, yu must pay enugh attentin and give prper praise t the hst and the hstess when they’re intrducing the dishes. Dn’t use yur chpsticks t pick a dish n the plate everywhere. Yu’d better keep quiet when having sup.
Enjy yur stay in China.
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：考生应结合迈克的电子邮件梳理出写作要点，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你能来中国过中秋节真是太棒了”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名称由来、庆祝方式、餐桌礼仪等”几个方面重点介绍中秋节的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望迈克在中国过得愉快”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① get tgether 聚在一起
② have a big dinner 吃一顿丰盛的晚餐
③ admire the full mn 赏月
④ pay enugh attentin t 足够重视……
⑤ give prper praise t 给予适当的表扬
⑥ had better 最好
[高分句型]
① It is in the middle f the fall f the year, s it is called the Mid-Autumn Festival.（s引导结果状语从句）
② As a guest, yu must pay enugh attentin and give prper praise t the hst and the hstess when they’re intrducing the dishes.（when引导时间状语从句）
③ Dn’t use yur chpsticks t pick a dish n the plate everywhere.（祈使句）
9．范文：
N wrd can describe my thanks t yu, my English teacher.
When I first came int the middle schl, I was pr at my English. One day, yu asked me t g t yur ffice after schl. Yu listened t my prblem patiently and encuraged me t keep studying hard. We made a plan fr my English study. After that, yu started t help me frm time t time. Finally, I made great prgress in English. I was mved deeply and really encuraged by yur teaching style and yur kindness. S I achieved much in yur class and I develped a deep lve fr English. I thank yu very much fr all the help yu have given me.
With gratitude, we will have peace f mind, and we want t be clse t thers t make mre friends. What’s mre, thanksgiving is a traditinal virtue f the Chinese natin and an imprtant part f ur traditinal culture. S we shuld always be grateful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者感激的对象——英语老师；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述英语老师在英语学习方面对作者提供帮助的故事；
第三步，书写结语。作者总结人为什么要怀有感恩之心。
[亮点词汇]
①be pr at 不擅长于……；
②encuraged sb. t d sth. 鼓励某人做某事；
③made a plan fr… 为……制定计划；
④a deep lve fr 对……的热爱。
[高分句型]
①When I first came int the middle schl, I was pr at my English. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I was mved deeply and really encuraged by yur teaching style and yur kindness (介词by表方式)；
③S I achieved much in yur class and I develped a deep lve fr English. (and引导并列句)
10．例文
My favrite birthday present—a gldfish
I have received many presents. Amng all the gifts, I lve the gldfish the mst. I have had it fr three years. I always want t have a pet in the family, but my parents dn’t allw me t keep ne. Nw I have my wn gldfish. I will keep it and take gd care f it. This gldfish is very beautiful. Its clur is pink. I lve watching it swimming in the water. Smetimes, I will feed it. I wish it can grw up with me. This is the best birthday present ever!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的四个主要问题，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我收到的生日礼物”来引出下文中对最喜欢的生日礼物的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“拥有的时间、喜欢它的原因、它的意义和其他”四方面入手，重点介绍我最喜欢的生日礼物；
③第三步，书写结语。表达对该礼物的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①take care f 照顾
②grw up 长大
[高分句型]
①I wish it can grw up with me.（宾语从句）
11．例文
Hw t Imprve Learning Efficiency?
In my class, sme students can recite a passage within five minutes, while thers spend much mre time ding it. What makes the difference? It has a lt t d with learning efficiency.
In my pinin, it’s because sme students are lack f gd habits. It’s hard fr them t cncentrate n the things they are ding. What’s mre, many students dn’t make gd use f their time at hme. As sn as they get hme, they start playing games instead f studying.
Here are my suggestins. First f all, we shuld understand the imprtance f learning. Secnd, we shuld be clear abut what we want and develp gd learning habits. If yu fllw these suggestins and take actin, I believe yur learning efficiency will be greatly imprved.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍是否存在学习效率不高的问题；
第二步，分析学习效率不高的原因，并进行适当的举例说明；
第三步，就所给的原因，给出相应的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①have a lt t d with 与……有很大关系
②be lack f 缺乏
③instead f 代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①As sn as they get hme, they start playing games instead f studying.（as sn as引导的时间状语从句）
②If yu fllw these suggestins and take actin, I believe yur learning efficiency will be greatly imprved.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．例文：
Nwadays, teenagers have different ways fr fun frm the past.
In the past, teenagers used t chse games that they culd play utdrs tgether with their friends r family. They wuld climb muntains r play balls with classmates n weekends. These activities were gd fr their health and culd make them happy when they played in the nature.
Hwever, teenagers these days like t stay alne at hme mst f the time. They play cmputer games r chat with friends n the phne. Althugh there are s many kinds f cmputer games, they still feel lnely. What’s mre, these activities are bad fr their eyes and health.
I hpe we teenagers can put dwn ur phnes and g utdrs t spend mre time with thers. It is really imprtant and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要补充；注意条理清晰，表达正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍青少年过去的娱乐方式；
第二步，介绍青少年现在的娱乐方式；
第三步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①used t过去常常
②去户外去户外
③stay alne独自待着
④s many kinds f如此多种的
[高分句型]
①Althugh there are s many kinds f cmputer games, they still feel lnely.（让步状语从句）
②I hpe we teenagers can put dwn ur phnes and g utdrs t spend mre time with thers.（宾语从句）
13．例文
My favrite mvie
My name is Li Hua. I like mvies very much. I think a gd mvie can teach us abut life, r explain what the meaning f life is, what real friendship is and s n. Ztpia is ne f my favrite mvies. It is a cartn mvie. The stry is abut a rabbit that jins the plice frce and slves a difficult case with a fx. I like the mvie because it teaches me t stick t my dream and then t achieve it. “If yu dn’t try anything new, yu’ll never succeed.” These wrds frm the mvie influenced me a lt.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作题目已给出，考生应注意完善题目，文章适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全题干；
第二步，整体对作品介绍；
第三步，介绍你喜爱的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①stick t坚持
②achieve实现
[高分句型]
①I think a gd mvie can teach us abut life, r explain what the meaning f life is, what real friendship is and s n.（what引导宾语从句）
②I like the mvie because it teaches me t stick t my dream and then t achieve it.（because引导原因状语从句）
14．One pssible versin:
Hw t Be a Happy Student
Everyne wants t live a happy life. What shuld we d t be happy? Here are my ideas.
First, gd health is the mst imprtant f all. S we shuld exercise ften. Fr example, we can run fr 30 minutes every mrning r play basketball after schl. Ding sprts is gd fr ur physical and mental health. Secnd, we shuld develp sme gd hbbies. In ur free time, we can spend mre time reading bks we like. We can learn t sing t relax urselves. We can als travel arund t enjy the beauty f nature. Third, we shuld be in gd mds. We need t lve ur life and try t be active. We shuld take an active part in all kinds f activities. And we need t get alng well with thers. When we’re sad, we can cmmunicate with ur parents, teachers r friends. Last but nt least, it’s necessary fr us t frm gd habits. We need t have a balanced diet. We shuld nt nly eat mre fruits and vegetables, but als avid eating t much junk fd. Meanwhile, we need t have enugh sleep every day.
In a wrd, if we d s, I believe we’ll be a happy student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用问句引出话题——如何才能成为一名快乐的学生；
第二步，从健康、爱好、心情及习惯四个方面表述如何才能快乐；
第三步，书写结语，对文章做出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd fr对……有益
②learn t d学习做某事
③get alng well with与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
① When we’re sad, we can cmmunicate with ur parents, teachers r friends.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② I believe we’ll be a happy student.（省略that的宾语从句）
15．例文
As we all knw, ding sprts can make us strng and healthy.
Last term, ne f my friends invited me t jin his basketball team. T be hnest, I was nt gd at playing basketball at that time. But he tld me nt t be wrried and taught me hw t play in persn. Gradually, I gt much pleasure frm this exiting sprt.
As yu can see, ding sprts has influenced me a lt. Firstly, it greatly imprved my physical health. Secndly, I have made a lt f new friends wh share the same interest with me.
Thanks t sprts, my life has been s clrful and meaningful. Let’s exercise tgether fr a healthy future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的相关要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，强调运动的重要性；
第二步，结合自身经历，告诉大家运动带给自己的影响；
第三步，号召大家一起做运动，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①t be hnest老实说
②in persn亲自
[高分句型]
①As we all knw, ding sprts can make us strng and healthy.（动名词作主语）
②Secndly, I have made a lt f new friends wh share the same interest with me.（定语从句）
16．例文
I want t t say srry t my friend
Hw time flies! My junir schl life will cme t an end. When I lk back at thse days, I want t say srry t my friend fr what I did n that April Fl’s Day.
I remember I’d spent days planning thse jkes. As sn as I saw my friend in the classrm, I went all ut t surprise him. Hwever, as the day went n, I nticed his smile disappearing. All f a sudden, I realized I went t far. I felt s regretful as I saw sadness in his eyes. Unfrtunately, I didn’t chse t face my mistake. Since then, ur relatinship has gne frm bad t wrse.
Nw I’ve cme t understand the imprtance f respect in any kind f humr between friends. I hpe he can frgive me fr what I did.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己想说的话以及原因”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自己想表达的是抱歉；
第二步，描述事件的经过，自己想道歉的原因；
第三步，表达自己的感受，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①say srry t对……说抱歉
②all f a sudden突然地
[高分句型]
①As sn as I saw my friend in the classrm, I went all ut t surprise him.（as sn as引导的时间状语从句）
②I hpe he can frgive me fr what I did.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
措施
1.节约水电；
2.少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾；
3.绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等；
4.……
提出希望
……
焦虑的表现
无法安心学习、担心成绩……
保持阳光心态
重要性
有益身心，有助于学习……
具体做法
多运动、按时作息、多与他人交流……
Dear Li Ming,
I’m ging t China as an exchange student this September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. Culd yu tell me: What is the Mid-Autumn Festival? Hw d yu celebrate it? What table manners shuld I pay attentin t when I have dinner with them?
Write sn.
Mike
游戏特点
举例
你的观点和倡议
过去
户外(utdrs)，与别人一起玩
爬山、球类运动……
……
现在
宅，自己玩
打游戏、玩手机……
……