书面表达10篇(重庆名校模拟)-2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(重庆专用)

这是一份书面表达10篇(重庆名校模拟)-2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(重庆专用)，共18页。试卷主要包含了帮助别人如夏花之灿烂等内容，欢迎下载使用。
专题04 书面表达10篇(重庆名校模拟)
1．（2024·重庆渝中·二模）书籍是人生的导师，拥有改变我们命运的力量。2024年的世界读书日的主题为“阅读推动未来”。为了更深入地了解人们的阅读方式，学校英语社团在社区开展了以Peple’s Favrite Bk-reading Ways为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述调查结果；
2. 陈述你的读书方式并说明理由；
3. ……
要求：
1. 80—120词；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Recently, the schl’s English club did a survey in the cmmunity abut peple’s favrite bk-reading ways.
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【答案】参考范文1
Recently, the schl’s English club did a survey in the cmmunity abut peple’s favrite bk-reading ways. Different peple have different views abut them. Nw here are the results.
As smart phnes becme mre and mre ppular, abut 52% f peple like reading n the phne. 20% f peple like reading n the cmputer. 18% f peple like listening t e-bks. Hwever, nly 10% f them like reading a paper bk.
In my pinin, bth e-bks and paper bks have advantages and disadvantages. I prefer e-bks, because I can read bks n the phne r e-readers n matter where I am. We can get infrmatin frm the libraries easily. And I think what we shuld d is t use e-bks wisely.
All in all, everyne has their wn way f enjying bks. N matter what way f reading we chse, we shuld stick t reading and enjy reading.
参考范文2
Recently, the schl’s English club did a survey in the cmmunity abut peple’s favrite bk-reading ways. Different peple have different views abut them. Nw here are the results.
As the e-bks becme mre and mre ppular, abut 52% peple like reading n the phne while 20% take interest in reading n cmputers. In additin, the number f peple wh chse t listen t e-bks is als large, which reaches 18%. Only 10% f them prefer t read paper bks.
Persnally, I still enjy the traditinal way f reading paper bks. I lve the feel f the pages between my fingers and the smell f the ink. It allws me t fcus better and immerse myself in the stry. Mrever, I can easily take ntes n the pages, which is very helpful fr my study.
In cnclusin, while different peple have different preferences when it cmes t reading, we shuld all realize the imprtance f reading in ur lives and make it a gd habit. Let’s embrace reading and let it shape ur prmising/bright future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：应用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述并评价调查结果；
第二步，陈述你的选择并说明理由；
第三步，结尾总结。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin按我的观点
②n matter where无论在哪里
③stick t ding坚持做
④take interest in ding对做……感兴趣
⑤mre and mre越来越
⑥prefer t d宁愿做
[高分句型]
①Nw here are the results.（倒装句）
②I prefer e-bks, because I can read bks n the phne n matter where I am.（because引导原因状语从句）
2．（2024·重庆开州·三模）4月23日是“世界读书日”，为了倡导全民阅读，打造“书香校园”，我校英语俱乐部正开展Enjy Reading主题沙龙，请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍你的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。
要求：1.文章 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Enjy reading
April 23rd is Wrld Bk Day. We are encuraged t read gd bks these days. As fr me, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Enjy reading
April 23rd is Wrld Bk Day. We are encuraged t read gd bks these days. As fr me, every mrning, I spend fifteen minutes reading newspapers fr the latest news. I’m als fnd f nvels and magazines. Besides, bk reviews prvide me with different ideas n great bks. I can als learn sme useful skills by reading, such as taking ntes and sharing ideas after reading.
When reading, I feel relaxed and pleased. It’s the best mment t make friends with thers in life. What’s mre, reading pens my mind and brings me happiness. Thrugh reading, I can experience what I haven’t seen r dne befre.
That’s all. Thanks fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的阅读情况；
第二步，介绍阅读给自己带来的好处；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time ding sth.花费时间做某事
②be fnd f喜爱
③prvide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物
④pen my mind打开我的心扉
[高分句型]
①We are encuraged t read gd bks these days.（被动语态）
②It’s the best mment t make friends with thers in life.（句型：it’s+n.+t d sth.）
③I can experience what I haven’t seen r dne befre.（what引导宾语从句）
3．（2024·重庆九龙坡·二模）最近，教育部发文指出，要建设“和谐有序、丰富活力”的校园，并强调良好的学生关系在其中的重要作用。作为九年级的学长，请你写一篇演讲稿，向同学们说明良好学生关系的重要性，提出建立良好关系的具体建议，并号召同学们一起行动。要求：
1. 词数：80—120词；
2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【答案】例文
My dear friends, tday I’m here t share sme f my ideas n building gd student relatins with yu. As we all knw, gd relatins amng students are quite imprtant fr us. They will help us create a suitable learning envirnment and find aid when we are in truble. Mrever, gd relatins allw us make prgress and have achievements as a whle.
Since building gd relatins is f great imprtance, hw can we d it? I think it’s imprtant t be friendly. We can share ur ideas with ur classmates. We can als get sme useful advice frm thers. Let’s build gd student relatins, and then we can study hard tgether.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明良好学生关系的重要性；
第二步，提出建立良好关系的具体建议；
第三步，总结观点。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all knw众所周知
②make prgress取得进步
③be f great imprtance非常重要
[高分句型]
①They will help us create a suitable learning envirnment and find aid when we are in truble. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．（2024·重庆永川·一模）帮助别人如夏花之灿烂。在日常生活中，你曾帮助过他人或得到过他人的帮助吗？近日，某英文杂志社正在开展以“Help Others fr Jy”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，谈谈“助人为乐”的重要性或意义，并结合自身的经历描述具体的“助人为乐”的事例及感受。
要求：1. 80—120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Help Others fr Jy
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【答案】范文：
Help Others fr Jy As we all knw, helping thers is helping urselves. Hwever, I didn’t truly understand the meaning f helping thers until I actually tk actin.
One day, I saw my friend, Mike, crying alne. Later, I learned that he culdn’t play vlleyball well. Withut thinking twice, I decided t help him. We practiced tgether, whether it was n ht days r rainy days. Thrugh hard wrk, his skill greatly imprved. I still remember the sweet smile he gave me when he succeeded. Whenever I think f the smile, a sense f pride runs thrugh my bdy.
Thanks t this experience, I cme t realize that when helping thers, we can spread warmth and make ur wrld a better place. S, give a helping hand when thers ask yu fr help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：以“Help Others fr Jy”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，谈谈“助人为乐”的重要性或意义，并结合自身的经历描述具体的“助人为乐”的事例及感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，围绕帮助别人就是帮助自己的主题，记叙帮助他人的具体过程；
第二步，描述帮助别人后的感受，可以结合事件的结果来写；
第三步，文章总结，呼吁大家在别人需要帮助的时候能主动伸出援手。
[亮点词汇]
①take actin采取行动
②thrugh hard wrk通过努力
③a sense f pride自豪感
④thanks t...多亏了……
[高分句型]
①I didn’t truly understand the meaning f helping thers until I actually tk actin. (引导的时间状语从句)
②Thanks t this experience, I cme t realize that when helping thers, we can spread warmth and make ur wrld a better place. (宾语从句和时间状语从句的省略句型)
5．（2024·重庆渝中·一模）学生时代除了有忙碌的学习，可敬可爱的老师和同学，还有丰富的校园活动，是人生最美好、最难以忘怀的时代。请根据提示，向大家介绍一至两个你们的校园活动，以及你的感受。
要求：
1.80—120 词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Activities: Reasns:
a ball game interesting
a sprts meeting meaningful
an art festival educatinal
a singing cmpetitin (t) make friends
a science and technlgy festival (t) relax neself
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【答案】例文：
Schl life is nt just abut studying. We als have many exciting activities that make ur schl days memrable.
One f my favrites is the annual sprts meeting. Students cmpete in different sprts, and we cheer them n. It’s nt nly meaningful, but als a great way t shw ur schl spirit and supprt ur friends.
Anther special event is the art festival. Students shw ff their talents in singing, dancing, painting, and s n. It’s a chance t appreciate ur classmates’ creativity and have sme fun. What’s mre, it is very educatinal.
These activities help us learn new skills, make friends, and create memries that will last a lifetime. They make schl life mre than just studying and exams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍校园活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了一至两个校园活动；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①memrable难忘的
②cmpete竞争
③cheer sb n为某人加油
④spirit精神
⑤shw ff炫耀
⑥last持续
[高分句型]
①We als have many exciting activities that make ur schl days memrable. (定语从句)
②These activities help us learn new skills, make friends, and create memries that will last a lifetime. (定语从句)
6．（2024·重庆綦江·一模）假如你是李华，上周末在网上某服装店购买了一件毛衣。收到货后你发现衣服有问题，与客服 (the custmer service agent) 理论，其服务态度 (attitude) 不好，而且不予退换。因此你决定给经理写一封投诉信。
内容包括：
1.服装问题 (颜色，尺寸……)；2.服务问题；3.提出解决方案。
要求：
1.80—120词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Sir,
I’m writing t tell yu abut my experience in yur clthing stre._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t receiving yur reply sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir,
I’m writing t tell yu abut my experience in yur clthing stre.
I bught a sweater there last weekend. When I received the sweater, I fund that there was smething wrng with it. First, its clr isn’t right. I bught a purple ne, but the ne I received is black. Secnd, I rdered a medium size but received a large size instead. Third, the sweater is even brken in sme places. I talked t the custmer service agent abut the prblems. But t my surprise, nt nly was she implite, but she refused t change it, and she even said it was my fault. I was deeply hurt by her attitude.
S, I’d like t give yu sme advice. First f all, yu’d better imprve yur service t yur custmers. Then, yu shuld change my sweater. At the same time, I hpe yu can say srry t me.
I’m lking frward t receiving yur reply sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“投诉商品质量问题，以及与客服沟通却未得到妥善处理”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍写这封信的意图；
第二步，根据题干的要点，描述商品的问题，与客服沟通未能解决问题等信息；
第三步，期待这次不好的购物体验得到妥善解决。
[亮点词汇]
①talk t与某人说
②first f all首先
[高分句型]
①When I received the sweater, I fund that there was smething wrng with it.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②At the same time, I hpe yu can say srry t me.（宾语从句）
7．（2024·重庆大渡口·二模）初中三年，白驹过隙，转眼毕业在即。假设你是九年级A 班的李华，你所在的班级计划举办一场告别初中的晚会 (a farewell party)。请你撰写一份发言稿，谈谈三年来你的成长和收获，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝福。
要求：
1.80—120词，开头已给出， 不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are ging t say gdbye t junir high schl days, I am filled with a mix f feelings—jy fr the happy days we’ve spent tgether and excitement fr the jurney that lies ahead.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are ging t say gdbye t junir high schl days, I am filled with a mix f feelings—jy fr the happy days we’ve spent tgether and excitement fr the jurney that lies ahead.
I still remember the first day f Grade 7 like it was yesterday. I used t be afraid f speaking in public. I thught I wuld never learn English well. But nw, I realize that I was just being silly. Since then, I have tried t speak English in public many times and made s much prgress. Nw I am mre and mre cnfident. Even thugh I am sad that junir high will be ver, I am lking frward t new experiences in senir high schl. I’ve made up my mind t make every effrt t study, fr I believe hard wrk is the key t success. Just as the ld saying ges, “n pains, n gains.” At last, I wuld like t shw my appreciatin t thse standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included.
Thank yu all!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是发言稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“即将告别初中时代，我感慨万千”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你的进步、你的期望、你对同学、老师们的祝福等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“表达我对所有人的感谢”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid f害怕
②even thugh尽管
③made s much prgress取得大的进步
[高分句型]
①I thught I wuld never learn English well. (宾语从句）
②Even thugh I am sad that junir high will be ver, I am lking frward t new experiences in senir high schl.（让步状语从句）
8．（23-24九年级下·重庆江津·期中）4月23日是“世界读书日”，为了倡导全民阅读，打造“书香校园”，你校英语俱乐部正开展Enjy reading主题沙龙，请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍你的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。
注意：1.发言稿中必须包含方框中的提示信息，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80~120；
4.文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
April 23rd is Wrld Bk Day. We are encuraged t read gd bks these days. As fr me,
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That’s all. Thanks fr listening.
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
April 23rd is Wrld Bk Day. We are encuraged t read gd bks these days. As fr me, every mrning, I spend fifteen minutes reading newspapers fr the latest news. I’m als fnd f nvels and magazines. Besides, bk reviews prvide me with different ideas n great bks. I can als learn sme useful skills by reading, such as taking ntes and sharing ideas after reading.
When reading, I feel relaxed and pleased. It’s the best mment t make friends with thers in life. What’s mre, reading pens my mind and brings me happiness. Thrugh reading, I can experience what I haven’t seen r dne befre.
That’s all. Thanks fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的阅读情况；
第二步，介绍阅读给自己带来的好处；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend ding sth.花费时间做某事
②be fnd f喜爱
③prvide sb. with sth.提供某人某物
④pen my mind打开我的心扉
[高分句型]
①We are encuraged t read gd bks these days.（运用了被动语态）
②It’s the best mment t make friends with thers in life.（句型：it’s+n.+t d sth.）
③What’s mre, reading pens my mind and brings me happiness.（动名词作主语）
④I can experience what I haven’t seen r dne befre.（what引导宾语从句）
9．（2024·重庆沙坪坝·一模）春天来临，万物复苏，人们纷纷来到户外感受春天的美好。学校为了缓解学生压力，也发起了周末“踏青”活动。假如你是学校英语杂志主编，请你用英文给同学们发出活动倡议，内容包括：
1.号召大家积极加入“踏青”并说明它的好处。
2.向大家推荐踏青中有意义的具体活动。
3.呼吁大家踏青时绿色出行，爱护环境，并提出可行的建议。
参考信息如下：
踏青：have a spring uting
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【答案】例文
Spring is cming, and all flwers are in full blm. It’s the best time t have a spring uting. We can nt nly enjy the beauty f nature but als breathe fresh air. At the same time, it can als relieve ur study stress. S let’s g t have a spring uting.
During the trip, there are many interesting activities, such as flying a kite, ging fr a picnic, ging camping and s n. Hwever, we shuld take the trip in envirnmentally-friendly ways. Dn’t pick the flwers n the side f the rad. We shuld prtect public facilities. We shuld pick up the rubbish when we see it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，号召大家加入“踏青”，并说明它的好处；
第二步，介绍踏青可进行的一些活动；
第三步，呼吁大家绿色出行，并提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in full blm盛开
②at the same time同时
③and s n等等
[高分句型]
①We can nt nly enjy the beauty f nature but als breathe fresh air. (nt nly ... but als连接的并列句)
②We shuld pick up the rubbish when we see it. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10．（23-24九年级下·重庆渝中·阶段练习）随着科技的日新月异，人类对太空的不断探索，未来人们的生活可能会发生翻天覆地的变化。或许人类会在火星上居住、拥有时光机、开发出全新能源等。请根据表格内容，发挥你的想象，写一篇畅想未来生活的文章。
未来的生活
要求：1．包含表格中的要点；可酌情增加内容。
2．条理清晰，行文流畅，内容积极。
3．不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
The life in the future
Our life may have great changes in the future.
In the future, we will wear clthes that can regulate the temperature accrding t the weather s that we dn’t need t buy s many clthes. As ppulatin grws, we will need mre fd. The rbt will prduce enugh fd fr us. The huses in the future will be different. They will be built with new materials. They are misture-prf, fireprf and earthquake-resistant. In the future, driverless car will becme ppular, which makes it easier fr us t travel arund the wrld.
I hpe all f these can cme true in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容畅想未来的生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍未来的生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①accrding t根据
②cme true实现
[高分句型]
①In the future, we will wear clthes that can regulate the temperature accrding t the weather s that we dn’t need t buy s many clthes. (s that引导的目的状语从句)
②In the future, driverless car will becme ppular, which makes it easier fr us t travel arund the wrld. (which引导的定语从句)
Enjy Reading
Reading habits
Materials: magazines, newspapers, bks...
Time: fr _________ minutes
Skills: take ntes, share ideas after reading...
…
Benefits
Make friends
Open yur mind
Bring yu happiness
…
Help Others fr Jy
imprtance
experience
Feeling
It's imprtant t...
spread lve
..
Yu helped thers/
Others helped yu.
Date: March 5th/...
Place: n the way t schl/at
schl/ in the library/...
Persn: a classmate/ a friend/...
What happened:
first: saw... d/...
then: helped... d/spent time/...
finally: slved the prblem/...
realize the true meaning f
strng feeling f jy in
helping thers/...
衣服
可以调节温度
食物
机器人将会生产足够的食物
房子
新材料建成，防潮（misture-prf）、防火（fireprf），抗震（earthquake-resistant）
交通
无人驾驶汽车成为主流