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    说明文是中考书面表达题中常见的写作形式。在初中阶段,说明文主要要求考生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚的描述,考查考生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示转化为完整文字信息的能力。
    ◆写作要求
    人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人,然后根据需要选取写作素材,简明扼要又重点突出地去介绍,力求真实准确,恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格,或从一般经历到创造性的贡献,在最后常有结论性的评语。
    写人物说明文一般包括以下几点:
    出生年月;2. 主要经历;3. 事迹成就;4. 影响、评价。例如:介绍“感动中国”年度人物江梦南(2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题),介绍“鲵宝宝”(2023·湖南张家界·统考中考真题),介绍王亚平(2022·江西·统考中考真题),介绍“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平(2021·广西桂林·统考中考真题)等等。
    写作方法指导
    一审 要想做到文章切题、要点齐全,审题至关重要。下笔之前要将所给的材料看清楚,读懂材料所要表达的内容或情景。
    二定 一定要点:根据所给材料要点,定出中心句。注意适当发挥,避免逐字逐句翻译。二定方法:常用的说明方法有举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法等。要根据说明的对象、目的来选择最佳的说明方法。
    三理 理顺各中心句之间的关系,排列好各中心句的顺序。说明文常用的结构安排顺序有以下三种:时间顺序、空间顾序和逻辑顺序。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚、脉络明晰。
    四查 查写作要点,查段落层次,查时态语态,查用词、拼写、标点等。通过检查,可以避免一些不必要的错误,使文章趋于完美。
    叙述方法:一般按照时间顺序,从外形到性格,从一般经历到创造性的贡献,最后常有结论性的评语。
    语言简洁生动:说明文的目的是向读者介绍他们不了解、不熟悉的人物、事理等,因此说明文的语言要浅显、简洁、生动。
    时态语态:说明文常用一般现在时。如果说明的是人物、事物过去或将来的情况,则要用过写作模板
    去或将来的有关时态。另外,由于说明文重点放在被说明的人物、事物上,故有些说明文被动语态的使用频率相对比较高。
    介绍人物
    典型事迹
    作出评价
    Can D yu
    He is called ... We all ...
    He ften ... One day... Nt nly... but als...
    引出人物
    He is ... He was brn... He graduated frm... He likes...
    常用表达
    【常用词汇】
    1. 表示外貌特征:beautiful, big nse, black eyes, fat, gd-lking, handsme, healthy, near-sighted, rdinary-lking, pretty, shrt, strng, tall, thin, with a big smile, white-haired, curly/ straight hair, medium height…
    2. 表示性格特点:absent-minded, attractive, bad-tempered, bright, cnfident, friendly, generus, humrus, kind, kind-hearted, lazy, naughty, smart, warm-hearted, wise, utging, quiet…
    3. 表示兴趣爱好:be gd at, be interested in, be fnd f, be pleased with, enjy ding, expect t d, lk frward t ding sth, put ne’s heart int…
    4. 表示经历事迹:becme a member f the …, cncentrate n ding sth, devte neself t, encurage sb t d sth, fight fr, have a gd way f ding sth, make up ne’s mind t d sth, try ne’s best t d sth…
    5. 表示他人评价:a mdel …, be cnsidered as, be famus / knwn as, be regarded as, make great cntributins t ur cuntry, set a gd example t all f us…
    【常用句型】
    1. He/ She is really… 他/她真的是……
    2. He/ She lks like… 他/她看上去像……
    3. He used t be/ have … 他过去常常……
    4. Her favurite… is… 她最喜欢的……是……
    5. She is gd at… 她擅长……
    中考真题精讲
    (2023·湖北荆门·中考真题)
    我国于今年5月30日成功发射神州十六号载人飞船。航天员乘组中的载荷专家桂海潮从小就有一个航天梦,并不断在为实现梦想而努力。假如你是李华,请根据以下要点,号召大家向桂海潮学习,通过努力实现梦想。
    要点:
    1. 努力学习各种知识, 丰富大脑;
    2. 积极参加体育锻炼,增强体质;
    3. 勇于面对不同挑战,永不放弃;
    4. 乐于寻求他人帮助,学会合作;
    5. 你的看法……
    要求:
    1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
    2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
    3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
    4. 词数:100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
    参考词汇:发射 launch (v. );丰富大脑 enrich ne’s mind;乐于 be willing t d;合作 cperate(v.)
    Dear teenagers,
    I’m Li Hua frm Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhu-16 successfully n May 30th this year. One f the astrnauts Gui Haicha is ur mdel. As teenagers, we can learn a lt frm him t realize ur dream.
    _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    The Students’ Unin
    【答案】例文
    Dear teenagers,
    I’m Li Hua frm Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhu-16 successfully n May 30th this year. One f the astrnauts Gui Haicha is ur mdel. As teenagers, we can learn a lt frm him t realize ur dream.
    If we want t realize ur dreams, first f all, we shuld wrk hard t learn all kinds f knwledge t enrich ur brains. Secnd, we shuld take an active part in physical exercise t build up ur bdy. The bdy is the rt f everything. Third, we must be brave enugh t face different challenges and never give up. Finally, when yu are in truble, be willing t ask thers fr help. Besides, it is imprtant t learn t cperate with thers.
    In my pinin, we need a firm heart if we want t realize ur dreams. We shuld have a strng sense f purpse and wrk hard t d it step by step.
    The Students’ Unin
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
    ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
    ③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,开头已给出;
    第二步,根据要点提示具体阐述努力实现梦想需要做的事情;
    第三步,最后表达个人观点。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①all kinds f各种各样的
    ②take an active part in积极参与
    ③never give up永不放弃
    ④in my pinin在我看来
    [高分句型]
    ①If we want t realize ur dreams, first f all, we shuld wrk hard t learn all kinds f knwledge t enrich ur brains.(if引导的条件状语从句)
    ②Finally, when yu are in truble, be willing t ask thers fr help.(when引导的时间状语从句)
    (2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题)
    梦想引领人生,奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南,幼年失聪,生活、求学之路充满艰辛,但学医救人一直是她的梦想,她通过读唇语,学会“听”和“说”,凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力,成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题,写一篇英语短文,内容须包括以下所有要点:
    1. 描述江梦南的成长经历(练习读唇语,努力学习,克服困难,实现梦想);
    2. 谈谈你的梦想(教师/志愿者……)、原因及如何实现。
    参考词汇:读唇语read lips
    注意:
    1. 词数80~100,已给出部分不计入总词数;
    2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
    3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
    A cmmn girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Tuching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. Hwever, she kept fighting against the fate(命运).
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    【答案】 A cmmn girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Tuching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. Hwever, she kept fighting against the fate(命运).
    Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The rad t life and study is full f hardships, but it has always been her dream t study medicine t save peple. S she read lips and studied hard t realize her dream f becming a Dctr f pharmacy.
    I als have a dream. I want t be a teacher when I grw up. It’s been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I als like t teach my knwledge t thers. In rder t realize my dream, I must study hard and stick t my dream.
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
    ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
    ③提示:要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,首先介绍江梦南的成长经历;
    第二步,介绍自己的梦想;
    第三步,介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①be full f充满
    ②grw up长大
    ③in rder t为了
    ④stick t坚持
    [高分句型]
    ①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.(since引导的时间状语从句)
    ②The rad t life and study is full f hardships, but it has always been her dream t study medicine t save peple.(并列连词and以及转折连词but的使用)
    (2021·广西桂林·统考中考真题)
    2021年5月22日,“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落,举世皆哀,人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示,以“The greatest her in my heart—Yuan Lngping”为题,写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。
    【写作要求】1、短文应包括以上信息,为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
    2、文章词数在90词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
    3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。
    The greatest her in my heart—Yuan Lngping
    Yuan Lngping is the greatest her in my heart.
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文:
    The greatest her in my heart—Yuan Lngping
    Yuan Lngping is the greatest her in my heart. He was brn in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study abut rice. In 1974, he develped a new kind f rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began t help peple grw mre rice nt nly in China but als in many ther areas arund the wrld. In 2021, he died in Changsha.
    Yuan Lngping made a great cntributin t the agriculture f the wrld. He slved the prblem f fd fr millins f peple. S he is called the “father f hybrid rice”.
    I think we shuld save fd in ur daily life t remember him. Never waste any fd frm nw n.
    【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求以“The greatest her in my heart—Yuan Lngping”为题,根据表格信息来介绍袁隆平院士的生平世界,要包含生平事迹、成就贡献、纪念他的方式三部分。可适当增加细节。
    2.写作指导:写作时可分为三段,第一段引出主题并介绍袁隆平的生平,第二段总结袁隆平的贡献,第三段提出为纪念袁隆平,要节约食物。介绍袁隆平的生平以一般过去时为主,写如何纪念要使用一般现在时。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
    4.(2021·江苏连云港·统考中考真题)
    我市第八届 “最美港城人”系列评选活动正在进行,你班决定推荐李华参加其类别之一“最美志愿者”的评选。请你以 “The Mst Beautiful Vlunteer为题,给校英文报写一篇短文介绍李华,内容包括:
    (1)品质: 礼貌、善良、有耐心;
    (2)事迹:乐于帮助老师和同学;周末参加各类活动,如去街道打扫卫生;另举两例;
    (3)你的评价:至少两条。
    注意:
    (1)词数 90 左右;
    (2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
    (3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
    The Mst Beautiful Vlunteer
    _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】参考范文:
    The Mst Beautiful Vlunteer
    Li Hua is a plite by. He is bth kind and patient.
    He is a helpful vlunteer. At schl, he is ready t help teachers and classmates. At weekends, he takes part in lts f activities. He ften des sme cleaning in the street. Besides, he ges t the library t help carry bks. Als, he lks after ld peple in the nursing hme.
    We all think Li Hua is such an excellent by that we shuld learn frm him. We’d like t recmmend him fr The Mst Beautiful Vlunteer.
    【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“最美丽的志愿者”为题,介绍李华的相关事迹。
    2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称,时态采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题;第二段介绍他的具体事迹;第三段表达推荐李华参加这个评选的意愿。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
    5.(2023·湖南张家界·统考中考真题)
    假如你是张家界某青少年宣讲团的李娟,国外友人Peter对首届湖南省旅游发展大会的吉祥物之一“鲵宝宝”很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息提示给Peter写一封电子邮件,介绍“鲵宝宝”。
    写作要点:
    写作要求:
    1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
    2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
    3.不少于60词(文章开头及结尾均已给出,不计入总词数)。
    参考词汇:鲵宝宝 Ni Baba 吉祥物 masct 大鲵 giant salamander
    Dear Peter,
    I’m happy t hear frm yu. It’s my hnr t intrduce the masct t yu. In fact, the masct was designed frm the prtected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    I’m lking frward t seeing yu in Zhangjiajie. Let’s experience Tujia culture and enjy the beautiful scenery.
    Yurs truly,
    Li Juan
    【答案】参考范文:
    Dear Peter,
    I’m happy t hear frm yu. It’s my hnr t intrduce the masct t yu. In fact, the masct was designed frm the prtected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander.
    We call it Ni Baba. It has a rund smiling face with big eyes. And it has a small nse and a small muth. In my pinin, it is a little fat but cute. What’s mre, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands fr Tujia culture. Lk, it is waving its little hands and saying hi t yu. It is friendly, isn’t it? Besides, d yu knw why we call it Baba? As far as I can see, it aims t prtect the animal. If yu cme t Zhang Jiajie, yu can’t miss it.
    I’m lking frward t seeing yu in Zhangjiajie. Let’s experience Tujia culture and enjy the beautiful scenery.
    Yurs truly,
    Li Juan
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍“鲵宝宝”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,表明写作意图,引出对“鲵宝宝”的介绍;
    第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“名字、外貌、象征意义”几个方面重点介绍;
    第三步,书写结语。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①In my pinin在我看来
    ②What’s mre而且
    ③stands fr代表
    ④lk frward t期待
    [高分句型]
    ①What’s mre, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands fr Tujia culture.(which引导的定语从句)
    ②If yu cme t Zhang Jiajie, yu can’t miss it.(if引导的条件状语从句)
    (2022·四川·统考中考真题)
    假设你叫李平,你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去伦敦Linda家住一段时间。请你根据表格信息,用英语给Linda写一封邮件,介绍你姐姐的基本情况。
    注意:
    (1)文中不得出现个人真实信息,如姓名、校名等;
    (2)文中应包含表格所给信息,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
    (3)词数80-100。
    Dear Linda,
    _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Ping
    【答案】例文
    Dear Linda,
    I’m glad t write t yu. Tday I want t intrduce my sister Li Rng t yu.
    She is 16 years ld. She is f medium height and she has shrt black hair. She is easy-ging, ut-ging and friendly. She likes histry because she thinks it helps her learn abut the histry and culture f the past. She likes t g t museums and she likes the cultural atmsphere f the museum. She likes cking and she always cks fr us. She likes playing basketball and she ften plays basketball n weekends. She ften wears T-shirts and jeans.
    I hpe yu will help her and she wn’t give yu any truble.
    Yurs,
    Li Ping
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据表格内容介绍姐姐的基本情况,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,表明写作意图。借用“介绍姐姐”来引出重点介绍的内容;
    第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、爱好和穿着”几个方面重点介绍;
    第三步,书写结语。表达希望对方帮忙,姐姐不会给对方添麻烦。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①向……介绍……
    ②f medium height中等身高
    ③learn abut学习关于……
    ④n weekends在周末
    [高分句型]
    ①She likes histry because she thinks it helps her learn abut histry and culture f the past.(because引导的原因状语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
    ②I hpe yu will help her and she wn’t give yu any truble.(and连接并列句)
    (2021·甘肃兰州·统考中考真题)
    假如你是李华,通过你校外籍教师,你认识了一位英国的新笔友Richard,他很想了解你的一些情况。请你根据下面表格中的信息,给他写一封邮件,向他介绍情况。
    要求:1. 邮件包括提示中所有的写作要点;
    2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
    3. 邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;
    4. 词数不少于 80,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,请抄写在答题卡的相应位置。
    Dear Richard,
    I’m glad t knw yu.
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】例文
    Dear Richard,
    I’m glad t knw yu. I heard that yu wanted t knw me. Nw let me intrduce myself t yu.
    I am utging and friendly. I am nice t everyne and always ready t help thers. I like playing basketball and listening t music. Basketball helps me strng and music makes me feel relaxed. I have a happy and warm family and we lve each ther. I want t be a teacher in the future. I am ging t study hard and prepare t be a gd teacher.
    I am glad t be yur pen pal and I am sure we can learn a lt frm each ther. I hpe yu will visit me sn.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇电子邮件。要求根据提示信息,写一封邮件给Richard,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
    2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己的个人信息和梦想等内容;第三段展望二人的友谊并期待Richard未来可以来参观。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
    8.(2021·湖南永州·统考中考真题)
    每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字,如张桂梅、钟南山、你的妈妈×××……假如你是李华,请给你的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件,介绍你心目中的一位英雄。
    注意:
    (1)信中必须包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹;
    (2)信中不得出现自己的校名和姓名;
    (3) 80词左右(首段已给出,不计入总词数)。
    Dear Linda,
    Hw are yu getting n? I’m writing this email t share a stry with yu.
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文:
    Dear Linda,
    Hw are yu getting n? I’m writing this email t share a stry with yu. As we knw, mst peple have heres in their hearts. Fr me, Dr. Zhng Nanshan is my her in my heart. He graduated frm Beijing Medical Cllege. He is ne f the famus dctrs in China.
    In the winter f 2019, the COVID-19 brke ut in China and acrss the whle wrld. Zhng Nanshan nt nly led but als tk an active part in the battle against it. He wrked hard day and night treating the patients. With the help f him, sn the COVID-19 was under cntrl.
    He is a gd dctr as well as a great her in my heart. I think a her shuld nt nly be brave, but als be ready t help thers.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【详解】1.题目解读:题目要求给自己的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件,介绍自己心目中的一位英雄,信中需包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹。
    2.写作指导:本文在陈述事实和观点时,时态采用一般现在时为主,在描述发生在过去事情时,时态采用一般过去时为主,人称主要为第一人称和第三人称;注意本文是一封电子邮件,要按照正确的格式来写作;可以先列出写作要点及每个要点可能用到的表达,再进行写作,要条理清晰,行文连贯;最后写作完成时应检查文章的表达是否符合语言规范和英文表达习惯等。
    9.(2021·青海西宁·统考中考真题)
    假如你是王宁,你想成为2022年北京冬奥会(Winter Olympics)的志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一篇80词左右的自荐信。开头已给出,不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
    内容包括:
    1.个人信息;
    2.自身优势(爱好特长、经历等);
    3.你将为此要做的准备;
    4. ……
    Dear Sir,
    I have heard that sme vlunteers are wanted in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing.
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文:
    Dear Sir,
    I have heard that sme vlunteers are wanted in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing. I am writing t apply fr a psitin.
    My name is Wang Ning, aged 17, a senir high schl student. My favurite sprts are skating and swimming. It helps me have a keen mind t reprt smething at a fast speed and have a strng bdy t wrk day and night. I want t get the wrk f interpreter, because I’m gd at Chinese and English. What’s the mst imprtant is that I used t be a vlunteer fr the University Games, which gives me a lt f experience related t games. If I get the wrk, I will wrk hard, make sme cntributin t 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
    I am lking frward t yur early reply.
    Yurs,
    Wang Ning
    【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示内容,写一封自荐信,申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者,要包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
    2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态多采用一般现在时,讲述经历时用一般过去时。要在信件中写清楚自己的个人信息、优势、将会做的准备,并适当补充要点。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
    10.(2022·江西·统考中考真题)
    学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动,请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息,再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质(persnality),最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
    要求:
    1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
    2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
    3.词数80—120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Hell, everyne! It’s my hnr t intrduce an astrnaut her — Wang Yaping. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank yu!
    【答案】例文:
    Hell, everyne! It’s my hnr t intrduce an astrnaut her — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 42-year-ld wman brn in a small village in Shandng Prvince. She likes playing sprts very much.
    Wang Yaping is the first female astrnaut wh perfrmed spacewalk by Shenzhu XIII. She deserves ur highest respect fr her persistence in hard training. She lves her wrk and never gives up.
    T learn frm Wang Yaping, I am ging t reflect n ur weak pints and wrk hard t d better. I’m ging t vercme the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard wrk can pay ff.
    Thank yu!
    【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质,在最后讲打算如何向她学习。
    2.写作指导:写作时要结合一、三人称,时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式:第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息;第二段谈其优秀品质;第三段讲自己的计划;最后一段收尾,感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
    名校模拟题提升练10篇
    (2023·河北秦皇岛·统考三模)
    一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄,一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。现你校正在开展“以先进人物为榜样,立志做有为的新时代中国青年”为主题的征文活动。请你以 “The Her in My Heart” 为题,用英语写一篇短文。
    提示:
    (1) Wh is yur her?
    (2) Why d yu like him/her?
    (3) Hw can yu becme a better man like him/her?
    要求:
    (1)短文须包括提示中所给内容要点,可适当发挥;
    (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
    (3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
    The Her in My Heart
    Everyne has a her in the heart.
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文
    The Her in My Heart
    Everyne has a her in the heart. Fr me, the her in my heart is a great teacher named Zhang Guimei.
    She tried her best t help the pr girls wh are in the muntain village t g t schl. She devted herself t her career althugh she was seriusly ill. I will learn frm her and try t help the peple wh are in truble.
    As a teenager, I will give a hand t the peple arund me. I will wrk hard t make a gd cntributin t ur mtherland.
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
    ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
    ③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,介绍你的英雄是谁;
    第二步,具体阐述你为什么喜欢他/她;
    第三步,最后表达你怎样才能成为像他/她那样更好的人。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①try ne’s best t d尽某人最大的努力做
    ②devte neself t献身于,专心于
    ③make a gd cntributin t为……做出贡献
    [高分句型]
    ①She tried her best t help the pr girls wh are in the muntain village t g t schl.(wh引导的定语从句)
    ②She devted herself t her career althugh she was seriusly ill.(althugh引导让步状语从句)
    (2023·湖南永州·统考二模)
    假如你叫李明,你即将初中毕业,回首过去的三年,有许多老师教过你,但其中历史老师夏老师是你最喜欢的老师。请根据下列表格内容提示,写一篇短文介绍他。
    要求:
    1. 词数80左右,可适当发挥。
    2. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
    3. 语句完整,意思连贯,语法正确。
    4. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。
    Hell, everyne! My name is Li Ming. I will graduate frm junir high schl sn. Lk back at the past three years, many teachers taught me, but
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文
    Hell, everyne! My name is LiMing. I will graduate frm junir high schl sn. Lk back at the past three years, many teachers taught me, but my favrite teacher is my histry teacher, Mr.Xia. He is Xia Gudng. He is a 42-year-ld man teacher. He was brn n May 23rd, 1976. He is f medium height with shrt hair and a pair f glasses. He is friendly and humrus. He likes playing basketball and telling stries. His histry classes are very interesting and lively, s almst all the students like his classes. Als, he gets n well with his students and care fr them. He is ne f the mst ppular teachers in ur s n. All in all, I like my histry teacher best during junir high schl.
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已部分给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的信息和要点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,引入主题,介绍自己最喜欢的老师;
    第二步,通过个人信息、爱好、特点等方面具体介绍这位老师;
    第三步,收尾,表达自己对老师的感情。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①get n well with相处得很好
    ②all in all总而言之
    [高分句型]
    ①He likes playing basketball and telling stries.(and连接并列句)
    ②He is f medium height with shrt hair and a pair f glasses.(介词短语作状语)
    (2022·贵州铜仁·统考三模)
    近期,三名中国宇航员完成了为期六个月的任务,安全返回地球。假如你是阳光中学学生李华,你最钦佩的就是给女儿摘星星的女航天员王亚平大校,请你用英语写一篇短文,向你校英语报投稿,讲述王亚平的故事。要点如下:
    1. 王亚平,41岁,再次创造历史,成为在太空待了100多天的第一位女航天员。
    2. 王亚平成为中国首位走出太空站的女航天员,迈出了中国女性舱外太空行走第一步。
    3. 她站上了“最高讲台”,在太空舱内给学生进行了一场现场直播的科学讲座,成为我国首位在太空上课的女老师。
    4. 要继续进行太空探测,还需要几代人的努力。
    注意:
    1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
    2. 词数90左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
    3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
    参考词汇:太空站:space statin 太空探测:space explratin 讲台:platfrm 钦佩:admire 探测:explratin 一代(人):generatin
    Three Chinese astrnauts have cmpleted their six-mnth missin and returned t the Earth safely.
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文
    Three Chinese astrnauts have cmpleted their six-mnth missin and returned t the Earth safely. I admire the wman astrnaut Wang Yaping mst. She kept her prmise that she wuld be back with stars fr her daughter.
    Wang Yaping, at the age f 41, has made histry again as she is nw the first Chinese wman t stay in space fr mre than 100 days. Mrever, she is als the Chinese female wh tk the first step nt the space, utside f the space statin. Believe it r nt, she even std n the highest platfrm t give students a live science lecture frm space. Students cnsider her as the first female teacher in space.
    Fr space explratin t cntinue, it requires the effrts f generatins. As a result, all the teenagers shuld study harder t devte t ur cuntry like Wang Yaping, ur her.
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
    ②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,介绍王亚平的个人信息;
    第二步,介绍王亚平在太空方面取得的成绩;
    第三步,表达自己的感悟。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①at the age f在……岁时
    ②mre than多于
    ③cnsider sb as把某人看作
    [高分句型]
    ①She kept her prmise that she wuld be back with stars fr her daughter.(that引导的定语从句)
    ②As a result, all the teenagers shuld study harder t devte t ur cuntry like Wang Yaping, ur her(动词不定式作目的状语)
    (2022·河北唐山·模拟预测)
    2022北京冬奥会赛场上,中国天才少女谷爱凌因超人的运动天赋、乐观的个性和不断挑战自我的形象,成功收获了众多粉丝的喜爱。谷爱凌曾直言,天分仅仅是一部分,而大部分是努力以及自律的生活方式。请你根据下面的表格,介绍一下这位人气偶像,并谈谈你从她身上学到了什么。
    提示: 1.What d yu knw abut Eileen Gu?
    2.What can yu learn frm her?
    要求:1. 短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两项要点,可适当发挥。
    2. 文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
    3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
    参考词汇:talent天赋 self-discipline自律
    My idl(偶像) is Eileen Gu.
    _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文:
    My idl(偶像) is Eileen Gu. She was brn n September 3, 2003. She is 1.75 meters tall. Her father is an American persn. Her mther is a Chinese persn. She has many hbbies, such as hrse riding, pian, skiing and s n. She studied skiing at the age f three and sn shwed her talent. When she was 9 years ld, she became a champin. In the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, she wn tw gld medals and ne silver medal. She will enter Stanfrd University in the fall f 2022.
    I think Gu Ailing’s achievements and talents are nly part f it. Mst f them are hard training and self-discipline lifestyle. She is self-cnscius and self disciplined. Ambitin and lve are the wings f Gu Ailing’s success.
    【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,要求根据所给英文提示介绍中国天才少女谷爱凌,包括她的生日、家庭、爱好以及经历和成就。
    2.写作指导:本文人称以第三人称为主;时态采用一般现在时为主,用过去时描述经历。同时注意文章的连贯性,保证条理清晰。
    5.(2023·陕西商洛·模拟预测)
    5月18日至19日,中国—中亚峰会在陕西省西安市举行。为此,西安市专门招募了200多名志愿者,从事中亚峰会的翻译、接待等服务工作。假如你是李华,请你根据下列的提示尝试写一份自荐信,说明自己愿意做志愿者的优势。
    提示:1.热爱中国文化和历史;
    2.能用英语讲好中国故事;
    3.性格外向,喜欢交朋友;
    4.爱好广泛,乐于尝试新事物;
    5.此次活动意义重大等。
    要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
    2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
    3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
    4.词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
    Dear Sir r Madam,
    I’m Li Hua frm Xi’an. May I have the hnr t wrk as a vlunteer at China-Central Asia Summit? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lking frward t yur early reply.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】范文:
    Dear Sir r Madam,
    I’m Li Hua frm Xi’an. May I have the hnr t wrk as a vlunteer at China-Central Asia Summit?
    I was brn in Xi’an, s I knw abut Xi’an histry and culture a lt. With the help f my English teacher, I am gd at speaking English. I am able t tell Chinese stries t freign visitrs in English. I’m such an utging girl that it’s easy fr me t cmmunicate with thers. As a teenager, I am ready t try smething new all the time.
    As far as I’m cncerned, vlunteer wrk is very meaningful. I prmise t be an excellent vlunteer if yu chse me.
    Lking frward t yur early reply.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中“做志愿者优势”的介绍要点,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
    【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作意图。我想要成为中国—中亚峰会的志愿者;
    第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“热爱中国文化和历史、英语好、性格外向、乐于尝试新事物”等几个方面介绍做志愿者的优势;
    第三步,书写结语。表明此次志愿者工作很有意义,希望能够收到对方的回复,自己被选中。
    【亮点词汇】①with the help f在……的帮助下
    ②be gd at ding擅长做某事
    ③be able t d能够做某事
    ④be ready t d乐于做某事
    【高分句型】①I’m such an utging girl that it’s easy fr me t cmmunicate with thers.(引导结果状语从句)
    ②I prmise t be an excellent vlunteer if yu chse me.(if引导条件状语从句)
    (2023·吉林·统考二模)
    参与志愿者活动有助于提升思想品德,培养社会责任感。假如你是李华,你所在的社区正招募志愿者,服务类型有照顾老人、指导儿童读书、辅导小学生功课、打扫小区卫生等。请你给社区负责人写一封自荐信,申请参加志愿者活动。
    内容包括:
    1. 你的个人信息介绍(年龄、性别、性格……);
    2. 你的兴趣爱好和个人能力;
    3. 你打算参加的志愿者活动(至少 2 项);
    4. 你对志愿者工作的看法。
    写作要求:
    1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可适当发挥;
    2. 词数80—100,书信的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
    3. 书写规范,卷面整洁;
    4. 文中不能出现考生姓名及学校名称。
    Dear Sir r Madam,
    I’d like t be a vlunteer in ur cmmunity.
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs truly,
    Li Hua
    【答案】例文
    Dear Sir r Madam,
    I’d like t be a vlunteer in ur cmmunity. My name is Li Hua. I am a 15-year-ld by. I am utging and friendly. I’d like t vlunteer in the children’s hme n Sundays. I’ll help them clean their rms. Besides, I’ll nt nly give away sme strybks t them but als tell them stries. I’m gd at singing and dancing and I can teach children t sing and dance. In additin, I speak English well and I can teach them English as well.
    Even thugh it is hard wrk, I can get pleasure and imprve myself. As the saying ges, “Helping thers is helping urselves.” As a middle schl student, I will keep it in my heart and fill myself with a strng will f devtin.
    I hpe that yu can ffer me a chance as a vlunteer. I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
    Yurs truly,
    Li Hua
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容写一封自荐信,申请参加志愿者活动,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的个人信息、兴趣爱好和个人能力;
    第二步,介绍自己打算参加的志愿者活动和对志愿者工作的看法;
    第三步,书写结语。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①give away赠送
    ②be gd at擅长
    ③In additin此外
    ④lk frward t期待
    [高分句型]
    ①Besides, I’ll nt nly give away sme strybks t them but als tell them stries.(nt als...)
    ②I hpe that yu can ffer me a chance as a vlunteer.(that引导宾语从句)
    (2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·统考二模)
    假如你是张强,校学生会招募志愿者为来哈尔滨旅游的外国游客服务。请根据以下提示信息给学生会王明老师写一封自荐信,并说说你想成为志愿者的原因。
    写作要点:
    1. 很希望能成为志愿者中的一员。
    2. 介绍你自己
    (1)15岁,来自九年三班。
    (2)性格开朗,乐于助人。
    (3)擅长英语口语,能很好地与外国人交流。
    3. 说说你想成为志愿者的原因。
    写作要求:
    1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
    2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
    3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
    4. 至少80词。
    Dear Wang Ming,
    I’m happy t hear that ur schl is recruiting vlunteers.
    _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    I’m lking frward t yur reply! Best wishes!
    Yurs,
    Zhang Qiang
    【答案】例文:
    Dear Wang Ming,
    I’m happy t hear that ur schl is recruiting vlunteers. I’m writing t yu t apply fr the vlunteer wrk. I strngly hpe t becme ne f the vlunteers.
    I’m a 15-year-ld student frm Class 3, Grade 9. I’m utging and ready t help thers in my daily life. What’s mre, I’m s gd at speaking English that I can cmmunicate with freigners in it fluently.
    T be a vlunteer, I can nt nly help thers but als help myself, because I can have a gd understanding f the wrld. I believe I can get much knwledge and wrking skills frm helping thers. Besides, it can imprve my English and it’s quite helpful fr my future life.
    If I am accepted, I’ll try my best t d it well.
    I’m lking frward t yur reply! Best wishes!
    Yurs,
    Zhang Qiang
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ① 题材:这是一篇自荐信,为记叙文;
    ② 时态:主要是一般现在时;
    ③ 提示:写作内容包括:意愿、个人信息、申请原因。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,简单介绍自己想成为志愿者;
    第二步,介绍自己;
    第三步,描述想成为志愿者的原因。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①be gd at擅长
    ②nt nly ... but als ... 不仅……而且……
    ③besides此外
    ④try ne’s best t d尽某人最大的努力做
    [高分句型]
    ① What’s mre, I’m s gd at speaking English that I can cmmunicate with freigners in it fluently.(结果状语从句)
    ② If I am accepted, I’ll try my best t d it well.(条件状语从句)
    8.(2022·内蒙古·模拟预测)
    假设你是李华。你的网友Simn观看了北京的冬奥会开幕式,感到特别的震撼。尤其喜爱冬奥会的吉祥物冰墩墩和雪容融。他想多了解一些关于冰墩墩的寓意,请你给他写一封回信。要点如下:
    1. 冰墩墩是一个穿着宇航服的大熊猫的卡通形象。它是一位来自未来的冰雪运动员。
    2. “冰”的意思是汉字的冰,代表了纯洁和力量,是冬季运动会的象征。
    3. “墩墩”象征着大熊猫憨态可掬的形象,意味着强壮和活泼的,也代表孩子。
    4. 冰墩墩整体则体现了运动员强壮有力的身体、坚忍不拔的意志和鼓舞人心的奥林匹克精神,
    5. 现在是一墩难求。
    注意:
    1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
    2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
    3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
    4. 提示词汇:a cartn image 卡通形象 purity and strength 纯洁和力量
    a winter sprts athlete 冰雪运动员 rbust and lively 强壮和活泼的
    tp selling prduct 热销产品
    Dear Simn,
    Thanks fr yur letter. I’m glad that yu like Bing DwenDwen and Shuey RhnRhn, the fficial masct f Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022.
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs truly,
    Li Hua
    【答案】例文
    Dear Simn,
    Thanks fr yur letter. I’m glad that yu like Bing DwenDwen and Shuey RhnRhn, the fficial mascts f Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022. I am als crazy abut them, especially Bing DwenDwen. It’s a cartn image f a panda wearing a spacesuit. It lks like a winter sprts athlete frm the future.
    “Bing” means “ice” in Chinese, which is a symbl f winter sprts. It als stands fr purity and strength. “Dwen” suggests health. “Dwen Dwen” gives the image a mre friendly feel. It means rbust and lively. Mrever, it als represents children. Altgether, “Bing Dwen Dwen” shws the spirit f the Olympics, including a strng mind and a healthy bdy.
    Bing DwenDwen which is a tp selling prduct is ne f the mst ppular mascts in the wrld.
    Yurs truly,
    Li Hua
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示信息,介绍关于冰墩墩的相关内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍冰墩墩”来引出重点介绍的内容;
    第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍冰墩墩的寓意;
    第三步,书写结语。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①be crazy abut着迷于
    ②lk like看起来像
    ③a symbl f……的象征
    ④stands fr代表
    [高分句型]
    Bing DwenDwen which is a tp selling prduct is ne f the mst ppular mascts in the wrld.(which引导的定语从句)
    (2022·吉林长春·校考模拟预测)
    小作文
    长春电视台要为校园节目招聘中学生主持人, 邀请形象好,有才艺,善于沟通的同学参加,假如你是李明,请根据以下表格给负责人张女士写一封应聘信介绍自己。(表格内容需要都包含在内)
    Dear Mrs. Zhang,
    I want t apply fr the hst jb.
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Hpe I can get the chance. Thanks.
    【答案】例文
    Dear Mrs. Zhang,
    I want t apply fr the hst jb. I want t intrduce smething abut myself.
    My name is Li Ming. I am 15 years ld. I study in Class One, Grade Nine f N. 2 Middle Schl in Changchun. I am tall and thin. I have big eyes. I always wear a smile n my face. I am utging. I like t make friends with thers. I like ding sprts very much because I think they can make me healthy.
    Hpe I can get the chance. Thanks.
    Yurs,
    Li Ming
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇小作文;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
    ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,介绍自己写这封信的目的;
    第二步,介绍自己的个人信息以及爱好;
    第三步,期待得到这个机会。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①apply fr申请
    ②make friends with sb与某人交朋友
    [高分句型]
    ①I like ding sprts very much because I think they can make me healthy.(because引导原因状语从句)
    (2023·山东日照·日照市田家炳实验中学校考二模)
    学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英语演讲活动,请你按照下面的要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息,再谈谈她的优秀品质,最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
    1. 42岁,出生于山东省的一个小村庄,爱好运动……
    2. 热爱祖国,为中国感到骄傲,克服训练中的困难,永不放弃……
    3. 计划如何向她学习……
    注意:
    1. 词数:90左右;
    2. 根据提示要点表述,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
    3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
    Hell, everyne! It’s my hnur t intrduce an astrnaut her—Wang Yaping. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Thank yu!
    【答案】例文
    Hell, everyne! It’s my hnr t intrduce an astrnaut her—Wang Yaping. Wang is a 42-year-ld wman brn in a small village in Shandng Prvince. She likes playing sprts very much.
    Wang Yaping is the first female astrnaut wh perfrmed spacewalk by Shenzhu XIII. She deserves ur highest respect fr her persistence in hard training. She lves her wrk and never gives up.
    T learn frm Wang Yaping, I am ging t reflect n ur weak pints and wrk hard t d better. I’m ging t vercme the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard wrk can pay ff.
    Thank yu!
    【详解】[总体分析]
    ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
    ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
    ③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
    [写作步骤]
    第一步,承接短文开头,简要介绍王亚平的个人信息;
    第二步,根据要点谈谈她的优秀品质,可列举具体的事例;
    第三步,结合具体事例介绍计划如何向她学习并书写结语。
    [亮点词汇]
    ①learn frm sb向某人学习
    ②reflect n反思
    ③vercme the difficulties克服困难
    ④pay ff偿清,回报
    [高分句型]
    ①Wang Yaping is the first female astrnaut wh perfrmed spacewalk by Shenzhu XIII.(wh引导的限制性定语从句)
    ②I’m ging t vercme the difficulties I meet just as Wang did.(省略引导词that引导的限制性定语从句,as引导的方式状语从句)
    Facts abut his life
    生平事迹
    1930 be brn, in Beijing;
    1964 start a special study abut rice;
    1974 develp a new kind f rice;
    1980 begin t, help peple grw mre rice,
    nt als...,
    China, many ther areas arund the wrld;
    2021 die, in Changsha;

    Cntributins
    成就贡献
    slve, the prblem f fd, fr millins f peple,
    call, the “father f hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父)

    One f the best ways t remember him
    纪念他最好的方式之一
    shuld, save fd, never waste any fd

    Name
    Ni Baba
    Appearance (外貌)
    rund face, big eyes…
    Xilankapu scarf (西兰卡普围巾)…
    Meaning (象征意义)
    be friendly…
    say hi t…
    prtect the animal…


    姓名
    Li Rng
    年龄
    16
    外貌
    中等身高、黑色短发
    性格
    随和、外向、友好
    爱好
    历史、博物馆、烹饪、打篮球
    衣着
    T恤、牛仔裤
    Persnal infrmatin(个人信息)
    Persnality
    utging, friendly
    Hbby
    play basketball, listen t music…
    Family
    happy, warm…
    Dream(梦想)
    want t be, be ging t…
    Friendship (友谊) between yu and Richard
    learn frm each ther, visit…
    写作要点
    具体内容
    1. Persnal infrmatin
    ●Age: 42
    ●Birthplace: a small village in Shandng Prvince
    ●Hbby: sprts
    2. Persnality
    根据完形填空B篇概括(不得照搬原文)
    3. Yur plans
    ①________
    ②________

    姓名
    夏国栋
    性别

    年龄
    42岁
    出生日期
    1976年5月23日
    长相
    中等身高,短头发,戴一副眼镜。
    个性
    友好,幽默
    爱好
    打篮球,讲故事
    特点
    上历史课生动有趣,几乎所有学生都喜欢他的课。
    其它
    与学生相处融洽,关心学生,是学校最受欢迎的老师之一等等。
    Name
    Eileen Gu
    Birth
    September 3rd, 2003
    Family
    father (American), mther (Chinese)
    Hbby
    hrse riding, pian, skiing
    Experience and achievement(成就)
    3 years ld—start skiing
    9 years ld—becme a champin (冠军)
    the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics—tw gld medals (金牌)
    姓名
    李明
    年龄
    15 岁
    学校
    长春市第 2 中学,9 年 1 班
    外貌
    ……
    性格
    ……
    爱好与特长
    ……

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