专题05 开放作文-2024年中考英语写作分类指导（真题+模拟）

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开放作文一般是要求考生在题目设置的特定情景下按照特定的要求，自由地发表评论、抒发情感，让考生有最大限度的发挥空间，同时也对考生的语言组织能力和创新能力提出了更高的要求。
开放作文通常会给出简短的提示，要求考生根据题干要求表达自己的感想。同时，这种命题方式也给考生提供了较大的个性展示空间，使得考生的创新思维能力和发散思维能力得到充分的发挥。此类作文的答案并不限定，只要考生言之有理，不出现偏题。遗漏要点等问题，所写内容符合题目要求即可。
写作方法：
相对于提纲作文而言，开放作文限制较少，留给考生自由发挥的空间更大。
开放作文的写作步骤：
认真审题，提炼主题
开放作文主要分为图画型、标题型和材料型三种，不同类型的开放作文写作时的第一步是相同的，即分析图画、标题或材料所提供的信息，进而确定主题。需要注意的是图画型中所给出的图画的寓意可能不止一个，考生按自己的理解阐述一个即可。
联系生活，确定要点
以自己确定的主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，确定写作的要点。近几年中考英语书面表达试题凸显时代性，考生应多关注社会生活实际，培养辩证思维能力，多角度展开思考，力求出新。
细化要点，布局谋篇
将要点进一步细化，使要点更丰满。对于开放作文，通常我们可 以采用三段式的写作模式来行文，这一行文模式使文章脉络清晰，在一定程度上降低了行文难度。下笔前，最好拟个提纲，以明确主次，切忌心中无数、边想边写。写作攻略
斟词酌句，组句成篇
选择适当的词语或结构将要点表达出来，选择适当的句型和适当的过渡语组句成文。切忌一边用汉语思考，一边“翻译”。要尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式来表达相关内容，但也要避免过多地使用同一种表达方式，尽量使用不同的单词、短语和语法结构，使表达多样化。适当使用连接词，使句子间的衔接自然、流畅。
必背高分表达
一、叙事描写类
首段：
(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that wh ften ffers me much warmth in my life. Let me intrduce him t yu.
（ 朋友：患难见真情。我有这样一个朋友，他常常给我温暖。让我把他介绍给你。）
(2) 父母：If yu ask me wh is the mst imprtant ne t me,withut dubt,the answer is my ... . Let me intrduce him t yu .
（如果你问我谁对我来说最重要，毫无疑问，答案是我的……。让我把他介绍给你。）
(3) 老师：In bth my life and study,my ... teacher is special t me because he is nt nly my teacher but als my friend wh has made a great difference t my character.
（在我的生活和学习中，我的……老师对我来说很特别，因为他不仅是我的老师，也是我的朋友，他对我的性格产生了很大的影响。）
主体段：
1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with lng hair and big eyes.
（非常漂亮，但是有点胖，长头发，大眼睛。）
2.性格： an utging wman wh always gets alng well with peple arund her./ ... is very kind t thers and easy t get n with./is s ready t help thers that we all like t make friends with him.（是一个外向的女人，总是与周围的人相处融洽。/ ...对他人非常友善，容易相处。/乐于帮助别人，我们都喜欢做和他做朋友。）
3.爱好：She is especially gd at cking and ften cks different delicius fds fr me.（她特别会做饭，经常给我做各种好吃的。）
4.事例：
（1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet truble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encurages me t face the fact bravely and then tries t help me t check the reasn why I fail. At the same time, she shares her gd ways f studying with me.
（琳达就像一个天使。每当我遇到麻烦，她都会一直在。当我考试不及格时，她总是鼓励我勇敢地面对事实，然后帮助我检查失败的原因。同时，她也和我分享了她学习的好方法。）
（2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, nt nly teaches us hw t learn, but als teaches us hw t be a persn. I remember I made a serius mistakes in Grade seven, that was t cpy thers’ hmewrk. Ms Li knew that. Instead f being angry with me, she tld me the imprtance f study and encuraged me t study hard t becme a talented persn in the future.
（我的语文老师李老师不仅教我们如何学习，还教我们如何做人。我记得我在七年级时犯了一个严重的错误，那就是抄别人的作业。李女士对此心知肚明。她没有生我的气，而是告诉我学习的重要性，并鼓励我努力学习，将来成为一个有才华的人。）
（3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was s that that I cried sadly in my rm. When my mther came frm wrk late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I wke up at night, my mther was still wrking. I was deeply mved. Then I made up my mind t study harder than befre.
（上学期，我考试不及格，以至于我在我的房间里伤心地哭了。妈妈下班迟到了，她耐心地跟我说话，给我打气。那天晚上，当我半夜醒来时，妈妈还在工作。我深受感动。然后我下定决心比以前更努力地学习。）
尾段：
As a sunshine teenager, Xia Hui is a gd example fr us t learn frm./I will treasure the friendship frever.
（作为一个阳光少年，小辉是我们学习的好榜样/我会永远珍惜这份友谊。）
Nw I understand my father’s lve t me. I will never frget what my father did fr me and try my best t make him pleased.
（现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记父亲为我所做的一切，并尽我所能让他高兴。）
He is an excellent teacher I will never frget and lve him frever.
（他是一位优秀的老师，我永远不会忘记和永远爱他。）
说明介绍类
（开头）
Nwadays, _______ (引出要说明的事物或现象) is becming mre and mre ppular / imprtant / cmmn / serius. It means that _______ (简单介绍其定义或特征).
（中间）
There are several aspects / reasns / effects / suggestins abut _______ (要说明的事物或现象).
①First f all, _______ (描述第一个方面或原因或影响或建议).
②Secndly, _______ (描述第二个方面或原因或影响或建议).
③Thirdly, _______ (描述第三个方面或原因或影响或建议).
④Besides, _______ (描述其他方面或原因或影响或建议).
（结尾）
In cnclusin, _______ (总结全文或提出自己的看法或建议).
【词汇】
1. neighbr/brder(vt.) 毗邻；环绕
2.be lcated/situated in坐落在
3. serve as…充当/用作……
4. highly-develped高度发达的
5.fficial language官方语言
6.the third largest city第三大城市
7.in the intersectin f在……的交叉处
8.n its east lies…东边有……
9.be rich/abundant in盛产
【句型】
1. It cvers an area f 7.6 millin square kilmeters .
2.It has a small ppulatin f ver 10 millin.
3. Canberra, the capital f Australia, is a beautiful city.
4. The Opera Huse is well knwn thrughut the wrld.
5. China has a ppulatin f ver 1.4 billin.中国有十四亿多人口。
6. China has a very lng histry f ver 5,000 years.中国有五千多年的悠久历史。
7. The area f this schl is 6,000 square meters.这个学校占地面积有6000平方米。
8. Yibin is an imprtant transprtatin center f Sichuan Prvince, with high-speed rail, expressways, waterways and airlines cnveniently available t the city.宜宾是四川省重要的交通枢纽，高铁、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。
9. Every year the picturesque scenery attracts lts f visitrs frm hme and abrad.
每年这如画的风景吸引了国内外很多游客。
It is very cnvenient fr yu t cme t ur city. \ The best way t experience… is t take a bus tur. \ It takes … (time) t take a bus frm… t…\. … is nly a few bus stps frm dwntwn.\. … is within easy reach.
三、咨询建议类
【开头句】
学习篇
1. I am veryglad t hear that yu will cme back t China and study in my schl next term. Here are sme suggestins fr yu.
2.In rder t have mre chances t practice and imprve English, we are invlved inmany kinds f grup wrk and pair wrk activities in English classes.
3. S I wuld like t suggest that everyne shuld brrw mre bks and read gd bks.
建设文明城市
1. Nwadays we are trying ur best t make Xining becme a civilized city.As students, we must knw what we shuld d and what we shuldnt d.
2.As junir students, we have als made sme cntributins t the civilized Suqian.
3.Here are my ideas abut hw t create a harmnius cmmunity.
4. S hw can we help prtect ur city's envirnment and make it a greener place t live? Here are sme small things we all can d and shuld d.
保持健康
1.As we knw, keeping in a gd md is gd fr ur health and study. Here are sme suggestins fr yu.
2. Summer hliday is cming. And swimming safety becmes a big prblem. S I'd like tgive yu sme advice t keep ff the danger.
【中间句】
交流
1. If yur parents get angry, yu shuld try t cmmunicate with them abut it.
2.Besides, if smene desn't want t exchange his r her ideas, maybe he r she may lse the chances t knw mre new methds abut learning English.
文明城市
1. D remembern matter where we g, be sure nt t thrw litter everywhere.
2. Firstly, when we are n the way t schl frm hme, we shuld fllw the traffic lights and rules t avid the traffic accidents.
3. Of curse, we shuld set up a recycling site r even the recycling website the Internet t make it easier.
保持健康
1. T keep yurself safe，yu mustn't g smewhere dangerus.
2. In the schl, I take an active part in P.E. lessns. Smetimes we play ftball and vlleyball. Smetimes we play basketball, table tennis r badmintn. Ftball is my favrite sprt.
【结尾句】
1. I hpe my suggestins will be helpful fr yu.
2.All in all, we will try ur best t d what we can d t make urselves and Suqian city mre civilized.
3.If yu fllw the advice that I have mentined abve, yu will be successful.
4.Last but nt least, the gvernment can make sme rules even laws t make peple realize the seriusness f e-waste.
四、观点看法类
【开头句】
1.As fr it , different students have different thughts. Sme students stand by it, thers are against it. As far as I'm cncerned, I think study trip is gd fr students, and here are my reasns.
2. D yu agree that yur parents have a secnd child?Different students have different pinins abut it.
3. Last week, wehad a discussin abut the ht tpic “T change r nt”. I think different peple have different chices t deal with prblems.
【中间句】
1.As fr me, I'd lve t have a brther r sister as cmpany, s that I can share my happiness and srrw with him r her anytime.
2.There is n dubt that junk fd is delicius and attractive, but it surely des harm t ur bdy.
3.What's mre, d mre utdr activities. As lng as yu are busy with smething interesting, yu will mre prbablyget away frm junk fd.
【结尾句】
1.In a wrd, bth the cck and the hen are useful. It is wrng fr them t see their wn use instead f seeing thers' use.
2. If everyne makes a cntributin t building a green city, Ezhu will becme a better place t live in.
3. I'm sure a gd balance between learning and playing can make a great cntributin t kids' grwth.
必背满分范文
（2023·山东淄博·统考中考真题）
某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favrite bk”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。
注意：
1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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【答案】例文
My favurite bk
Gd bks are valuable treasures. Amng all the bks I’ve read, the Mnkey King is my favurite bk.
The Mnkey King is the main character in the traditinal Chinese bk Jurney t the West. He is nt a nrmal mnkey. In fact, he is brave enugh t fight with any bad persn and he can always win the fights. S I like t read it.
The bk mainly talks abut three things. First f all, it tells us why the mnkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and bjects he can change int. Secndly, the bk shws us hw the mnkey uses his magic stick. Smetimes he can make the stick s small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but nt least, the bk tells us hw the mnkey fights with bad peple. I like t read this part very much because the mnkey always tries his best t win the fights.
The bk teaches us t be brave when we are in truble. And it als tells us t keep fighting t help the weak. Mst imprtantly, it tells us t keep trying in ur lives and never give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求介绍自己最喜欢的书，包括其主要内容及喜欢它的理由；考生应按照要求写作，正确用词，使作文表达流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己最喜欢的书是什么；
第二步，详细介绍这本书的主要内容以及你喜欢它的理由；
第三步，介绍从这本书中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact 事实上
②try his best t d sth. 尽他最大的努力做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①First f all, it tells us why the mnkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and bjects he can change int. (why引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)
②I like t read this part very much because the mnkey always tries his best t win the fights.(because引导的原因状语从句)
（2023·山东东营·统考中考真题）
旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“The place I want t visit”为题，写一篇100 词左右的短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
The place I want t visit
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【答案】例文：
The place I want t visit
Beijing, the secnd largest city in ur cuntry, is the place I want t visit.
There are several reasns why I wuld like t visit Beijing. First, Beijing is the capital f China, and has a histry f mre than 3,000 years. It has been the capital fr many dynasties. Secnd, there are many histrical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. There are als sme new stadiums, including the Bird Nest and the Water Cube, which were built fr the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
I am really lking frward t ging there and visiting all the wnderful places. At the same time, I hpe Beijing will be mre and mre beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求以“The place I want t visit”为题写短文介绍自己想要参观的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍想要去参观哪里；
第二步，谈谈想去这个地方的原因；
第三步，介绍想要在那里干些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth. 想要做某事
②such as 例如
③lk frward t ding sth. 期待做某事
④at the same time 与此同时
[高分句型]
①There are several reasns why I wuld like t visit Beijing.（why引导定语从句）
②Secnd, there are many histrical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.（there be句型）
（2023·吉林长春·统考中考真题）
某报正在以“Challenge”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语故事及体会来投稿。
要求：1.写一个自身或其他人的故事；
2.适当增加细节，行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文：
Challenge
Life is full f ups and dwns. N ne can lead a life withut any challenges. Hwever, I believe challenges make a better me. I was pr in English in Grade 7, which trubled me a lt. Then I made up my mind t learn English well. Frm then n I gt up early t memrize new wrds and useful sentence patterns. Besides, I did many English exercises. Indeed it was nt an easy jb t catch up with my classmates, but I kept ging and never gave up. At last, my hard wrk paid ff, and I made great prgress in English.
This taught me a lessn: Dn’t be afraid f challenges, because they cme hand in hand with achievements.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求以“Challenge”为题写短文投稿，结合自身或他人的故事来谈谈遇到的挑战及自己的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲讲自身应对挑战的经历；
第二步，谈谈自己从这次挑战中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be full f 充满
②make up ne’s mind t d sth. 下定决心做某事
③catch up with 赶上
[高分句型]
①I was pr in English in Grade 7, which trubled me a lt.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②Dn’t be afraid f challenges, because they cme hand in hand with achievements.（祈使句的否定形式；because引导原因状语从句）
（2023·新疆·中考真题）
每个人的成长，都经历过很多次尝试，有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“My First Try”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.词数80—120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Try
When it cmes t the tpic f “My First Try”,
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【答案】例文：
My First Try
When it cmes t the tpic f “My First Try”, I’ll never frget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7.
It was my first time t be a vlunteer. As a member f Animal Helpers, I vlunteered t be respnsible fr washing, feeding and playing with hmeless dgs. At the same time, I tk sme phts f them and made psters nline t call n mre peple t give a hand. Thrugh my effrts, ver eight dgs were lucky t find their new hmes. When I saw them taken gd care f and they brught the peple much fun, I gt such a strng feeling f pride.
I realize that each life is imprtant and the tiny things I d can make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求“My First Try”为题，讲述自己成长中的第一次尝试，注意描述清楚细节，用词要准确，语句要通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，讲述自己第一的尝试是在什么时候；
第二步，具体介绍第一次尝试做的事情，以及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语。阐述自己的领悟。
[亮点词汇]
①vlunteer t d sth志愿做某事
②be respnsible fr负责
③call n号召
④take gd care f好好照顾
[高分句型]
①When I saw them taken gd care f and they brught the peple much fun. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I realize that each life is imprtant and the tiny things I d can make a difference. (宾语从句)
（2023·黑龙江绥化·统考中考真题）
我们的生活丰富多彩，每个家庭都发生过一些有趣的事，请选择一件用英语写一篇短文，与我们分享。
写作要求：
（1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）词数不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
I have a happy family. There are many funny things in my family.
One day, my mther and I went t a park. We had a gd time and we decided t have lunch in the park. My mther bught sme milk and bread. My mther tld me t wash my hands befre lunch. Hwever, when we came back, ur bread was gne! We thught that smene tk it. We are very angry. I thught that the thief wuld cme back t take the milk. S, my mther and I hid behind a tree and waited. One hur later, n ne came and we were very hungry. We gave up and we wanted t g hme t have smething t eat. Suddenly, I fund smething under the chair. Oh, it’s ur bread!
What a funny thing!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍自己家庭中发生的一件趣事，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己家发生的一件趣事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a gd time玩得开心
②give up放弃
[高分句型]
①My mther tld me t wash my hands befre lunch.(动词不定式作宾语补足语)
②when we came back, ur bread was gne!(when引导的时间状语从句)
③What a funny thing!(感叹句)
（2023·四川成都·统考中考真题）
你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。
注意：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词)；
2. 须全面反映图文信息；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数80左右。
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【答案】例文：
Stay Safe Online
With the wide f spread f the f the Internet, we have easy access t almst everything we want t knw. Meanwhile, there are als hidden dangers that we can’t see thrugh. Then what shuld we d t stay safe nline?
First f all, prtect yur privacy. Dn’t give away yur persnal infrmatin like name r address. Secnd, dn’t click n any strange link s as t avid prperty lss. Third, never see strangers yu meet nline. Finally, always be plite in the virtual wrld. Try nt t be a target fr a cyberbully.
Only when we bey the rules abve ca we build a healthy and harmnius nline wrld.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出我们面对的网络安全问题。
第二步，对如何保证网络安全提出一些建议。
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①with the wide f spread f随着……广泛传播
②first f all首先
③give away泄露
④click n点击
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, there are als hidden dangers that we can’t see thrugh. (that引导定语从句)
②Then what shuld we d t stay safe nline? (动词不定式表目的)
（2022·青海·统考中考真题）
当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“China in Ten Years”为题，畅想并描述十年后的祖国。
要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
China in Ten Years
Nwadays, ur cuntry is develping fast. It has made great achievements in
many fields. What will China be like in ten years? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
China in Ten Years
Nwadays, ur cuntry is develping fast. It has made great achievements in many fields. What will China be like in ten years? Can yu imagine the future f China?
I think China will be the largest, the richest and the mst develped cuntry in the wrld. In the future, we can live n any planet in the slar system. And we dn’t have t wrry abut garbage pllutin, because we can disslve it as sn as pssible, which will benefit ur life. What’s mre, peple even dn’t need t build a huse by themselves, and rbts can d it instead f human beings. Even s, educatin will be mre cnvenient, n matter where yu are, yu can learn what yu need frm the Internet.
That’s the future China. What’s yur pinin?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题，畅想中国未来十年是什么样子；
第二步，从生活，工作，交通等方面畅想未来。
[亮点词汇]
①made great achievements 取得众多成就
②wrry abut 担心
③instead f 代替
[高分句型]
①And we dn’t have t wrry abut garbage pllutin, because we can disslve it as sn as pssible, which will benefit ur life.（because原因状语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
②n matter where yu are, yu can learn what yu need frm the Internet.（n matter引导让步状语从句）
（2022·江苏盐城·统考中考真题）
学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“One Thing I will D fr ________”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你将为朋友、家人、学校或社会做的一件事。
注意事项：
（1）补全题目，如“my friend, my parents, ur schl”等；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One Thing I will D fr ________
I have made great prgress in the past three years. Nw I want t d ne thing fr
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【答案】例文：
One Thing I will D fr My Parents
I have made great prgress in the past three years. Nw I want t d ne thing fr my parents.
I want t make a breakfast fr my parents. I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast. Then, the next mrning I will get up early s as nt t wake my parents. I will make my mther’s favrite sandwiches and cffee. My father likes t eat tmat beef ndles fr breakfast, I will learn hw t ck n my phne. Make sure they can have a delicius breakfast after getting up.
I have had this idea in my heart fr many years, but I never get the chance t d it. In the past few years, my parents always gt up early t prepare breakfast fr me. It is their lve and supprt that make me better, s I want t return them with the same lve. I lve them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：根据情景综合运用各种时态，注意主谓保持一致性；
③提示：文章写作要点已给出，注意将作文标题补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己想为谁做一件事；
第二步，具体阐述自己想做什么事，以及怎样做这件事；
第三步，阐述自己为什么想做这件事。
[亮点词汇]
①want t d sth.想要做某事
②get up起床
③make sure确保
④prepare sth. fr sb.为某人准备某物
[高分句型]
①I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast. （what引导的宾语从句）
②It is their lve and supprt that make me better（It is+被强调部分+that+其他）
（2022·新疆·统考中考真题）
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行
2.一次难忘的比赛
3.一次难忘的志愿服务
……
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。
Lking back at these past three years, I had a lt f sweet memries…
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【答案】例文
Lking back at these past three years, I had a lt f sweet memries.
Last summer vacatin, I decided t learn t swim. At first, I was afraid f swimming in the water. I didn’t feel gd in the water. But the cach said he wuld prtect me. Then I started swimming, but I culdn’t swim frward at all. With the cach’s help, I knew hw t mve and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I culd swim by myself. I was very excited and prud f myself.
What I learn frm this experience is that nthing is impssible if I put my heart int it and try t d it bravely.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
考前模拟预测
（2023·浙江·模拟预测）
目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinin n Cheating in Examinatins”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：
1. 主要原因；
2. 个人看法；
3. 注意：（1）短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）短文题目与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
My Opinin n Cheating in Examinatins
It is knwn t us all that sme students cheat in examinatins at schl. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My Opinin n Cheating in Examinatins
It is knwn t us all that sme students cheat in examinatin at schl.
On the ne hand, as students, we ften take examinatins at schl, but smetimes we have t many examinatins which are t difficult fr us. On the ther hand, sme f us are lazy and dn’t wrk hard at ur lessns. S when taking examinatins, we smetimes cheat in rder t get better results t please ur parents and teachers.
In my pinin, it is wrng t cheat in examinatins because it breaks the schl rules. We students shuld be hnest and try t get gd results by studying hard instead f cheating in examinatins. What’s mre, we shuld imprve ur study methds and get well prepared fr examinatins.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括“作弊的原因”和“对作弊的看法”，需要具体描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些学生考试作弊（已经给出）；
第二步，介绍作弊的原因；
第三步，介绍对于作弊的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①n the ne the ther hand一方面……另一方面
②in rder t为了
③break the schl rules违反校规
④instead f而不是
⑤get well prepared fr好好做准备
[高分句型]
① smetimes we have t many examinatins which are t difficult fr us.（定语从句）
②In my pinin, it is wrng t cheat in examinatins because it breaks the rules f schls.（it的固定句型）
（2023·云南昆明·昆明八中校考模拟预测）
提示：在初中三年的学习生活中，好习惯伴随着你的成长和进步。播种习惯，收获性格；播种性格，收获命运。请你以“Gd habits make me ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈好习惯对你学习或生活的影响。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Gd habits make me ________
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【答案】例文
Gd habits make me healthy
Gd habits are imprtant in ur lives. They influence us a lt in many ways. I think gd habits make me healthy. I have sme gd habits such as eating healthy fd and ding exercise.
Years ag, I used t be fat and ften fell ill. I liked junk fd and never tk any exercise. My health cnditin became s wrrying that I decided t change. It was hard fr me t give up bad habits and develp gd nes. Hwever, I started t try t eat healthy fd. I spent sme f my spare time exercising every day. What’s mre, I jined a sprts club and tk part in the activities there. Gradually, I gt healthier and healthier. It is the gd habits that helped me.
Thanks t my gd habits, nw I have a healthy bdy. It is nt easy t keep them, but I’ll try my best. Health is wealth, after all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文以“Gd habits make me healthy”为题谈谈好习惯对你学习或生活的影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍好习惯的好处；
第二步，介绍自己养成好习惯的一个经历；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②used t be过去是
③spend time ding sth.花费时间做某事
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①My health cnditin became s wrrying that I decided t change.(引导的结果状语从句)
②It is nt easy t keep them, but I’ll try my best.(but引导的并列句)
（2023·黑龙江绥化·模拟预测）
亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，在此离别之际，恰逢学校英语报征稿，请你以“A/An__________ Persn in My Schl Life”为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求:
（1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）;
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整;
（3）词数不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
A Helpful Persn in My Schl Life
I have met a lt f peple in my schl life. One f them is my gd friend Emma. She is the best friend I’ve made in the class, and she is always there fr me when I need help.
When I was in Grade 8, I fund myself getting upset easily. I was under a lt f stress and culdn’t even listen t the teachers carefully in class. Emma nticed my prblem and spent tw hurs with me ne day, talking abut her wn stress and hw she was dealing with her difficulties. Frm her, I learnt that the nly way t vercme difficulties is keeping trying instead f cmplaining. I felt much mre cnfident when I knew that I culd fight against my difficulties tgether with Emma.
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” A gd friend is the persn wh encurages yu t be happy and strng.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述过去事情用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明描写对象；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍令你印象深刻的事情；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①upset心烦的
②stress压力
③deal with处理
④vercme difficulties克服困难
⑤cmplain抱怨
[高分句型]
①A gd friend is the persn wh encurages yu t be happy and strng.（定语从句）
②Frm her, I learnt that the nly way t vercme difficulties is keeping trying instead f cmplaining.（宾语从句）
（2023·福建厦门·厦门双十中学校考模拟预测）
成长是一种蜕变，在跌跌撞撞中成就更好的自己。你可能学会了一项新技能，或者掌握了新知识，也可能是养成了一种好习惯。请选择一个方面谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有的内容要点；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
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【答案】例文
In the final exam f the ninth grade, I gt the first place in my class. I have regained my cnfidence. I believe everything is easy.
In the seventh grade, I was crazy abut cmputer games. At that time, I went t bed very late every night. I culdn’t get up in the mrning. I slept in class and didn’t listen carefully. S I failed the exam. I felt that my classmates lked dwn n me, and my teachers and parents wrried abut me. Later, I realized that this was nt gd. I began t ask my teachers and my gd friends fr help. Since then, I didn’t play cmputer games anymre. I develped gd learning habits.
I studied hard and achieved my dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，话题作文，谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作时，围绕话题进行叙述，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题（总写）。我获得了第一名，认为一切很简单；
第二步，叙述成长改变的经历；
第三步，谈谈收获，结尾。努力学习，实现了梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①In the final exam f在……的期末考试中
②get the first place获得第一名
③be crazy abut迷恋
④lk dwn n瞧不起
⑤ask … fr help请求帮助
⑥develp gd learning habits养成良好的学习习惯
⑦study hard and achieve dreams努力学习，实现梦想
[高分句型]
I felt that my classmates lked dwn n me, and my teachers and parents wrried abut me.（宾语从句）
（2023·重庆渝中·重庆巴蜀中学校考模拟预测）
习总书记告诫青年人“艰难困苦，玉汝于成”。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。“精感石没羽，岂云惮险坚”，初中三年你有过逆势前行克服困难和的经历吗？请以“The harder, The better”为题，写一篇书面表达讲述你的一次经历和感悟。
要求：
（1）确定主题；
（2）围绕主题，表达内容积极向上，有具体生动的事件；
（3）词数80—120；
（4）作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
提示问题：
What was the difficulty?
What did yu d t get ver the difficulty?
What have yu learned frm it?
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【答案】例文：
The harder, The better
In ur life, we may meet with different kinds f difficulties. But hw can we deal with them? Here is ne f my wn experiences.
When I first went int the middle schl, I was t shy t cmmunicate with thers. And I was afraid t ask thers questins that I culdn’t wrk ut. I turned t my parents fr help and they gave me useful suggestins. They tld me that I needed t be brave t talk t thers and make new friends. I tried my best t fllw their suggestins and finally I did that.
Nw I understand that I need t learn hw t get ver difficulties by myself with cnfidence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应以“The harder, The better”为题，写一篇书面表达讲述你初中三年的一次经历和感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明每个人都会遇到困难；
第二步，具体阐述你遇到的困难是什么，以及怎样克服的；
第三步，总结，写出你从困难中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with 处理
②cmmunicate with sb. 与某人交流
③turn t sb. fr help 向某人求助
④try ne’s best t d sth. 尽某人最大努力去做某事
[高分句型]
①When I first went int the middle schl, I was t shy t cmmunicate with thers.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Nw I understand that I need t learn hw t get ver difficulties by myself with cnfidence.（that引导宾语从句；“疑问词+不定式”作宾语）
（2023·陕西西安·校考模拟预测）
在过去的三年学习生活中，相信每个人都有印象深刻的日子，这一天的回忆也许是最开心的、难忘的，也可能是不幸的、难过的，请以“The ______ Day in My Junir High Schl”为题写一篇英语作文，描述一下你印象深刻的一天。
注意：
1. 补全标题；
2. 文章内容必包含上面提及的要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 表达清楚，语句通顺，行文流畅，字迹工整，卷面整洁；
4. 词数：不得少于70词。
5. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等个人信息，否则不予评分：
The ______ Day in My Junir High Schl
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【答案】例文
The Unfrgettable Day in My Junir High Schl
I’ll never frget June 11th, 2012. It was a sunny day. On the way t schl, my friend did smething rude t me. It made me sad. What’s wrse, I gt a “C” in my favrite subject. After schl, I went hme unhappily. It was dark in the rm. Suddenly the lights were n, and I heard the sng “Happy birthday”. I was surprised t see many peple and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was s excited and happy. It was my first time t have a birthday party.
I’ll never frget that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍让自己难忘的一天；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细地描述印象深刻的一天；
第三步，书写结语。发表自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①On the way t schl在去学校的路上
②What’s wrse更糟糕的是
[高分句型]
It was my first time t have a birthday party.（“It was ne’s first time t d sth.”句型）
（2023·宁夏银川·校考模拟预测）
即将成为一名高中生的你，应该怎样完善自己而成为一名优秀的高中生呢？请你根据提示内容，以“Hw t be an excellent high schl students”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1.develp gd study habits
2.bey the schl rules
3.lve labr (劳动), learn basic life skills
4.be plite and friendly t thers
要求：1.文中须包含提示内容中的各项；
2.至少补充一条自己的想法；
3.合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
注意：1.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Hw t be an excellent high schl student
I am ging t be a senir high schl student. And hw t be an excellent high schl student?
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【答案】例文
Hw t be an excellent high schl student
I am ging t be a senir high schl student. And hw t be an excellent high schl student?
Firstly, I must bey the schl rules, ging t schl n time and never smking. Secndly, as a high schl student, it’s imprtant t have gd study habits. I shuld listen t the teachers carefully in class and d sme sprts t relax myself after schl. Thirdly, I am ging t cmmunicate better with my teachers and classmates, be plite and friendly t thers. Furthly, at hme I will try my best t help my parents d sme husewrk, like ding the dishes and cleaning the huse when they are very tired every day. At last, I’ll prtect the envirnment and take an active part in the vlunteer wrk as ften as pssible.
Fllwing these suggestins, I believe I can be an excellent student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，介绍自己要成为一名优秀的高中生该如何做。
第三步，总结全文，表明自己的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①n time准时
②listen t听
③d sme sprts做一些运动
④cmmunicate with与……沟通
⑤take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①Secndly, as a high schl student, it’s imprtant t have gd study habits.（it的固定句型）
②Furthly, at hme I will try my best t help my parents d sme husewrk, like ding the dishes and cleaning the huse when they are very tired every day.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③At last, I’ll prtect the envirnment and take an active part in the vlunteer wrk as ften as pssible.（as ften as pssible尽可能经常）
（2023·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）
你将参加学校“My Hbbies”的主题征文活动，请根据以下内容提示问题描述你的兴趣爱好和相关观点。
内容提示：
（1）What are yur hbbies?
（2）Why are hbbies imprtant fr students?
（3）Hw can we students balance（平衡）schlwrk and hbbies?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数60﹣80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Hbbies
Everyne has hbbies.
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【答案】例文
My Hbbies
Everyne has hbbies. I like playing basketball. I’m n the schl basketball team. If I have time, I ften g t the park with my friends t play basketball. I think hbbies can nt nly make us relaxed, but als make us healthy. S I think hbbies are very imprtant fr us. But we need t schedule ur time ratinally. We want t ensure that students wh cmplete their learning tasks can cntinue their interests.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据内容提示问题描述你的兴趣爱好和相关观点，写一篇以“My Hbbies”的主题征文活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点名主题，介绍每个人都有爱好；
第二步，具体阐述你的爱好，爱好对学生的重要性以及如何平衡学业和爱好；
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②g t the park去公园
③nt als不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I ften g t the park with my friends t play basketball.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I think hbbies can nt nly make us relaxed, but als make us healthy.（I think+宾语从句）
（2023·江苏宿迁·校联考一模）
习近平在讲话中引用李大钊的话说， “青年者，国家之魂”，“一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能兴旺发达。” 作为青少年的我们，现行之重是当好学生。请以“Hw t Be a Gd Student”为题，谈谈我们应该怎样做，才能不负自己，不负时代赋予我们的责任。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的提示，可以自由发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，合理展开想象；
2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Hw t Be a Gd Student
As teenagers, we shuld be gd students at present. Then what shuld we d? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hw t be a gd student?
As teenagers, we shuld be gd students at present. Then what shuld we d?
First f all, listen t the teachers carefully in class. We can g ver what we have learned as ften as pssible and prepare fr the new knwledge in time. Als, We can read different kinds f bks in ur free time.
Secndly, it is imprtant fr us t d sme exercise and have a healthy diet. We shuld g t bed early and get up early. Thirdly, We must bey schl rules and traffic rules. Besides, we shuld behave plitely in public. We shuld always respect the ld and care fr the yung.
What’s mre, we shuld d sme husewrk at hme. And it is meaningful fr us t wrk as vlunteers in ur cmmunity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，表述在学习方面我们应如何做好；
第二步，表述在运动、个人安全及行为表现方面我们应该如何做好；
第三步，表述在其他方面我们应该如何做好。
[亮点词汇]
①at present目前
②different kinds f不同种类的
③What’s mre此外
[高分句型]
It is meaningful fr us t wrk as as Vlunteers in ur cmmunity.（it作形式主语）
（2023·辽宁盘锦·校联考三模）
拥有健康的体魄在我们的日常生活中尤为重要。某校园英文网站以“Hw t live a healthy life”为题征文，请从运动、饮食、睡眠、心态等方面提出建议，呼吁同学们关爱自己的健康。
要求：
1.内容符合题目要求，词数80-100；
2语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hw t live a healthy life
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【答案】例文
Hw t live a healthy life
As the saying ges, “Yu dn’t knw what health is until yu lse it.” S it is very imprtant t live a healthy life. Here is my advice.
First, yu shuld d mre exercise t build up yur bdy. Maybe running in the mrning is a gd chice. At the same time, yu’d better get enugh sleep during the night. Yu are suppsed t g t bed early and get up early. Staying up late is harmful t yur health. And then it’s a gd idea t keep a balanced diet and develp a gd eating habit. Fr example, it’s necessary t eat sme fruit and vegetables every day. Mre imprtantly, hlding an active and ptimistic attitude tward life is rather imprtant. Whenever yu are in truble, yu can try t cmmunicate with yur parents and learn t relax.
All in all, I hpe everyne can pay mre attentin t health and everyne can benefit frm healthy living habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何过健康的生活的介绍要点， 适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍如何过健康的生活”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“运动、饮食、睡眠、心态等”几个方面重点介绍如何过健康的生活的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语：希望每个人都能更加关注健康，每个人都可以从健康的生活习惯中受益。。
[亮点词汇]
①d exercise做锻炼
②build up ne’s bdy强健体魄
③g t bed上床睡觉
[高分句型]
①First, yu shuld d mre exercise t build up yur bdy.（t d不定式作目的状语）
②Staying up late is harmful t yur health.（动名词作主语）
（2023·浙江湖州·校联考三模）
每个人都是独一无二的，都会发出自身特有的光芒。相信自己，你就会变得了不起；做自己，你就是最棒的！请结合自己的性格、爱好、生活习惯等方面，以“I like myself”为话题写一篇短文向校刊的英语专栏投稿，谈谈你眼中的自己。
*What d yu like abut yurself? (character, hbby, lifestyle...)
*Why d yu like yurself? (give an example/examples)
...
要求：
1.征文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
I believe that a persn wh lves himself can lve his life well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
I believe that a persn wh lves himself can lve his life well. Everyne is special. S am I. What I like abut myself is mainly abut my healthy life habit as well as gd character. First, never stay up late s that I can listen attentively in class. l am utging, s l can get n well with thers. Besides, jgging fr half an hur everyday helps me keep in excellent cnditin. Finally, it’s my character that enables me t live happily. What I wn has brught me lts f benefits and I will keep n wrking hard t perfect myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——一个爱自己的人，能够很好地爱自己的生活；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢自己的哪些方面并分析原因；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as也
②lts f许多
③stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①First, never stay up late s that I can listen attentively in class.(s that引导的结果状语从句)
②Besides, jgging fr half an hur everyday helps me keep in excellent cnditin.(动名词作主语)
1. What will yu d?
2. Hw will yu d it?
3. Why d yu chse t d it?
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