专题10 青少年问题-2024年中考英语写作分类指导（真题+模拟）

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写作步骤
步骤一：确定问题与建议的内容和顺序。
步骤二：列举有关问题与建议的句型，多多益善。
步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。
词汇积累
1. get fat 变胖
2. t much+后加不可数名词 t many+后加可数名词复数
much t+后加形容词和副词
3. 注意 pay attentin t +ding sth
4. 和某人分享某物 share sth with sb
5. 少吃多锻炼 eat less and exercise mre
6. enugh "足够”与名词连用，enugh bks。
与形容词连用放其后， gd enugh。
结构：形容词+enugh t d sth 足够怎么样可以做 ...
7. 有足够时间做某事have enugh time t d sth
8. 让某人发疯 drive sb mad
9. （电视）开着be n
10.感到孤独/瞌睡 feel lnely/sleepy
11. 尽量做某事 try t d sth
12. 处理deal with d with,
deal with 常与hw连用，d with 常与what 连用
13. 除此做某事，别无选择have n chice but t d
14. 发现做某事样 find it +形容词+t d sth
15. 熬夜熬到很晚stay up late
16. 保持清醒 stay awake 按时 n time
17. 想象做某事 imagine ding sth
18. 尽可能经常 as ften as pssible as ften as sb can.
19. 大声读英语 read English alud
20. 某人花费多长时间做某事
sb spend +smetime n sth
sb spend smetime in ding sth
21. 值得做某事be wrth ding sth
22. 梦想做某事 dream f ding sth
23.复习g ver. .
24. 给某人提供某物ffer sb sth=ffer sth t sb
25.建议（名词）：
a. advice 是不可数名词，没有复数。
b. suggestin 是可数名词，复数为suggestins
26.hpe的用法：
a. hpe that +从句 b.hpe t d sth
27. 收到某人的来信hear frm sb
28. 对... 痴迷 be crazy abut...
29. 我对足球的喜爱 my lve f ftball
30. 担心某人 wrry abut sb be wrried abut sb
31. 陷入麻烦 get int truble
32. 允许某人做某事 allw sb t d sth
33.对某人严格be strict with sb
对某事严格be strict in sth
34. 在外面待到很晚stay ut late
35. 期望做某事lk frward t ding
36.没有取得进步make little prgress
一、人际交往常用表达：
1. It can shw that we are listening t ur classmates and we care abut them s that it can strengthen ur relatinship. (that引导的宾语从句，以及s that引导的目的状语从句)
它可以反映出我们在倾听同学的想法，并且我们在意他们，这样可以使我们的关系牢固。
2. We shuld listen t ur parents carefully in rder t knw abut ur parents’ ideas and avid arguing with each ther. (动词不定式作目的状语)
为了理解家长的意思并且避免互相争吵，我们应该听父母说话。
3. The next day, we rganized the infrmatin and decided what we wanted t put n the bard.（what引导的宾语从句）
第二天，我们组织了信息，决定了放在海报版上面的内容。
4. I searched fr the pictures we needed n the internet.（省略that的定语从句）
我在网上搜了我们需要的图片。
5. What’s mre, we shuld be kind t thers and ffer necessary help t thse wh are in truble.（wh引导定语从句）
此外，我们应该互相友善，并向遇到麻烦的人提供必要的帮助。
6. Only in this way can we get alng well with each ther and feel happy.（倒装句）
只有通过这种方式，我们才能互相相处融洽，感到开心。
7. Althugh they give me much pressure, I knw it’s because they really lve me and want me t have a bright future. (althugh引导让步状语从句，because引导表语从句)
尽管他们给了我很多压力，但是我知道是因为他们真的爱我，想让我拥有一个光明的未来。
8. There are t many strict rules fr me at hme and my parents dn’t quite understand me. (运用there be句型)
在家里，对我来说有太多严格的规矩，我的父母不太理解我。
二、感情、情绪常用表达
1. Yu are s helpful that yu are ready t help almst every student in ur class.（s…that引导的结果状语从句）
你如此的乐于助人，以至于你随时可以帮助班级中的每个同学。
2. The persn that I want t thank mst is my mther.（that引导的定语从句）
我最想感谢的人是我的妈妈。
3. When I’m in truble, yu always encurage me t g ver the prblems.（when引导时间状语从句）
当我遇到困难时，你总是鼓励我克服困难。
4. I am very grateful t yu fr what yu have dne fr me.（what引导宾语从句）
对于你为我做的事情，我非常感激。
5. In my heart, my mther is a persn wh always sets a gd example fr me.（wh引导的定语从句）
在我心中，我的妈妈是总能为我树立榜样的人。
6. I think I shuld say srry and thanks t yu.（宾语从句）
我想我应该对你道歉并表示感谢。
7. When we were in Grade 8, we lst the chance t get the first prize in the ftball match.（时间状语从句）
当我们在八年级时，我们在足球比赛中失去了获得一等奖的机会。
8. I never stpped cmplaining t yu that it was yu wh missed the gal.（强调句）
我从来没有停止过对你抱怨说，是你丢了那个球。
必背满分范文
（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 mypia；电子产品 electrnic device
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu?
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Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu? I’m srry t learn that yur eyesight is getting weaker. I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight. And reading bks fr t lng may cause mypia.
But dn’t wrry. I’d like t share with yu sme ways f prtecting eyesight. At first, yu shuld cntrl the time yu spend n electrnic prducts. Yu can d mre utdr activities. What’s mre, yu shuld develp sme gd habits. Yu shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit. They are gd fr yur health. Besides, ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes. Lastly, yu shuld have yur eyes examined every term t make sure yur eyes stay healthy.
I hpe yu’ll find my ways helpful.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
②be gd fr对……有好处
③play an imprtant rle in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
（2023·山东济南·统考中考真题）
新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favrite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1.描述并评价调查结果；
2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
There are many practical learning activities in English class.
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【答案】例文：
There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, ur schl club has made a survey n students’ favrite English class activities. Here are the results.
Of the fur activities mentined, abut ne third f the students say presentatin is their favrite. The number f students wh chse discussin and creative writing is almst the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% f the students cnsider debate their favrite as they think it is challenging.
As far as I am cncerned, presentatin is the mst useful. On the ne hand, I am able t learn a lt while preparing fr it. On the ther hand, it helps t imprve my English speaking ability as well as cmmunicatin skills.
English class activities are imprtant, s we had better make full use f them t make English learning mre interesting and clrful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果；
第二步，描述并评价调查结果；
第三步，陈述你的选择并说明理由；
第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the number f……的数量
②as far as就……而言
③had better d sth.最好做某事
④make full use f充分利用
[高分句型]
①Here are the results.(倒装句)
②The number f students wh chse discussin and creative writing is almst the same, taking up 25% and 27% each.(定语从句)
（2023·山东青岛·统考中考真题）
观察图片，你想到了什么？请结合自己的经历，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你的感悟。
要求：
1.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
Frm the cartn, I can knw
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【答案】例文
Frm the cartn, I can knw we shuld depend n urselves. These days, we Chinese teenagers ften depend n ur parents in ur daily lives. We can’t deal with difficulties by urselves and we can’t take gd care f urselves. I seldm did husewrk in the past, because I thught it was ur parents’ wrk. This is a wrng pinin. We shuld learn t d husewrk like sweeping the flr and taking ut the rubbish. I hardly cked either. When my mther was n business, I realized I must learn t ck by myself. After that, I find that cking is nt as difficult as it seems.
S it’s imprtant fr us t learn t manage ur wn lives.
When we get int senir high schl, we need t adapt t the new envirnment as sn as pssible. And we shuld make gd use f time and get enugh sleep. At the same time, we need t study seriusly and make prgress. T make mre friends, we had better jin clubs actively. Lastly, we shuld take up ur hbbies in ur free time t nt nly keep healthy but als keep ur minds clear.
All in all, the earlier we manage ur wn lives, the better it is fr ur future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意结合所给图片，谈谈自己的感悟，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。结合自身生活实际，谈谈依赖父母的现象；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。列举提升自我管理能力，更好地适应高中新生活的合理化建议。
第三步，书写结语。发出在未来生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。
[亮点词汇]
①depend n依靠
②seldm很少
③as difficult as和……一样难
④make gd use f充分利用
⑤nt nly…but als… 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①I find that cking is nt as difficult as it seems.(宾语从句)
②S it’s imprtant fr us t learn t manage ur wn lives.（It’s+形容词+fr sb+t d sth.句型）
（2023·湖北恩施·中考真题）
自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023—2025）》以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要求：
（1）文中必须包含表格中所给的要点，另对任意一方面补充一条你自己的观点；
（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：physical health 身体健康 psychlgical health 心理健康
Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Nwadays, mre and mre peple have cme t fcus n teenagers’ health. The fllwings are my pinins abut hw we teenagers live a healthy life.
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【答案】例文
Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Nwadays, mre and mre peple have cme t fcus n teenagers’ health. The fllwing are my pinins abut hw we teenagers live a healthy life.
Firstly, we must keep healthy. We shuld have a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds f fd and lts f fresh fruit and vegetables. We’d better play sprts at least ne hur every day. Exercise makes us strnger and helps us relax. We shuld get at least eight hurs’ sleep at night, s that we can have enugh energy t study.
Secndly, we have t be mentally healthy. We must be cnfident and have gd mds every day.
Finally, be happy. Happiness is imprtant fr ur health. If yu are wrried abut smething, try t slve it as sn as pssible.
T sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very imprtant fr us. I hpe everybdy can live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②different kinds f不同种类的
③be wrried abut担心
④sum up总结
[高分句型]
①We shuld get at least eight hurs’ sleep at night, s that we can have enugh energy t study.（s that引导的目的状语从句）
②If yu are wrried abut smething, try t slve it as sn as pssible.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题）
青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
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I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
These days I’m nt happy. I always argue with my parents. They nly care abut my schlwrk. The summer hliday is cming. They plan t chse lts f after-schl classes fr me. But I dn’t want t take these classes and dn’t want t be s busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want t take painting lessns during the hliday. They disagree with me. I dn’t knw what t d. And hw can I imprve the relatinship with my parents? Can yu give me sme advice?
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care abut关心
③take painting lessns上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer hliday is cming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I dn’t knw what t d. (疑问词+动词不定式)
6．（2023·四川遂宁·中考真题）
时光荏苒，新一阶段的学习生活期将开启。对于未来，同学们期待中又有些许担忧，英语课上，大家就新学期是否住校这个问题展开了讨论，请根据科代表整理出的信息，结合自己的看法，以“Are yu ging t live in the schl?”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，在下一堂课上进行分享。
注意：
1.文章开头已给出。不计入总词数；
2.应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3.要求语句通顺，行文连贯；
4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参将词汇：drmitry（n.宿舍） independent （adj.独立的） private （adj.私人的） manage （v.管理）
Are yu ging t live in the schl?
A new term is cming. Are yu ging t live in the schl drmitry? I think there are advantages and disadvantages.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Are yu ging t live in the schl?
A new term is cming. Are yu ging t live in the schl drmitry? I think there are advantages and disadvantages.
First f all, it can help us save time and nt waste time n the rad. Living in the schl drmitry at the same time can make us fcus mre n ur studies. Secndly, living in the schl drmitry can make us learn t be independent and manage urselves better. At the same time, when we have questins, we can cmmunicate with ur teachers r classmates in time. Hwever, the lack f private space in the schl drmitry makes sleep easily affected. At the same time, there is n family t take care f. If yu have smething n yur mind, yu can’t cmmunicate with yur parents in time.
I chse t live in the schl drmitry, because it can nt nly cultivate my independence, but als increase the affectin between me and my classmates.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍住校的好处；
第二步，介绍住校的坏处；
第三步，介绍自己的选择。
[亮点词汇]
①cmmunicate with sb.和某人交流
②the lack f...缺乏……
[高分句型]
①At the same time, when we have questins, we can cmmunicate with ur teachers r classmates in time.(when引导的时间状语从句。)
②I chse t in the schl , because it can nt nly cultivate my independence, but als increase the affectin between me and my classmates.(nt nly als ……不仅……而且..)
7.（2023·四川乐山·统考中考真题）
2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促进法》规定：未成年人的父母或其他监护人应该重视家庭教育，关心孩子身心健康。对于此规定，作为学生的你有话想说。请你给校英语专栏写一篇短文，对父母提出建议并表明观点。内容包括：
1. 多花时间陪我们，如教做家务、一起玩耍等；
2. 帮助我们养成好的习惯；
3. 常与我们沟通谈心；
4. 信任我们并保护我们的隐私。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
参考词汇：physical and mental health身心健康；privacy n.隐私
Accrding t the law “Family Educatin Prmtin”, parents r ther guardians f minrs shuld be respnsible fr family educatin. It asks parents t pay attentin t children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestins fr parents.
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【答案】参考范文
Accrding t the Law “Family Educatin Prmtin”, parents r ther guardians f minrs shuld be respnsible fr family educatin. It asks parents t pay attentin t children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestins fr parents.
First f all, I think parents shuld spend mre time with us. Fr example, parents can teach us t d husewrk and play with us in spare time. Secnd, parents shuld help us t get int gd habits, such as eating healthy fd, ding sprts and s n. What’s mre, parents had better cmmunicate with us mre ften. That’s because sme misunderstandings are caused by lack f cmmunicatin. Finally, I hpe parents can trust us and prtect ur privacy. We children need mre persnal space.
In my pinin, we can wrk tgether t understand and respect each ther s that we can make prgress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点逐个进行阐述，对父母提出建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表明自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get int gd habits养成良好的习惯
②had better d sth最好做某事
③cmmunicate with sb和某人交流
④lack f……的缺乏
[高分句型]
①First f all, I think parents shuld spend mre time with us.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②That’s because sme misunderstandings are caused by lack f cmmunicatin.（because引导的表语从句）
③In my pinin, we can wrk tgether t understand and respect each ther s that we can make prgress.（s that引导的结果状语从句）
（2023·山东泰安·统考中考真题）
强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以“Hw t be gd students in the new era”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代（era）的好学生。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
Hw t be gd students in the new era
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【答案】例文
Hw t be gd students in the new era.
The 21st century is a time full f challenges and chances. It is imprtant fr us t knw hw t be gd students in this new era. Tday I’m glad t share my ideas abut hw t be gd students.
First, we shuld lve ur cuntry as well as ur family. We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us. We shuld be friendly with ur classmates. Secnd, we shuld study hard and be creative. We shuld help each ther and learn frm each ther. Third, we shuld take mre physical exercise t keep ur bdy and mind healthy. We shuld als d husewrk frequently and learn t be independent.
As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第二步，从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第三步，从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as以及
②help each ther互相帮助
③learn t d学习做
[高分句型]
①We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us.（wh引导的定语从句）
②As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.（as lng as引导的条件状语从句）
考前模拟预测
9．（2024·新疆克孜勒苏·统考一模）最近你和父母针对 “青少年该不该在周末和朋友外出” 进行了讨论。请你根据下列表格中的信息提示，以 “Shuld teenagers g ut with friends n weekends?” 为话题，写一篇 80词左右的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：1. 所写内容包括表格中提供的父母的想法
2.至少给出你的三个想法。
Shuld teenagers g ut with friends n weekends?
Recently I’ve had a discussin with my parents abut whether teenagers shuld g ut with friends n weekends. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Shuld teenagers g ut with friends n weekends?
Recently I’ve had a discussin with my parents abut whether teenagers shuld g ut with friends n weekends.
My parent thinks that teenagers shuld stay at hme n weekends. They shuld g ver their lessns. And they culd have enugh time t have a gd sleep. They als think teenagers shuld help parents d sme husewrk n weekends.
In my pinin, we teenagers shuld be allwed t g ut with friends fr fun n weekends, s we can relax mre. And we can als share ideas with each ther. What’s mre, we can als take sme exercise tgether t keep fit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出谈论的主题（已给出）。
第二步，介绍父母的想法；
第三步，介绍自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at hme待在家
②g ver their lessns复习功课
③have enugh time t d有足够时间做某事
④ sb和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①My parent thinks that teenagers shuld stay at hme n weekends. (that引导的宾语从句)
②In my pinin, we teenagers shuld be allwed t g ut with friends fr fun n weekends, s we can relax mre. (被动语态)
10．（2024·西藏拉萨·统考一模）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展主题为“ Hw t Keep a Gd Relatinship with Parents” 的征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：
1. 父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法；
3. 表达对父母的理解。
【答案】例文：
In my pinin, I have t many rules at hme. My parents never allw me t g ut with my friends at night. They dn’t allw me t chse my wn clthes, either. And they pay t much attentin t my exam results. I think my parents dn’t understand me.
In rder t keep a gd relatinship with my parents, I study hard and listen t them. I talk with them as friends, and I always tell them my truble. I als help them d sme husewrk.
Als, I try my best t understand them. Althugh they dn’t allw me t make my wn decisins and they give me t much pressure, I knw they really lve me and want me t have a bright future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己的问题；
第二步，具体阐述你与父母保持良好关系的做法；
第三步，最后表达对父母的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①in my pinin 在我看来
②allw sb. t d sth. 允许某人做某事
③t much太多
[高分句型]
①I think my parents dn’t understand me.（宾语从句）
②Althugh they dn’t allw me t make my wn decisins and they give me t much pressure, I knw they really lve me and want me t have a bright future.（让步状语从句，宾语从句）
11．（2022·黑龙江大庆·校联考二模）请根据以下要点提示，以 “Hw t Keep Safe” 为题写一篇作文。
提示： 1. 交通安全；2. 食品安全；3. 活动安全；4. 交友安全(网络交友)；5. 遇险建议：遇到危险要保持冷静，保证自身安全，然后及时报警或向家长，老师求助。
写作要求： 1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 表达通顺，语言规范 ，文中不能出现真实的人名，校名等信息；3. 词数90词左右。
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【答案】例文：
Hw t Keep Safe
Hell, everyne. Safety is very imprtant fr us. We shuld learn t prtect urselves. Here are sme suggestins abut hw t keep safe.
Firstly, we must fllw the traffic rules. Secndly, we shuld pay attentin t the fd safety. Be sure nt t eat t much junk fd. Thirdly, when we g t upstairs r dwnstairs, we shuld keep t the right side. Be careful while ding sprts. Remember nt t swim in the river alne. What’s mre, we’d better nt make friends nline. We must stay away frm dangerus peple arund.
If we get int truble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the plice, the teachers r parents fr help.
In a wrd, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value ur lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料提示内容较多，注意不要遗漏；全文以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明文章主题——如何保持安全；
第二步，介绍不同的安全类型；
第三步，给出遇险后建议；
第四步，首尾呼应，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attentin t 注意
②stay away frm 远离
③get int truble 陷入困境
[高分句型]
①Here are sme suggestins abut hw t keep safe.（倒装句；“疑问词+不定式” 结构作宾语）
②Thirdly, when we g t upstairs r dwnstairs, we shuld keep t the right side. （时间状语从句）
③If we get int truble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the plice, the teachers r parents fr help.（条件状语从句）
12．（2023·浙江·模拟预测）目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinin n Cheating in Examinatins”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：
1. 主要原因；
2. 个人看法；
3. 注意：（1）短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）短文题目与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
My Opinin n Cheating in Examinatins
It is knwn t us all that sme students cheat in examinatins at schl.
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【答案】例文：
My Opinin n Cheating in Examinatins
It is knwn t us all that sme students cheat in examinatin at schl.
On the ne hand, as students, we ften take examinatins at schl, but smetimes we have t many examinatins which are t difficult fr us. On the ther hand, sme f us are lazy and dn’t wrk hard at ur lessns. S when taking examinatins, we smetimes cheat in rder t get better results t please ur parents and teachers.
In my pinin, it is wrng t cheat in examinatins because it breaks the schl rules. We students shuld be hnest and try t get gd results by studying hard instead f cheating in examinatins. What’s mre, we shuld imprve ur study methds and get well prepared fr examinatins.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括“作弊的原因”和“对作弊的看法”，需要具体描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些学生考试作弊（已经给出）；
第二步，介绍作弊的原因；
第三步，介绍对于作弊的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①n the ne the ther hand一方面……另一方面
②in rder t为了
③break the schl rules违反校规
④instead f而不是
⑤get well prepared fr好好做准备
[高分句型]
① smetimes we have t many examinatins which are t difficult fr us.（定语从句）
②In my pinin, it is wrng t cheat in examinatins because it breaks the rules f schls.（it的固定句型）
13．（2020·广东深圳·校联考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你刚刚收到好友Helen的一封邮件，在邮件里Helen提及她的一些苦恼，请你根据下面的要点提示，给Helen回复一封邮件，帮助她走出困境。
要点提示：
要求：
1）文中不可出现真实的学校和姓名；
2）可根据要点适当发挥，使条理清楚、行文连贯；
3）书写工整，字数80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen,
I knw yu are wrried abut
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Hpe these suggestins are really helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Helen,
I knw yu are wrried abut yur study and the relatinship with yur parents, yur gd friend Mary makes friends with ther students. Yu lst the ftball match. Yu feel stressed and lnely, yu even quarrel with yur parents. Many students have the same prblems as yu. I have a few ideas that might help yu ut.
First, I suggest that yu talk with yur parents directly and share yur feelings with them. I believe yur parents will understand yu and help yu make a study plan. Secnd, when yu feel lnely, try t take part in sme schl activities and learn t cmmunicate with yur classmates. Last but nt least, find fun ways t exercise. Playing ftball with yur new friends is a gd way t relax yurself. Dn’t be afraid f lsing the game. Practice makes perfect.
Hpe these suggestins are really helpful t yu.
Yurs，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的一些苦恼；
第二步，针对朋友的苦恼，给出自己的建议；
第三步，最后总结并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① quarrel with sb和某人吵架
② take part in参加
③ be afraid f害怕
[高分句型]
① when yu feel lnely, try t take part in sme schl activities and learn t cmmunicate with yur classmates.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② I suggest that yu talk with yur parents directly and share yur feelings with them.（that引导的宾语从句）
14．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第四十七中学校考模拟预测）假如你是校英语报学生编辑李平，在最近举办的“兴趣是最好的老师”活动中收到了很多同学的来信，寻求英语学习方面的帮助。请你给他们回信，介绍一下你的英语学习方法，并谈一谈中学生如何培养对英语学习的兴趣。
写作要点：
1. 感谢同学们对你的信任。
2. 介绍你的学习英语方法：
(1) 上好每一节英语课；
(2) 每天坚持记英语日记；
(3) 培养英语学习兴趣。
3. 谈一谈中学生应该如何培养对英语学习的兴趣。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear students,
I’ve received yur letters.
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Lking frward t yur gd news!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear students,
I’ve received yur letters. Thank yu all fr yur trust in me, I appreciate it very much.
Yu asked me abut my ways f learning English and hw t develp an interest in English, s let me tell yu sme ways. First, yu have t listen t every class carefully, because yu get
mst f yur knwledge frm yur classes. Secnd, yu shuld make English ntes every day, since making ntes is a gd way t g ver yur lessns. Last, yu shuld develp an interest in
English, because interest is the best teacher. Hw d yu develp an interest in English? Yu shuld read English bks, and try t d mre things with English in yur daily life, such as speaking t
smene else r writing. I hpe my advice can help yu.
Lking frward t yur gd news!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“对同学的来信表示感谢，介绍学习英语的方法，对培养英语学习的兴趣的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我收到了你们的信。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“认真听课，坚持每天写英语日记，培养英语学习兴趣的方法”重点介绍学习英语的方法的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“期待你的好消息！” 的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①develp an interest培养兴趣
② daily life日常生活
[高分句型]
① First, yu have t listen t every class carefully, because yu getmst f yur knwledge frm yur classes.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② I hpe my advice can help yu.（省略that的宾语从句）
15．（2023·福建福州·福建省福州第一中学校考模拟预测）5月20日，教育部召开了全国中小学“五项管理”落实推进视频会议，青少年的手机、睡眠、作业、读物、体质等问题再次引起了广泛关注。最近，你们班就同学们在英语阅读方面存在的问题进行了一次调查并展开了讨论。请你根据表格内容写一篇调查报告，并提出一些建议。
注意：
1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容；
2. 建议可面向学生、老师或者学校；
3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 词数80左右。
Recently, we have dne a survey f students’ English reading status in ur class, but the results are nt pleasing.
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【答案】例文：
Recently, we have dne a survey f students’ English reading status in ur class, but the results are nt pleasing. 23% f my classmates aren’t interested in English reading. 40% say they hardly have time fr reading because f t much hmewrk. 35% f them have difficulty in reading and dn’t knw hw t read in right ways. Besides, half f the students say they dn’t have suitable reading materials.
In my pinin, we’re suppsed t spend mre time in reading. We need t practice reading every day. As fr teachers, I hpe that they can give us less hmewrk and teach us hw t imprve ur reading abilities.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍做了一项调查，结果不令人满意（题目已给出）；
第二步，具体介绍各种状况中人数的占比情况；
第三步，最后给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① d a survey做调查
② t much太多
③ in ne’s pinin在某人看来
[高分句型]
① 40% say they hardly have time fr reading because f t much hmewrk.（宾语从句）
② 35% f them have difficulty in reading and dn’t knw hw t read in right ways.（疑问词+不定式）
16．（2023·福建三明·统考模拟预测）近年来中学生身体健康越来越受到重视。假定你是李华，你校英语校报正在开展主题为“我运动，我健康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你的运动方式（两种）；
2. 你对运动的看法：（1）增强体质；（2）缓解压力；（3）……。
注意：
1. 所写内容应包括以上要点，内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。
As students, we can d different kinds f sprts after class.
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【答案】例文
As students, we can d different kinds f sprts after class. As fr me, I think walking is gd fr health. I ften walk n the playgrund fr half an hur. Anther sprts that I like is playing ftball. I ften play it with my friends after schl. It is very interesting.
There is n dubt that ding sprts is helpful fr us. It can nt nly build up ur bdies but als help keep us healthy and strng. What’s mre, when we feel stressed, we can d sme sprts t relax urselves. The mst imprtant is that we can make friends when we d sprts. I met my best friend when I nce played ftball n the playgrund.
Let’s d mre sprts. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括自己的两种运动方式、对运动的三点看法（即好处）。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的两种运动方式；
第二步，介绍对于运动的三点看法，即运动的好处；
第三步，呼吁多运动，保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
① as fr me 对我来说
② build up ur bdies 锻炼我们的身体
③ relax urselves 放松自己
④ in this way 用这种方法
[高分句型]
There is n dubt that ding sprts is helpful fr us.（同位语从句）
17．（2023·陕西西安·西北大学附中校考模拟预测）学校即将开展英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下的内容提示，以“Hw t be an excellent teenager”为主题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容提示：
1. 努力学习，积极锻炼；
2. 尊敬（respect） 长辈，乐于助人；
3. 学会做家务；
4. 热爱中国文化，培养各种兴趣爱好；
5. 感想……
要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（校名、姓名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。
Hell, everyne! I’d like t share my ideas abut hw t be an excellent teenager.
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That’s all. Thank yu.
【答案】例文：
Hell, everyne! I’d like t share my ideas abut hw t be an excellent teenager.
First f all, t be an excellent teenager, it is very imprtant fr us t study hard and exercise actively. Besides, we must respect the elderly and be willing t help thers. Ding sme vluntary wrk is meaningful. What’s mre, we shuld learn t d husewrk when we are free. It is a necessary life skill t help us live independently in the future. Last but nt least, we shuld lve Chinese culture and develp all kinds f interests and hbbies.
Althugh it is nt easy fr us t be an excellent teenager, we als try ur best t make it. Only in this way, ur cuntry will be strnger and strnger.
That’s all. Thank yu.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇演讲稿，为议论文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，可以适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍演讲主题是“如何成为优秀的青少年”（已经给出）；
第二步，介绍成为优秀青少年的方法；
第三步，表达感想。
[亮点词汇]
① be willing t 乐于
② live independently 独立生活
③ nly in this way 只有这样
④ try ur best t 尽力
[高分句型]
① Althugh it is nt easy fr us t be an excellent teenager, we als try ur best t make it.（让步状语从句）
② First f all, t be an excellent teenager, it is very imprtant fr us t study hard and exercise actively.（it作形式主语句型）
18．（2023·陕西西安·西安市曲江第一中学校考模拟预测）现在许多孩子在家里很少做家务，甚至不愿意做家务。学校为了号召同学们积极参与家务劳动，开展了以“We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk”为主题的演讲活动。假如你是李华，请结合下面的信息用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意: 1. 文章必须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实地名、人名和校名；
3. 词数在70左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Ladies and gentlemen,
Gd mrning! I’m Li Hua. It’s my hnr t give yu a speech. My tpic is “We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk”.
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Thanks fr listening.
【答案】例文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Gd mrning! I’m Li Hua. It’s my hnr t give yu a speech. My tpic is “We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk”.
On weekdays, I ften clean my bedrm every mrning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, I usually wash clthes and sweep the flr.
I think ding husewrk is necessary and meaningful, which makes me happy and mre respnsible.
In my pinin, as a family member, we must share the husewrk. We can’t depend n ur parents frever. Therefre, ding husewrk can make us independent when we grw up. Sharing the husewrk is helpful fr us t build a gd relatinship with ur parents. I think trying t d sme husewrk can als keep us healthy and strng.
Thanks fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇演讲稿，为议论文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点包括：平时自己所做的家务活动 、感受和应该做家务的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己平时所做的家务活动；
第二步，介绍自己做家务的感受；
第三步，介绍应该做家务的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① depend n 依靠
② make us independent 使得我们独立
③ build a gd relatinship 建立良好关系
④ in my pinin 我认为
[高分句型]
I think ding husewrk is necessary and meaningful, which makes me happy and mre respnsible.（定语从句）
近视原因
长时间使用电子产品；
读书时间过长。
建议
控制使用电子产品时间；
养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望
……
身体健康
心理健康
坚持锻炼
拥有自信
保证睡眠
保持好心情
……
……
Are yu ging t live in the schl?
Advantages:
1.节省时间，专注学习
2.学会独立，管理自我
3.……
Disadvantages:
1.缺乏私人空间，睡眠易受影响
2.没有家人照顾，生活可能不习惯
3.……
My ptins:
Yu’re parents’ ideas
Yur ideas
1. g ver lessns
2. have a gd sleep
3. help parents d husewrk
Prblems
Methds
1. 学习压力大，经常和父母争吵，很苦恼；
1. 和父母进行一次交谈；
2. 好朋友Mary有了新朋友，感到孤单；
2. 积极参加课外活动，多与他人交流沟通；
3. 足球比赛失了球，输了比赛……
3. ……
英语阅读现状
你的建议
1. 对英语阅读不感兴趣(23%)
2. 作业太多，没时间阅读(40%)
3. 阅读有困难，缺乏正确的方法(35%)
4. 没有合适的阅读材料(50%)
……
（至少两点）
We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk
What husewrk d yu ften d at hme?
Hw d yu feel abut ding husewrk?
Why d we have t d husewrk?