【查补能力漏洞·提升练】专题11 书面表达（含写作模板）-【查漏补缺】2024年中考英语复习冲刺过关

【查补能力漏洞·提升练】专题11 书面表达（解析版）（2023·辽宁鞍山·中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 myopia；电子产品 electronic deviceDear Mike,How is it going with you? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Ping【答案】例文：Dear Mike,How is it going with you? I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight. And reading books for too long may cause myopia.But don’t worry. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight. At first, you should control the time you spend on electronic products. You can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some good habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined every term to make sure your eyes stay healthy.I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.Yours, Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；第三步，表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①would like to do sth.想要做某事②be good for对……有好处③play an important role in在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)②doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes.(动名词作主语)一、解题策略1. 审主题审写作主题，内容和要求。2. 审人称确定本文的主要人称。3. 审时态确定本文主要用到的时态，做到有的放矢。4.列提纲：三段式△以下题为例：假设你是张明。你的好朋友李磊上周给你写了一封信，信中和你分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能AI ( artificial intelligence) 的一些观点，并表述了他对于人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。请以此为背景，根据写作提示写一封回信。写作提示：1.建议李磊不要过分忧虑；2.在信中阐述人工智能的优点 (参考下表)：3.在信尾总结你对人工智能的看法。写作要求：1.要点齐全，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；语句通顺，书写规范；2.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名。写作思路：一、审题1. 审写作主题，内容和要求写作主题：建议李磊不要过分担忧写作内容：根据提示列举人工智能的优点，并发表在自己的看法2. 审人称你的观点以第一人称为主3. 审时态观点类、看法类的表达一般都是以一般现在时态为主，所以你的观点和建议是以一般现在时态为主。二、列提纲：三段式1、第一段：在已给的开头后，将回信的目的提出来，然后引出第二段的内容I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss artificial intelligence with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings（根据已给的背景内容，提出回信的目的）. Instead, it has more advantages than disadvantages. The following is my point of view regarding AI.（引出第二段的内容）第二段：根据提示，列举人工智能的优点First of all, AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can use AI to help them as well. As a result, people can free themselves from over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China. That’s why the government is paying more attention to it.3、第三段 ：自己的看法In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree? I’m looking forward to you reply. （套路）注意：Every coin has two sides =AI is a double-edged sword中考英语书面表达常考体裁模板大全01 邀请信【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School，the president of the Student Union. 我是来自育文学校的王明，学生会主席。2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6. 我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。 3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday. 周日，在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。4. I ’d like to invite you to judge it . 我想邀请你做它的裁判。5. I’m writing to invite you to... 我写信是邀请你.……6. I wonder if you can come to... 我 想 知 道 你 是 否 能 来.……7. We sincerely hope you can attend it. 我们真诚希望你能够参加。8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to... 我 很 荣 幸 的 邀 请 你.……9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm? 很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以，这周六，在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来吗 ？【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理由。1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲 。2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together. 下午，我们会一起……4. Remember to take water and lunch with you. 记得带上水和午餐。5. By the way, you may take Bus No . 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club. 顺 便说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher , and I , on behalf of our school , sincerely invite you to be part of the contest . 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请，并期待对方尽快回复。1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience. 那期间你有空吗？请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation? 请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗？3. We will feel much honored if you could come. 如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。4. We are looking forward to your coming. 我们期待着你的到来。5. I am longing to see you soon . 我期待着尽早见到你。02 建议信【篇首句】说明写信目的。1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps he followingsuggestions are helpful to you . 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3. I’m writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5. I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。6. I’m very glad to have received your e -mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。1. I’d like to suggest that... 我想要建议……2. In my opinion, ... 在我看来，……3. If I were you, I would ... 如果我是你，我会……4.You’d better do.../not do...你最好/最好不……5.It’s necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class. 首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。7. As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. 众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。8.What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly. 还有，试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应该养成记日记的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。【篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”. 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。3. Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如 何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。 我会非常高兴看到情况改善。5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。 无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。7. I hope you can take good consideration of my advice. I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details. 我希望你可以好好考虑我的建议。我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。8. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. I’m eager to see you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。很希望早点在北京见到你。提前祝你来北京之行愉快。03 口头通知【篇首句】引起注意。1. Hello, everybody/everyone .2. Ladies and gentlemen .3. May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 请注意，好吗？我要通知一件事情。4. Attention, please! I have something important to tell you. 请注意！我有重要的事情要告诉你们。 【 篇中句 】主要内容。1. There will be a party/speech/contest held by the English Department in the hall of the library on Saturday evening. 周六晚上，在图书馆大厅，英语系将会举行一场聚会/演讲/比赛。2. In order to welcome our friends from the United States, the Student Union will organize a party in the school hall on Saturday evening, August 15. 为了欢迎我们来自美国的朋友，学生会将会在8月15号星期六晚上组织一场聚会。3. Our school has decided to hold an activity to climb Xiang shan Hill this Sunday. 我们学校决定这周六组织去爬香山。4. It will begin at 5 pm and last about two hours. 它将在下午5点开始，持续大约2个小时。5. The school will arrange several buses to take us there. 学校会安排几辆公交车带我们去那里。6. There will colourful activities then, such as singing, dancing, exchanging gifts with one another and so on . 到时会有丰富多彩的活动，比如唱歌、跳舞、互换礼物等等。7. All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes . Please listen carefully and we’ ll have a discussion in groups . 所有的老师和学生都被要求参加。请带上笔记本做笔记。请认真聆听，之后我们会有分组讨论。【篇尾句】要求/邀请参加+注意事项。1. Those who are interested in the activity are welcome. 欢迎对此活动感兴趣的人参加。2. Those who want to take part in it please sign up at the Student Union. 想要参加的人请在学生会报名。3. Please come and join in it. Everyone is welcome to attend it. 请来参加。每个人都是受欢迎的 。4. Remember to take your hats and gloves. 记得带上你的帽子和手套。5. Remember that we are required hats and water. 记得我们被要求带帽子和水。6. Please come on time and don’ t be late. 请准时到来，不要迟到。7. You might as well take a camera in case you want to take some photos of the beautiful scenery. 你不妨带个相机以防你想要给美丽的风景拍照。8. Please pass on this message to those who are not here today. 请把这个消息告诉不在场的人。9. I hope that you will have a nice time there. 我希望你在那里过得愉快。10. I am sure you will have a good time there/then. 我保证你在那里/到时会过得愉快。11. I believe you will have a wonderful time then. 我相信到时你会过得非常愉快。12. I think you will enjoy it very much. 我想你会非常喜欢它的。13. There’s sure to be a lot of fun. Everyone is welcome. 一定会有很多的乐趣。大家都是受欢迎的。14. Good luck. 祝好运。15. That’s all. Thank you. 我说完了。谢谢！04 申请信【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明信息来源，并提出申请。1. I’m Li Hua, from Class One, Senior Two. 我是李华，来自高二一班。2. I have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company. 我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。3. I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. 我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。4. I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor（家庭教师/助教）in the newspaper.我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。5. I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school. 我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。6. I am writing to tell you that I’m suitable for the job you are advertising. 我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。 7. I am writing to inquire about the possibility of the job. 我写信是询问（我得到）这份工作的可能性。8. I am writing to join the program. 我写信是想加入这个项目。9. I would like to apply for it during the summer vacation. 我想要暑假申请它。【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。1. I think I’m qualified for the position. 我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。2. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills. 首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。3. What’s more, I am well acquainted with the western culture.（be acquainted with熟悉） 而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。 4. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life. 最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。5 . I think it’s of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends. 我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。6. I am sure I can do my best in the job. 我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。7. That’s why I am applying for the position. 那就是我申请这个职位的原因。8. I hope I can join you. 我希望我能够加入你们。【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。1. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity. 如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。2. I hope you can offer me the opportunity. 我希望你能提供给我这个机会。3. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your summer camp. 我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。4. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189...如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189……5. I am looking forward to your early reply. 期待你的早日恢复。6. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 期待早日收到你的来信。05 投诉信【篇首句】介绍自己， 说明写作目的：投诉。1. I’m Li Hua. I feel bad to trouble you but I’m afraid that I have to make a complaint about your restaurant. 我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。但是，恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。2. I’m writing to you to complain about... 我 写 信 是 投 诉……3. I want to express my dissatisfaction about the woolen scarf I bought from your company. 我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。【篇中句】说明投诉问题、后果，并提出合理建议。1 . In the first place, the food is too salty and the water isn’t served in time. In addition, the music you broadcast is too noisy. Under these circumstances, I find it hard to sit here having dinner quietly .首先，食物太咸，水没有及时端上来。而且，你们播放的音乐太吵了。在这样的环境下，我很难安静的坐在这里吃饭 。2. While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green shirt for 300 HK dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it. When it’s washed, it fades in colour. Now I can’t wear it.大概一周前我在香港度假的时候，我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫，但是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候，它会掉色。现在，我不能穿了。3. It arrived on time the day before yesterday. But when I checked it, I found a hole in the middle . I was astonished because the hole was obvious and I didn’t think you should neglect this deficiency（缺 陷 ）.它是前天按时到的。但是当我检查时，我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊，因为这个洞和明显，我认为你们不应该忽略这个缺陷。4 . I have dialed your service number for several times but it was always busy. 我多次拨打你们的服务电话，但它总是占线。5. Now this problem keeps worrying me. 现在这个问题一直在困扰我。6. To improve the situation, you can take the following measures. 为了改善状况，你们可以采取下面的措施。7. Can you change a new one for me as soon as possible? 你们可以尽快给我换件新的吗？8. I insist you change a new one for me or give me a refund（退 款 ）. 我坚持你们给我换件新的或者给我退款。 9. How shall I send this scarf back to you? 我怎么把这条围巾寄还给你？【 篇尾句 】 希望给予考虑 ， 并期待对方尽快回复 。1. Thanks for your consideration. 感谢你的考虑。2. I hope you will give due attention to this matter. 我希望你给予此事应有的重视。3. I believe you will take my complaint seriously. 我相信你会认真考虑我的投诉。4. I’ll appreciate it if my demand is met. 如果我的要求被满足，我会非常感激。5. I’m looking forward to your early reply . 期待着你早日答复。06 道歉信1. 道歉信结构道歉信通常包括三部分内容： 1 .表示歉意，道歉的原由；2 .出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施； 3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。 好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。2. 道歉信模板Dear ,① I am truly sorry that ___________（道歉 的 原 因 ）.② The reason is that ___________（介绍原 因 ）. ③ Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. ④ Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation .Yours sincerely, Li Ming3. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话I am writing this letter to express my regret … 我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……I am writing to apologize for … 我写信是为……道歉 。I would like to give you my apology for … 我想为……向你道歉。I am very sorry to say that … 我很抱歉……I must apologize about (not) doing sth … 对于做了/没做……，我必须道歉。Please accept my sincere apology for … 请接受我对于……的真诚道歉。I am writing to say sorry for … 我写信是想对……说抱歉。I am terribly sorry, but … 我很抱歉，但是……4. 道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。Please allow me to say sorry again. 请允许我再一次说抱歉。Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. 希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 我真诚的希望你能够站在 我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now. 我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。I am sorry that I can’ t … but trust that you will be able to understand. 很抱歉我不能……，但我相信，你会理解的。（2024·陕西宝鸡·二模）“中小学生心理健康日”就要到了, 为此你校英语角开展了主题为“Speak to your heart”的活动, 鼓励同学们敞开心扉, 分享自己的心理成长历程。请你根据以下提示内容, 写一则英语通知, 号召大家积极参加此次活动。要求：1. 参考提示内容, 可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；4. 词数：不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出, 但不计人总词数）。NoticeHello, everyone. The Mental Health Day is coming. There will be wonderful activities for you to take part in. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Anyway, the activities are helpful and interesting. Come and join us! The School English ComerApril 29, 2024【答案】例文：NoticeHello, everyone. The Mental Health Day is coming. There will be wonderful activities for you to take part in. The activities will begin at 9:30 a.m. next Saturday in the library. First, some students will give speeches on what affects their mood and how to stay in a good mood. Next, a great movie will be shown. You’ll talk about it and share your ideas after watching it. The last part will be “A Letter to Yourself”. By writing, you will learn more about yourself. And at the end of the day, you will find yourself in good spirits.          Anyway, the activities are helpful and interesting. Come and join us!The School English Corner April 29, 2024【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是通知；②时态：主要时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”的几个要点，适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点，一一阐述活动时间、地点和内容。第三步：书写结语。表达“快来加入我们”的邀请。[亮点词汇]①take part in参加②in a good mood好心情③in good spirits精神状态良好[高分句型]①First, some students will give speeches on what affects their mood and how to stay in a good mood.(what引导宾语从句）②Next, a great movie will be shown. (一般将来时的被动语态）（2024·山东泰安·二模）作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，相信只要我们勇于改变自我，不断蜕变，就可以成就更好的自己。学校英语社开展以“Make Myself Better”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据表格内容提示写一篇短文，向英语社投稿。注意：1.短文须包括问题提示中的要点，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Make Myself BetterEveryone wants to become a better person. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Make Myself BetterEveryone wants to become a better person. First of all, I am a lazy girl and I hardly ever exercise. But I am a positive person. So in the coming year, I am going to start an exercise program to improve my physical health. For example, I plan to join a swimming club and practice it once or twice a week. What’s more, I want to learn how to cook by myself so that I can make meals for my parents when they’re busy. It’s also a good way to improve the relationships with my family. Last but not least, I will take up a new hobby. I think singing is a great activity so I am going to learn to sing. This will also make my family happy because they love to listen to music and sing together. I hope I can be a better me.【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，并适当补充细节，不要有语法错误，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。［写作步骤］第一步，介绍自己的优势及劣势；第二步，介绍如何使自己更好；第三步，为什么想做这些事。［亮点词汇］①hardly几乎不 ②twice a week一周两次 ③What’s more此外 ［高分句型］①What’s more, I want to learn how to cook by myself so that I can make meals for my parents when they’re busy. （目的状语从句）②This will also make my family happy because they love to listen to music and sing together.（原因状语从句） （2024·河南南阳·二模）我们一生中会遇到许许多多的人，但并非每个人都会在我们心中留下痕迹。谁是你生命中最难忘的人？假如你是李华，学校将要开展以“The Most Unforgettable Person In My Life”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。提示：要求：1. 短文必须包含以上思维导图的内容，可适当发挥；2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；3. 词数100左右。The Most Unforgettable Person In My Life_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文The Most Unforgettable Person In My LifeThe most unforgettable person in my life is my mentor, Professor Wang. Professor Wang is a dedicated educator. His appearance is unassuming, yet his personality is both inspiring and approachable. He has a warm smile that always makes you feel welcome, and his patience and understanding make him a great listener. The reason why Professor Wang is the most unforgettable person in my life is his profound influence on my academic and personal growth. Moreover, Professor Wang’s unwavering commitment to excellence and his dedication to his students have taught me the importance of hard work and perseverance. He has instilled in me the belief that with hard work and dedication, one can achieve anything. In conclusion, I am grateful to have had the opportunity to learn from such an exceptional individual and will always cherish the memories.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的重点信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍一生中最难忘的人。第二步，具体阐述，从名字与工作、外表与性格、理由和值得学习的地方等进行介绍；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①approachable平易近人②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事③the importance of……的重要性④perseverance毅力⑤be grateful to对……感激⑥learn from向……学习[高分句型]①He has a warm smile that always makes you feel welcome, and his patience and understanding make him a great listener. (that引导的定语从句)②The reason why Professor Wang is the most unforgettable person in my life is his profound influence on my academic and personal growth. (why引导的定语从句)（2024·黑龙江鸡西·二模）习总书记在二十大报告中指出“青年强，则国家强”。作为中学生的我们，更要努力发展自身，做拼搏上进的中国少年！请根据以下图片，联系自身实际，从德智体美劳等方面谈谈自己将如何努力做合格的中国少年。要求：1．话题作文和图示作文任选其一。2．词数：80~100之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3．字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager?Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should help others who have fallen down. After we see their smiles on their faces, we must be happier too. Secondly, we should study hard. In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. Thirdly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. So we should keep on doing more exercise. Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. So we should develop a good habit to learn more and more skills when we are in our free time. Finally, we can do more social work. For example, we can plant more trees to protect the environment. We can also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.From doing these, I must be a better teenager.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；③提示：根据图片内容以及提示单词，联系自身实际介绍自己将如何做合格的中国少年。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，突出主题：如何成为一名好少年？第二步，结合图片内容，分别从帮助他人、努力学习、体育锻炼、发展兴趣及参与社会实践活动等五个方面具体阐述如何做一名合格的中国少年。第三步，书写结语。表达自己做一名好少年的决心。[亮点词汇]①fall down落后②broaden our eyes开阔我们的眼界③develop a good habit培养好的习惯④be willing to do sth.愿意做某事[高分句型]①For example, we should help others who have fallen down. (who引导的定语从句)②In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. (动词不定式作目的状语)③Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)④Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. (倒装结构)（2024·陕西商洛·二模）每年3月5日是“学雷锋纪念日”，我们要弘扬和践行雷锋精神。为此，学校上月开展了人人争做“小雷锋”的主题志愿者活动，带领同学们去附近的养老院（nursing home）或社区去进行志愿者活动。请你以演讲的形式介绍此次活动，并发出倡议。要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4. 词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。Dear students,Lei Feng Memorial Day is on March 5 each year. Lei Feng’s spirit should be remembered by us Chinese. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dear students,Lei Feng Memorial Day is on March 5 each year. Lei Feng’s spirit should be remembered by us Chinese. As a member of volunteers, we decided to do something.We went to the nursing home and the community last Tuesday. The activity lasted three hours from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Some of us performed programs for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspapers for them. Some of us chatted with them. How happy they were!From this meaningful activity, I find that we should care for the old and respect them. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly. What we do also bring us happiness.Thank you for listening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿;②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的重点信息，可适当补充细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出本文主题，介绍“雷锋日”志愿者活动活动；第二步，详细介绍活动内容，包括时间、地点、活动及目的等；第三步，分享此次活动的感受并号召人们平日应该如何做；第四步，书写结语，感谢聆听。[亮点词汇]①a member of……的成员②decide to do sth决定做某事③such as例如④chat with聊天⑤care for关心[高分句型]①How happy they were! (感叹句)②I find that we should care for the old and respect them. (宾语从句)③What we do also bring us happiness. (主语从句)（2024·湖南长沙·二模）作为中国人，我们理应学好汉语。随着中国国际地位的提高，有部分人认为现在学好汉语就可以了，没有必要再学习英语了。你认为还需要学英语吗？近日，你校校园网英语论坛上正在开展以“Is it necessary to learn English?”为主题的讨论。请你写一篇英语短文，结合现在的社会现状和自身的经历，谈谈你的看法并给出相关建议。提示：（1）Is it necessary to learn English?（2）Why do you think so?（3）What advice can you give to the people who want to learn English well?要求：（1）词数80左右；（2）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Is it necessary to learn English?    With the rise of China’s international status, I think it is important to learn English well.     Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends. Take myself for example. Last Saturday I met a foreigner who asked for directions on the road, but I couldn’t say exactly what I meant, so I couldn’t help him. Through this, I understand the importance of learning English well. If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.     Finally, I wish your English is getting better and better.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，点明学习英语很重要。第二步，具体介绍为什么自己觉得学好英语很重要以及对学好英语的一些建议。第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]① it is important to do sth.做某事很重要②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事③do word cards做单词卡片[高分句型]①Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends.(not only...but also 不仅……而且……)②If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.(If 引导的条件状语从句)（2024·湖南长沙·模拟预测）假如你叫李华，你们班将在今年暑假参加以“亲近大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营。其中包括小组自由活动。请根据下面你设计的小组活动方案写一封电子邮件，发给交换生Mike，告知Mike你所设计的计划。要求：（1）电子邮件包含计划中所有的活动，并给出理由；（2）邮件不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；（3）词数80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Hi Mike,We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time.Li Hua【答案】例文Hi Mike,We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. It’s also a great way to improve our physical fitness. At noon, we’ll have a picnic. We can share our food. We can enjoy ourselves by singing, dancing and telling stories. We can develop our English speaking and communication skills. In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time.Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，从上午、中午和下午三个时间段来详述夏令营活动计划。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍暑期夏令营计划；第二步，详述自己的计划；第三步，表达自己的期待并且相信会玩得愉快。[亮点词汇]①first of all 首先②enjoy oneself 玩得愉快③each other 彼此，相互[高分句型]①First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.（so that引导目的状语从句）②In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.（which引导非限制性定语从句）（2024·河南鹤壁·一模）若成长是一本著作，那么烦恼便是藏在段落深处的错字；如果成长是一张白纸，那么烦恼便是附在背面的一个瑕疵。请以“How I work out problems”为题，根据写作要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼的。1. 写作要点：1）你是如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼的？2）你又是用什么方法解决的？3）你的感想是什么？2. 写作要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数100左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version：How I work out problemsProblems and worries are normal in our life. But don’t worry. I would like to share you how I work out problems.First, I often tell my friends about my worries. Because I know they’re always there for me and their advice always helps me a lot. Then, I amused to doing some exercise like running. You know doing exercise can make me feel so tired that I can get a good sleep. And when the next day comes, I’ll feel better. I’m fond of listening to music in a quiet place by myself. What’s more, reading books and watching news are sometimes useful for me, too. When I read, I forget my problems and worries.I think we should learn to control our feelings. And if you have some problems and worries, you can try what I share with you.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般将来时”和“一般过来时”。③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼、解决烦恼的方法和自己的感想的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼；第二步，介绍自己如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼；第三步，介绍自己的感想。[亮点词汇]① work out problems解决问题② the next day第二天③ What’s more而且，更重要的是④ learn to control our feelings学会控制我们的感情[高分句型]① You know doing exercise can make me feel so tired that I can get a good sleep. (so…that引导结果状语从句)② When I read, I forget my problems and worries. (When引导时间状语从句)③ And if you have some problems and worries, you can try what I share with you. (if引导条件状语从句)（2024·湖北武汉·二模）不积跬步无以至千里，充实的初中生活已接近尾声。这三年里你一定取得了很多进步，比如学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成、学科成绩的提升等。请以My Progress in Middle School为题，结合自身经历选取一个方面，根据以下问题用英文写一篇短文向校广播台投稿。What progress have you made?How did you make it?How do you feel about your progress?Something more about it.注意：1.文中不得透露个人真实信息；2.词数 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总字数。My Progress in Middle SchoolNo doubt, everyone is sure to change and so am I. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：My Progress in Middle SchoolNo doubt, everyone is sure to change and so am I. My three-year middle school life will be over. Looking back, I want to share my progress in middle school with you.I have made great progress in learning English. When I entered middle school, I had great difficulty in learning English. I couldn’t remember English words and I got bad results in English tests. However, I didn’t give up. In class, I listened to my teachers carefully and spoke English as much as possible. After class, I often asked teachers and classmates for help. I also kept writing English diaries and tried to use the new grammar rules that I learned from the books. All of these have helped me a lot.Now, I have much confidence when facing challenges. I become patient and careful. What’s more, I am not afraid to make mistakes any more.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态是“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”以及“现在完成时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，写作开头已给出，写作时可直接写作目的。第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“取得的进步”、“怎么取得进步的”以及“取得进步的感受”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①be sure to do sth.确定做某事②be over结束③want to do sth.想要做某事④make great progress取得极大的进步⑤give up放弃⑥listen to听⑦as much as possible尽可能多地⑧ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助⑨keep doing sth.保持做某事⑩try to do sth.尝试做某事[高分句型]①When I entered middle school, I had great difficulty in learning English. (when引导的时间状语从句)②I also kept writing English diaries and tried to use the new grammar rules that I learned from the books. (that引导的定语从句)（2024·四川成都·二模）为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，你校校刊英语专栏以”最美大课间，强健青少年”为主题向全校学生征稿。请根据以下图示，写一篇短文向专栏投稿。注意： 1.请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词)；2.须全面反映图文信息；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4. 词数 80 左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：    The colourful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier.    In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classrooms to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. Sometimes we also do long jumps. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class.    Having a variety of activities during our rest time will certainly benefit us a lot. I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students.【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；③提示：注意图片的信息要涵盖，注意要点齐全。［写作步骤］第一步，总述锻炼能让青少年更健康；第二步，具体介绍活动内容；第三步，表达自己的观点。［亮点词汇］① In my opinion以我的观点看②such as例如 ［高分句型］① Having a variety of activities during our rest time will certainly benefit us a lot. （动名词作主语）② I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students. （宾语从句）近视原因长时间使用电子产品；读书时间过长。建议控制使用电子产品时间；养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）……希望……人工智能的优点可以代替人类从事危险工作，从而保证人类安全可以代替人类进行单调重复的工作，从而从繁重工作中解放 (free v.) 自己，有时间去做一些感兴趣的事情在我国科技领域扮演着重要角色，这就是政府更加关注的原因……问题提示参考句型1. What are your advantages and disadvantages?I do well in... I decide to...It’s important to...2. How are you going to make yourself better? (lifestyle, schoolwork, sports...)3. Why do you want to do these things?Time8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m., last TuesdayPlacenursing home; communityActivitiesdo some cleaning, read newspaper, sing and dance, tell stories…Purpose…Morningclimb mountainsNoonpicnicsinging, dancing, tell storiesAfternoonpick fruits