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一、在复习语言点的时候，要依据语言的横向组合和纵向聚合，按照“点—线—面”顺序，构建知识网络环境。
二、多做高考题，少扣模拟题
1、时间的把控。
2、总结一下各部分的得分情况，了解自己的强弱项。
3、留意出题点，揣摩不同内容出题人的着眼点在哪里，做到知己知彼。
三、多攻词汇表，少记课外词
四、写作。研究高考写作命题话题范围，根据测试的频度和交际场景的生活化程度进行分类。
专题19 感谢信+道歉信+祝贺信专攻
高考零失误必刷100题
一 感谢信
（2023·湖南长沙·高三长沙一中校考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，刚从新西兰的University f Canterbury游学归来。请你代表中国交换生给该校校长Dr Jhn Wd写封信。内容包括：
1. 感谢接待；
2. 谈谈收获；
3. 邀请来访。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Dr Jhn Wd,
I’m writing n behalf f all the exchange students t express ur gratitude fr yur hspitality and genersity during ur stay in New Zealand.
What impressed us deeply were the delicius lcal cuisine and the cmfrtable accmmdatin well-prepared fr us. Als, the activities yu arranged nt nly gt every ne f us invlved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, fr which we were really grateful.
Thanks again fr all yur effrts and we sincerely hpe yu can cme t China and visit us in the near future!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，刚从新西兰的University f Canterbury游学归来。请你代表中国交换生给该校校长Dr Jhn Wd写封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：n behalf f→represent
表达：express→extend
美味的：delicius→tasty
感谢的：grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What impressed us deeply were the delicius lcal cuisine and the cmfrtable accmmdatin well-prepared fr us.
拓展句：It was the delicius lcal cuisine and the cmfrtable accmmdatin well-prepared fr us that impressed us deeply.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What impressed us deeply were the delicius lcal cuisine and the cmfrtable accmmdatin well prepared fr us.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] Als, the activities yu arranged nt nly gt every ne f us invlved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, fr which we were really grateful. (运用了介词+关系代词结构的非限制性定语从句)
（2024·吉林·统考二模）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike一直鼓励你要多进行体育锻炼，并提出了很多有益的建议，你因此而开始重视运动，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 你选择的运动及原因；
3. 运动对你的影响和意义。
注意：词数80左右。
Dear Mike,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I am writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur cnsistent encuragement and advice regarding my physical exercise.
I have chsen t include running in my daily rutine. Running ffers a perfect way f exercise, which is essential fr maintaining a healthy bdy and mind. Additinally, running prvides a sense f freedm and stress relief. Nw I feel mre energetic and regular exercise has given me a sense f accmplishment and pride.
Thanks again fr yur invaluable guidance and supprt. I lk frward t cntinuing ur cnversatin abut exercise and ther tpics in the future.
Yurs sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你的美国朋友Mike一直鼓励你要多进行体育锻炼，并提出了很多有益的建议，你因此而开始重视运动，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 感谢他的帮助；2. 你选择的运动及原因；3. 运动对你的影响和意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciatin
持续的：cnsistent→cntinuus
非常重要的：essential→vital
此外：additinally →besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Additinally, running prvides a sense f freedm and stress relief. Nw I feel mre energetic and regular exercise has given me a sense f accmplishment and pride.
拓展句：Additinally, running prvides a sense f freedm and stress relief, which makes me mre energetic and gives me a sense f accmplishment and pride.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Running ffers a perfect way f exercise, which is essential fr maintaining a healthy bdy and mind. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I lk frward t cntinuing ur cnversatin abut exercise and ther tpics in the future. (运用了动名词作宾语)
（2023·四川南充·统考一模）
假如你是李华，在你校举办的“用英语讲好中国故事”(Chinese Stries Retld in English)活动中，你获得一等奖。你的英国笔友Jhn发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲的故事， 请你给他写一封回信， 内容包括：
1.感谢关注；
2.故事概况；
3.参加活动的感受。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Dear Jhn,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jhn,
Having received yur cngratulatins n my winning first prize in the activity, Chinese Stries Retld in English, I’m writing t express my heartfelt thanks fr yur cncern and intrduce the stry —Chinese Silk.
Dating back t the Western Zhu perid, Chinese silk basts a lng histry f ver 3,000 years. Legend has it that Leizu, the wife f the Yellw Emperr, discvered the silk-making prcess. There was an ancient trade and cmmunicatin rute called “The Silk Rad”, prmting the exchange f ideas and gds between China and ther civilizatins. Sft and elegant, Chinese silk has a significant ecnmic impact and plays a crucial rle in cultural exchanges.
The activity has nt nly deepened my understanding f Chinese culture, but als strengthened my curage t speak English. I hpe yu can cme t China t experience ur culture.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你在你校举办的“用英语讲好中国故事”活动中，你获得一等奖。你的英国笔友Jhn发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲的故事，要求考生给他写一封回信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→cnvey
叫作：call→name
促进：prmte→imprve
影响：impact→effect
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There was an ancient trade and cmmunicatin rute called “The Silk Rad”, prmting the exchange f ideas and gds between China and ther civilizatins.
拓展句：There was an ancient trade and cmmunicatin rute called “The Silk Rad”, which prmted the exchange f ideas and gds between China and ther civilizatins.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Dating back t the Western Zhu perid, Chinese silk basts a lng histry f ver 3,000 years.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]The activity has nt nly deepened my understanding f Chinese culture, but als strengthened my curage t speak English.(nt als...句型)
（2023·湖南长沙·高三雅礼中学校考阶段练习）
假如你是李华，你在口语课上回答错误，引得全班哄堂大笑。外教Julia及时救场，你想写封信表达你的感谢。内容包括：
1. 当时的情况；
2. 外教的做法；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Julia,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Julia,
I hpe this letter finds yu well. I am writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur timely interventin during the ral class yesterday.
When I answered incrrectly, the whle class burst int laughter. Embarrassed and ashamed, I felt my face turn red. Hwever, yu quickly stepped in and yur wrds f affirmatin and inspiratin turned the awkward mment int ne filled with encuragement. With a gentle tne and understanding smile, yu put me at ease and gave me the cnfidence t try again.
Yur actins nt nly shwed me great supprt, but als made me feel respected and valued. Yur kindness and encuragement have given me the push t keep trying and never give up. I am truly grateful fr everything that yu have dne fr me.
Thank yu fr being such a great teacher!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你在口语课上回答错误，引得全班哄堂大笑。外教Julia及时救场，要求考生写封信表达你的感谢。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→shw
不正确地：incrrectly→mistakenly
激励：encuragement→inspiratin
感激的：grateful→appreciative
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With a gentle tne and understanding smile, yu put me at ease and gave me the cnfidence t try again.
拓展句：With a gentle tne and understanding smile, yu put me at ease, which gave me the cnfidence t try again.
【点睛】[高分句型1]When I answered incrrectly, the whle class burst int laughter.(when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]I am truly grateful fr everything that yu have dne fr me.(that引导的定语从句)
（2023·江苏·高三马坝高中校考期中）
假如你是中学生李华， 随学校到美国一所高中进行了一个月的交流学习活动。在美国，你结识了Tm回国后，你决定给Tm写一封信，内容包括：
1、表达谢意 2、自己的收获 3、邀请他来中国做客
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tm,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs ,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tm,
I have just arrived hme and I can’t wait t write yu a letter. I wuld like t cnvey my sincere appreciatin fr yu kind help, withut which, I wuldn’t have had a better understanding f the life and study f the US.
What impressed me mst is yur beautiful campus and the friendly students. Mrever, helped by yu, my spken English has imprved a lt. It’s yur generus help that enabled me t be cnfident when talking with thers in English.
Thanks again fr yur kind help and I’ll be mre than glad t have the pprtunity t repay yur kindness/hspitality by shwing yu arund China.
Yurs ,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Tm写封信，表达对他的谢意，讲述自己的收获，邀请他来中国做客。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：cnvey→express
真诚的：sincere→genuine
另外：mrever→furthermre
高兴的：glad→delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Mrever, helped by yu, my spken English has imprved a lt.
拓展句：Mrever, because I was helped by yu, my spken English has imprved a lt.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I wuld like t cnvey my sincere appreciatin fr yu kind help, withut which, I wuldn’t have had a better understanding f the life and study f the US. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What impressed me mst is yur beautiful campus and the friendly students. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
（安徽安庆·安庆市第七中学校考模拟预测）
假定你是李华, 在美国迪士尼乐园 (Disneyland) 游玩时丢了钱包，该园的工作人员Henry帮你找到钱包并设法还给了你。请你写封信向他表示感谢。要点如下：
1. 说明写信原因；
2. 简述事情经过；
3. 表达谢意。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua. With the deepest gratitude, I’m writing t express my heartfelt thanks t yu fr yur help.
When I enjyed my trip in Disneyland yesterday, I discvered my wallet was missing. I was ttally at a lss where I culd have left it. It cntained all the mney, my identity card and passprt, withut which I wuld get int great truble. S I felt extremely wrried and upset. I had n chice but t turn t yu. Yu prmised me that yu wuld manage t find it back. Luckily, yu fund it, and sent it t my htel this mrning. I d appreciate yur kindness.
Thanks again fr yur help. Wish yu all the best.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给迪士尼乐园工作人员Henry写信，感谢他帮自己找到钱包。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由衷的：heartfelt → sincere
完全地：ttally → cmpletely
担心的：wrried → anxius
幸运地：luckily → frtunately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I d appreciate yur kindness.
拓展句：I d appreciate yur kindness and what yu have dne.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I enjyed my trip in Disneyland yesterday, I discvered my wallet was missing. (运用了从属连词when引导时间状语从句和省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It cntained all the mney, my identity card and passprt, withut which I wuld get int great truble. (运用了关系代词“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句)
二 道歉信
（2023·重庆·高三重庆市第十一中学校校考阶段练习）
假设你是李华，你上周没能参加Jim老师的英语写作课考试，请你写一封信，向老师陈述情况，内容包括：
1.表达歉意；
2.无法参加考试的原因；
3.提出补救办法。
注意：1.词数100左右，可适当增加细节;
2.开头和结尾的称呼已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am indeed very srry that I missed the examinatin n English Writing yu rganized last Friday. I feel terrible abut it and want t explain what happened that day.
I suddenly fell sick early that mrning and my parents had t take me t the hspital. The dctr examined me and said I had a bad cld. Please find enclsed a cpy f the medical bill. I sincerely hpe yu culd understand my situatin and accept my aplgy.
I wuld appreciate yur allwing me t take a make-up examinatin. I will cme t yur ffice and lk frward t the make-up exam.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假设是李华，你上周没能参加Jim老师的英语写作课考试，请你写一封信，向老师陈述情况
【详解】1.词汇积累
确实：indeed→truly
解释：explain→illustrate
附上：enclsed→attached
真诚地：sincerely→heartfeltly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I suddenly fell sick early that mrning and my parents had t take me t the hspital.
拓展句：My parents tk me t the hspital because I suddenly fell sick early that mrning.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am indeed very srry that I missed the examinatin n English Writing yu rganized last Friday. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I feel terrible abut it and want t explain what happened that day. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
8.（2023·贵州·高三校考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，与交换生Leslie约好一起去博物馆，现因故不能赴约。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Leslie,
I’m terribly srry t say that I am nt able t g t the museum with yu this Saturday mrning.
Just nw, my mther tld me that we wuld see my grandparents that mrning. They live lnely in the cuntryside. We want t spend the whle weekend in their huse and keep them cmpany.
I hpe yu can understand the situatin. I will really appreciate it if yu allw me t fix anther suitable time t visit the museum. If it’s cnvenient fr yu, I’d like t schedule the visit fr next Sunday.
I d aplgize again fr any incnvenience caused.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Leslie写信，就自己因故不能赴约一起去博物馆表达歉意，并说明原因和另约时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：terribly → very/awfully
整个的：whle → entire
希望：hpe → wish
合适的：suitable → apprpriate/prper
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They live lnely in the cuntryside. We want t spend the whle weekend in their huse and keep them cmpany.
拓展句：They live lnely in the cuntryside, where we are ging t spend the whle weekend and keep them cmpany.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I hpe yu can understand the situatin. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If it’s cnvenient fr yu, I’d like t schedule the visit fr next Sunday. (运用了从属连词if引导条件状语从句)
9.（2023·广东广州·高三华南师大附中校考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，已报名参加外教Hans举办的读书分享会，但因故不能到场。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示歉意;
2. 解释原因：
3. 弥补措施。
注意：1. 写作词应为80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yus faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Hans,
I am terribly srry fr nt being able t t take part in the reading sharing held this Friday afternn. I’m writing t cnvey my heartfelt aplgy fr breaking my prmise.
The reasn why I am unable t attend the reading sharing is that I have t take part in a swimming cmpetitin n behalf f ur schl n that day. As yu knw, I have been lking frward t attending the reading sharing since we made the appintment. Unexpectedly, the classmate wh shuld have attended the swimming cmpetitin suddenly fell ill. Therefre, I have t take his place and cmpete in the cntest.
I hpe yu will understand my prblem and the unexpected change will nt cause yu t much truble. I have attached all kinds f imprtant dcuments fr the reading sharing with this letter and I hpe yu will give it a read.
I am truly srry fr the incnvenience and d lk frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。因自己已经报名参加外教Hans举办的读书分享会，但因故不能到场。要求考生给他写封邮件，表达歉意，解释原因并提出弥补措施。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hld→ hst
真挚的：heartfelt → genuine
因此：therefre→ thus
比赛：cntest→ match
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have attached all kinds f imprtant dcuments fr the reading sharing with this letter and I hpe yu will give it a read.
拓展句：I have attached all kinds f imprtant dcuments fr the reading sharing with this letter, which I hpe yu will give a read.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reasn why I am unable t attend the reading sharing is that I have t take part in a swimming cmpetitin n behalf f ur schl n that day. （运用了why引导的定语从句以及that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】Unexpectedly, the classmate wh shuld have attended the swimming cmpetitin suddenly fell ill.（运用了wh引导的定语从句）
10.（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考三模）
假定你是李华，你的外籍好友 Jenny 邀请你周末一起去参观博物馆，但你因故不能接受邀请。请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.表达歉意并解释原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
Thank yu very much fr inviting me t visit the museum with yu this weekend. It sunds like a great plan and I appreciate yur kindness. But unfrtunately I wn’t be able t jin yu this time because I have t rehearse an English drama with my classmates. I feel srry fr letting yu dwn and hpe yu can understand my situatin.
Hwever, I’d lve t have the pprtunity t visit the museum with yu anther time. Maybe we can arrange anther date that suits bth f us.
Thank yu again fr yur kind invitatin, and I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的道歉信。要求考生给外籍好友 Jenny写封道歉信，表示自己因故不能接受她的邀请——周末一起去参观博物馆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great→ wnderful
不幸地：unfrtunately→ unluckily
使……失望：let dwn → disappint
机会：pprtunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hwever, I’d lve t have the pprtunity t visit the museum with yu anther time.
拓展句：Hwever, I’d lve it if I can have the pprtunity t visit the museum with yu anther time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But unfrtunately I wn’t be able t jin yu this time because I have t rehearse an English drama with my classmates.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Maybe we can arrange anther date that suits bth f us.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
（2022·浙江金华·校联考一模）
假定你是校英语剧社社长李华，原定于下周举行的英语剧表演比赛因故推迟，请给担任评委的外教Katherine写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.推迟原因；
3.后续调整。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答
Dear Katherine,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Katherine,
Hw are things ging with yu these days? I’m srry t tell yu that the English drama cmpetitin scheduled t be held next week has been pstpned fr sme reasn.
I suppse everybdy arund the wrld has been smehw affected by Cvid-19, and we are n exceptin. The greatest influence n us is that the English drama cmpetitin this year has been pstpned t next mnth. If the virus is under cntrl sn, we will rearrange and infrm yu in time. I wish it wuld be cnvenient fr yu t be ur judge then.
Please stay safe and stay in cntact with me.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Katherine写信，告诉她原定于下周举行的英语剧表演比赛因故推迟，对此深表歉意，并讲明原因和后续安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推迟：pstpne→put ff
影响：affect→influence
竞赛：cmpetitin→cntest
与……保持联系：stay in cntact with→keep in tuch with
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句： I’m srry t tell yu that the English drama cmpetitin scheduled t be held next week has been pstpned fr sme reasn.
拓展句： I’m srry t tell yu that the English drama cmpetitin which was scheduled t be held next week has been pstpned fr sme reasn.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m srry t tell yu that the English drama cmpetitin scheduled t be held next week has been pstpned fr sme reasn.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和过去分词作后置定语）
[高分句型2]The greatest influence n us is that the English drama cmpetitin this year has been pstpned t next mnth.（运用了that引导的表语从句）
[高分句型3]I wish it wuld be cnvenient fr yu t be ur judge then.（运用了虚拟语气）
三 祝贺信
（2024上·天津·高三天津市咸水沽第一中学校考阶段练习）
假如你是晨光中学的李津，你校举办了一场有关用英语讲中国故事的演讲比赛，你的朋友
Chris 获得了第一名，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
(1)表达祝贺;(2)向他学习;(3)希望他能够分享提高英语口语的方法。注意：
(1)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; (2)词数不少于 100。
参考词汇: 用英语讲中国故事 Stries f China Retld in English Challenge
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing this letter t express my cngratulatins t yu fr winning the first prize in the Stries f China Retld in English Challenge.
Yur perfrmance was perfect, especially yur excellent spken English, which has left a deep impressin n all the teachers and students present. Besides, what surprised us mst was that yu were s cnfident and brave n the stage when facing plenty f audience. T be hnest, yu are a her in my heart, and I wuld like t take this chance t learn frm yu. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd share with me sme methds f imprving ral English.
All in all, n wrds can express my cngratulatins. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求写信祝贺朋友在用英语讲中国故事的演讲比赛中获得第一名，并向朋友求教提高英语口语的方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→cnvey
此外：besides → what’s mre
大量的：plenty f→a number f
机会：chance→pprtunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T be hnest, yu are a her in my heart.
拓展句：I have t say that yu are a her in my heart.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yur perfrmance was perfect, especially yur excellent spken English, which has left a deep impressin n all the teachers and students present.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, what surprised us mst was that yu were s cnfident and brave n the stage when facing plenty f audience.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
（2023·山东·高三校联考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jane来信说她在“留学生中国传统文化剪纸竞赛”中获得了第一名。请你给她写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.肯定她的付出并期待深度交流；
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jane:
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jane,
Learning that yu have gained the first place in the Chinese Traditinal Culture Paper-cutting Cmpetitin fr Internatinal Students, I’m mre than delighted t write t extend my sincere cngratulatins t yu.
As the saying ges, yu reap what yu sw. Frm my perspective, yur effrts paid ff. It was yur passin and hard wrk that cntributed t yur winning. Keen n Chinese traditinal culture paper-cutting, yu have lng been devted t learning frm masters and keeping practicing cnstantly. What yu have cmmitted t cunts.
I expect yu culd share yur experience and reflectin with me. I am terribly thirsty fr cultivating my culture cnsciusness and enhancing my practical abilities. Once again, cngratulatins n yur splendid achievement.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的祝贺信。要求考生给美国朋友Jane写信，祝贺她在“留学生中国传统文化剪纸竞赛”中获得了第一名，肯定她的付出并期待深度交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→ happy
表达：extend → express
导致：cntribute t → lead t
致力于：be devted t→ be dedicated t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Keen n Chinese traditinal culture paper-cutting, yu have lng been devted t learning frm masters and keeping practicing cnstantly.
拓展句：Since yu are keen n Chinese traditinal culture paper-cutting, yu have lng been devted t learning frm masters and keeping practicing cnstantly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the saying ges, yu reap what yu sw.（运用了as引导的定语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】What yu have cmmitted t cunts.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
（2024上·黑龙江牡丹江·高三牡丹江市第二高级中学校联考）
假定你是李华，得知好友 Eric回国后在学校成立了中国传统文化和习俗学习小组。请给他写 一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；2.询问学习内容；3.期待他分享学习体会。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I’m writing t extend my heartfelt cngratulatins t yu n the establishment f the Chinese traditinal culture and custm study grup in yur schl.
I’m glad that yu are s fascinated by ur traditinal culture and custms and I’d be truly thrilled if yu culd share sme insights int the tpics and the activities that yur study grup will explre. Are yu fcusing n sme specific aspects, such as Chinese calligraphy, festival custms, r ancient literature? I’m eager t learn abut yur reflectins and the valuable lessns yu’ve gained frm studying Chinese traditinal culture and custms.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友 Eric写一封邮件，祝贺他回国后在学校成立了中国传统文化和习俗学习小组，询问学习内容并期待他分享学习体会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→pleased
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
专注于：fcus n→cncentrate n
获得：gain→btain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t extend my heartfelt cngratulatins t yu n the establishment f the Chinese traditinal culture and custm study grup in yur schl.
拓展句：Hearing that yu established the Chinese traditinal culture and custm study grup in yur schl, I’m writing t extend my heartfelt cngratulatins t yu.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad that yu are s fascinated by ur traditinal culture and custms and I’d be truly thrilled if yu culd share sme insights int the tpics and the activities that yur study grup will explre.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句以及后一个that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’m eager t learn abut yur reflectins and the valuable lessns yu’ve gained frm studying Chinese traditinal culture and custms.（运用了省略关系词的定语从句）
15.（2023上·吉林松原·高三前郭尔罗斯县第五中学校考）
假定你是校学生会主席李华，上周末学生会举办了中国诗词翻译大赛(Chinese Pem Translatin Cmpetitin)，得到了外教Thmas的大力帮助，请你给Thmas写一封邮件，表示感谢，内容包括：
1. 感谢外教的帮助；
2. 同学们的收获。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Thmas,
I’m writing this letter t express my sincere gratitude t yu fr yur enrmus help in the Chinese Pem Translatin Cmpetitin, in which we have gained quite a lt.
It’s s kind f yu t have taught us sme basic translatin skills and techniques befre the cmpetitin. Under yur prfessinal guidance, the participants presented many brilliant translated pems. Meanwhile, nt nly did we realize the beauty f translatin but als imprved ur ability t appreciate pems. Mst imprtantly, this activity has stimulated ur passin fr learning pems frm different varius perspectives.
Many thanks fr yur valuable time and supprt! Please have n hesitatin in writing t me shuld yu want me t d smething fr yu help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Thmas写一封邮件，对其在学生会举办的中国诗词翻译大赛(Chinese Pem Translatin Cmpetitin)中给予的大力帮助表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help→assistance
获得：gain→btain
意识到：realize→be aware f
欣赏：appreciate→admire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Under yur prfessinal guidance, the participants presented many brilliant translated pems.
拓展句：Since yu ffered prfessinal guidance, the participants presented many brilliant translated pems.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing this letter t express my sincere gratitude t yu fr yur enrmus help in the Chinese Pem Translatin Cmpetitin, in which we have gained quite a lt.（运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Meanwhile, nt nly did we realize the beauty f translatin but als imprved ur ability t appreciate pems.（运用了部分倒装结构）