高中英语2024届高考读后续写构造动作链句式讲解和练习

这是一份高中英语2024届高考读后续写构造动作链句式讲解和练习，共9页。试卷主要包含了知识讲解，实战练习，好题精练等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一、知识讲解
句式一：主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C （三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）
【示例】
歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, tk a deep breath and began t sing.
仿写1：He tk a taxi t the plice statin.
[翻译]他拦下一辆的士，拿着手提箱跳进去冲着司机说，“去”
[改写]He stpped a taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and tld the driver, “G t the plice statin, please.”
仿写2：The bys jumped int the lake t play.
[翻译]男孩们兴奋地跑到湖边，脱下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。
[改写]The bys excitedly rushed t the lake, quickly tk ff their clthes and jumped int the water t play.
仿写3：She hugged her sn tightly.
[翻译]她冲上前，跪下，把儿子抱在怀里。
[改写]She dashed frward withut hesitatin, knelt dwn and gathered her sn int her arms tightly.
仿写4：I rushed hme t get the cttn cat.
[翻译]我冲回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那顶棉质的。
[改写]I rushed hme, searched thrugh my cllectin f hats and grabbed the cttn ne.
仿写5：She lked at the trphy and thanked TUNTUN.
[翻译]她先看一下奖杯，深吸一口气，说道：“谢谢吞吞！”
[改写]She glanced at the trphy, tk a deep breath and said,“Thank TUNTUN!”
仿写6：Mac jumped ff the bicycle t shut the dr.
[翻译]麦克毫不犹豫跳下自行车，冲向车的后门，猛然地关上车门。
[改写]Mac jumped ff the bicycle withut any hesitatin, dashed t the back dr and slammed the dr heavily.
仿写7：I went t schl in a hurry this mrning.
[翻译]我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起书包，骑着自行车匆忙去上学了。
[改写]I pulled n my cat hurriedly, grabbed my schlbag and cycled t schl this mrning.
仿写8：My mum gave fifty dllars t the pr ld man.
[翻译]妈妈打开钱包，拿出五十元钱，递给那个贫困的老人。
[改写]My mm pened the purse, tk ut fifty dllars and handed it t the pr ld man.
仿写9：She picked up the pht and placed it int the album.
[翻译]她拿起照片，盯着看一会儿，仔细放进相册里。
[改写]She picked up the pht, stared at it fr a while and placed it cautiusly int the album.
仿写10：Jimmy quickly threw the meat at the fierce wlf.
[翻译]吉米快速拿出肉，瞄准，径直朝凶猛的狼扔过去。
[改写]Jimmy quickly pulled ut the meat, aimed at the wlf and threw it straight t the fierce animal.
句式二：Having dne…, 主谓宾（表示先做了某事，再发生核心动作）
【示例】
在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line fr an hur at the bank, the wman grew impatient and left.
仿写1：After having queued fr 3 hurs, he was tld that the tickets had been sld ut.
[翻译]排了三个小时队后，他被告知票卖完了。
[改写]Having queued fr 3 hurs, he was tld that the tickets had been sld ut.
仿写2：She wandered aimlessly in the street fr hurs, then she felt a little hungry and wished fr smething t eat.
[翻译]她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。
[改写]Having wandered aimlessly in the street fr hurs, she felt a little hungry and wished fr smething t eat.
仿写3：After he tld the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned hme with a lighter heart.
[翻译]说出真相后、他心里轻松了很多、心情放松地回家了。
[改写]Having tld the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned hme with a lighter heart.
仿写4：After getting my prmise f tending t my mther, my father felt assured and laded his luggage int the car.
[翻译]得到了我会好好照顾母亲的承诺后，爸爸放心地把行李放进车里。
[改写]Having gtten my prmise f tending t my mther, my father felt assured and laded his luggage int the car.
仿写5：After fighting in the war fr years, the slider returned t his hme, nly t find his families had mved away.
[翻译]征战多年后，战士回到家中，发现家人已经搬走了。
[改写]Having fught in the war fr years, the slider returned t his hme, nly t find his families had mved away.
仿写6：After I prmised that we wuld get there befre five, I was seized with panic when the car brke dwn.
[翻译]因为承诺了五点之前我们一定到那儿，所以当车抛锚的时候，我非常慌张。
[改写]Having prmised that we wuld get there befre five, I was seized with panic when the car brke dwn.
仿写7：After she made full preparatins, she std by the windw and expected the arrival f her daughter.
[翻译]做好充分的准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。
[改写]Having made full preparatins, she std by the windw, expecting the arrival f her daughter.
仿写8：After receiving the Nimbus 2000, Harry Ptter was s happy that he didn’t knw what t d.
[翻译]哈利波特收到光轮2000后高兴得不知所措。
[改写]Having received the Nimbus 2000, Harry Ptter was s happy that he was at a lss what t d.
仿写9：After waiting fr a lng time, I walked t schl thrugh the snw by myself.
[翻译]等了很久之后，我独自在雪地里跋涉到学校。
[改写]Having waited fr what seemed t be ages, I trudged t schl thrugh the snw by myself.
仿写10：After experiencing s many failures ne after anther, she finally picked herself up.
[翻译]她接连经历了那么多次失败后，终于振作起来了。
[改写]Having experienced s many failures ne after anther, she finally picked herself up.
二、实战练习
1.(2023年新高考I卷读后续写片段)
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I almst frgt the cntest when the news came. T my surprise, I was infrmed that my essay had ranked first in the cntest. A mix f excitement and dubt washed ver me.________________________________________________ __（再三仔细检查后，我再也无法控制自己，立即与我的英语老师分享了这个消息。）Withut her help, I wuld never have had the chance t btain the hnr. My face lit up with jy as I accepted the award, my smile filled with pride. I felt a burst f gratitude welling up in my heart and surging thugh me
2.(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. Passing the deserted huse, I sptted the brken glass, which had been fixed perfectly. It reminded me f the hummingbird, the tiny cute creature. ____________________________________________________________________________（在和主人聊了一会儿之后，我被告知她从那天起就再也没有回来过。） “Perhaps she is enjying the valuable freedm at this mment,” I said t myself. Hurs later, the sun began t sink.
3.(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again.I still remembered my friends' prmise s I went past the abandned milking huse t see if they had fixed the brken windw. T my satisfactin, n ther tiny creatures wuld meet this truble any mre. As I apprached the farm, I was greeted by a spicy smell f the barbecue, urging me t walk faster. We were ttally immersed in the peaceful atmsphere, ____________________________________________________________________________（享受着精致的美食，谈论着我们的有趣经历，唱着歌直到日落）. It was time fr us t say gdbye s we went t the parking lt tgether.
4.(2022年新高考I卷读后续写片段)
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn't lk at me. Tapping him gently n the shulder, I asked David what had caused him t decide t give up the pprtunity. 1___________________________________ _______________________________________（犹豫了一下，他低声回答：“你知道，我跑得很慢，而且我的跑步姿势很难看，这会让别人嘲笑我。”）2 （我笑了笑，摇摇头说：“事实上，所有的人都尊重和钦佩那些克服自己的困难，勇敢地实现目标的人。”）“Really?” He seemed t be in dubt abut my wrds. Seeing me nd firmly, he wre his big tthy smile again, his eyes sparkling with excitement and curisity.
5.(2021年新高考I卷读后续写片段)
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
In the mrning, as scheduled, 1 （双胞胎早早起床，踮着脚走进厨房，从袋子里舀出面粉）Once they set abut making bread，they felt cnfused. At that time，2 ，（他们的爸爸溜进厨房，轻拍双胞胎的肩膀，柔声安慰道）“Dn’t quit. Yu can vercme the challenge.” The twins made the bread smthly. Then，3 （他们端着早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈）. With her eyes glittering with excitement, the mther was s cntent that she gathered her children int her arms.
三、好题精练
1.河北省金科大联考2023-2024学年高三10月联考读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, Sam was n his way t a nearby twn when his car brke dwn in the middle f nwhere. He tried t fix it but culdn't figure ut what was wrng. Just then, a middle-aged wman passing by saw him struggling and apprached him. She asked if he needed help, and Sam felt relieved.
The wman inspected the car and fund ut that the engine had blwn up. She tld Sam that she knew a mechanic in the nearby twn wh culd repair the car.
The wman tk Sam t the mechanic, and he gt his car repaired. When Sam asked fr the bill, he fund that he left his wallet at hme and didn't knw what t d. The mechanic tld him that the middle-aged wman had already paid fr it. Sam was surprised and didn't knw hw t repay her.
Hwever, the wman refused t accept any payment frm him, simply smiling and saying,“Yu dn't have t pay me back. Just prmise me that yu'll pay it frward t smene else in need when yu can. ” Sam was tuched by her kindness and accepted her help.
Feeling grateful and inspired,Sam cntinued his trip t the twn. Ging thrugh all these things, he felt a bit tired and stpped at a nearby café t have a rest. When he was abut t leave, he nticed that the waitress was pregnant(怀孕的)and struggling t carry a tray f fd t a table. He sympathized with her very much and went t help her carry the fd withut hesitatin.
The waitress was surprised and thanked Sam fr his friendliness. She asked him why he was being s kind t her, and he tld her abut the middle-aged wman wh had helped him earlier and hw he wanted t pay it frward.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When he arrived hme, his wife asked him hw his trip went.
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Sam felt prud f the chain f lve that he had started, which had spread far and wide.
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2.2024届山东省滨州市新高考大联考高三10月月考读后续写
阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文。
Once upn a time there was a great man wh married the wman f his dreams. With their lve, they created a little girl. She was a bright and cheerful little girl and the great man lved her very much.
When she was very little, he wuld pick her up, hum a tune and dance with her arund the rm , and he wuld tell her, “I lve yu, little girl. ” When the little girl was grwing up, the great man wuld hug her and tell her, “I lve yu, little girl. ” The little girl wuld put and say , “I'm nt a little girl anymre." Then the man wuld laugh and say,“But t me, yu'll always be my little girl.”
The little, girl wh-was-nt-little-anymre left her hme and went int the wrld. As she learned mre. abut herself, she learned mre abut the man. She saw that he truly was great and strng, fr nw she recgnized his strengths. One f his strengths was his ability t express his lve t his family. It didn't matter where she went in the wrld. The man wuld call her and say,“I lve yu, little girl. ”
The day came when the little girl wh-was-nt-little-anymre received a phne call. The great man was damaged.
“He had had a strke. He was aphasic,"they explained t the girl. He culdn't talk anymre and they weren't sure that he culd understand the wrds spken t him. He culd n lnger smile, laugh , walk , hug, dance r tell the little girl wh-was-nt-little-anymre that he lved her. And s she went t the side f the great man. When she walked int the rm and saw him, he lked small and nt strng at all. He lked at her and tried t speak, but he culd nt.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The little girl did what she had been lnging t,
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And then she heard frm within the man, the beat f his heart.
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3.江苏省常州市联盟学校2024届高三10月学情调研读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Years ag, nt lng after graduating frm schl and starting my career in Denver, I set ff n an exciting sl trip t reunite with an ld friend. As I packed my car, little did I knw that this adventure wuld unveil the remarkable bnds that can frm between strangers, all sparked by the simple exchange f "thank yu."
My jurney cmmenced with a thrilling flight t Albuquerque, a vibrant city in New Mexic. My ultimate destinatin was Oklahma City, where I lked frward t visiting a dear friend. The trip was relatively smth, treating me t beautiful sights alng the way. While waiting in line t pay fr gas, I struck up a friendly chat withan lder cuple wh were als refueling their vehicle.
Cntinuing my jurey with jy in my heart, dark, minus smke suddenly billwed frm my car's rear.
Panic gripped me as I hastily pulled ver t the side f the rad, unsure f ur next steps. In an incredible twist ffate, the same friendly cuple frm the gas statin pulled up behind my car. With warm smiles and pen hearts, they generusly ffered t drive me t my friend's place in Oklahma City. During the ride, we engaged in lively cnversatins, sharing stries and laughter as the miles passed by. Upn reaching ur destinatin, the husband even handed me his business card as a gesture f gdwill and kindness.
Appreciative f their unwavering help, I later expressed my gratitude thrugh a heartfelt thank-yu nte. In respnse, they sent me a cherished Christmas gift alng with a tuching nte as well. As the years passed, lifethrew anther curveball my way. On a fateful day, I drve t a nearby twn fr an imprtant meeting.
Unfrtunately, in my haste, I accidentally left my car's lights n all day lng. As dusk apprached, I returned t my car, nly t find that the battery had cmpletely died. Thankfully, I nticed the Friendly Frd dealershipcnveniently lcated next dr. Filled with hpe, I entered the shwrm, where I encuntered tw helpful salesmen.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In a lighthearted tne, I asked, "Just hw friendly is Friendly Frd?”
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This heartwarming sequence f events serves as a reminder f the prfund impact tw simple wrds-"Thank yu" -can have.
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附：参考答案
二、实战练习
1.
A few weeks later, I almst frgt the cntest when the news came. T my surprise, I learned that my essay had ranked first in the cntest. A mix f excitement and dubt washed ver me. Having duble-checked it, I culd n lnger cntain myself and prmptly shared the news with my English teacher. Withut her help, I wuld never have had the chance t btain the hnr. My face lit up with jy as I accepted the award, my smile filled with pride. I felt a burst f gratitude welling up in my heart and surging thugh me
2.
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. As my car neared it my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. Passing the deserted huse, I sptted the brken glass, which had been fixed perfectly. It reminded me f the hummingbird, the tiny cute creature. Having had a small chat with the hst, I was infrmed that she hadn’t cme back ever since that day. “Perhaps she is enjying the valuable freedm at this mment,” I said t myself. Hurs later, the sun began t sink.
3.
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again.I still remembered my friends' prmise s I went past the abandned milking huse t see if they had fixed the brken windw. T my satisfactin , n ther tiny creatures wuld meet this truble any mre . As I apprached the farm, I was greeted by a spicy smell f the barbecue, urging me t walk faster. We were ttally immersed in the peaceful atmsphere, enjying the delicate cuisines, talking abut ur interesting experiences and singing sngs till the sun set. It was time fr us t say gdbye s we went t the parking lt tgether.
4.
运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
We sat dwn next t each ther, but David wuldn't lk at me. Tapping him gently n the shulder, I asked David what had caused him t decide t give up the pprtunity. Having hesitated fr a mment, he replied in a lw vice, “Yu knw, I run very slwly and my running psture is ugly, which will result in thers laughing at me.” I smiled, shk my head and said, “As a matter f fact, all the peple respect and admire thse wh vercme their wn difficulties and bravely achieve their gals.” “Really?” He seemed t be in dubt abut my wrds. Seeing me nd firmly, he wre his big tthy smile again, his eyes sparkling with excitement and curisity.
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In the mrning, as scheduled, the twins gt up early, tipted t the kitchen and scped sme flur ut f the bag. Once they set abut making bread，they felt cnfused. At that time，their father slid int the kitchen, patting the twins’ shulders and cmfrting them in a sft vice, “Dn’t quit. Yu can vercme the challenge.” The twins made the bread smthly. Then they carried the breakfast, advanced upstairs and wke up their mther. With her eyes glittering with excitement, the mther was s cntent that she gathered her children int her arms.
三、好题精练习
1.
When he arrived hme, his wife asked him hw his trip went. Sam tld her abut the middle-aged wman, the mechanic, and the waitress. His wife was tuched by his stry and suggested that they start a chain f lve, where they wuld d smething kind fr smene else every day. Sam and his wife started their chain f lve, and sn, it spread t their friends and family. They all realized that a small act f kindness culd make a big difference in smene else's life.
Sam felt prud f the chain f lve that he had started, which had spread far and wide. Many peple perfrm randm acts f kindness t help thers. Sam realized that kindness was the greatest gift that ne culd give, and it was smething that culd be passed n frm generatin t generatin. In the end, Sam knew that his life had been meaningful and fulfilling, and he was happy t see the psitive changes in the wrld.
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The little girl did what had lnging t. She climbed up n the bed next t the great man. Tears ran frm bth f their eyes and she drew her arms arund the weak shulders f her father. Her head n his chest, many graceful memries crwded in her mind-the wnderful times they spent tgether and the happiness she had always felt when prtected and cherished by the great man. Tears were welling up in her eyes when she recalled father’s past cmpany and the simple yet warm wrds. She felt grief fr the lss she was t endure, the wrds f lve that had cmfrted her. Hw she wished time culd be turned back. “I lve yu, Great Man,” the little girl murmured.
And then she heard frm within the man, the beat f his heart. The heart where the music and the wrds had always lived beat faster with her wrds. The heart beat n, steadily uncncerned abut the damage t the rest f the bdy. The little girl felt frm the beating heart as if the nce great man was eager t express the lng-time-n-heard wrd “I lve yu.” Excitement rushed thrugh her and the little girl stuck her head clser n his chest. What she received was a clear, lw and familiar vice, "I lve yu, little girl." She heard what she had desired t hear. Envelped by fragrant air, she felt as if she were in the wnderland. Cheerful atmsphere filled in the huse. The magic happened, and lve culd indeed create a miracle.
3.
In a lighthearted tne, I asked, "Just hw friendly is Friendly Frd?” The salesmen chuckled heartily at my playful inquiry and assured me that Friendly Frd was indeed cmmitted t its name and reputatin. Within a blink f an eye, they began t wrk efficiently, trying hard t revive my dead battery, even thugh I was clearly nt a ptential custmer. Sweating heavily, they did nt shw any discntentment r impatience. Sn enugh, my car resumed its pwer as if given a brand new life thanks t their effrts. I culd hardly express hw lucky and blessed I was t receive immediate aids frm cmpletely strangers.
This heartwarming sequence f events serves as a reminder f the prfund impact tw simple wrds--"Thank yu"-can have. Once my car rared t life again, I ffered t pay them fr their invaluable help, but bth plitely declined. They shk my hand, genuinely saying“It's all part f being Friendly Frd, where ur cmmitment t custmers ges beynd just selling cars.”Grateful beynd wrds fr their kindness, I returned hme that evening with a heart full f appreciatin. Later that week, I decided t send them a thank-yu nte, just as I had dne years ag with the lder cuple wh had rescued us during ur Christmas jurney.