专题10 中考高分写作-【查漏补缺】2024年中考英语复习冲刺过关（江苏专用）

这是一份专题10 中考高分写作-【查漏补缺】2024年中考英语复习冲刺过关（江苏专用），共20页。
例如这样一篇材料是目前中考比较容易考察的类型：
生活是一位睿智的长者，生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对，无论是美好还是意外，我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请以“Life is full f”为题写一篇短文，分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。
内容包括：1. 请先将标题填写完整；2. 分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历；3. 谈谈你的感悟。
Life is full f challenges
Life will be wnderful with all kinds f challenges. It is the challenges that make me strnger.
（开头段比较简洁，点明主题“生活充满挑战，但挑战让我更坚强。”）
I mved t the city when I entered the middle schl. But my prblem was that n ne cked fr me because my parents came hme late, s I made up my mind t learn hw t ck. I must challenge myself. Then ne day I watched my parents cking dinner carefully. They taught me hw t ck. A few days later, I learned t ck fr myself. Nw I am happy I can ck delicius fd. My parents are satisfied with me. I am als prud f myself.
（中间段主要分享自己的一段特殊经历，这里一定要围绕主题去展开故事的讲解，并且要提到现在自己的改变有哪些。）
I learned frm it that we may meet sme difficulties in ur life, but if we have cnfidence and are gd at learning, everything will be better. I am s eager t meet the cming difficulties, I wn’t give up n matter hw hard they will be.
（结尾段谈谈个人的感悟，这个时候需要重新说明一下主题，并且提到遇到挑战个人会怎么应对。）
2. 适当运用英语中的定语从句、状语从句和宾语从句这大句式以及what引导的主语从句和it作为形式主语和形式宾语的句式。同时，感叹句和强调句也可以使用。
例如：
Her smile is s bright that she wn the heart f mine when I first met her.（s ….that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）
Besides, it is imprtant fr us t keep safety rules in mind, especially when we rw a bat r play in the amusement park.（it作形式主语，“It is +adj. fr sb. t d sth.”句型）
It’s my great hnr t infrm yu that we will g t the Slender West Lake in Yangzhu fr a study tur next Wednesday.（it作形式主语，It is +名词+t d sth）
Yu may find it difficult t make friends with peple wh always have dubts abut yu. (it作形式宾语，sb find it +adj+t d sth)
Mary is always ready t help thers wh get int truble.（wh引导定语从句）
Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself.（what引导主语从句）
I think the Exp Park is nt nly an exhibitin f gardens, but als the pride f Xuzhu’s develpment.（“nt als...”结构）
If I have the chance t be a member f the club, I’ll be happy.（if引导条件状语从句）
As fr me, I think being a leader can help me learn hw t arrange things prperly, which means a lt t me.（动名词作主语，which引导非限制性定语从句）
What a wnderful experience!（what引导感叹句）
I learned frm it that we may meet sme difficulties in ur life, but if we have cnfidence and are gd at learning, everything will be better.（that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）
Life will be wnderful with all kinds f challenges. It is the challenges that make me strnger.
3.有明显的衔接词或者词组，使得文章长短有致。
例如：
What’s mre, Mary is always ready t help thers wh get int truble.
As we all knw, a gd friend can make ur life better.
First f all, t make a gd friend, yu must be friendly t thers.
Als, be a trustwrthy man. Yu can tell anything t such a persn. especially when yu are in a bad md.
In additin, the mst imprtant quality in finding friends is hnesty.
As fr me, ne f my secrets f making friends is being helpful.
I believe that being helpful means shwing cncern fr thers. Fr example, my classmate Jiang Lei felt sad after lsing a basketball game
In a wrd, I’m lking frward t having a meaningful new life.
4. 可以适当地运用谚语或者名人名言来增强文章想表达的思想感情。
例如：
Practice makes perfect. （孰能生巧）We can practice hard in rder t have a gd perfrmance at schl.
N pain, n gain. （一份耕耘，一份收获）We shuld realize the imprtance f wrking hard n the way t success.
Where there is a will, there is a way.（有志者事竟成）We can’t give up easily when we get int truble.
A friend in need is a friend indeed.（患难见真情）Friendship plays an imprtant rle in ur life.
【例题讲解】
时光荏苒，光阴似箭。在三年的初中生活里，你肯定遇到过许多良师益友，其中谁会是你最难忘的人呢？请以“The Mst Unfrgettable Persn”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你和他（她）之间的故事。
注意：
1. 内容必须包括所给的提示要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
The Mst Unfrgettable Persn
Hw time flies! I’ll graduate frm my middle schl sn. Over the past three years, I’ve met lts f imprtant persns.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The Mst Unfrgettable Persn
Hw time flies! I’ll graduate frm middle my schl sn. Over the past three years, I’ve met lts f imprtant persns. Amng them, my deskmate Mary is the mst unfrgettable persn fr me.
Her smile is s bright that she wn the heart f mine when I first met her. What’s mre, Mary is always ready t help thers wh get int truble. She has changed me a lt since we became deskmates. I used t be lazy and always made a great mess n my desk. And I was always mad when lking fr my exercise bks and test papers. She ften reminded me t tidy my desk. Smetimes she even helped me lk fr things. Gradually, I frmed the gd habit f putting everything in rder.
T me, Mary is just like the bright light in my life. She has left me many happy memries and I will never frget her.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的关键信息，结合给出的三个问题来介绍自己最难忘的人。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明最难忘的人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人为何是最难忘的；
第三步，介绍自己对这个人的感觉。
[亮点词汇]
①lts f 许多
②be ready t d sth. 准备好做某事
③get int truble 遇见麻烦
④used t be 过去曾经是
⑤lk fr 寻找
⑥frm the gd habit f 养成……的好习惯
[高分句型]
①Her smile is s bright that she wn the heart f mine when I first met her.（that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）
②What’s mre, Mary is always ready t help thers wh get int truble.（wh引导定语从句）
【基础练习】
1. 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric给你发来电子邮件请求帮助。请根据邮件内容，用英语回复。
注意：
1. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。
3. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I’m glad t receive yur email. Nw, I’m writing t tell yu abut my thughts.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I’m glad t receive yur email. Nw, I’m writing t tell yu abut my thughts.
First, it’s brave f yu t try ut fr the perfrmance during yur drama festival.
Althugh yu haven’t gt the rle yu wanted, it’s still a gd chance fr yu t imprve yur acting skills and cnfidence. In fact, the rle withut any dialgue may be mre challenging because yu will have t use mre bdy languages t express yurself. S dn’t give up the chance.
What’s mre, practice hard in rder t have a gd perfrmance. Practice makes perfect.
Wish yu gd luck and lk frward t yur wnderful perfrmance!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏Eric的邮件中的关键信息，针对朋友参加戏剧节选拔而提出的想法和建议。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达很开心收到朋友的电子邮件，并要表达自己的想法。
第二步，夸赞朋友勇于参加戏剧节的选拔，讲述要参加没有对话的角色的理由，鼓励朋友熟能生巧。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“祝愿朋友表演成功”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①try ut fr the perfrmance参加……的选拔
②in fact事实上
③give up放弃
④in rder t为了
[高分句型]
①I’m glad t receive yur email.（be glad t d sth.句型）
②First, it’s brave f yu t try ut fr the perfrmance during yur drama festival.（It is +形容词+f sb. t d sth.该句型常用描述人物特征的形容词）
③Practice makes perfect.（谚语）
2.初中生活就要结束了，同学们即将开始新的征程，规划新的人生。请根据下表提示以“My plan fr the new life”为题，给你们校报写一篇英语短文，介绍你的计划。
注意：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
My plan fr the new life
Our middle schl life is cming t an end. A new life is n the way. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My plan fr the new life
Our middle schl life is cming t an end. A new life is n the way. I plan t d lts f things fr the new life.
First, I will make a plan and try t keep a balance between wrk and rest. I’ll wrk hard n all subjects. In my free time, I hpe t read mre useful bks t learn abut different histries and cultures. Reading can pen up a new wrld t me.
Secnd, I’d like t have a healthy lifestyle. It’s gd fr me t get up early and g t bed early. Exercise mre every day. I’ll g jgging in the park r play basketball with my friends. Mrever, I’m ging t d sme husewrk fr my parents t thank them. Listening t music is gd fr me t relax myself. I als want t g travelling t enjy the natural beauty and visit the palaces f interest.
In a wrd, I’m lking frward t having a meaningful new life.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文要求从学习、生活和原文等方面介绍新生活的计划，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍学习计划；
第二步，介绍生活计划；
第三步，介绍自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd fr对……有好处
②In a wrd总之
③want t d sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
① It’s gd fr me t get up early and g t bed early.（it固定句型）
②Listening t music is gd fr me t relax myself.（动名词作宾语）
3. 假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。
要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be f great value t my later life.
The living skills training will be n a farm. There, I can live with lcal peple wh will help me learn mre abut their custms and lifestyles. Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities n the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I als have sme advice fr yu I hpe there will be mre activities like grwing plants and vegetables. I hpe I will enjy myself n the farm.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应先选择想要参与的活动，然后谈谈自己的理由，并给出一些建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种活动并说明理由；
第二步，更加详细地陈述理由，说明这种活动的好处；
第三步，给出一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be f great value 很有价值
②take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be f great value t my later life.（because引导原因状语从句；省略that的定语从句）
②Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself.（what引导主语从句；that引导表语从句）
4. 随着五一劳动假期的到来和疫情的开放，越来越多的人选择外出旅游放松自己。假如你是李华，看到某旅行社组织的两种旅游团的宣传。请用英语给旅行社写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种旅游团及理由，并对你选择的旅游团的活动提出建议。
(verlk: 俯瞰； helicpter: 直升机）
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种旅游团的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.对你所选择的旅游团活动说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such wnderful turs. I prefer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文1
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such wnderful turs. I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tur because the tur will imprve my knwledge f the lngest river in China.
The Yangtze River Cultural Tur will take place in Nanjing. It lasts frm May 1 t May 2. There, we can verlk the Yangtze River frm a helicpter. Mrever, we will take a bat trip n the Yangtze River. We can als enjy beautiful views alng the Yangtze River. In the tur, we can listen t speeches n hw t prtect the Yangtze River, t. What’s mre, the cst f the trip is 450 yuan per persn.
I als have sme advice fr yu. I hpe mre speeches abut the histry f the Yangtze River will be given. I am sure I will enjy myself in the tur.
Yurs,
Li Hua
例文2
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such wnderful turs. I prefer Disneyland Tur because the tur will make me relaxed after a few mnths’ hard wrk.
The Tur will be in Shanghai. It lasts frm May 2 t May 3. There, we can try different kinds f rides, such as Space Muntain. It will be very exciting. What makes me interested is that we can watch a parade f Disney characters. In the tur, we can als enjy the beautiful firewrks shw. Mrever, the cst f the trip is 1050 yuan per persn.
I als have sme advice fr yu. I hpe we can have sme time t d sme shpping. I want t buy sme gifts fr my friends. I am sure I will have a fantastic time in Disneyland.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。选择你更想参与的一种旅游团并说明理由；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动、费用”几个方面重点介绍旅游团活动的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。提出建议表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take place举行
②listen t speeches听演讲
③What’s mre而且
④enjy myself玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tur because the tur will imprve my knwledge f the lngest river in China. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I am sure I will enjy myself in the tur.(宾语从句)
5. 红星中学王校长是一位英语老师，在学校网站的英语栏目“HEAR YOUR VOICE”发帖，了解学生学习和学校食堂两方面的情况。假如你是学生李明，请根据校长的帖子，选择其中一个方面反映问题，并提出建议。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。.
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Ming, frm Grade Nine. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs faithfully,
Li Ming
【答案】
Pssible versin 1:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Ming, frm Grade Nine. I want t tell yu smething abut ur study.
First f all, prper exercises help us check what we have learned. Since we have seven subjects, we have t spend mre than three hurs finishing ur hmewrk. Wuld yu make teachers reduce hmewrk? Besides, mst f us find lessns bring. Althugh exercises and exams help us understand the key pints, they take up t much time. Dear headmaster, yu can’t imagine hw bring ur schl life is. I think teachers shuld imprve their teaching methds.
I hpe these prblems can be dealt with sn.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Ming
Pssible versin 2:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Ming, frm Grade Nine. I want t say smething abut ur Students’ Canteen.
First, I am unhappy with the lunch fd. Smetimes it is nt delicius. Hwever, I have t eat it. Mre kinds f dishes shuld be prvided. Mrever, the canteen is t small t hld s many students. Why nt build a larger ne? Finally, the envirnment at the canteen is nt satisfying. The tables and chairs are smetimes dirty. I think the canteen wrkers shuld d the cleaning mre carefully.
If the prblems can be slved, students will have a happier time n campus.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Ming
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕王校长帖子中的问题进行写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，交代写作目的；
第二步，阐述学生学习或学校食堂的问题并给出建议；
第三步，表达自己的期望，希望这些问题能够成功解决。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②key pints重点
③take up占据
[高分句型]
①First f all, prper exercises help us check what we have learned.（what引导的宾语从句）
6. 假如你是导游，请根据下表内容，用英语向外国朋友介绍“第十三届中国国际园林博览会（The 13th China Internatinal Garden Exp Park）”主展区的一些情况。
注意：
1) 语言通顺，意思连贯，想象合理，书写规范；
2) 词数：90词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：吕梁山风景区Lvliang Muntain Scenic Area；吉祥物masct； 综合性cmprehensive.
Hell, guys!
Welcme t ur Exp Park. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hell, guys!
Welcme t ur Exp Park. Nw let me intrduce this wnderful park t yu. Here is the main exhibitin f the 13th China Internatinal Garden Exp Park. It is lcated in Lvliang Muntain Scenic Area in the sutheast f Xuzhu. It has an area f 2595 mu, abut 30 kilmeters away frm Xuzhu City.
The Garden Exp Park pened n Nvember 16 last year, with the theme f “Green City, Gd Life”. Here are the mascts—Xuxu and Zhuzhu. They are s cute, sunny and healthy that many turists like them very much. As we all knw, there are 65 exhibitin parks in ttal, including utdr exhibitin and indr exhibitin. It is a cmprehensive garden made up f turism, culture, educatin, science, technlgy and agriculture. It mainly shws the great achievements such as new technlgies, new materials, new artwrks and new equipment.
I think the Exp Park is nt nly an exhibitin f gardens, but als the pride f Xuzhu’s develpment. It shws t the public that Xuzhu is develping s fast and becming mre and mre beautiful. I hpe yu will have a gd time here.
【解析】
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要按要求补充；除了开幕时间外，其他不需要用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写地理位置；
第二步，描写开幕时间、吉祥物、展区情况；
第三步，描述自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①have an area f 占地
②with the theme f 主题为
③a cmprehensive garden made up f 由……组成的综合性园林
④shw the great achievements 展示巨大的成就
[高分句型]
①They are s cute, sunny and healthy that many turists like them very much.（“”结构）
②I think the Exp Park is nt nly an exhibitin f gardens, but als the pride f Xuzhu’s develpment.（“nt als...”结构）
③It shws t the public that Xuzhu is develping s fast and becming mre and mre beautiful.（宾语从句）
7. 假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。
要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be f great value t my later life.
The living skills training will be n a farm. There, I can live with lcal peple wh will help me learn mre abut their custms and lifestyles. Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities n the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I als have sme advice fr yu I hpe there will be mre activities like grwing plants and vegetables. I hpe I will enjy myself n the farm.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应先选择想要参与的活动，然后谈谈自己的理由，并给出一些建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种活动并说明理由；
第二步，更加详细地陈述理由，说明这种活动的好处；
第三步，给出一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be f great value 很有价值
②take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be f great value t my later life.（because引导原因状语从句；省略that的定语从句）
②Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself.（what引导主语从句；that引导表语从句）
8. “立德树人、五育并举”的教育理念在我市落地生花。三年荏苒，即将毕业，我们增强了爱国情怀，强健了体魄，启发了智力，陶冶了情操，完善了人格，茁壮成长，收获颇多。假如你是李华，请根据下图提示，从“德智体美劳”几方面谈谈这几年的进步。做成“青春记忆”的视频演讲，进行成果展示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名；
3. 从“五育”中选择至少“三育”，其中“劳”必须写。 成长树上的提示只是参考，考生可以自己发挥。要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，适当发挥。
参考词汇：劳动教育labr educatin
Hw time flies! We’re leaving the junir high schl and getting int the senir high schl. In the past three years, I’ve made great prgress in many ways.
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【答案】
Hw time flies! We’re leaving the junir high schl and getting int the senir high schl. In the past three years, I’ve made great prgress in many ways.
First, I always bey schl rules. I try t be a gd student. I’ve learned t care fr thers and ften help thse wh are in truble. And I can get alng with my classmates nw.
Secnd, I used t be crazy abut playing games. But nw I spend mst f my free time reading all kinds f bks. I knw reading makes a full man. Als, I develp a gd habit f studying and get gd grades finally.
Finally, ur schl pays much attentin t the labr educatin. S I’ve learned all kinds f basic life skills, such as making bed, cking dinner and mpping up the flr. My parents are satisfied with this. What’s mre, I ften wrk as a vlunteer in my cmmunity. I ften help my neighburs fix things, like brken bicycles and cmputers.
In a wrd, I’m very prud that I can make such great prgress in the past three years. Thanks fr yur listening.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示和要求，从“五育”中选择至少“三育”，其中“劳”必须写，写一篇演讲稿。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明这几年自己取得了很大的进步；
第二步，具体从“三育”说明自己的进步；
第三步，总结，自己为这些年的进步感到骄傲并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①get alng with 与……和睦相处
②develp a gd habit f 养成……的好习惯
③pays much attentin t 非常关注
[高分句型]
I knw reading makes a full man.（宾语从句）
Dear Li Hua,
Hw are yu ging?
Our schl will hld a drama festival next mnth. I tried ut fr the perfrmance last week. But I’m very unhappy t be chsen t play a rle withut any dialgue. Shuld I give up the chance? Culd yu please give me sme advice? Thank yu!
Yurs,
Eric
学习
制定计划，努力学习；多读好书，……
生活
早睡早起，勤做锻炼，如……
做做家务，感恩父母；听听音乐，放松自己；
外出旅游，参观名胜；
愿望
……
Summer Camp
Living skills training
●n a farm
●live with lcal peple
●ck meals by yurself
●feed animals, ...
Sprts training
●in a training centre
●live with team members
●be tested by caches
●play ball games, ...
May Day Tur
the Yangtze River Cultural Tur
Disneyland Tur
Time
May 1 — May 2
May 2 — May 3
Place
Nanjing
Shanghai
Activities
● Overlk the Yangtze River frm a helicpter.
● Take a bat trip n the Yangtze River.
● Listen t speeches n hw t prtect the Yangtze River.
● Try different kinds f rides, such as Space Muntain.
● Watch a parade f Disney characters.
● Enjy the beautiful firewrks shw.
Cst
￥450 /per persn
￥1050 /per persn
←HEAR YOUR VOICE
Mr. Wang
Dear students,
Hw is everything ging? D yu have any prblems with yur study? Fr example, d yu ften stay up late t finish yur hmewrk? What abut ur Students’ Canteen (食堂)? Are yu satisfied with yur lunch?
Lking frward t yur prblems and advice.
5:20 PM. Apr. 16, 2023
地理位置
位于徐州东南约30公里的吕梁山风景区，面积2595亩。
开幕时间
2022年11月6日。
吉祥物
徐徐、州州——形象可爱，阳光健康。
主要展区情况
共设65个展园，包括室外展和室内展。是一个集旅游、文化、教育、科技及农业展示为一体的综合性园林，……
你的观点
（自拟二条）
Summer Camp
Living skills training
●n a farm
●live with lcal peple
●ck meals by yurself
●feed animals, ...
Sprts training
●in a training centre
●live with team members
●be tested by caches
●play ball games, ...