专题24 应用文写作--2024年中考英语【热点·重点·难点】专练（江苏专用）

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“应用文写作”是中考英语常考的作文类型之一，一般会考察书信、邮件这一类的文体。需要考生根据所给的信件进行回信或者写信给他人询问情况以及帮助。在2024年的中考中，这一部分内容的命题趋势可能会侧重考查考生对于书信内容的把握和对格式的熟悉。
重点掌握应用文写作的要点和句式要求。解答此类试题的关键，是要正确理解对方信件中提出来的要求或者写给对方信件中需要涉及的内容，要关注说话的语气和句式的使用。
掌握好应用文写作这个题型对于中考的综合拿分非常重要。考生需要在平时做题中进行考点的积累和运用。
知识点1：申请信
为了迎接端午节的到来，你所在的社区将举办一天的庆祝活动。为保证活动顺利开展，现社区将招募活动志愿者。假如你是李明，阳光中学初三学生，想要成为一名志愿者。请根据志愿者招募要求、根据所提供的流程图、并结合自身情况，写一封申请信。
注意事项：
1. 必须包括所有的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合语境，省略号处补充完整；
2. 词数在100个左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear sir/madam,
I wuld like t be a vlunteer fr the activity t celebrate the Dragn Bat Festival in ur cmmunity.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear sir/madam,
I wuld like t be a vlunteer fr the activity t celebrate the Dragn Bat Festival in ur cmmunity.
I am Li Ming, a grade 9 student frm Sunshine Middle Schl. I am friendly and willing t chat with thers. It’s meaningful t be a vlunteer fr the activity because I can intrduce the Dragn Bat Festival t thers and help them knw mre abut the stry f Qu Yuan.
Besides, I can help different peple in need. Fr example, I can help children d sme DIY jb like making 5-clrd rings. What’s mre, I can make sme rice dumplings fr the elderly and help them clean their huses.
I hpe I can becme a vlunteer fr this cmmunity activity!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据招募要求和流程图写一封申请信；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称口吻；可采用4段落格式，第一段：开门见山，说明写信的目的；第二段：自我介绍和做志愿者的目的；第三段：阐述自己能做些什么；第四段：再次表明自己的愿望。
知识点2：演讲稿
随着科技的发展和疫情的影响，网络学习备受青睐。假如你是李华，受邀为全校同学作以“T be a smart nline learner”为主题的演讲。请你结合自身的经历，用英文写一份演讲稿，对网络学习的利或弊发表观点并提出相关建议。以下信息为非限定内容，仅供参考。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。
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【答案】
Dear students,
I’m glad t stand here t give yu a speech n hw t be a smart nline learner.
In early April, I had nline classes. I searched fr smething useful n the Internet. And I handed in my hmewrk t the teachers nline every day. It was really a special experience fr me.
There’s n dubt that nline learning has its advantages. Fr example, it can prvide us with different kinds f resurces, which are f help t us. Besides, it will ffer us a great chance t manage ur time by urselves.
In rder t be a smart nline learner, we shuld develp gd learning habits, make a study plan and make full use f the resurces.
That’s all. Thanks fr listening! (100 wrds)
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给材料内容，以“T be a smart nline learner”为主题，写一篇短文。
本文主要采用一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。根据提示材料，从在线学习的优势和劣势着手进行描述，写作时要注意保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
知识点3：回复咨询信
假设你是无锡市第五中学的张颖，你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。请根据下图提示，给她回一封电子邮件。
注意事项：
1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
2. 所给斜体字提示为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Jenny
Thank yu fr yur email. I wuld like t tell yu smething abut
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Zhang Ying
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
Thank yu fr yur email. I wuld like t tell yu smething abut the extra-curricular reading in ur schl.
In fact, mst students in ur schl haven’t realized the imprtance f extra-curricular reading. Therefre, the time devted t reading is limited. Sme students prefer cmic bks t classic reading materials. Here are the reasns. Sme students haven’t frmed a gd habit f reading. Others have s little interest in reading that they wuld rather spend time n vides r cmputer games. Sme peple have n time r interest. Reading is gd fr bth ur life and study, which can pen up a new wrld t us. S it is necessary fr students t take up reading.
Since last year, I have read many wrld classics, such as a Dream f Red Mansins. I have learned a lt abut Chinese histry.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Zhang Ying
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和现在完成时”；
③提示：注意回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
第一步：表明写作意图。根据所给内容要点，给英国笔友珍妮回一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国学生课外阅读的情况。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点明主题；其次介绍中国学生课外阅读的现状；接着介绍学生不喜欢阅读的原因；接下来介绍阅读的好处；最后介绍我的阅读经历。
第三步：书写结语。表示祝福。
[高分句型]
①Others have s little interest in reading that they wuld rather spend time n vides r cmputer games.（s…that…引导结果状语从句，表示“如此……以至于……”）
②Reading is gd fr bth ur life and study, which can pen up a new wrld t us.（which引导的定语从句）
③S it is necessary fr students t take up reading.（It is+形容词+fr sb.+t d sth.”意为“对某人来说做某事怎么样”）
（2023年江苏省淮安市中考英语试题）
Ⅶ. 书面表达（满分20分）
71. 假如你是李华，你们学校英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
参考词汇：做早操d mrning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessns
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise prperly
注意：
1. 词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening.
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I’m glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
My favrite exercise is playing basketball. I ften play basketball fr abut ten hurs a week. Because I think it is interesting and relaxing and it als enables me t make friends with thers.
I think we shuld d mrning exercises every day t start ur day. What’s mre, when we have PE lessns, we can take part in different kinds f activities. We can als run fr half an hur every day t build up ur bdy. If we have time, we can ride bikes n weekends with ur friends.
I hpe everyne can exercise mre and have a better life.
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示信息进行写作，适当增加细节。
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的日常锻炼；
第三步，介绍给同学的建议；
第四步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③n weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessns, we can take part in different kinds f activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hpe everyne can exercise mre and have a better life.(省略that的宾语从句)
（2023年江苏省宿迁市中考英语试题）
六. 书面表达(满分15分)
71. “双减”政策推行之后，中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标，你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
注意事项：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editr,
I am glad t tell yu smething abut the after-schl services in ur schl and the vluntary wrk we d.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editr,
I am glad t tell yu smething abut the after-schl services in ur schl and the vluntary wrk we d.
Our schl prvides varius after-schl services, such as music, basketball, and mre. I enjy taking part in the art club where I can express my creativity.
In additin t these services, we als have pprtunities fr vluntary wrk. By helping thers slve prblems and assisting in cmmunity service events, we gain valuable experience and develp imprtant skills.
Thrugh these activities, I have gained cnfidence and imprved my abilities. I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍学校的课后服务和志愿工作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对课后服务和志愿工作的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从课后服务和志愿工作两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②take part in参加
③In additin t另外
④in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①By helping thers slve prblems and assisting in cmmunity service events, we gain valuable experience and develp imprtant skills.（动名词作宾语）
②I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.（that引导的宾语从句）
（2023年江苏省无锡市中考英语试题）
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
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I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
These days I’m nt happy. I always argue with my parents. They nly care abut my schlwrk. The summer hliday is cming. They plan t chse lts f after-schl classes fr me. But I dn’t want t take these classes and dn’t want t be s busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want t take painting lessns during the hliday. They disagree with me. I dn’t knw what t d. And hw can I imprve the relatinship with my parents? Can yu give me sme advice?
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care abut关心
③take painting lessns上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer hliday is cming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I dn’t knw what t d. (疑问词+动词不定式)
（2023年江苏省徐州市中考英语试题）
书面表达
71. 假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simn即将返校，他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣，他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。
注意：
1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；
3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息；
4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】
Hi Simn,
I’m very happy t tell yu abut ur Schl Technlgy Week. It will be held in the N. 2 building in tw weeks. There are many different kinds f activities in the Week. First, yu can watch science fictin films like The Wandering Earth. Secnd, sme students will tell stries abut scientists like Deng Jiaxian. What’s mre, ur schl will share the latest news abut technlgy and shw creative ideas abut rbts. Yu are crazy abut rbts, right? Great, there are sme smart rbt shws yu can take part in here. Then yu can see and experience hw excellent they are.
I’m sure yu will enjy the Technlgy Week.
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，介绍科技周开始的时间；
第二步，根据Simn的问题提示，介绍科技周的活动；
第三步，介绍Simn感兴趣的机器人活动。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds f不同种类的
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
Then yu can see and experience hw excellent they are.(感叹句作宾语)
（2023年江苏省镇江市中考英语试题）
66.假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy t hear that there is an empty area in ur schl fr building a Culture Crner r a Vegetable Garden. In my pinin, it’s better t ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy t hear that there is an empty area in ur schl fr building a Culture Crner r a Vegetable Garden. In my pinin, it’s better t build a vegetable garden. The reasns are as fllws.
First f all, ur cuntry advcates labr educatin. Secnd, students can wrk with their classmates in the garden t strengthen their friendship. Third, wrking in the garden can help students learn farming skills. Furth, a garden built n the empty land can harvest a lt f vegetables, such as tmates, ptates, carrts and s n, which can save the cst f fd fr the schl. Last but nt least, students can frm the habit f labr by planting vegetables.
This is nt nly gd fr the schl, but als gd fr the grwth f students.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格选择一种方案；
第二步，就选择的方案结合提示信息介绍下你的想法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
③last but nt least最后也是最重要的
[高分句型]
Furth, a garden built n empty land can harvest a lt f vegetables, such as tmates, ptates, carrts and s n, which can save the cst f fd fr the schl.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
1.（2023年淮安市开明中学集团中考二模英语试题）
Ⅶ. 书面表达（满分20分）
71. 今年是毛泽东等老一辈革命家为雷锋同志题词六十周年。干一行，钻一行的钉子精神和为人民服务的奉献精神是雷锋精神的核心。假如你是Sandy，你所在的社区正在进行“雷锋家庭”的评选活动，请你给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，推荐你的家庭。内容必须包括以下所有要点。
1.家庭成员：父亲身为医生严谨细致；母亲身为教师耐心友善；你学习勤奋
2.邻里关系：邻里和睦相处，经常帮助邻居解决各种问题，如……
3.志愿者活动：上周末去敬老院，帮老人打扫房间，陪老人聊天……
注意：
1.词数在80~100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2.文中需包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Principal f Cmmunity,
I wuld like t recmmend my family as “Lei Feng Family” in ur cmmunity
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe we can get the tittle. I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs faithfully,
Sandy
【答案】
Dear Principal f Cmmunity,
I wuld like t recmmend my family as “Lei Feng Family” in ur cmmunity. There are five peple in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.
My father is a dctr. He is rigrus and careful. My mther is a teacher, wh is patient and friendly. I always study hard.
What’s mre, we get alng well with ur neighburs in ur cmmunity. When they have prblems, we are always ready t help them, such as repairing the bikes.
Last but nt least, my family members like t wrk fr charity. Last weekend, we went t the nursing hme, helped the elderly clean the rm, and chatted with them. We ften vlunteer t help peple in need. We have sent them lts f dnatins.
I hpe we can get the tittle. I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs faithfully,
Sandy
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对你的家庭的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“家庭成员、邻里关系、志愿者活动等”几个方面重点介绍你的家庭的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我期待您的回复”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth想要做某事；
②what’s mre而且；
③vlunteer t d sth志愿做某事；
④lk frward t期待。
[高分句型]
①There are five peple in my happy family. (“there be”句型)
②My mther is a teacher, wh is patient and friendly. (wh引导定语从句)
2.（2023年常州市金坛区中考二模英语试题）
七、书面表达(共1题；满分15分)
57. 假如你是Tm，你有许多好朋友。你的网友Jack发来邮件询问你的交友秘诀。请你给他回复一封邮件。
Dear Tm,
In yur last email, yu tld me yu have lts f gd friends. I’m s curius. As we knw, a friend is easier lst than fund. Can yu tell me hw yu can make s many friends.
1. What gd qualities can make it easier fr us t make friends?
2. What’s yur secret f making friends? Can yu share smething yu nce did fr yur friends with me?
I really want t make mre friends like yu. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Jack
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad t knw yu are s curius abut why I have s many gd friends. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I sincerely hpe yu will als win true friendship in the future.
Yurs,
Tm
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m glad t knw yu are s curius abut why I have s many gd friends. As we all knw, a gd friend can make ur life better.
First f all, t make a gd friend, yu must be friendly t thers. Smile t thers, yu’ll surely get a smile in return. Als, be a trustwrthy man. Yu can tell anything t such a persn. especially when yu are in a bad md. In additin, in my pinin, the mst imprtant quality in finding friends is hnesty. Yu may find it difficult t make friends with peple wh always have dubts abut yu. On the cntrary, thse hnest peple will really care abut yu when yu meet any prblem. As the saying ges, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
As fr me, ne f my secrets f making friends is being helpful. I believe that being helpful means shwing cncern fr thers. Fr example, my classmate Jiang Lei felt sad after lsing a basketball game. Knwing abut his state f mind, I ften went t encurage him and supprted him during his training. He became cnfident sn with my help. We became gd friends later n.
I sincerely hpe yu will als win true friendship in the future.
Yurs,
Tm
【解析】
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍自己的交友秘诀。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍交到朋友应具备什么品质。
第二步，介绍交友的秘诀并分享一下自己曾经为朋友做过的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly t thers对他人友好
②in return作为回报
③in my pinin在我看来
[高分句型]
①Yu can tell anything t such a persn. especially when yu are in a bad md. (when引导时间状语从句)
②Yu may find it difficult t make friends with peple wh always have dubts abut yu. (it作形式宾语)
3.（2023年无锡市锡山区中考二模英语试题）
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 假如你是Lucy，想加入学校传统文化俱乐部。请根据招聘要求写一封自荐信，阐述你的理由。
注意：
1.内容须包括表中要点，适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
My name is Lucy. I am writing t recmmend myself as a member f the club._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs faithfully,
Lucy
【答案】
Dear Sir,
My name is Lucy. I am writing t recmmend myself as a member f the schl drama club.
I have many strng qualities fr this psitin. I am lively and energetic. I have many friends and I can get n well with them.
I am interested in ur traditinal culture. In my free time, I like reading bks and watching vides abut different cultures. As teenagers, I think it’s ur duty t spread ur traditinal culture. The value and beauty f the traditinal culture shuld be knwn by mre peple and get t mre areas.
I’m willing t devte sme f my spare time t take part in the club activities.
If I have the chance t be a member f the club, I’ll be happy.
Yurs faithfully,
Lucy
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的性格以及爱好等；
第二步，具体阐述你加入俱乐部的理由。
第三步，最后表达自己如果有机会成为俱乐部的一员，会很高兴的。
[亮点词汇]
①get n well with sb和某人相处融洽
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①The value and beauty f the traditinal culture shuld be knwn by mre peple and get t mre areas.（含有情态动词的被动语态）
②If I have the chance t be a member f the club, I’ll be happy.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4.（2022年江苏省镇江市中考英语试题）
66.假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer______________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be f great value t my later life.
The living skills training will be n a farm. There, I can live with lcal peple wh will help me learn mre abut their custms and lifestyles. Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities n the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I als have sme advice fr yu. I hpe there will be mre activities like grwing plants and vegetables. I hpe I will enjy myself n the farm.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，要求根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。写作时承接短文开头，即直接说明选择的活动项目以及总体原因，作为信件的第一段；第二段根据提示要点依次说明选择此项目的具体原因；第三段对此项目提出一两个建议并结尾。具体原因的阐述为本文重点，写作时应巧妙运用衔接语言，使列举原因更有条理，更清晰易懂。
5.（2022年江苏省南京市中考英语试题）
六、书面表达（满分15分）
为了迎接2022南京青奥会，你校在筹备一个丹麦文化角。假如你是南京青奥示范学校阳光中学的李明，请你用英语给丹麦的姊妹学校写一封电子邮件，内容必须包括：
表达你对南京举办青奥会的喜悦心情；
说明创办丹麦文化角的目的：介绍丹麦文化，增进友谊；
请对方提供有关丹麦文化的信息并邀请他们来宁交流。
参考词汇：
2022 青奥会 the 2022 Yuth Olympic Games ; 丹麦 Denmark
文化角 culture crner; 增进友谊 build up friendships
注意：
文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am Li Ming frm Sunshine Secndary Schl, a YOG dem schl f Nanjing._________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam
I am Li Ming frm Sunshine Secndary Schl, a YOG dem schl f Nanjing. I am writing t ask fr sme infrmatin abut yur culture, as ur schl is preparing a Denmark culture crner t build up friendships between teens.
I’m very prud that ur city will be the hst f the 2022 Yuth Olympic Games. We are planning t intrduce yur culture and yur life. Wuld yu please send sme t us? We wuld be grateful fr yur help if yu d.
At the same time, we are really happy t invite yu and yur students t cme t Nanjing in the summer f 2022. Welcme t Nanjing!
Yurs sincerely
Li Ming
【解析】1. 本文主要以第一人称书写； 2.本文主要使用一般将来时态； 3.使用正确的语句表达每一个要点； 4.适当发挥，展开想象，最少写一两句话； 5.词数为80词左右，不含给出的开头与结尾。
Vlunteers wanted!
The Dragn Bat Festival is cming and ur cmmunity will hld sme activities n that day t celebrate it. Sme vlunteers are needed. Can yu tell us smething abut yurself? Why yu want t be a vlunteer fr the activity? And mst imprtantly, what can yu d fr thse different peple in ur cmmunity?
If yu want t jin us, please let us knw.
We are lking frward t hearing frm yu sn!
The Sunshine Cmmunity
My experience
In early April, I had nline classes. …
My pinin
Its advantages
Its disadvantages
prvide different kinds f resurces
ffer us a great chance t …
influence ur attentin
d harm t …
My advice
develp gd learning habits, …
我的日常锻炼
1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处（不少于两点)
给同学的建议
1. 校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）
2. 校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）
号召
1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
延时服务
参加各种各样的课程，比如音乐、篮球等；
……(你的情况)
志愿服务
帮助他人解决问题；
…… (举例说明)
你的收获
提升能力，更加自信；
……(补充1-2点)
Hi Simn,
I’m very happy t tell yu abut ur Schl Technlgy Week.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure yu will enjy the Technlgy Week.
Li Hua
A Culture Crner
A Vegetable Garden
●display art wrks
●share ideas and feelings
●hld activities (fashin shws, …)
●develp a sense f beauty
●…
●wrk with classmates
●learn farming skills
●harvest vegetables (tmates, …)
●frm the habit f labur (劳动)
●…
A Member f the Schl Traditinal Culture Club Wanted
D yu want t be a member f ur club? Nw, it’s yur big chance!
If yu want t be ne f us, please let us knw:
Anyne wh is interested in it, please e-mail us at stunin@126.cm.