作文预测04+图表作文-2024年中考英语书面表达命题预测

这是一份作文预测04+图表作文-2024年中考英语书面表达命题预测，共23页。试卷主要包含了词数不少于80；，首句已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等内容，欢迎下载使用。

图表作文就是将表格、数字或图像等所包含的信息，转换成连贯的文字表述的一种写作形式。此类作文要求学生通过分析图表的直观内容，对数据变化所反映出来的问题或趋势进行描述，并对数据变化的原因进行分析, 弄清各种信息之间的关系，提炼要点，织语言进行写作，得出令人信服的结果，必要时还需加入自己的观点。从写作类型来看，图表作文的文体多以说明文和议论文为主。从组图表形式可以分为表格、柱状图、曲线图和饼状图等。
表格、柱状图、曲线图和饼状图等。
阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力，无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式，它都能让你增长知识，开阔眼界。最近，某出版社在两万人中，针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查，下图是相关的统计结果，其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文：第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求：
1．词数不少于80；
2．首句已给出，不计入总词数。
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently, a survey was dne amng 20,000 peple abut the ways f reading．Here is what we have learned frm it.
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【答案】例文
Recently, a survey was dne amng 20,000 peple abut the ways f reading．Here is what we have learned frm it．
60% f the peple like t read n mbile phnes r e-readers, while nly 38.4% chse t read paper bks．S we can knw that mre and mre peple prefer t read e-bks rather than paper bks．Hwever, whatever way f reading we chse, it can help increase ur knwledge and pen ur eyes．
As fr me, I am still used t reading paper bks．Whenever I pen a paper bk, the smell f paper reminds me f the stries in the bks frm my mm when I was a little kid．Just because f this, I gt int the habit f reading．S when I read paper bks nw, they always bring me the ld feelings．On the ther hand, cmpared with the electrnic devices, reading paper bks is gd fr eyes．S yu see, I believe e-bks wn’t take the place f paper bks in my heart.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意要点中的“从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式”来谈谈这种阅读方式的好处，这是本篇写作的重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
第三步，书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
① mre and mre 越来越多
② increase 增长
③ as fr 关于，至于
④ remind sb．f 使某人想起……
⑤ cmpared with 与……相比较
【高分句型】
① S we can knw that mre and mre peple prefer t read e-bks rather than paper bks.（prefer t d sth．rather than d sth．宁愿做某事而不愿做某事）
② whatever way f reading we chse, it can help increase ur knwledge and pen ur eyes．（whatever引导的让步状语从句）
图表作文通常以表格或图形的形式呈现，体裁多为说明文，应用文或议论文。此类题型要求考生根据图表提供的数据和文字内容进行分析与讨论，得出令人信服的结论，或对某一结论进行评述。
图表作文常见的命题形式有；表格（table),条形图（bar chart)、饼状图（piechart)、线形图（line graph).图表中的数据信息往往较多，写作时一般不能把各种数据都列出来。因此，读懂表格与图形是关键，考生要认真分析图表内各数据或各信息之间的关系。考生平常要多做练习，熟悉这类作文的写法，熟记常用词汇和句型。
方法和步骤
1.描述图表内容
在文章开头，简要描述图表的直观内容，包括各个类别的数据和比较对象.
2.分析数据变化
对图表中的数据变化进行分析，揭示数据变化的趋势和规律.
3.探讨原因
分析数据变化的原因，可能是由于某种政策、现象、社会问题等导致的.
4.提出建议
根据图表所揭示的问题或趋势，给出相应的建议或措施，以解决问题或改善现状.
5.结论总结全文的观点，强调图表所反映的问题或趋势的重要性，呼吁人们重视并采取行动.
图表作文的写作要点在于准确地描述图表内容,分析数据变化的原因，给出合理的建议或评价.在写作过程中，对图表中的内容说明一定要简明扼要，尽量使用简单句•这种类型的作文可以帮助学生提高数据分析和表达能力，同时也有助于培养他们的批判性思维和社会责任感.
（1）
【图表类：制作海报。说明文】
假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意：
1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： pster（n.海报）； design（v．& n.设计）
My Experience f Making a Pster
Last week, I made a pster f the great changes in my hmetwn._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【图表类：奇美湖南。地方元素介绍】
学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
(1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）；
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Wrd bank: transprt 交通；cnvenient 方便的
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lvable and livable place．
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（3）
【图表类：写活动】
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。
注意：
1．可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2．词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank yu fr jining us in ur vluntary wrk next Saturday.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
（4）
【图表类：学校生活，英语学习】
新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favrite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1.描述并评价调查结果；
2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
There are many practical learning activities in English class．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（5）
【图表类：五育并举】
根据所给要求，写一篇80词左右的短文。下图是某校对八年级100名学生寒假活动的调查结果。请简要说明图表内容，并结合自身情况，谈谈该如何过一个充实又有意义的寒假。
要求：(1)词数不少于80词； (2)不得出现真实校名和人名。
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（6）
【图表类：学习与生活】
近期，你们学校针对学生利用电子设备(device)上网的情况做了一次调查，具体结果如下表。请你用英语写一份调查报告，以便刊登在校刊上。要求不少于80词，并简要分析产生这种情况的原因。
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【图表类：建议】
适当的放松有助于缓解学生压力，使他们保持精力充沛，促进其身心健康。为更有效地助力学生成长，某校针对“你最喜欢的放松方式”，对某年级1000名学生进行了抽样调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
请你用两段话写一篇英文短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈你喜欢的放松方式的好处。
要求：1．词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
The schl did a survey amng 1, 000 students abut different students’ favrite ways t relax．Here are the results．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（8）
《论语》有云：吾日三省吾身。自我反思能让我们发现自身的不足。作为学生，我们应当认识到反思的重要性，尤其是在考试后，反思能够有效地帮助我们实现“考后一百分”。下图是某校九年级的200名学生对以往考试失败原因的反思结果。
Reasns Why Students Fail Exams
在初中三年的学习生活中，你一定有一些难忘的自我反思的经历跟大家分享。请你分两段写一篇短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段结合自己的经历，谈谈你的看法和感受。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
A schl carries ut a survey（调查）amng 200 students frm Grade 9 abut the reasns why they fail exams．Here are the results.
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【图表类：观点与看法】
现今，越来越多的人喜欢网上点餐外卖服务，你所在的学校学生会就“你对网上点餐的看法”进行了问卷调查。请根据调查结果，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。
注意：（1）参考词汇：塑料包装 plastic packaging
2）词数：80个左右（文章的开头己给出，不计入词数）·
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Online fd delivery is bming in China．The student Unin in ur schl has made a survey abut it．Here are the result
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（10）
【图表类：科技创新】
科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假定你家就有一台智能家用电器(smart appliance),扫地机器人(rbt cleaner),请你根据以下写作内容提示，写一篇关于它的英语短文，给同学们介绍一下它，让更多人受惠。
注意:
（1）请适当拓展，不要直译内容：
（2）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
Many inventins have changed peple’s life．My rbt cleaner is ne f them．
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今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。
注意：1．词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
In tday’s English class, we had a discussin n “A valuable gift I gave”．Here is what we shared in ur grup.
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(12)
上个月，你校举办了“我的成长”的英语主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们小组四人的分享内容，需包括以下要点。
注意：1．字数：80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Hell, everyne! We had a sharing sessin n “My prgress” last mnth．Here is what we shared in ur grup.
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(13)
最近，你随机调查了你校50名同学的课外英语学习现状（结果见下面图表）。请你就此用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行汇报，并谈谈您的看法和建议。
注意：1、文章必须包括图表中的四项内容，可适当增加细节；
2、看法和建议至少两条；
3、词数80左右。
I have recently dne a survey abut hw students learn English ut f class.
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(14)
中国《政府工作报告》提出绿色低碳发展。作为新时代的青少年，我们应响应国家号召，共建绿色低碳家园，请以“Let’s Build a Green City Tgether!”为题，写一篇英语倡议书。
要求：
1．书写认真规范，词数不少于80词，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2．短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Let’s Build a Green City Tgether!
As we all knw, the envirnment is imprtant t us．S it’s ur duty t prtect it．A green city is the key t a healthy life．Let’s take actin nw!
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Theme
Healthy Yu and Me
Time
8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place
Sprts Center
Activities
…
Purpse
…
参考答案
（1）
【图表类：制作海报。说明文】
My Experience f Making a Pster
Last week ，I made a pster f the great changes in my hmetwn．The purpse f making it is t shw the rapid develpment f my hmetwn in recent years．Firstly, I asked my grandparents abut their past living cnditins．Then, I fund sme ld phts nline t cmpare the past and present f my hmetwn．Finally, I srted the infrmatin that I had learned and designed a pster with relevant pictures attached.
This experience helps me knw better abut my hmetwn．With its develpment, peple have led better lives and the envirnment has been imprved．I am very happy t see these changes．As a member f this twn, I will cntribute my wn effrts t its develpment.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的；
第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程；
第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。
【亮点词汇】
①rapid develpment快速发展
②living cnditins生活条件
③srted the infrmatin把信息分类
④lead a better life过上更好的生活
【高分句型】
①Finally, I srted the infrmatin that I had learned and designed a pster with relevant pictures attached.（that引导的定语从句）
②With its develpment, peple have led better lives and the envirnment has been imprved.（现在完成时的被动语态）
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Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lvable and livable place．Let me tell yu smething abut Hunan.
First, there are lts f places f interest, such as Zhangjiajie．Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where yu can appreciate the beauty f nature．Secnd, the high-speed train is cnvenient and user-friendly, s yu can g t Hunan by high-speed train．Third, Hunan cuisine cnsists f many kinds f delicius fd that yu can nt miss anyway．If yu like ndles, yu must try the tasty and muth-watering rice ndles in Hunan．What’s mre, the peple in Hunan are helpful and warm-hearted．Yu will feel at hme here.
Welcme t Hunan.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：要求以“Amazing Hunan”为题，结合所给要点进行写作，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，突出写作内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，简单介绍湖南，引出下文重点；
第二步，介绍湖南的名胜古迹、交通工具、美食和人等；
第三步，书写结语
【亮点词汇】
① lts f 许多
② such as 比如
③ cnsist f 由……组成
④ what’s mre 此外
⑤ feel at hme 感到自在
【高分句型】
① Let me tell yu smething abut Hunan.（祈使句）
②Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where yu can appreciate the beauty f nature.（where引导非限制性定语从句）
③ Third, Hunan cuisine cnsists f many kinds f delicius fd that yu can nt miss anyway.（that引导定语从句）
④ If yu like ndles, yu must try the tasty and muth-watering rice ndles in Hunan.（if引导条件状语从句）
（3）
Dear Sam,
Thank yu fr jining us in ur vluntary wrk next Saturday．Let me intrduce smething abut the activity t yu.
The theme f the activity is “Healthy Yu and Me”, and it will be held frm 8:30 a.m．t 11:30 a.m．next Saturday．It will be held in the Sprts Center．There are many interesting activities．First, there will be a sprts histry shw．It will be held in ur schl hall．Besides, “Healthy Yu and Me” speech will be n, t．If yu want t take part, please let us knw befre this Friday．There will be different kinds f after-schl exercise classes, such as ftball, basketball, tennis and s n．Yu can chse the ne yu like.
The main purpse is t increase students’ interest in sprts, and encurage students t take exercise actively．I am lking frward t yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“主题、时间、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，介绍活动的目的并书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①介绍……给……
②从……到……
③different kinds f各种不同的
④lk frward t期待
【高分句型】
①The theme f the activity is “Healthy Yu and Me”, and it will be held frm 8:30 a.m．t 11:30 a.m．next Saturday．（and连接并列句）
②The main purpse is t increase students’ interest in sprts, and encurage students t take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和作宾语补足语）
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There are many practical learning activities in English class．Recently, ur schl club has made a survey n students’ favrite English class activities．Here are the results.
Of the fur activities mentined, abut ne third f the students say presentatin is their favrite．The number f students wh chse discussin and creative writing is almst the same, taking up 25% and 27% each．Only 17% f the students cnsider debate their favrite as they think it is challenging.
As far as I am cncerned, presentatin is the mst useful．On the ne hand, I am able t learn a lt while preparing fr it．On the ther hand, it helps t imprve my English speaking ability as well as cmmunicatin skills.
English class activities are imprtant, s we had better make full use f them t make English learning mre interesting and clrful.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果；
第二步，描述并评价调查结果；
第三步，陈述你的选择并说明理由；
第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
【亮点词汇】
①the number f……的数量
②as far as就……而言
③had better d sth.最好做某事
④make full use f充分利用
【高分句型】
①Here are the results.(倒装句)
②The number f students wh chse discussin and creative writing is almst the same, taking up 25% and 27% each.(定语从句)
（5）
A schl did a survey amng 100 students abut their activities fr winter hlidays．Here are the results.
16 percent f the students learned a new skill, such as cking, tidying the rm and s n．They think these basic skills can help them develp their independence．22 percent f the students helped their family like ding husewrk．Their parents felt happy t see their children’s changes．62 percent f the students played fr fun such as watching TV, travelling and s n．As fr me, I did cmmunity vlunteer wrk during the winter hliday．Hw can we spend a meaningful hliday?
First, we shuld learn sme basic skills．Secnd, we shuld keep exercising t stay healthy．Last but nt least, we can take up sme hbbies．S yu can live a meaningful and enjyable hliday.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料介绍学生们的寒假活动以及如何度过一个有意义的寒假，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学生们的寒假活动以及自己的寒假活动；
第三步，介绍如何度过一个有意义的寒假；
【亮点词汇】
①such as例如
②as fr至于
③take up开始从事
【高分句型】
① Here are the results.（倒装句）
② Secnd, we shuld keep exercising t stay healthy （动词不定式作目的状语）
（6）
The graph shws the results f a survey in which students were asked abut their preferred devices fr ging nline．There are fur main devices in their answers: a smartphne, a laptp, a tablet and a desktp cmputer.
Frm the chart it is clear that mst students prefer t use smartphnes and laptps．Nearly a third f students prefer t g nline with a smartphne．Thirty percent like t use a laptp．A desktp cmputer accunts fr furteen percent f users’ preferred devices．Only few students prefer a device ther than these main fur.
In cnclusin, since mbile and prtable devices are the mst ppular chices, it is clear that many students like t take them arund．The desktp is t heavy t carry and hard t use, s it is the least ppular.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为图表作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
【写作步骤】
第一步，整体介绍学生利用电子设备上网的情况；
第二步，具体阐述每一项电子设备的占比；
第三步，最后分析移动和便携式设备最受欢迎的原因。
【亮点词汇】
①prefer t d宁愿做
②ther than除了……以外
③In cnclusin总而言之
【高分句型】
①In cnclusin, since mbile and prtable devices are the mst ppular chices, it is clear that many students like t take them arund.（since引导原因状语从句）
②The desktp is t heavy t carry and hard t use, s it is the least ppular.（最高级）
（7）
The schl did a survey amng 1, 000 students abut different students’ favrite ways t relax．Here are the results．41% f the students like ding exercise.28% f the students think it’s relaxing t have trips．And the percentage f the students wh prefer t spend time with their friends is 22%．The ther 9% chse ther ways t relax．As fr me, I am interested in ding exercise．It helps me reduce stress and keep active.
Last mnth, when the teacher tld us we wuld have a math test．I felt s wrried that I culdn’t fall asleep until midnight．As a result, I was tired in class and I culdn’t fllw my math teacher．T be less stressed ut, I played basketball with my friend．We talked and played, sharing ur prblems and happiness．It was basketball that brught me curage t speak ut my prblems．I felt relaxed and active．In the fllwing days, my friend ften led me t think abut sme math prblems when we practiced basketball n the playgrund．Gradually, I culd d better in math.
T relax myself, I will keep develping gd habits．I will travel, have a party with my friend r g t the mvies．I will als learn t cmmunicate mre with thers while ding these things．Only in this way can I be better.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据图表内容完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，可自由发挥。
【写作步骤】
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，结合自己的经历，说明自己喜欢的放松方式；
第三步，总结自己的放松方式，以及这些方式的好处。
【亮点词汇】
①fall asleep入睡②cmmunicate with sb.和某人交流③keep ding sth一直做某事
【高分句型】
①And the percentage f the students wh prefer t spend time with their friends is 22%.（wh引导的定语从句）
②I felt s wrried that I culdn’t fall asleep until midnight.（引导的结果状语从句）
③It was basketball that brught me curage t speak ut my prblems.（强调句）
④Only in this way can I be better.（倒装句）
（8）
45% f the students think they are careless when they have exams, while tw in ten fail the exams because they lack basic skills．35% f them think that they fail because f nervusness．
As fr me, I fail in sme exams because I always make mistakes fr carelessness．Last term, I tk an imprtant English exam, and I failed t pass it because f sme spelling mistakes．Fr example, I mistk “aunt” as “ant”, and “snack” as “snake”．My classmates laughed at my “funny” spelling．After that, my teacher gave me sme a advice, and I decided t try t avid such mistakes by carefully writing and memrizing wrds which were easily misspelled ver and ver again．
Althugh it is a slw way t imprve my spelling, I’m sure I will make great prgress as lng as I keep it.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中结合自己的经历，谈谈你的看法和感受等要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“九年级的200名学生分析考试失败的原因”来引出重点介绍的内容；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“表格内容、结合自身经历、自己的看法和感受”等几个方面重点议论；
③第三步，书写结语。表达“只要坚持就会取得进步”的愿望。
【亮点词汇】
①make mistakes犯错②fail t d sth未能做某事③make great prgress取得巨大进步④as lng as只要
【高分句型】
①I decided t try t avid such mistakes by carefully writing and memrizing wrds which were easily misspelled ver and ver again.（which引导的定语从句）
②Althugh it is a slw way t imprve my spelling, I’m sure I will make great prgress as lng as I keep it.（althugh引导的让步状语从句以及it is+n+t d sth句型）
（9）
Online fd delivery is bming in China．The student Unin in ur schl has made a survey abut it．Here are the result。35% f students cnsider that it’s cnvenient fr them t rder nline anytime , anywhere ．Meanwhile , 30% f students appreciate varius chices fr fd , which can meet different peple’s needs .
Hwever , 25% f students wrry abut the pllutin caused by increasing amunt f plastic packaging ．Mrever , 10% f students pint ut delivery fd is usually high in fat r sugar and this may cause health prblems .
As fr me , I’m nt a fan f it ．I wuld rather ck fr myself thugh it takes time ．Therefre , we shuld make every effrt t eat in a healthier way .
（10）
Many inventins have changed peple’s life．My rbt cleaner is ne f them．
It’s a rund smart appliance, just like a big cake/ UFO with wheels at the bttm f it s that it can mve freely．It’s as smart as a human being because it can clean the flr itself in a huse．What’s mre, it wrks with electricity, s it will nt pllute the air．Abve all, it’s mre cnvenient fr us t use it because we can cntrl it by using ur mbile phnes.
In my pinin, the rbt cleaner is a great inventin and ur gd friend．It saves time and helps us live a better life．Why nt have a try and buy ne fr yurselves?
(11)
In tday’s English class, we had a discussin n “A valuable gift I gave”．Here is what we shared in ur grup．Bb prepared sme delicius chicken sup as a gift fr his parents n his 16th birthday．He thught it was a gd way t express his great thanks and lve t his parents．Fr graduatin, Kate gave her gd friend a pht album, cntaining phts f the memrable events they have experienced tgether．She thught it was a valuable recrd f friendship．Lily sent her freign teacher a paper cutting she made herself n Teachers’ Day．Her teacher Amy lves Chinese culture and was learning paper cutting．As fr me, I bught myself a skipping rpe, with which I hpe t d regular exercise and stay healthy and fit.
(12)
Hell, everyne! We had a sharing sessin n “My prgress” last mnth．Here is what we shared in ur grup.
There are fur members in ur grup, Fang Fang, Sun Lei, Zha Yun and me．Fang Fanghas spent mst f her time studying in her free time．Therefre, she frms gd learning habits right nw．Sun Lei has taken part in varius kinds f vluntary wrk．It is such a gd chance fr her t help thers in need．As an ld saying ges, rses in yur hand, flavr in mine．Zha Yun has spared n effrt t jin sme clubs which aim at prtecting the envirnment．He feels s prud f himself that he can d smething t help prtect the envirnment such as recycling ld things, picking up rubbish in the park, cleaning the streets and s n．As fr me, I have imprved a lt in learning the traditinal art like paper cutting, trying my best t keep Chinese traditinal art frm alive.
Learning t grw is part f ur life．Hpe everyne can seize the day and live it t the fullest.
(13)
I have recently dne a survey abut hw students learn English ut f class．Almst all students read textbks．They think reading textbks is the mst imprtant fr English learning.Mre than 40 students make wrd cards．Sme students g ver their ntes they have taken in class．Hwever, nly a few students ask the teachers fr help． In my pinin, listening and speaking are the secrets f becming a gd language learner．We need t d lts f listening and speaking practice, such as watching English mvies and listening t English sngs．Als, chatting with freigners can be helpful.
试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。
写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如We need t d lts f listening and speaking practice, such as watching English mvies and listening t English sngs．Als, chatting with freigners can be helpful.等等。
(14)
Let’s Build a Green City Tgether!
As we all knw, the envirnment is imprtant t us．S it’s ur duty t prtect it．A green city is the key t a healthy life．Let’s take actin nw!
First, it’s imprtant t have a green life．We shuld save water and electricity．When we leave a rm, we shuld turn ff the lights．We shuldn’t thrw rubbish everywhere．We shuld use fewer plastic prducts．Secnd, green traffic is gd fr reducing air pllutin．When we g utside, we can take public transprtatin such as subway r g t schl by bike．Third, t make ur city greener, we shuld plant mre trees．We shuld als make part in mre cmmunity activities t make ur city clean and beautiful．We can cllect waste things such as bttles, paper, and ld clthes and recycle them.
I believe the sky will be bluer, the muntains will be greener and the rivers will be cleaner．Our cuntry will be richer and mre beautiful.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书。
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍环境对人类的重要性，呼吁大家一起行动；
第二步，从题目中给出的绿色生活、绿色交通、绿色家园三个方面写具体该怎样做；
第三步，书写结语，表达“共建天更蓝、山更绿、水更清的大美中国”的美好愿望。
【亮点词汇】
①as we all knw众所周知②be the key t是……的关键③be imprtant t对……是重要的
【高分句型】
When we leave a rm, we shuld turn ff the lights.（时间状语从句）