16续写真题2016浙江卷11月吵架迷路课件PPT

这是一份16续写真题2016浙江卷11月吵架迷路课件PPT，共24页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp（野营） by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way t the lake, they started t quarrel because f sme different pinins. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I'm ging t find a better spt（地点） fr us t camp”， and walked away.With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, She suddenly realized that she was lst.“Tm！” she cried.“Help！”N reply. If nly she hadn’t left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, as night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane started t miss her husband, Tm. She wanted t tell him hw much she lved him.
2016年浙江卷真题原文
Jane rse(起身) at the break f day（黎明）, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落) smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a river. T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes（浆果丛林）. She drank and ate a few berries. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alng the river and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.Frtunately，Jane heard a helicpter（直升飞机）. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse（衬衫）, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and raised（举起） them if the helicpters came back again.
读原文 划要素 填表格
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. _______________________________________________________It was daybreak when Jane wke up. _______________________________________________________
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Jane stayed in the frest alne the whle night.
①Hw did Jane feel?
②What did she think?
③Where did she sleep?
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Hw did Jane gt rescued?
①What did Jane d befre the helicpter arrive?
It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
Jane ; helicpter ; Tm
②What did Jane d when the helicpter arrive?
③what did Tm d?
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
Jane was tired and frightened.
She began t walk.
She fell asleep.
She regreted.
She thught where Tm was.
But she was safe.
The helicpter fund her.
She was rescued.
She met Tm.
They made up.
She met sme dangers.
She appealed t the helicpter.
T her great jy, the helicpter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rck slwly.
范文赏析
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1） Lying beside the river, she fell asleep very sn.2） She ate sme berries and then walked alng the stream, hping t find a suitable place t guide the helicpter.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:3） Tm jumped ff the helicpter and rushed twards Jane. 4）They hugged each ther tightly and burst int tears.
招式2： 动作链（V1, V2 and V3）（V1 and V2） 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:5）Suddenly, she heard the shuts f tigers, which made her scared t death.
招式3： 定语从句 “先行词n. + 关系代词/关系副词 + 定语从句 ”
e.g.:6）She walked and walked, exhausted but full f hpe.
招式4： 形容词作状语，表示情绪感受 常用句式： ① Adj. + adj., ... ② ..., adj. + adj.
水到渠成 范文赏析
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Jane was s tired, hungry, and extremely frightened. She thught t herself, “If nly I had nt quarrelled with Tm. Where is Tm? He must have made the emergency call. What I need is enugh curage. If I cntinue my spirits tmrrw, I will be likely t guide the helicpter.” Lying beside the river, she fell asleep very sn. Suddenly, she heard the shuts f tigers, which made her scared t death. After she held her breath fr a few minutes, everything was quiet again. In the terrible darkness, she slept again.
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. She ate sme berries and then walked alng the stream, hping t find a suitable place t guide the helicpter. She walked and walked, exhausted but full f hpe. Suddenly, she sptted a huge flat rck. She managed t climb nt it and waited with patience. The helicpter appeared again. The nearer it gt, the mre she waved the yellw bluse. T her great jy, the helicpter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rck slwly. Tm jumped ff the helicpter and rushed twards Jane. They hugged each ther tightly and burst int tears.