高考真题之读后续写04 2022年6月浙江卷•帮助无家可归的人

读后续写真题讲解新高考 2022年6月浙江卷Miss Lin 01 02 03 04原题分析词汇、句型准备续写预测完成续写；分析范文高考读后续写原文分析PART 01原题分析 I needed to do something in my community（社区）in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do. I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner. Background information原题分析 As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I'd come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn't have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned（分配）to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she'd be right there, which I found quite comforting. I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had tally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen. 心理描写外貌描写人文关怀（升华主题）注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. _______________________________________ ___________________________________Paragraph 2: I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.______________________________________________ ____________________________________________Who : homeless people and me When : when they began preparing the food for completing the community service.What : many homeless people were gathering before the shop opened Where: at a soup kitchen How/why : Think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.情节分析Backgroundinformation1What the author encountered2-3What did the author feel4How to help the homelessclimax/conflict帮助施粥的过程和感受讲述了作者为了完成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间，需要在所在的社区做点什么，作者去了施粥所故事情节发展分析作者发现准备过程中要做的事情很多，作者看到无家可归的人靠近时心里有点害怕作者看到了年龄和国籍各不相同的人，这让作者感到很难过续写预测①由第一段首句内容“当他们朝我走来的时候，我露出了最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。”可知，第一段可描写作者是怎么为无家可归的人施粥。②由第二段首句内容“我很高兴我用这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。”可知，第二段可描写作者对这次社区服务的感悟。①倒：pour/decant②意识到：realize that/be aware that③主张：urge sb. to do/advocate sb. to do行为类①感谢：gratefully/thankfully②急切的：anxious/eager/nervous③ 带来温暖：brought warmth into my heart情绪类词汇积累高分句型(由that引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句)This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help. (由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了that和when引导的时间状语从句)I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. 进行续写PART 02第一段：作者是怎么为无家可归的人施粥。As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. Nervous as I felt, I did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need, with my hands trembling. Upon seeing it, every one of them beamed with smile, gently murmured “Thank you” and bowed to me sincerely, which brought warmth straight into my heart. The passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event. It was not until the night wiped out the last ray of sun that we finished our community service for the homeless.心理+动作描写时间的流逝见证了这一事件的顺利进行。直到夜晚把最后一缕阳光吹灭，我们才完成了对无家可归者的社区服务第二段描写作者对这次社区服务的感悟I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who seemed to be dangerous and unamiable, but also I extended a helping hand to those who wanted food and clothes. I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy, therefore, we should always keep grateful for what life blessed us with. However, we did have the power to share our happiness with others, that is, spreading love. Love is everything, like the clear moon hanging high in the sky, spreading its comforting moonlight selflessly to everyone.爱是一切，就像高悬在天空中的明月，无私地向每一个人传播着它令人安慰的月光。优秀表达积累Nervous as I felt Keep myself calmHand out the mealWith my hands tremblingBeam with smileBow to me Bring warmth into my heartClear my prejudiceBorn to be wealthyKeep grateful Share our happiness Spread love 优秀句子The passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event. It was not until the night wiped out the last ray of sun that we finished our community service for the homeless.Love is everything, like the clear moon hanging high in the sky, spreading its comforting moonlight selflessly to everyone.爱是一切，就像高悬在天空中的明月，无私地向每一个人传播着它令人安慰的月光。时间的流逝见证了这一事件的顺利进行。直到夜晚把最后一缕阳光吹灭，我们才完成了对无家可归者的社区服务。THANKS更多读后续写ppt请主页搜索