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这是一份高考真题之读后续写09 2021年1月八省联考•好心的墨西哥一家 已查看,文件包含春季lesson2读后续写ppt、读后续写修车2八省首次大型联考Zoepptx、读后续写修车12021124八省首次大型联考泗洪pptx、02《洪亮英语》再开发202101八省首次大型联考读后续写pptx、20211八省联考读后续写docx、2021八省联考英语读后续写方法探究docx、读后续写翻译练习好心的墨西哥家庭++2022届高考英语作文doc、八省联考读后续写下水文doc、读后续写专题墨西哥一家助人写作学案-2022届高三英语写作专项docx等9份试卷配套教学资源,其中试卷共37页, 欢迎下载使用。
During this past year, I've had three instances f car truble. Each time these things happened, I was sick f the way mst peple hadn't bthered t help. One f thse times, I was n the side f the rad fr clse t three hurs with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windws, big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶), and ffered mney. Nthing. Right as I was abut t give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled ver, and the father bunded ut.
was fed up with peple’s cldness/indifferencecynical
disappinted
Plt 1: Stuck n the rad due t car truble, I came acrss a Mexican family, wh stpped t check n me.
He sized up the situatin and called fr his daughter, wh spke English. He cnveyed thrugh her that he had a jack but that it was t small fr the Jeep, s we wuld need smething t supprt it. Then he gt a saw(锯子)frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business. I started taking the wheel ff, and then, if yu can believe it, I brke his tire irn(撬车胎棒). N wrries: He handed it t his wife, and she was gne in a flash dwn the rad t buy a new tire irn. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the jb, and I was a very happy man.
Plt 2: The father helped me fix my car.
The tw f us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pt f water fr us t wash ur hands. I tried t put a $20 bill in the man's hand, but he wuldn't take it, s instead I went up t the truck and gave it t his wife as quietly as I culd. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexic, she said. They were in Oregn s Mmmy and Daddy culd wrk n a fruit farm fr the next few weeks. Then they wuld g hme.
Plt 3: Despite the father’s refusal, I insisted n paying this family 20 dllars, s I quietly left the mney with the wife.
Read the stry
Get the main idea (把握故事梗概)
During this past year
n the side f the rad
IA Mexican family (father, mther, a daughter)
A Mexican family helped me fix my car and refused my 20 dllars, but I gave it t the wife.
T help me ut.
By helping me fix the car.
Read the characters
IFatherMtherdaughter
Felt sick f peple’s cldness.My car brke dwn n the rad.I fixed my car with the Mexican father.Didn’t have lunch.Gave the Mexican family 20 dllars as reward.
Knw the main characters (明确主要人物)
Culdn't speak English.HelpfulGenerusRefused t accept the 20 dllars.Wrked n a fruit farm
Quick in respnseCnsiderate
Helped her parents cmmunicate with me.Asked if I’d had lunch.
What happened?Emtins?
Read the plt
Clarify the main events (理清主要事件)
Read the given sentences
Para.1 When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I'd had lunch.Para.2 After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag.
Predict the ending (预测故事结尾)
Q1: What was my reply? (abut lunch) Q2: What did the girl d? (The paper bag) Q3: Hw did I feel? Q4: Hw did they leave? (After they left,)
Q1: What did I find in the paper bag?Q2: Hw did I change the pinin twards strangers?Q3: What des the stry intend t tell readers?
list the writing pints
List the utline (罗列写作要点)
I respnded t the girl.The girl handed me the lunch.The Mexican family left.
embarrassed/awkward
mved/grateful
I fund lunch and smething else in the paper bag.my reflectins n the event
Para.1 When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
My tummy/belly/guts/stmach gave an enrmus rumble/started t rumble.A rumbling/grumbling stmach/The sund f my stmach grumbling betrayed me.Pangs f hunger suddenly struck me.Shaking my head, I insisted that I was nt that hungry and they shuld save the fd fr the rest f jurney.
Scratching my head, I was discncerted(尴尬的) t find that 从句/(宾语+宾补).Smiling awkwardly, I admitted feeling a little bit hungry/peckish(饥饿的). I ndded my head in embarrassment/embarrassedly.A flush/blush(脸红) f embarrassment came t my cheeks at the sund f my stmach grumbling.
She made me wait fr a mment/while/secnd.
I brimmed ver with (满溢;充满)gratitude when 从句。Tuched deeply/immensely, I…I ndded in gratitude, eyes glistening(闪耀地) with held-back tears.I disslved int tears f gratitude. 我开始感激的哭起来。I was deeply affected by her kindness.深受感动。
She whirled arund(猛地转身), gt int the car, and fumbled arund fr sme fd.
“Here yu are.” Appearing int sight was a paper bag. I lked at the little girl, whse starry eyes n the lightening face glittered smething sly, arusing my curisity abut what was in the bag.
With my thumb up, I expressed my thanks/gratitude again and again/repeatedly.Laughing ludly, the father said with his brken English, “N Thanks! Happy!”
The father started the truck, with the mther and girl seated at the back seat, waving gdbye t me. Waving back with a smile, I wished them a safe trip.I watched the truck disappear int the distance, mixed feelings welling up in me.
Para.2 After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag.
The fd’s sweet smell filled my nstrils, making my muth water. Nt until I picked the hamburger up did I spt a 20-dllar bill alng with a nte, reading, “Kindness is free. Take care.”
Stunned and mved, I stared at the nte, feeling a pang f guilt abut my pervius thught that all peple were indifferent.Having spent a tugh year littered with severe hardship, I cried my heart ut/emtinally cllapsed in my Jeep n this deserted rad fr the kindness frm sme strangers. Frm that day n, every time I meet smene wh needs help, I always reach ut t them, hping t pass n the kindness that Mexican family ffered me.
D things fr peple nt because f wh they are r what they d in return, but because f wh yu are.Lve and kindness are never wasted. They always make a difference. They bless the ne wh receives them, and they bless yu, the giver.A single act f kindness thrws ut rts in all directins, and the rts spring up and make new trees.Carry ut a randm act f kindness, with n expectatin f reward, safe in the knwledge that ne day smene might d the same fr yu.Remember there’s n such thing as a small act f kindness. Every act creates a ripple with n lgical end.A little thught and a little kindness are ften wrth mre than a great deal f mney.Try t be a rainbw in smene else’s clud.We may never truly knw the reach f an act f kindness r the mark that it leaves n a life.
A Pssible Versin: When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. Shaking my head, I insisted that I was nt that hungry, and they shuld save the fd fr the rest f jurney. Hwever, the sund f my stmach grumbling betrayed me. Smiling awkwardly, I admitted feeling a little bit peckish. Having made me wait fr a secnd, she whirled arund, gt int the car, and fumbled arund fr sme fd. Secnds later, “Here yu are.” Appearing int sight was a paper bag. Deeply affected by her kindness, I lked at the little girl, whse starry eyes n the lightening face glittered smething sly, arusing my curisity abut what was in the bag. The family were ready t leave. The father started the truck, with the mther and girl seated in the back seat, waving gdbye t me. Waving back with a smile, I wished them a safe trip. I watched the truck disappear int the distance, mixed feelings welling up in me.
After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag. The fd’s sweet smell filled my nstrils, making my muth water. Nt until I picked the hamburger up did I spt a 20-dllar bill alng with a nte, reading, “Kindness is free. Take care.” Stunned and mved, I stared at the nte, feeling a pang f guilt abut my pervius thught that all peple were indifferent. Having spent a tugh year littered with severe hardship, I cried my heart ut in my Jeep n this deserted rad fr the kindness frm sme strangers. It eventually dawned n me that lve and kindness are never wasted. They always make a difference. They bless the ne wh receives them, and they als bless the giver. Frm that day n, every time I meet smene wh needs help, I always reach ut t them, hping t pass n the kindness that Mexican family ffered me.
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