高考真题之读后续写10 2020年7月浙江卷•拍照北极熊遇险
展开The Attack f Plar Bears
One fall, my wife Ellis and I had a single gal t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside "the plar bear capital f the wrld"-- the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears--like all wild animals-shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times. As Ellis and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a near lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.Terrified, Ellis and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh--he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter(相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Ellis and I feared the fence wuldn't last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar(吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.Paragraph 2: At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
一、确定主要人物、结尾句及主题
1. Wh is the main character f the stry and wh are the secndary characters? I (a yung male plar bear/my wife-Ellis)2. What happened t the authr and his wife?They were attacked by a plar bear while they were cking dinner in their camp surrunded by a high wire fence.
3. Why did the authr and his wife stay at the reasearch camp ?They wanted t take pictures f plar bears, which he thught was amazing but dangerus.4. Can yu predict hw the stry ends after reading it? They were ut f danger when the helicpter arrived.5. Why did the bear attack them?The bear was s hungry that it tried t get fd frm them.5. What’s the theme f the stry?Smething shuld be dne fr plar bears.
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
Paragraph2: At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
二、根据原文最后情节以及两句开头提示语,四句话确定情节框架
Ellis and I feared the fence wuldn't last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar(吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
1. When the bear headed back t the camp, hw did they feel?The bear flew int a rage and it lked really scary t them.2. Accrding t the given sentence f Para. 2 (At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.), what shuld be mentined at the end f Para.1?They were in danger f being fiercely attacked by the bear.3. Accrding t the given sentence f Para.2, what will happen next?The helicpter landed near the camp and scared the bear.
4. They were ut f danger when the helicpter arrived.
Para.23. The helicpter landed near the camp and scared the bear.
Para.11. The bear flew int a rage and it lked really scary t them.
2. They were in danger f being fiercely attacked by the bear.
The fur sentences make an utline f the plt.(四句话确定情节框架)
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.. 1. The bear flew int a rage and it lked really scary t them.What did the bear d when it headed back t the camp?What did it lk like?Hw did they feel at the sight?What did the authr and his wife d?What happened when the helicpter arrived?2. They were in danger f being fiercely attacked by the bear.
三、运用5W1H设问法,完善故事内容 (Based n the fur sentences, create the new plts by using the methd f 5W1H--Frward the plt by raising questins.)
Paragraph 2: The little by paid fr the dll immediately and said, "My mmmy lves white rses very much." 3. The helicpter landed near the camp and scared the bear.What was the bear's reactin?What did I d and what did the authr say?Hw did they feel when they were safe?What did they see frm the helicpter?What did they think f?4. They were ut f danger when the helicpter arrived.
Ellis phtgraph pictures safe camera bread fence nises spray ran
四、利用十个划线关键词,预测可能的情节(Use the 10 key wrds as a clue t create a lgical plt.)
1. eat the bread2. the bear was eating the bread3. As the helicpter tk ff, we culd see the bear eating the bread greedily. 4. Para. 2
D it in the fllwing way.
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.1. He expsed his sharp teeth, snarling at us, as he ran frward.2. And again the furius creature std n his back legs and began t snap at the fence like a demn.3. It seemed that his muth was dripping with bld and his eyes were red with rage.4. At the sight f it, I culd feel a flicker f fear flding ver me, and Ellis was stunned, her muth hanging pen.5. It was nly then that my mind began t race.6. Once again, I plucked my curage t blast him with pepper spray, but withut success.7. Then all f a sudden, came a crash f the fence falling dwn.
Read ne pssible versin and make sure yu knw HOW the plt develps.
Paragraph 2: At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.1. It landed in a clearing, nt far frm the camp, and the lud nises frm the rescue helicpter scared the bear.2. Fr an instant, he frze, but after a while, he started t charge at us again.3. "Ellis!" I shrieked, "Lk ut!"4. We immediately stepped aside, spun rund and gallped twards the helicpter.5. The mment we were int the helicpter, we cllapsed, gasping with relief.6. As it tk ff, we culd see the bear was hungrily eating the bread we had made.7. What a hungry bear! After we returned hme safe and sund, we realized that smething shuld be dne fr bears.
情节简单,合乎逻辑细节描写,语言优美
1、I feel like I am _________in an cean f sadness. 我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。2、She__________, hiding her face in her hands. 她掩面哭泣。3、They were immersed in___________. 他们沉浸在悲痛之中。4、She began t cry as if t __________all her srrw. 她开始哭起来,好像要把所有的悲伤都倾诉出来。5、I was flabbergasted and ttally______________, nly t feel the _____________all arund, the cld wind like an unrelenting arrw int my heart.我目瞪口呆,完全没有了反应,只觉得四周空荡荡的,寒风像无情的箭,扎进我的心窝里。
unrespnsive
5、S many thughts ____________her mind, all at nce. 那么多的想法立马涌入她的脑海中。6、Tears filling her eyes, she ffered her heartfelt___________. 热泪盈眶。她表达由衷的感激。
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