高考真题之读后续写12 2020年1月浙江卷•给狗狗找伴
展开A puppy fr Pppy
"I'm ging t miss yu s much, Pppy," said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins (情绪) get the better f him.His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. "I guess this is it," he said. "I'll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?" His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by's mther turned t the dg, "Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme."
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn't.They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. "What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?" asked Dad. "We've tried everything.""I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy," smiled Mm. "Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let's get a little dg fr Pppy."
It didn't take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx. she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever s slwly, then faster as she the smell.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.
一、确定主要人物、结尾句及主题
1. Wh is the main character f the stry and wh are the secndary characters? Pppy (a little dg, a by, Dad and Mm)2. Why did Dad and Mm get a little dg fr Pppy?Pppy was sad after the by went t university, s Dad and Mm get a little dg fr Pppy, trying t cheer her up.
3. What des the stry want t cnvey?Just like humans, animals als have feelings and thughts. 4. Can yu predict hw the stry ends after reading it? When the by returned hme, he was mved t tears by what had happened in the past few weeks.
Paragraph 1: Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
Paragraph2: A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.
二、根据原文最后情节以及两句开头提示语,四句话确定情节框架
It didn't take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx. she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever s slwly, then faster as she the smell.
1. What did the little dg lk like and what did it d?The little dg was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes. 2. Accrding t the given sentence f Para. 2 (A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.), what shuld be mentined at the end f Para.1?In the cmpany f the little dg, Pppy was cheerful again.3. Accrding t the given sentence f Para.2, what will happen next?Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly.
4. When the by returned hme, he was mved t tears by what had happened in the past few weeks.
Para.23. Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly.
Para.11. The little dg was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes.
2. In the cmpany f the little dg, Pppy was cheerful again.
The fur sentences make an utline f the plt.(四句话确定情节框架)
Paragraph 1: Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. 1. The little dg was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes. What did the little dg d in the bx?Hw did Pppy react t the newcmer at the sight?What did parents d and say?What did Pppy d then?Was Pppy cheerful again and hw did parents feel?2. In the cmpany f the little dg, Pppy was cheerful again.
三、运用5W1H设问法,完善故事内容 (Based n the fur sentences, create the new plts by using the methd f 5W1H--Frward the plt by raising questins.)
Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.3. Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly.What did Pppy d at the sight f the by?Did the by ntice the little dg?Hw did the by feel when he saw the little dg?What did the by d and say?What did parents say t the by and hw did the by feel?4. When the by returned hme, he was mved t tears by what had happened in the past few weeks.
Pppy parents university hugged by watched dg back cheerful bx
四、利用十个划线关键词,预测可能的情节(Use the 10 key wrds as a clue t create a lgical plt.)
1. wh watched wh?2. Pppy watched the yung teenager.3. Hw did Pppy watch the by?4. Pppy watched the by quietly like a baby in his arm5. And quietly, Pppy raised her head and watched the yung teenager like a baby in his arms.6. Para. 2.
D it in the fllwing way.
Paragraph 1: Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. 1. It was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes. 2. Wagging its tail, it tried t climb ut f the bx, but it fell dwn n its back, unable t stand up. 3. Upn seeing this, his parents culd nt help laughing. 4. Gently, Mm picked it up frm the bx and put it n the flr. 5. “Pppy, isn’t it a sweet dg? It’s fr yu!” Mm said in a sft vice. “It’s yur cmpanin.” 6. Cheerful and yet a little nervus, Pppy kept running and barking at the new family member. 7. But Much t the relief f his parents, they were like peas and carrts sn afterwards, and it seemed as if Pppy had frgtten her ld friend.
Read ne pssible versin and make sure yu knw HOW the plt develps.
Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.1. Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiusly. 2. It tk the by fr a lng time t ntice that there was a cute puppy beside Pppy, grwling and sniffing at his feet. 3. Immediately, he bent dwn, strked its head and asked, “What an adrable puppy! Whse is it?”4. His parents smiled and replied, “We gt it fr Puppy because...”5. Knwing what had happened t Pppy when he was at the university, the by was s mved that he tk the ld girl in his arms. 6. Tears burred his visin as he murmured, “Pppy, I miss yu, t.”7. And quietly, Pppy raised her head and watched the yung teenager like a baby in his arms.
情节简单,合乎逻辑细节描写,语言优美
1、He turned t me, with his eyes full f________.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。2、Her face turned _______and std there tngue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。
3、She ______all ver, feeling like sitting n pins and needles.她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。4、My heart seems t be under the weight f an ________rck, muth des nt listen t the trembling. My mind went_______.我心里仿佛被个无形的大石压住,嘴巴不听的颤抖。脑子一片空白。5、My heart seemed t ________ut f my thrat, my legs were t weak t stand, and I almst _______dwn several times.我的心像是要从喉咙口蹦出米,腿软得儿乎站不住,好几次差点摔倒。
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