全国百强校2025年新高考英语复习读后续写提分课件5 第五讲　精析写作手法　实现语言协同

这是一份全国百强校2025年新高考英语复习读后续写提分课件5 第五讲　精析写作手法　实现语言协同，共33页。PPT课件主要包含了全面周到地，做出积极的应对，高效演练 素养提能等内容，欢迎下载使用。
　　为了使所写的内容和语言和原文保持连贯性和一致性，读后续写需要通过在理解原文的基础上，巧妙利用 “拉平效应”，创造性地模仿和使用语言，即继承原文语言表达方面的显著特征，包括写作手法及语言表达技巧，从而一方面保证写作的效度和流畅度，另一方面保证写作在各个语言层次和表达风格上和原文保持一致。　　通过分析语篇，可以从五个方面理解原文的语言应用技巧：
[典题示例]　　阅读下面的材料，完成以下任务。　　When there was news that a strm was cming，Sarah didn't think much abut it. She simply shrugged it ff like any ther nrmal day.When she went t the grcery stre and saw that it was full, she still wasn't wrried.
　　Peple inside ran like mad between aisles(过道), grabbing what they culd. Mre peple were crwding in, pushing each ther. Even mre were waiting utside, trying t make their way int the stre. Bare shelves and lng lines made Sarah chuckle.They must be verreacting, she thught.　　On her way hme, she lked verhead.Dark cluds were indeed frming.And they seemed t be running quickly acrss the sky.Still, Sarah was nt bthered.The rain wuld be nice since it had been warm lately.
　　When she gt hme, Sarah made ppcrn and sat n the sfa with her dg, Cper, and gt ready t watch a mvie. Just as she hit play n the remte，she heard the thunder, as lud as a bmb.Rain started t cme dwn hard，making it almst impssible t see the trees in her frnt yard thrugh the windw.Cper immediately jumped frm the sfa, barking in fear in the crner.
　　“It's OK.”Sarah said.She mved t ne side and saw Cper lked a bit nervus.Sarah turned ff the mvie and instead skipped t the lcal news statin.The strm was much mre serius than she had thught.Peple in a nearby city even said they sptted a trnad.The reprter advised peple t stay inside and secure all f the drs and windws.
　　Sarah gt up and began making her way arund the huse.Cper fllwed clse behind as she checked all f the windws t make sure they were all fully clsed.By the time she gt back t her sfa，the rain had stpped.“That wasn't s bad，”Sarah said alud.“Just a nice shwer.”
　　She turned t Cper，wh had gne back t the crner and still lked a bit frightened.She lked utside.It was actually very calm, but she culd see that the wind was picking up.The branches f the trees were dancing wildly and the garbage bin had tipped ver.
[解题技法]1．场景描写(Surrundings)请选出以下句子场景描写的作用。A．介绍发生的时间B．介绍发生的地点C．介绍发生的自然环境D．介绍发生的社会场景E．推动情节发展F．表达感情
①When there was news that a strm was cming，Sarah didn't think much abut it.____②When she went t the grcery stre and saw that it was full, she still wasn't wrried.______③Bare shelves and lng lines made Sarah chuckle. ___④Rain started t cme dwn hard，making it almst impssible t see the trees in her frnt yard thrugh the windw. ___
⑤It was actually very calm, but she culd see that the wind was picking up. ___⑥The branches f the trees were dancing wildly and the garbage bin had tipped ver. ___
2．动作描写(Actins)(1)请选出以下句子动作描写的作用。A．塑造人物的形象B．反映人物的情感态度C．反映人物的心理变化D．反映人物的性格特点及思想品质
①She simply shrugged it ff like any ther nrmal day. ___②When she gt hme，Sarah made ppcrn and sat n the sfa with her dg, Cper, and gt ready t watch a mvie. ___③Sarah turned ff the mvie and instead skipped t the lcal news statin. ___④Sarah gt up and began making her way arund the huse.Cper fllwed clse behind as she checked all f the windws t make sure they were all fully clsed. ___⑤She turned t Cper, wh had gne back t the crner and still lked a bit frightened.She lked utside. ___
(2)上题中的句④反映了萨拉(Sarah)能够_____________考虑到各个方面，并且遇到问题能够____________________。3．心理描写(Feelings)请选出以下句子心理描写的手法。A．形容词直接描述心理活动B．动作体现心理活动C．场景描写衬托心理活动D．间接引语体现心理活动
① still wasn't wrried.___②They must be verreacting, she thught. ___ ③Still，Sarah was nt bthered.The rain wuld be nice since it had been warm lately. ___④Cper fllwed clse behind... ___
5．修辞(Figure f speech)请选出以下句子的修辞手法。A．比喻　 B．拟人　　C．夸张　D．排比①Peple inside ran like mad between aisles, grabbing what they culd. Mre peple were crwding in, pushing each ther. Even mre were waiting utside, trying t make their way int the stre. ___②Peple inside ran like mad between aisles, grabbing what they culd. ___③Dark cluds were indeed frming. And they seemed t be running quickly acrss the sky. ___④Just as she hit play n the remte, she heard the thunder, as lud as a bmb. ___
　　阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。　　(2022·烟台高考适应性练习)It was an rdinary day fr Shawn Turner and his kids as they were driving hme alng Military Trail n the mrning f February 23. Hwever, all this was abut t change when his 9-year-ld sn Timmy suddenly yelled frm the backseat. He alerted him that there was a car flating in the canal they were passing by.
　　 Shawn immediately pulled ff nt the shulder near the Bca Ratn canal. The 33-year-ld dad rushed ut f his vehicle and saw a wman behind the wheel in the sinking car. Knwing that there was n time t waste, Shawn quickly tk ff his sweatpants and jumped int the water.　　 He swam up t the windw and cnfirmed that the wman, later identified as Mlly Pedrne, was uncnscius. She was still buckled (弯曲) in as her white Kia Sul filled with water.A wman als jumped in t assist with the rescue.
　　He sht his hand thrugh the cracked windw t rll it all the way dwn and launched his bdy halfway acrss the frnt seat. Shawn struggled t unbuckle Mlly's seatbelt. Just then, a man later identified as Adam Gunn dived int the water and quickly swam twards the driver's side windw. 　　By then, the car was clse t being fully submerged.Shawn climbed inside t free Mlly.
　　Shawn lifted Mlly ut f her seat s that Adam culd pull her thrugh the driver's side windw. Because f his weight, the car started sinking faster. His 14-year-ld sn, wh was filming the rescue, yelled in panic, “Dad, jump ut! Get ut！”
　　Just as the car's entire frnt was underwater, Shawn's head emerged frm the surface. He, the wman, and Adam carried Mlly t the shre. As they were bringing her t the bank, Mlly pened her eyes, lking cnfused. 　　“I tld her t relax, that she was in an accident and that her car went int the water，” Shawn said.
　　Hwever, Mlly had n recllectin f the whle rescue. It was when she gt in the hspital that she understd everything that had happened.　　注意：续写词数应为150左右。
　　Mlly was driving hme frm a wrk meeting that Sunday when she suddenly suffered frm a heart attack.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Mlly says she is lucky that her injuries were nly a few bruises (瘀伤) and a black eye, pssibly frm hitting the steering wheel (方向盘)．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One pssible versin：　　Mlly was driving hme frm a wrk meeting that Sunday when she suddenly suffered frm a heart attack. The attack rendered her uncnscius, and that's when her car came crashing int the canal. Mlly started having the illness 13 years ag and started treating it with medicatin. The drug helped her manage the attack, but its cst tk a tll n her finances. Even with insurance, the medicine cst her $500 a mnth. She culdn't get help frm her dctr t find a mre affrdable alternative, s she weaned herself ff—then came the accident.