全国百强校2025年新高考英语复习读后续写提分课件7 第七讲　结尾画龙点睛　升华回应主题

这是一份全国百强校2025年新高考英语复习读后续写提分课件7 第七讲　结尾画龙点睛　升华回应主题，共37页。PPT课件主要包含了一审审要素，At 500 pm，Linda，高效演练 素养提能等内容，欢迎下载使用。
　　一篇文章的结尾不仅能够揭示故事的结局，还能够和前文呼应，使整篇文章成为一个有机的整体。此外，一个令人印象深刻的结尾往往能够在读后续写中起到画龙点睛的作用。因而，在结尾中，往往需要用经典句式和高级词汇来点缀，由人见品质，由事及道理，起到点明中心和升华主题的作用。
/精彩结尾欣赏/1．As it turned ut, it was her selflessness and devtin that saved the ld lady. (强调句型)结果是她的无私与奉献救了这位老太太。实战应用：主题语境——人与社会——无私、善良、奉献
2．Walk the path f lve and kindness, and jy will be yur cnstant cmpanin.(祈使句＋and＋陈述句)走在充满爱与善意的路上，快乐将会一直伴随左右。实战应用：主题语境——人与社会——人际关系、友好相处3．Smetimes giving frm ur need instead f ur abundance is just what we need t d！(v.-ing作主语；what引导表语从句)　有时候把我们需要的而不是富足的东西给予别人恰恰是我们要做的！实战应用：主题语境——人与社会——身处窘境也乐于伸出援手
4．Stepping ut nt nly helped a brther in need, but als gave ur kids the sweet taste f helping thers.(v.-ing作主语； nt als...)挺身而出不仅帮助了一个有需要的兄弟，也让我们的孩子们品尝到了帮助别人的美好滋味。实战应用：主题语境——人与社会——予人玫瑰，手留余香
5．We shuld pay mre attentin t the wrld where we live and appreciate hw the human beings and animals live tgether/live in harmny.(where引导定语从句)我们应该更多地关注我们生活的世界，欣赏人类和动物是如何和谐共处的。实战应用：主题语境——人与自然——人与自然和谐相处
6．If it had been my dg, I'd hpe that smebdy wuld be willing t g that extra mile/truble.(虚拟语气)如果那是我的狗，我也希望有人愿意为它多费力气。实战应用：主题语境——人与自然——关爱宠物，友好相处
7．I think I am a much better persn tday than I used t be, and I hpe I will nt frget these experiences.(than引导比较状语从句)我想，与原来相比，现在我是一个更好的自己了，并且我希望自己不会忘了这些经历。实战应用：主题语境——人与自我——关注自我变化和自我成长
8．It's such a privilege t be a part f these kids' lives, even just fr a few hurs, getting t knw them and hearing their stries. (it作形式主语)能成为这些孩子生活的一部分是一种莫大的荣幸，哪怕只有几个小时，了解他们，聆听他们的故事。实战应用：主题语境——人与社会——无私帮助并参与有需要的孩子的生活
9．Lking back, I feel blessed smene had wanted t help a stranger.(v.-ing 作状语)　回首往事，很幸运有人乐于帮助(我这样)一个陌生人。实战应用：主题语境——人与社会——感恩素昧平生的陌生人的帮助
10．One thing is fr certain—Larry went abve and beynd the call f duty by getting s clse t the burning vehicle. His effrts mst likely saved the wman's life.(by ding 作方式状语)有一点是肯定的——拉里如此接近着火的汽车，超出了职责范围。他的努力很可能救了那个女人的命。实战应用：主题语境——人与社会——客观叙述乐于助人的品质
11．常用谚语Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。Actin speaks luder than wrds.　言胜于行。A friend in need is a friend indeed.　患难见真情。A gd beginning is half dne.良好的开端是成功的一半。
All rads lead t Rme.　条条大路通罗马。A miss is as gd as a mile.失之毫厘，差之千里。When in Rme, d as the Rmans d. 入乡随俗。Hnesty is the best plicy.　诚实为上策。
[典题示例]　　阅读下面的材料，完成以下任务。　　Jack, a clerk at the lcal bank, was wandering alne n the street. It was a cld, silent winter night. His mind was n his wife Linda, wh had been in a car accident tw mnths ag and was nw lying in a hspital bed, waiting fr mre mney fr her peratin. Jack had sld everything he had, and he had tried his best t brrw mney frm all the peple and banks he culd. But the real wrld is cruel.
　　A large amunt f mney was still needed. T Jack, it wuld mean a great deal f suffering t see his wife die withut any help. “I have nly ne ptin left, ”Jack said t himself. Then he went t the bank, his wrkplace, again. Fr several days, he bserved the bank and planned a theft.
　　The next day, he went t wrk as usual. Everything seemed nrmal: he jked with his wrkmates and helped his clients as he always did. But n ne nticed that he had brught a bigger suitcase t wrk, instead f the small ne he always carried. At 5：00 pm, the bank clsed, and the clerks and the guards had all gne hme.
Hwever, at that mment, Jack was in the bathrm, and the guards didn't ntice him, f curse. When the nises cming frm the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark, Jack came ut frm the bathrm. He first cut the lines f the alarms and mnitrs with tls frm his new suitcase.
　　He was all t familiar with the equipment since he had been wrking there fr 8 years and had been studying the security system fr the past 30 days. Using a special key and sme ther tls, he then easily pened the drs f the safes. The bank's security system wasn't very gd, which allwed Jack t take a lt f mney. Several minutes later, Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with mney.　　注意：续写词数应为150左右。
　　After Jack had been gne frm the bank fr a while, the alarms began t ring._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　But the mst unlucky man was the manager f the bank, an ld man.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[解题技法]1．通读全文　本文文体为：
n the street
winter night
The next day
When the nises cming frm the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark
the manager f the bank
waiting fr mre mney fr her peratin
planned a theft
cut the lines f the alarms and mnitrs
pened the drs f the safes
take a lt f mney
left the bank
3.二定——定主题主题：T save his wife, Jack made a mistake and planned a theft. But what the ld man went thrugh tuched him and he decided t turn himself in.发人深省的结尾______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One pssible versin：As it turned ut, hnesty is really the best plicy.
　　阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。　　(2022·惠州高三调研)I received an urgent call frm my aunt. “Turn n the TV. Granny's n the Channel 10 news.” It turned ut that Granny had made a sandwich run fr her ffice and was stpped at a red light dwntwn. She had the windw rlled dwn t enjy the breeze when a man rushed up t the driver's side windw, intending t carjack (劫车) her.
　　Nw, what the wuld-be carjacker culdn't have knwn was that this wman simply wasn't “a granny”. This was Nancy Jhnsn—the same wman wh wned and lived n a Texas cattle farm, drve her wn tractrs, and dug her wn pst hles t lay fence. The week befre, she had sht a rattlesnake and chpped ff its head with a shvel. She was the prud wner f the new minivan (小型货车) she was driving. In ther wrds, she was nt yur nrmal kind f granny.
　　The carjacker leaned int the pen windw, ne hand stuffed in his pcket, and said, “Get ut f this car. I have a gun, and I will sht yu.” A statement like that wuld have terrified anyne else. Instead, Granny saw it as a challenge. “If yu really had a gun in yur pcket, yu wuld have pulled it ut and led with that first，” she shuted at him, apparently unwrried.
　　She was right. The criminal didn't have a gun. He instead reached int the windw, grabbed her, and tried t pull her ut f the van. He pulled pen the dr, wildly catching Granny's arms. Granny leaned her shulder inside t press the hrn (喇叭) and started yelling t make peple arund ntice what was happening. With the dr nw pen, she held tight the steering wheel with ne arm and started kicking the man anywhere her ft culd make cntact. This tall wman had quite a reach.　　注意：续写词数应为150左右。
　　After a well-placed kick, the man was dne, and attempted t release her and run._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　Later, we asked, “Granny, dn't yu realize yu culd have gt yurself killed？”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One pssible versin：After a well-placed kick, the man was dne, and attempted t release her and run. But Granny wuldn't stand fr that. It was nw her turn t grab nt him, her hands made strng frm hurs and hurs f farm wrk. That pr fl didn't have a chance. She shuted fr help t bystanders, and they rushed t her aid. With Granny leading the charge, a grup f strangers came tgether and pinned the man t the sidewalk, hlding him there until the plice came. A silver-haired wman had just made a citizen's arrest.