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目录
真题呈现 1
答案解析 2
研读材料 3
思维拓展 3
谋篇布局 5
满分语料分类背诵10类68例 5
满分秘诀一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 5
满分秘诀二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 6
满分秘诀三、独立主格结构/with复合结构 6
满分秘诀四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 6
满分秘诀五、介词短语位于句首 7
满分秘诀六、环境描写 8
满分秘诀七、主题升华句 8
范文背诵 9
真题呈现
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther’s Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jenna fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jeff t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff’s hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear! The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
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【简要分析】
【原文解读】
本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起
饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母
亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。
【续写线索】帮助——指导——积极——献礼——感动
【段落续写】
1.由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
2.由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。
第二节 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. Knwing what they were preparing fr, he was greatly surprised. S immediately, he ffered t get invlved in the kids’ jb. Firstly, he put the pt f prridge n a gentle heat, asking Jeff t watch ut fr it ging fr fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna t break anther tw eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparatins dne, they started t fry bread tgether. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. T their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. Eyes pened, the wman heard a harmnius “Happy Mther’s Day” frm her twin kids with ht, sweet breakfast befre her. Behind the children std their father. T shed light n the game f the gift, he tld the mther the whle stry. After learning abut what happened, she rse quickly t gaze at the by’s hand with mved tears rlling dwn her cheeks. “Thank yu, my hney!” said the mther.
【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。
2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist
②完成：finish/cmplete
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①高兴：happy/delighted
②感动：mved/tuched
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key t success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. It was nt nly the breakfast, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much. (固定短语nt nly…but (als)和强调句型)
研读材料
一、读大意，抓中心主题
双胞胎Jeff和Jenna准备在母亲节为母亲做法式吐司和鸡肉粥的早餐，母亲节当天，他们先煮粥，然后把面包放进鸡蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二块面包将要煎成功的时候，沸腾的粥把火熄灭了，厨房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也烫伤了，Jenna帮他用冷水冲手的时候闻到了面包烧焦的味道。
二、读人物，找续写人物
读续写两段的首句可知，Dad ,Mm和twins是续写内容的关键人物
三、读时态，选续写时态
通读全文可知，该故事主要是用一般过去时讲述的，故续写内容的时态也应一致。
四、读结构，辨划分方式
弄清故事的结构特点及表现形式，选择合适的方式划分段落，常用的有4种：
1.以时空变化划分(指时间和地点)；
2.以人物思想感情的变化来划分；
3.按记叙内容的变化来划分；
4.按描述角度的变化、事情发展的阶段来划分。
再看回真题，一开始，这对双胞胎在母亲节前就在策划给母亲的惊喜，而后是在母亲节当天，两人在厨房为母亲准备早餐。而由续写两段首句可知，续写第一段这对Twins还是在厨房里，第二段是在楼上妈妈的卧室里，人物所处地点不断变化，由此可知, 题目是按照时空变化来划分的。而我们在构思续写内容时也应在这两个地点的基础上进行拓展。
五、读语言，定风格特色
挖掘文本语言表达风格，模仿原文语言写句子。使续写部分的语言风格与原文的风格相一致，以促进语言协同。此外，如果原文有较多对话, 续写也可出现对话；如原文没有对话, 尽量少用对话形式。
思维导图
谋篇布局
续写第一段：
根据续写第二段提示句可知，早餐最终被做好了，因此本段可围绕“爸爸出现”后给予双胞胎的帮助展开故事情节，可以是爸爸给他们指出补救办法，或者爸爸直接帮忙，不管是哪种构思，双胞胎做早餐的困难在本段应该得到解决。
续写第二段：
根据提示句可知双胞胎已经端着早餐上楼并叫醒妈妈，因此本段可围绕双胞胎见到妈妈后的故事展开，可以穿插双胞胎和妈妈之间的对话，还可以提到爸爸假装睡觉，最后可以通过自然式结尾，给故事画上句号，或通过主题式结尾，突出“亲情”、“劳动”、“克服困难、解决问题”等主题。
语料背诵
满分秘诀一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语）
1.一看到这一片狼藉，他的下巴就惊吓掉了。
1. His jaw drpped pen at the sight f the great mess.
2.如释重负的泪水像一条断了的珍珠项链一样滚落下来。
2. Tears f relief rlled dwn like a brken pearl necklace.
3.很快，厨房里弥漫着早餐的香味。
3. Sn, the delicius smell f breakfast filled the kitchen.
4.母亲面带微笑，灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。
4. The mther’s face beamed and her shining smile lit up the rm.
5.很快，一份精心设计的法式吐司和一碗粥就做好了。
5. Sn, a well-designed French tast and a bwl f prridge were ready.
6.当她看到早餐时，眼睛睁大了，兴奋得闪闪发光。
6. When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up and twinkled with excitement.
7.她的眼睛在早餐和双胞胎之间徘徊，好像在问发生了什么事。
7. Her eyes wandered between the breakfast and the twins as if she was asking what happened.
8、整个上午，大家沐浴在幸福家庭的温暖中，度过了一段幸福的时光。
8. That whle mrning witnessed a happy time with everyne bathed in the warmth f a happy family.
9.她一注意到早餐端到床上，脸上就闪过一丝兴奋。
9. The instant she nticed the breakfast was brught in bed, a ripple f excitement flashed thrugh her face.
10.食物的香味弥漫在卧室里，仿佛变了魔法，卧室变成了世界上最可爱的地方。
10. The scent f the fd filled the bedrm, which, as if by magic, had turned int the mst lvely place in the wrld.
满分秘诀二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型）
11.杰夫又吃了一片面包，这一次一切都很完美。
11. Jeff put in anther slice f bread and this time everything was perfect.
12.他们拥抱着她，喊道：“妈妈，母亲节快乐！”
12. They hugged her and yelled "Happy Mther’s Day, Mummy!"
13.父亲拿出药盒，在詹娜的手上涂了一些药。
13. Father fetched the medicine bx and applied sme medicine t Jenna’s hand.
14.妈妈咬了一口三明治，大声说这是她吃过的最好的三明治。
14. Mther bit int a sandwich and exclaimed it was the best sandwich she had ever tasted.
15.他们的母亲立刻坐了起来，紧紧地拥抱着他们，感激他们做的丰盛早餐。
15. Their mther sat up right away, hugged them tightly and appreciated them fr their brilliant breakfast.
满分秘诀三、独立主格结构/with复合结构
16.他们的父亲发现了混乱的局面，明白了一切。
16. Sptting the messy situatin, their father understd everything.
17.一切都解决了，父亲离开了厨房，答应保守他们的秘密。
17. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, prmising t keep their secret.
18.詹娜哭了，悔恨和内疚像无尽的潮水一样淹没了她。
18. Jenna cried with regret and guilt verwhelming her like endless tides.
19.他们的父亲困惑地问他们，心中闪过一丝愤怒。
19. Their father asked them cnfusedly with a sense f anger flating up in his mind.
20.母亲深深地感动了，说了声“谢谢”，拥抱着孩子们，泪水模糊了她的眼睛。
20. Deeply tuched, the mther said “Thank yu” and hugged the kids, tears blurring her eyes.
21.母亲热泪盈眶，紧紧地搂着他们。
21. With tears welling up in her eyes, the mther threw her arms arund them tightly.
22.父亲吓了一跳，倒在地上，皱着眉头望着现场。
22.Astnished, Father was rted n the flr, staring at the scene with eyebrw frwning.
23.这对双胞胎大喊“母亲节快乐”，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
23. The twins yelled “Happy Mther’s Day”, with their eyes twinkling with excitement.
24.由于每个人都扮演不同的角色，没过多久，他们三个人就完成了所有的事情。
24. With everyne sharing different rles, it didn’t take lng fr the three f them t get everything dne.
25.母亲搂着双胞胎，紧紧地拥抱着他们，眼泪从脸颊上流下。
25. Mther threw her arms arund the twins and hugged them tightly, with mving tears streaming dwn frm cheeks.
满分秘诀四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等）
26.父亲看到这里一片狼藉，吓得僵住了，好像在地上扎了根似的。
26. Seeing the mess, Father frze with shck, as if rted n the grund.
27.听到这些话，这对双胞胎点了点头，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
27. Hearing the wrds, the twins ndded their heads, their eyes shining with excitement.
28.看着诱人的早餐，他们激动得失去了说话的能力。
28. Lking at the inviting breakfast, they were deprived f all pwer f speech by excitement.
29.听到这些话，这对双胞胎点了点头，眼睛里闪烁着激动的光芒。
29. Hearing the wrds, the twins ndded, with their eyes sparkling with great excitement.
30.看着精心准备的早餐，三人会心一笑。
30. Lking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
31.他们把早餐递给她，大喊“母亲节快乐！给你一个大惊喜！”
31. They handed the breakfast t her, yelling “Happy Mther's Day! A big surprise fr yu!”
32.她站起来，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，说：“这将是我一生中最好的早餐。”。"
32. She gt up and held the twins tightly in her arms, saying ''This will be the best breakfast in my life. "
33.看到他们灰心丧气的脸，他叫他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们给妈妈做早餐。
33. Seeing their discuraged faces, he tld them t clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast fr Mther.
34.看到美味的早餐，这对双胞胎可以想象他们的母亲在享用时会多么惊讶和自豪。
34. Seeing the delicius breakfast, the twins culd imagine hw surprised and prud their mther wuld be when enjying it.
35.她瞪大了眼睛，忍不住品尝着早餐，骄傲地说这是她吃过的最好的早餐。
35. Her eyes widened and she culd nt help tasting the breakfast, saying prudly it was the best breakfast she had ever had.
满分秘诀五、介词短语位于句首
36.一瞬间，厨房的空气中弥漫着甜甜的味道。
36. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
37.说完之后，杰夫结结巴巴地说出了他们的计划，脸涨得通红。
37. After that, Jeff stammered ut their plan, his face flushing.
38.一看到脏乱的厨房，他就知道发生了什么事。
38. At the sight f the messy kitchen, he knew what had happened.
39.他毫不犹豫地关上了锅下的火。
39. Withut hesitatin, he turned ff the fire burning under the pan.
40.让他们欣慰的是，在父亲的指导下，他们成功地做好了早餐。
40. T their relief, with the guidance f father, they successfully made the breakfast.
41.一看到法式吐司和粥，他们的妈妈就哭了：“太惊喜了！”
41. At the sight f the French tast and prridge, their mum let ut a cry, “What a surprise!”
42.他们的父亲没有责怪他们的粗心大意，而是灿烂地微笑着拍拍他们的头。
42. Instead f blaming them fr their carelessness, their father put n a bright smile and patted n their heads.
43.不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲做了一些鸡蛋三明治，煮了一些燕麦粥。
43. Within an hur, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made sme egg sandwiches and cked sme at prridge.
44.在父亲的指导下，他们收拾残局，成功地做了法式吐司和鸡肉粥。
44. Under their father’s instructin, they cleaned up the mess and succeeded in making French tast and chicken prridge.
满分秘诀六、形容词、副词短语位于句首
45.他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，轻声说：“谢谢，我的孩子们。”
45. Shcked and prud, their mther said in a sweet whisper, “Thanks, my kids.”
46.很快，美味诱人的法式吐司和鸡肉粥就做好了。
46. Sn the delicius and inviting French tast and chicken prridge were ready.
满分秘诀七、直接引语/简洁对话
47.他轻轻地拍了拍，安慰道：“别担心，我会帮你修的。”
47. He patted them gently, cmfrting “Dn't wrry! I'll help yu fix it.”
48.“惊喜！妈妈，母亲节快乐！”他们说着，把胳膊举向空中。
48. “Surprise! Happy mther’s day, mummy!” They said, thrwing their arms int the air.
49.他笑着小声对他们说：“哇，你们两个真让我惊讶，我能和你们一起去吗？”
49. He whispered t them with a smile, “Ww, yu tw really surprised me, can I jin yu?”
50.“别慌！”他递给每个人一条湿毛巾，帮助他们迅速清理残局。
50. “Dn’t panic!” he handed each ne a wet twel, helping them clean the mess quickly.
51. 这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。”
51. “Thank yu, my hney.” the happiest mther in the wrld kept repeating these wrds.
满分秘诀八、特殊句式（倒装、强调、感叹）
52.惊喜来得太突然他们的母亲没有意识到发生了什么事。
52. S sudden was the surprise that their mther didn't realize what had happened.
53.她非常高兴，紧紧地抱着双胞胎，喜悦的泪水夺眶而出。
53. S delighted was she that she hugged the twins tightly, tears f jy welling up in her eyes.
54.她羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。
54. S ashamed was she that she shed guilty tears with head drping.
55.他们的母亲突然没有意识到发生了什么事。
55. S sudden was the surprise that their mther didn't realize what had happened.
56.妈妈刚一醒来，就发现了美味的早餐。
56. N sner had mther wken up than she sptted the delicius breakfast.
57.家庭的爱有助于做出最美味的早餐。
57. It is the family lve that helps make the mst delicius breakfast.
58.在任何情况下，他们的母亲都没有想到她的一天会以这样一份温暖的礼物开始。
58.Under n circumstances had their mther expected her day t start with such a warm gift.
满分秘诀九、环境描写
59.阳光透过窗户照在骄傲的母亲脸上。
59. The sun was shining n the prud mther’s face thrugh the windws.
60.清晨的阳光洒进来，全家人沐浴在爱和幸福之中。
60. The early sunlight streaming in, the whle family were bathed in lve and happiness.
61.沐浴在阳光下，他们一起享用早餐。
61. Bathed in the sunshine, they enjyed the breakfast tgether.
满分秘诀十、主题升华句
62.整个房间都沐浴在母亲节快乐的气氛中。
62.The whle rm was bathed in a happy Mther's Day atmsphere.
63. 他们的父亲站在门口，记下这感动的场面。
63.他们的父亲站在门旁，记录着这感人的一幕。
63. Their father was standing beside the dr, recrding this tuching scene.
64.这位父亲用相机记录下了令人难忘的一幕。多么令人惊喜的母亲节啊。
64. Using the camera, the father recrded the memrable scene. What a Mther’s Day Surprise.
65.沉浸在家庭的爱中，妈妈高兴地说：“你们三个让我过得很开心！”
65. Immersed in the lve f the family, mm said in delight, “Yu three have made my day!”
66.一家人聚在精心设计的早餐旁，沉浸在幸福和感激之中。
66. Gathering arund the well-designed breakfast, the whle family was immersed in happiness and gratitude.
67. 她立马明白了一切，感觉到一股暖流在她心里涌动，奔腾而来。
67. She understd the whle thing at nce and felt a warm current welling up in her heart and surging thrugh her.
68. 妈妈吻了吻他们，灿烂的笑 “亲爱的谢谢你们。真是个大惊喜！”
68. Mther kissed them and smiled dazzlingly “Oh dear, thank yu my sweeties. What a big surprise!”
范文背诵
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. “Dn’t panic!” their father handed each f them a wet twel, helping them clean the mess up quickly. After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare breakfast. The twins acted as their father’s little helpers, and it was a pleasure t team up with their father. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take lng befre the French tast and chicken prridge were ready. Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, prmising t keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. “Happy Mther’s Day!” shuted the twins. “And we have a surprise fr yu!” S sweet was the surprise that Mther excitedly shk Father, wh was pretending t snre. Her face lit up with happiness. Mther hugged the twins and shwed her thanks. She tasted a piece f French tast and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Lve filled the whle rm. What a beautiful and sweet surprise!