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【考情分析】
【写作指导】
读后续写中涉及常见话题“野外遇险”中大多是遭遇如狗熊、狼等猛兽。（如2017年浙江卷“野外遇到狼的袭击”）相关词块及句式如下：
词汇积累
【素材宝库】
金句积累
With nthing in the hand, they didn't dare t fight against the wlf.
他们手里什么也没有，不敢与狼搏斗。
Mac then jumped ff the bicycle and was ready t fight against the wlf.
然后，麦克跳下了自行车，准备与狼搏斗。
In the meanwhile, the wlf might feel the peple's threats arund, s it began t step back slwly.
与此同时，狼可能会感觉到周围人们的威胁，所以它开始慢慢地后退。
Then it lunged at the back f Mac’s bike, tearing pen his tent bag.
然后它冲向麦克的自行车后面，撕开了他的帐篷袋.
With ne hand n the bars, he fired the bear spray at the wlf.
他单手紧握自行车把手，朝狼喷防熊喷雾剂。
The wlf was bearing dwn, just a dzen yards away nw.
狼正向前下来，现在就在十几码之外.
A bit later they sptted a wlf lping with immense strides alngside a man n a bike.
不久之后，他们发现一匹狼在骑车人的旁边大步疾跑。
Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bike as if it were a
kill. Shrtly after, the animal ran ff.
Becky从后窗望去，看见那匹狼站在Mac的自行车旁边观察，好像这是它的猎物似的。不久，这野兽跑掉了。
The night was dark, the snw blew cntinually, and the dark fir-trees rared all arund us.
夜很黑，雪不停地刮，黑暗的冷杉树在我们周围呼啸。
He just grwled and went back t trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws.
它只是咆哮着，又试图用它那巨大的爪子撕掉栅栏。
He clawed, bit, and shved the wire mesh. He std n his hind legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
他抓，咬，推铁丝网。他用后腿站起来，推着木栅栏的柱子。
At the the sight f a huge timber wlf, I frze in my tracks.
一看到一只巨大的木狼，我就僵住了脚步。
Jim’s muscles twitched. All he wanted was t get away frm here.
吉姆的肌肉抽搐。他只想离开这里。
There was a dead silence except fr the sund f her heavy breathing and sniffing.
除了她沉重的呼吸声和嗅探声之外，一片一片寂静。
My heart in my muth, I sat dwn eight feet frm her.
我的心提到了嗓子眼里，我坐在离她八英尺远的地方。
He culd hear nthing but the sund f his hearts thrbbing vilently in his chest.
他什么也听不见，只有他的心在他的胸口剧烈地跳动着的声音。
Terrified, she lked dwn at the hles which were as deep as graves.
她吓坏了，低头看着那些像坟墓一样深的洞。
His heart beat s vilently that he felt nearly suffcated.
他的心跳如此剧烈，几乎窒息了。
S frightened was he that he was frzen n the spt.
他非常害怕，当场就呆住了。
A shiver f fright ran thrugh him when the wlf stared at him in silence.
当狼默默地盯着他时，他吓了一阵寒颤。
万能写作模板
Step 1 通读语篇，精准理解
1．语篇类型：记叙文
2．关键信息:根据记叙文六要素wh, when, where, what, why, hw, 把握故事梗概.
Step 2 把握全局，梳理故事情节
Step 3 推动情节，寻找线索，展开续写
1．发现问题
2．情节发展
设置矛盾与冲突
合理的解决办法
3．主旨升华
Step 4 激活表达，精品输出
语言润色
运用丰富高级的词汇
多变句式结构9r
2．结构衔接
3．高分范文赏读
【 高考真题】
1.（2017年浙江卷读后续写）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled (骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He fund ut his can f hear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t shw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wlf’s teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn’t think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As The Jungle Bk sng Bear Necessities ges, “frget abut yur wrries and yur cnflict” can be a little bit difficult when yu find yurself face t face with a real bear.
Bears are cmmn in the Nrthern Hemisphere. As human habitats stretch tward the wilderness, mre and mre animals crss their paths with thse f humans. This can lead t dangerus encunters especially when precautins are nt in place. In these situatins, keeping yur distance is still the best advice.
Accrding t the Natinal Park Service, ne shuld als remain calm as bears, mre ften than nt, are nt really willing t attack yu. Once in a standff (对峙), avid making sudden mves r lud nises as these can trigger aggressin. 7-year-ld Huxley did exactly what he was tld when he encuntered a massive bear.
It was a Sunny mrning. Huxley was wandering n his way hme when a big hulking (笨重的) figure emerges frm behind him. A hurried glance backward, he knew it was a black bear. The bear apprached cautiusly at first, prbably sizing up the figure in frnt f him. A secnd later, perhaps judging that Huxley was n match fr it, the bear burst int a full sprint (冲刺) and ran its way tward the by.
At first, Huxley was really frightened. Hwever, he knew it was impssible t run r fight with the big beast. In the mment f crisis, he remembered his mther reminds him regularly abut these pssible encunters. She tells him that if Huxley finds himself face t face with a bear and there are n adults arund, he shuld remain calm.
Huxley calmed dwn at thinking f this. He stared at the bear dwn withut any mvement. This might have been the reasn why the yung bear stpped dead in its tracks. They faced each ther mtinless, and there was nly a ft distance between them.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Frm arund the crner, a neighbr hurriedly walked t the scene.
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The neighbr cntinued t pressure the bear while the animal tried its best t find an escape rute.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Evan was 13, he wanted t have a dg. His mm Octavia refused since raising a dg wuld need lts f attentin and care.
The by nce jined the Frest Explratin club f his schl where Octavia taught. And the mther was in charge f the club. One mrning, guided by Octavia, Evan and his schlmates went hiking in a frest. During the hike, sme purple flwers caught Evan’s eye. Evan thught thse beautiful flwers culd surely impress his mther. S he walked t the riverside secretly t pick thse flwers. Unfrtunately, Evan gt separated frm the grup and gt lst.
He anxiusly kept walking, hping he culd catch up with the grup. Suddenly, a dg appeared. At first, Evan thught it might be a wlf, s he tensed and std there still. When the dg gt clser, he saw its tail wagging (摇摆) gently.
“Oh, buddy. Yu scared me,” he said, petting the dg. “Yu must be a stray (走失的) dg, huh?” The dg lked at him with the mst sincere expressin. Evan wanted t find his way hme, nt nly fr himself but als fr the animal. Therefre, he walked again. The mment Octavia realized Evan was gne, she and thers began lking fr Evan desperately, but in vain.
It was getting darker and clder. Evan discvered a cave. He went inside and made a fire t keep warm. He knew his mm and ther schlmates must have been searching the frest fr him. “Buddy, let’s wait here and see if we can hear my grup calling,” Evan tld the dg. And they sat near each ther. Befre lng, Evan fell asleep.
At sme pint, he heard the sund f animal grwling (低声吼叫) and nticed the dg at the entrance f their shelter. The dg was grwling at smething that Evan culdn’t see well. But there was anther animal grwling back. Evan wiped his eyes and tried t see what made the dg s alert and angry. He then saw a big fx, and said t himself, “Thank gdness! I’m nt alne!” But he was still frightened. The fx mved frward, wanting t attack Evan.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Withut stepping back, the brave dg cntinued barking, ready t attack the fx.
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“It’s my mm! Let’s g!” Evan excitedly tld the dg and ran t Octavia.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a kid in Pennsylvania, my family rehabilitated (康复治疗) wild animals. I grew up with raccns (浣熊) and a fx running arund the huse. We wuld g travelling t Bermuda and I wuld watch the whales ff the shre. I fell in lve with them and wanted t knw mre abut what they gt up t underwater. Nw I’ve been studying whales fr mre than 30 years and am the president f the Center fr Cetacean Research and Cnservatin.
In 2017, I was n a bat arund Rartnga in the Ck Islands, wrking n a film abut whale cnservatin. The crew wanted t get mre ftage (镜头) f me in the water with the humpback whales — I ften slip in quietly t recrd their behaviur fr research. Seeing a cuple f humpbacks in the distance, I slid ff the bat wearing a snrkel mask and a GPr, and swam twards them.
As I was appraching, ne f the male humpbacks came right up t me, nuzzling (用鼻爱抚) me with his head and pushing me thrugh the water. I felt a rush f pleasure mixed with fear. I tried t keep calm, never taking my eyes ff him. Then the whale swam underneath me and lifted me ut f the water n his flipper (鳍). I signalled t the bat, then — swsh — I was pushed back under.
After seven and a half minutes f being pushed arund by the humpback, I saw what I thught was a secnd, smaller whale. But then I nticed the tail — whales mve theirs up and dwn, and this ne was mving side t side. I realized with hrrr that it belnged t a huge, 18ft tiger shark! Tiger sharks are knwn t attack peple, smetimes fatally (致命的).
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The shark had arched its bdy in attack mde.
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I tld the whale that I lved him and thanked him as he was t swim ff.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grady and his family g camping every summer. As it was becming htter, here came the camping time.
Having planned the camp lng, the family finally decided the destinatin—the Great Natinal Frest. With fd, necessity and ckers laded nt the car, the family squeezed (挤进) int the car. The car dr clsed, heat was shut utside.
In the car, Jared, Grady’s yunger brther was playing with a ty, making great nise. Grady’s mther talked excitedly with his father. As sn as he sat in the car, Grady put n the earphnes and turned n the music. He neither wanted t jin his brther nr jined any talk. After what seemed t be hurs, the car stpped where they headed. Grady threw dwn his backpack and slammed (砰地关上) the car dr.
“This will be a lengthy week,” he said unhappily t n ne in particular. He lked arund the campgrund. Hundreds f tall and green fir trees cvered the muntainside like a green carpet. The sun wuld be setting sn. Grady thught maybe the heat wuldn’t be unbearable. But actually nw in the muntain, the ht July left him extremely uncmfrtable.
Grady hated camping, but it was smething his family insisted n every summer. His father liked cking ver an pen air, telling stries abut hw t survive things like bear attacks and bites f bees. His mther and Jared liked t hike and take pictures f animals. Jared had a cllectin f insect pictures that he had put n the walls in his half f their rm. Grady thught they were just scary and that Jared was a strange kid.
They set up camp—tw tents, ne fr his parents and ne fr himself and Jared. While everyne else started preparing dinner, Grady, lking fr sme place t cl dwn, set ff fr the nearby river, which was deep enugh t swim in.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Grady gt clse t the river, he saw a cute bear cub (幼崽).
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Turning arund, he saw an angry bear mving fast twards him.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Frtunate Escape
“Truth r Dare, Ben?” Max questined. Max, Ben and I were walking hme tgether while I tk small bites f the beef burger I had grabbed frm a shp nearby. “Truth r Dare” was a game we usually played t amuse urselves n the lengthy, bring jurney hme. Ben wanted a dare. “Well, Ben, I dare yu t carry my bag all the way hme!” Max cmmanded as we laughed at pr Ben’s truble.
As Ben pulled the heavy bag up his shulder and adjusted the bag straps, he nticed that Max’s bag was partially pen. When he hurriedly put it n his back, an bject flew ut f the bag, and ver the fence f ur neighbur’s huse.
“Oh, n,” Max cried, “I think that was my English assignment.” Stretching his hand ut and trying t crawl(爬)under the fence t save the paper, Ben fund that it was just ut f reach.
“Well, I guess I’ll just have t climb ver the fence t get it,” Ben said. He was barely able t climb up, using the small gaps in the wden fence as handhlds as the fence was nearly as tall as him(which was nt very tall), and lw enugh fr smething t be thrwn ver it. Sliding dwn the fence, Ben grabbed the valued piece f paper, cmplaining abut injured dignity. Just then, a lud and frightening bark cut his wrds shrt.
“Wf, Wf!” Our neighbur, Mr Masn, wned a German shepherd(kind f dg), well-knwn fr its fierceness, which guarded the huse. It was smething we had verlked, t fcused n bringing back Max’s assignment. Ben’s legs trembled like jelly and his face turned a deathly white as the German shepherd advanced slwly n him like a wlf mving twards its target.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Max and I stared at it in fear.
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Just then I caught sight f my half-eaten burger n the path.
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6．阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tm was a skilled teenage surfer. He had always been attracted by the cean and the challenge f riding its waves. He had trained tirelessly fr years, sharpening his skills and perfecting his technique. He had participated in many cmpetitins and wn several titles. But ne day, his wrld was turned upside dwn.
It was a rutine training day. While Tm was cncentrating n his training in the sea, a shark came in thrugh the brken shark-prf net and apprached him. The animal kncked ver Tm’s surfbard and bit his right leg, tearing thrugh his flesh (肉体) and causing massive damage. Despite the seriusness f his injuries, Tm was lucky t survive the attack. He was rushed t the hspital, where he received an emergency peratin. With the effrts f dctrs, his leg was saved.
Tm’s recvery was lng and painful, but he refused t give up n his dream f surfing. At first, his prgress was slw. He had t learn t walk again, and then t run, and then t jump. Every mvement was a struggle. But with the help f his family and friends, as well as his wn fierce determinatin, Tm gradually began t make prgress. He spent hurs every day in the gym, ding strength and balance exercises t rebuild his bdy.
Finally, after mnths f hard wrk, Tm was ready t get back int the water. His first training was incredibly difficult, as he struggled t vercme his fear f the cean and the memry f the shark attack. But gradually, he began t regain his cnfidence and his lve fr surfing. As his strength and skills returned, Tm set his sights n cmpeting nce again. He trained tirelessly, wrking with a cach t perfect his technique and imprve his perfrmance. And finally, the day f the cmpetitin arrived.
注意：
1．所续写的短文词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Standing in frnt f the starting line again, Tm felt nervus．
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Tm fell int the sea．
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