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【考情分析】
【写作指导】
把握建议信的写作框架。建议信一般是对他人求助的回复。是向别人提出合理可行的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、解决特定问题的一种回复信件。其写作时一般以第一人称和第二人称为主，主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。建议内容要合情合理，具有合理性和说服性。其写作框架如下：
第一段：回顾对方的诉求，表明写作目的。
第二段：提出具体建议并说明理由。
第三段：希望对方接受建议并希望建设对其有帮助。
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之第一段
词汇积累之第二段
词汇积累之第三段
谚语积累
A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
T save time is t lengthen life. 节约时间就是延长生命。
Time lst cannt be wn again. 时光一去不复返。
.The chief aim f man is nt t get mney. 人的主要目的并不是赚钱。
The mney the miser hards will d him n gd. 守财奴积财，对自己毫无好处。
An apple a day keeps the dctr away. 一天一苹果，不用请医生。
Preventin is better than cure. 预防胜于治疗。
All wrk and n play makes Jack a dull by. 只工作, 不玩耍, 聪明小伙也变傻。
Gd health is ver wealth. 健康是最大的财富。
Happiness lies first f all in health. 幸福首先在于健康。
Cntent is better than riches. 知足者常乐。
A gd beginning is half dne. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
Dn t put ff till tmrrw what shuld be dne tday. 今日事，今日毕。
Fact speak luder than wrds. 事实胜于雄辩。
A bird in the hand is wrth than tw in the bush. 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。
Strike the irn while it is ht. 趁热打铁。
When in Rme, d as the Rmans d. 入乡随俗。
Man prpses, gd dispses. 谋事在人，成事在天。
Lk befre yu leap. 摸清情况再行动。
Experience must be bught. 吃一堑，长一智。
Make hay while the sun shines. 良机勿失。
He wh des nt advance lses grund. 逆水行舟，不进则退。
.Every advantage has its disadvantage. 有利必有弊
He laughs best wh laughs last. 谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好。
It is the first step that csts trublesme. 万事开头难。
The farthest way abut is the nearest way hme. 抄近路反而绕远路。
Take things as they cme. 既来之，则安之
The early bird catches the wrm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
Dn't truble truble until truble trubles yu. 不要自找麻烦。
30. Dn 't try t teach yur grandmther t suck eggs. 不要班门弄斧子。
万能写作模板
Dear ___________ (建议对象)
Yu have asked me fr my advice n hw t ________________________（对方的寻求建议内容）. I’d like t ffer sme suggestins fr yu.
First f all, it is f great imprtance t ____________________________（建议1）， as yu can _________________________________（理由1）. Then, it als helps t ____________________________（理由2）. Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t _____________________________（建议2），because by ding sth ____________________________________（理由3）. Yu can als ____________________________（建议1）. I’m cnvinced ___________________________________（预测可能的结果）.
Please take my prpsals int cnsideratin. I hpe yu will find them useful.
Yurs sincerely,
_________（写信人）

【 高考真题】
1．（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→tip
提供：ffer→prvide
开展：carry ut→cnduct
主题：theme→tpic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
拓展句：Since yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．（2023年新高考I卷） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
3．（2019年天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl.It’s ur great pleasure t have yu visit ur schl and give a lecture n western art during the cming summer vacatin.
When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic. Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities. It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my advice, and I hpe that I can gain mre knwledge thrugh the lecture. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：prvide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：pprtunity→chance
采纳建议：take ne’s advice→fllw ne’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．（2023·河北沧州·沧州市第二中学校联考三模）假定你是某英文杂志心理咨询栏目的编辑李华。最近收到了读者Ellen的电子邮件，请你给她写一封回信。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ellen,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ellen,
I knw hw yu feel. Smetimes there is a difference between the peple we hang arund with and us. As a result, we may feel trn between being urselves and being frced t fllw suit. Hwever, it is imprtant t remember that it is natural.
First, ask yurself if it is really wrth being upset that yu are nt clse t peple with whm yu have very little in cmmn. Then stay strng and psitive. There are plenty f peple with the same interests and hbbiesas yu ut there. Als, I’m prud f yu: Shrt vides are incredibly addictive and everyne shuld avid them.
Yu’re lucky that this cmes naturally t yu.
I hpe yu can fllw yur heart and make full use f time.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是某英文杂志心理咨询栏目的编辑李华。最近收到了读者Ellen的电子邮件，根据Ellen陈述的问题给她回信，给一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
结果：as a result→as a cnsequence
重要的：imprtant→significant
乐观的：psitive→ptimistic
以……为骄傲：be prud f→take pride in
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Smetimes there is a difference between the peple we hang arund with and us. As a result, we may feel trn between being urselves and being frced t fllw suit,
拓展句：Smetimes there is a difference between the peple we hang arund with and us，as a result f which we may feel trn between being urselves and being frced t fllw suit,
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hwever, it is imprtant t remember that it is natural.（运用了it作形式主语）
【高分句型2】First, ask yurself if it is really wrth being upset that yu are nt clse t peple with whm yu have very little in cmmn. （运用了if引导宾语从句，that引导主语从句，和介词+关系代词引导定语从句）
2．（2023·辽宁铁岭·高三校联考期中）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary来信就如何有效地阅读一本书向你征求意见。请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括
1.写信目的；
2.给出建议；
3.表达期望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mary,
It’s great t hear frm yu. Knwing that yu are seeking advice n hw t effectively read a bk, I’m mre than delighted t share sme insights with yu.
Undubtedly, pre-reading cmes the first place. Befre diving int a bk, it is suggested that yu take a few mments t skim thrugh intrductins r summaries available. This will give yu a general idea f the bk’s main idea. In additin, yu are suppsed t highlight key pints and jt dwn any questin that arises while reading, thus staying engaged. Finally, after finishing a bk, it is necessary t reflect n what yu’ve learned t reinfrce yur understanding.
I hpe these tips are f help t yu. If yu have any further questins, please dn’t hesitate t reach ut. Happy reading!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的朋友Mary来信就如何有效地阅读一本书向你征求意见这一情况，给她回一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→ suggestin
高兴的：delighted → glad
此外：In additin→ What’s mre
加强：reinfrce→ strengthen
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Befre diving int a bk, it is suggested that yu take a few mments t skim thrugh intrductins r summaries available. This will give yu a general idea f the bk’s main idea.
合并句：Befre diving int a bk, it is suggested that yu take a few mments t skim thrugh intrductins r summaries available, which may give yu a general idea f the bk’s main idea.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knwing that yu are seeking advice n hw t effectively read a bk, I’m mre than delighted t share sme insights with yu.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句。）
【高分句型2】Finally, after finishing a bk, it is necessary t reflect n what yu’ve learned t reinfrce yur understanding. （运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句。）
3．（2023·江苏徐州·高三统考期中）你校学生会号召全体学生为了身体健康，杜绝一切电子产品。请针对学生会这项行动给校英文报写一篇投稿，内容包括：
1. 指出问题；2. 说明理由；3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Electrnic prducts: friendly r frightening?
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【答案】
Electrnic prducts: friendly r frightening?
Aiming t prtect ur health, the Students’ Unin calls n us t put all the electrnic prducts away, n which I’d like t make a cmment.
There’s n denying that if we depend n electrnic prducts t much, they will d harm t us. But that desn’t mean we have t put all f them away, as sme f them can really bring us much cnvenience. Fr instance, an e-bk is able t stre s many bks that we can take them everywhere and read them any time we want.
Therefre, it is advised that we use electrnic prducts t ur advantage and avid relying n them all the time.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文报写一篇投稿，报道你校学生会号召全体学生为了身体健康，杜绝一切电子产品这项活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
评论：cmment →remark
依赖：depend n→ rely n
对……有害：d harm t →be harmful t
例如：Fr instance→ Fr example
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：There’s n denying that if we depend n electrnic prducts t much, they will d harm t us.
拓展句：There is n denying that if we rely t much n electrnic prducts, they will be harmful t us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aiming t prtect ur health, the Students’ Unin calls n us t put all the electrnic prducts away, n which I’d like t make a cmment.（运用了介词n + which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】There’s n denying that if we depend n electrnic prducts t much, they will d harm t us.（运用了that引导的同位语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）
4．（2023·福建福州·高三闽侯县第一中学校联考期中）假定你是高中生李华。为了帮助来自英国的交换生们了解中国的四大名著，学校安排你和他们进行交流。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍四大名著;
2. 给出阅读建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gd afternn, dear friends! I’d like t briefly intrduce the Fur Great Classical Nvels f China t yu and give yu sme advice.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks fr listening.
【答案】One pssible versin:
Gd afternn, dear friends! I’d like t briefly intrduce the Fur Great Classical Nvels f China t yu and give yu sme advice.
The Fur Great Classical Nvels f China are thught t be the best nvels in Chinese literature, and they have had a significant influence n Chinese peple. What these nvels have in cmmn is that they were written in the spken language f their times. They might be difficult fr freigners t understand, s yu shuld get a Chinese dictinary ready fr reference. Besides, it wuld be helpful t knw sme backgrund knwledge abut Chinese histry. If yu have any questins abut these nvels, dn’t hesitate t ask me.
I hpe yu will enjy reading them.
Thanks fr listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为了帮助来自英国的交换生们了解中国的四大名著，学校安排你和他们进行交流。要求考生用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：influence→impact
困难的：difficult → challenging
此外：besides→ what’s mre
有帮助的：helpful→ beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： They might be difficult fr freigners t understand, s yu shuld get a Chinese dictinary ready fr reference.
拓展句： They might be difficult fr freigners t understand, s yu shuld get a Chinese dictinary ready fr reference, which is necessary fr yu.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What these nvels have in cmmn is that they were written in the spken language f their times. （运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导表语从句）
【高分句型2】If yu have any questins abut these nvels, dn’t hesitate t ask me.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
5．（2023·浙江金华·校联考一模）假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Peter组织的“英语角”活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, ne f yur students. I’m writing t render what I’ve fund abut students’ interest in ur English Crner.
Aimed at cultivating students’ interest in English leaning, yur English Crner undubtedly ffers us students a great platfrm t enhance ur English prficiency. Hwever, I’ve fund students lacking enthusiasm t get invlved lately. I think it wuld be a gd idea t shwcase the unique charm f English Cmer by adding mre interactive activities like English Drama Perfrmance. Additinally, why nt undertake a survey t knw abut what really interests students?
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd make a bit change, in which case, the English Crner will surely becme ne f the fndest memries rted in ur hearts.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你发现同学们参与外教Peter组织的“英语角”活动的兴趣不高，要求考生给外教Peter写封信提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供：render→prvide
培养：cultivate→develp
增强：enhance→imprve
独特的：unique→particular
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句： Hwever, I’ve fund students lacking enthusiasm t get invlved lately.
拓展句：Hwever, I’ve fund students wh lack enthusiasm t get invlved lately.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing t render what I’ve fund abut students’ interest in ur English Crner.(what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I wuld appreciate it if yu culd make a bit change, in which case, the English Crner will surely becme ne f the fndest memries rted in ur hearts.(if引导的条件状语从句)
6．（2023·北京朝阳·高三统考期中）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校国际部交换生Jim正在策划一次“中西文化交流”活动，作为好友，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动形式；
2. 活动内容。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Cultural exchange between China and the west” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Cultural exchange between China and the west” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can ask sme Chinese shwcase paper cuttings n site, and sme freign students t shw Hallween cstumes and styling, which will all fit int the theme.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给你校国际部交换生Jim，就他想策划的活动提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划：plan→ map ut
提供：ffer→ prvide
建议：suggestin→ advice
报名参加：get invlved in→ take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins.
拓展句：I hpe that yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Cultural exchange between China and the west” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. （运用了现在分词Hearing作原因状语）
【高分句型2】I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Cultural exchange between China and the west” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
7．（2023·上海·高三上海市回民中学校考期中）期中考试过后，学校准备利用半天时间开展课余活动。目前有两个备选方案：（1）开展体育、艺术方面的活动 （2）去重点大学参观考察。
近期学校正在征询学生意见，请比较两个方案，给学校写一封信，谈谈你的看法。
信中必须包括:
1. 你建议采用的方案；
2. 你如此建议的理由；
3. 你对于执行该方案的建议。
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【答案】
Dear Schl Leaders,
As the schl prepares t use half a day fr extracurricular activities after the midterm exams, I suggest that we chse ptin ne, which is t carry ut sprts and arts-related activities.
Firstly, sprts and arts activities can help students exercise, develp interests, teamwrk spirit, and mre. In additin, as an effective way t relieve stress and adjust learning status, the activities can help students release pressure, and devte themselves t learning and live mre effectively.
Therefre, I recmmend that specific implementatin plans shuld be arranged accrding t the students’ ages and interests, such as basketball, sccer, dance, painting, etc., t encurage students t participate actively and experience the jy f extracurricular activities and their true benefits.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。期中考试过后，学校准备利用半天时间开展课余活动。目前有两个备选方案：（1）开展体育、艺术方面的活动 （2）去重点大学参观考察。要求考生比较两个方案，给学校写一封信，谈谈自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggest→advice
执行：carry ut → perfrm
首先：firstly→ first f all
此外：In additin→ what’s mre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Firstly, sprts and arts activities can help students exercise, develp interests, teamwrk spirit, and mre.
拓展句：Firstly, sprts and arts activities can help students exercise, which can als develp interests, teamwrk spirit, and mre.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the schl prepares t use half a day fr extracurricular activities after the midterm exams, I suggest that we chse ptin ne, which is t carry ut sprts and arts-related activities.（运用了as引导原因状语从句，以及that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Therefre, I recmmend that specific implementatin plans shuld be arranged accrding t the students’ ages and interests, such as basketball, sccer, dance, painting, etc., t encurage students t participate actively and experience the jy f extracurricular activities and their true benefits.（运用了that引导宾语从句以）
8．（2022·安徽芜湖·高三校联考期中）假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友 August在今年该校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear August,
I am srry t hear that yu failed t pass the Chinese Bridge Cmpetitin in yur schl.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear August,
I am srry t hear that yu failed t pass the Chinese Bridge Cmpetitin in yur schl.
I hpe this failure wn’t let yu dwn. Yur standard prnunciatin and devted lve fr Chinese always amaze me whenever I meet yu. S, summn up yur curage and keep n trying.
As we all knw, delivering a speech in public is nt an easy thing, especially when the speaker is a freign language learner. Frm my viewpint, firstly, yu shuld pay attentin t the use f Chinese wrds and expressins in different situatins. Reading sme Chinese pems is als a gd chice. Lastly, learn frm the mistakes and practice mre.
I hpe yu can make it in the next cmpetitin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友 August在今年该校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：cmpetitin→cntest
演讲：speech→lecture
在我看来：frm my viewpint→in my pinin
选择：chice→ptin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：S, summn up yur curage and keep n trying.
拓展句：S, if yu really have a passin abut Chinese, summn up yur curage and keep n trying.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am srry t hear that yu failed t pass the Chinese Bridge Cmpetitin in yur schl. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As we all knw, delivering a speech in public is nt an easy thing, especially when the speaker is a freign language learner. (运用了动名词作主语和as引导的非限制性定语从句)
9．（2023·江苏镇江·高三统考期中）假如你是学生会主席李华，学校英语网站邀请你写一篇博文，就国货兴起发表你的看法。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。
1.国货兴起的原因；
2.国货面临的挑战；
3.你的建议和期望。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Recent years have witnessed a remarkable bm in the ppularity f Chinese prducts, which can be attributed t the fllwing factrs.
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【答案】
Recent years have witnessed a remarkable bm in the ppularity f Chinese prducts, which can be attributed t the fllwing factrs. First, Chinese cmpanies have been investing in innvatin and quality, making ur prducts glbally cmpetitive. Secnd, supprting hmegrwn prducts is a way f expressing ur lve fr the cuntry, as we take pride in what the natin has achieved.
Hwever, challenges lie ahead. One majr cncern is the need fr Chinese prducts t maintain their quality standards and innvate cntinually. Mrever, hw Chinese brands survive in the fierce glbal market is anther ne.
Frm my perspective, hmegrwn prducts are a reflectin f ur natin. If these cmpanies cntinue t priritize quality and ethics, I believe it will make us prud and cnfident abut ur culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是学生会主席李华，学校英语网站邀请你写一篇博文，就国货兴起发表你的看法。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
繁荣：bm→prsperity
方式：way→methds
表达：express→cnvey
不断地：cntinually→in a rw
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, Chinese cmpanies have been investing in innvatin and quality, making ur prducts glbally cmpetitive.
拓展句：First, Chinese cmpanies have been investing in innvatin and quality, which makes ur prducts glbally cmpetitive.
【点睛】[高分句型1] If these cmpanies cntinue t priritize quality and ethics, I believe it will make us prud and cnfident abut ur culture. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Secnd, supprting hmegrwn prducts is a way f expressing ur lve fr the cuntry, as we take pride in what the natin has achieved. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
10．（2022·四川南充·四川省南充高级中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Jack要在暑假期间回国，打算为他妈妈准备几件富有中国特色的礼物，特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1.建议礼物旗袍和中国结；
2.说明礼物原因；
3.表达祝福。
参考词汇：旗袍 chengsam
注意：1.写作词数为100词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m glad t hear that yu are cming back hme during the summer hliday and yu want t bring a few gifts fr yur mther that symblize the Chinese culture.
In my pinin, yu can buy the fllwing tw presents. First f all, chengsam, a very beautiful traditinal dress fr Chinese wmen, can shw the real beauty f a wman, thus I am sure that yur mther will like it very much. What’s mre, the Chinese knt, which is pretty decratin ppular with Chinese, is usually hung in the sitting rm f ur hme. It stands fr unity and gd luck. Meanwhile, I’m cnvinced that it will bring gd luck and happiness t yur family.
Have a gd vacatin and remember me t yur mther.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Jack写封信，就其回国为妈妈购买礼物给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first f all→ firstly
此外：what’s mre→ in additin
与此同时：meanwhile→ at the same time
确信：cnvinced→ sure
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：First f all, chengsam, a very beautiful traditinal dress fr Chinese wmen, can shw the real beauty f a wman, thus I am sure that yur mther will like it very much.
拓展句：First f all, chengsam, which is a very beautiful traditinal dress fr Chinese wmen, can shw the real beauty f a wman, thus I am sure that yur mther will like it very much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad t hear that yu are cming back hme during the summer hliday and yu want t bring a few gifts fr yur mther that symblize the Chinese culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s mre, the Chinese knt, which is pretty decratin ppular with Chinese, is usually hung in the sitting rm f ur hme.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）年份
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I am writing t ffer yu sme advice n hw t imprve yur spken English.
我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。
Yu have asked fr my advice and I will try t express my views n...
你向我征求意见，我会尽力表达我对于的看法。这里有一些建议关于
3. Having learnt that ur library is planning t buy new bks, I'm willing t recmmend sme bks t yu.
得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。
4.Glad/Pleased/Delighted t knw that yu are traveling in Shanghai，I think it is a gd chice t visit Huangpu River.
很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。
5.I have learned that yu have sme truble in... and wuld like t give/ffer yu the fllwing suggestins.
我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
6. When it cmes t/As fr..., the fllwing are my suggestins./My suggestins are as fllws.
当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。
7. I'm writing t give yu sme suggestins/give yu a hand.
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
8.I'm extremely delighted t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t fit in the new schl life.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
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1. The reasn why I recmmend this bk is that it emphasizes the imprtance f gd habits.
我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。
It is a gd way t braden yur mind, thrugh which yu can learn different cultures f the wrld.
这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。
First f all, yu shuld listen t the teacher carefully and take ntes in class s that yu can g ver yur lessns as sn as yu can after class.
首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。
I recmmend it mainly fr the fllwing tw reasns.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
In my pinin/As far as I'm cncerned/Persnally, it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
I think it wuld be f benefit/beneficial if yu...
我认为如果……，将会受益。
a gd/great/better chice.
做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。
It is als a gd idea/als helps t d..., which can...
做……也不错，这能……
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I will be always there fr yu if yu need help.
如果你需要帮助，我会一直在你身边。
2. If yu need further infrmatin, dn't hesitate t cntact me.
如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。
3. I'll be mre than happy if yu can take my recmmendatin/ideas int cnsideratin.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。
4. I hpe that my suggestins/advice will be beneficial/f benefit t yu.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
5.I hpe yu will find my suggestins/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial.
我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。
Dear Li Hua,
I dn’t like watching shrt vides, but all f my classmates d. Smetimes I can’t catch up with their cnversatins and jkes. I dn’t want t be left ut, but I als dn’t want t waste time n meaningless cntent. What shuld I d?
Yurs,
Ellen