2025届新高考英语读后续写提分技能及典题例析课件

这是一份2025届新高考英语读后续写提分技能及典题例析课件，共60页。PPT课件主要包含了目录 ，情感描写技巧，她惊奇地看着我，with tears，人与社会，续写部分，地点 ，kind ，nervous，terrified等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Can yu write dwn the expressins f emtins fr the mind-map?
happy sad afraid nervus angry surprised thankful mvedtiredsatisfied
Hw d yu feel?
Mind-map：Emtins
▲情感形容词的后缀常有：-ed(人，感到...的),-ing(物，令人..的),-ful/-less(人/物,...的)
1.happy: happy,delighted,cheerful,excited/exciting, thrilled, shut with jy 2.sad: sad, heart-brken,upset, disappinted, depressed/frustrated, srrwful, desperate, tears streaming dwn ne’s cheek(泪流满面)… 3.afraid: afraid, scared, frightened, fearful, palms are sweating(手心出汗)…
Mind-map：Emtins
4.nervus: nervus, anxius,wrried, stressed,stressful(令人有压力的) 5.angry: angry,mad,bad-temered,lse ne's temper(发火),burn with anger(怒火中烧) 6.surprised:surprised/surprising, amazed/amazing,astnished/shcked(震惊的)
7.thankful: thankful,grateful, thank sb fr 8.mved: mved/mving, tuched/tuching9.tired: tired, exhausted 10.satisfied: satisfied, pleased,cntent11.relaxed: relaxed, take it easy, relieved
12.hpeful：hpeful,with hpe in ne's eyes,hpeless(无希望的)13.determined: determined,firm, have a will/ have a strng mind(意志坚定)14.quiet：quiet, silent,calm 15.brave:brave,fearless,curagushpeful型：hpeful,with hpe in ne's eyes,hpeless(无希望的)
1.be/feel/becme +adj. (系表结构)2.Feeling+adj，主+谓+宾 (非谓语短语，作原因/伴随状语)3.adj+adj, 主+谓+宾（形容词短语，作原因/伴随状语）4.形容词+ly→副词（修饰动词/形容词/副词/介词短语/句子）5.with+n.（介词短语，作原因/伴随状语）
技巧1. be/feel/becme +adj. (系表结构)
2. 听到那个坏消息，她很伤心。
He _________________ and sweet.
was very happy
1. 他又高兴又甜蜜。
Hearing the bad news, she ________________.
felt very sad
3. 天黑了，她非常担心她儿子的安全,情不自禁哭了。
she ______________________abut her sn's safety when it was dark, and culdn't help crying.
felt very wrried
技巧 2. Feeling+adj，主+谓+宾 (非谓语短语,作原因/伴随状语)
1. 他感到很激动，立刻拿出手机，迫不及待地告诉他的朋友这次经历。
she went n her way,_______________, and sn met an ld man n the rad.
feeling upset
2. 她不开心地继续赶路，不久就在路上遇到一位老人。
_________________, he tk ut his phne atnce, eager t tell his friends the experience.
Feeling excited
Wang Peng sat in his empty restaurant, _____________________.
feeling very frustrated/depressed
3. 王鹏坐在空荡荡的饭店里面，感到非常沮丧。
技巧 3. adj, 主+谓+宾（形容词短语，作原因/伴随状语）
3. 难过但不恐惧，他决定要改变这一切。
We finally arrived at ur destinatin，______________．
tired and hungry
2. 我们终于到达了目的地，又累又饿.
Heartbrken but fearless
_________________, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew.
1. 吓坏了，埃利和我尝试了所有我们知道的防御熊的行动。
Frighted/Terrified
_______________________________,he decided t turn everything arund.
技巧 4. 形容词+ly→副词（修饰动词/形容词/副词/介词短语/句子）
1.他高兴地笑了，露出了一排洁白整齐的牙齿。
______________, I had taught Anthny t sew when he was 13, when he still respected me.
Luckily/Frtunately
2.幸运地,在安东尼13岁时我已经教过他缝纫, 那时他还在崇拜我.
He _____________, revealing a rw f white and even teeth.
smiled happily
技巧 5. with/in+n.（介词短语）
2. “但是我知道他刚才就在那儿。”露茜说，眼里带着泪水。
She lked at me ________________.
" But I knw he was, " said Lucy, ___________ in her eyes .
in amazement
如 in surprise/amazement,with jy/tears/ wrry(忧虑)
1. Have yu ever heard anything interesting abut the bank rbber?2. What will yu d if yu meet a bank rbber?
A funny thing happened t Arthur when he was n the way t wrk ne day. As he walked alng Park Avenue near the First Natinal Bank, he heard the sund f smene trying t start a car. He tried again and again but culdn’t get the car mving. Arthur turned and lked inside at the face f a yung man wh lked wrried. Arthur stpped and asked, “It lks like yu’ve gt a prblem,” Arthur said.
“I’m afraid s. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.” “Is there smething I can d t help?” Arthur asked. The yung man lked at the tw suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If yu’re sure it wuldn’t be t much truble, yu culd help me get these suitcases int a taxi.”
“N truble at all. I’d be glad t help.” The yung man gt ut and tk ne f the suitcases frm the back seat. After placing it n the grund, he turned t get the ther ne. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the lng lud nise f an alarm.It was frm the bank. There had been a rbbery (抢劫)!
Park Avenue had been quiet a mment befre. Nw the air was filled with the sund f the alarm and the shuts f peple running frm all directins. Cars stpped and the passengers jined the crwd in frnt f the bank. Peple asked each ther, “What happened?” But everyne had a different answer.
Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned t lk at the bank and walked right int the yung wman in frnt f him.She lked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she lking at me like that?” He thught. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!”
Arthur lked arund at the crwd f peple. He became frightened, and withut anther thught, he started t run.
着急介词 in +名词in dangerin needin truble
in a big hurry
单词大师 Wrd Master
正当我开始觉得自己永远都好不 了了的时候，我的病开始好转了。
Just as I started t think that I was never ging t get well, the illness began t recede.
be filled with
The by’s eyes filled with tears.
篇章大师 Passage Persn
A funny thing happened t Arthur when he was n the way t wrk ne day.
Nw the air was filled with the sund f the alarm and the shuts f peple running frm all directins. Cars stpped and the passengers jined the crwd in frnt f the bank. Peple asked each ther, “What happened?” But everyne had a different answer.
语言描写 ： “What happened?”
环境描写：was filled with the sund f the alarm and the shuts f peple
隐含线索：cars stpped, jined the crw in frnt f the bank, a different answer
事件：Arthur 的危机是被误会为 bank thief
一个有趣的并且难忘的经历
阅读小组长（Discussin Leader)
Reread the stry and figure ut the plt.
On his way t wrk, Arthur helped the yung man wh had gt a prblem.
Arthur agreed t help the yung man carry the suitcase.
Arthur heard the alarm, lked arund at the crwd f peple and started t run. frightened
Arthur 在去上班的路上帮助一个年轻人拿箱子
银行发生抢劫，警铃大响
Arthur 拿着箱子看着周围人群开始奔跑
篇章概括者 Summarizer
Arthur 在上班的路上遇到了一个需要帮助的年轻人。在他帮助这个年轻人拿箱子的时候，突然旁边的银行发出警报声，Arthur看着聚集的人群，拿着箱子就跑。然后？
On the way t wrk, Arthur met a yung man wh needed a hand. While Arthur was carrying the suitcase fr the yung man, suddenly, the lng lud nise f an alarm brke ut frm the bank. Seeing the crwd gathering, Arthur was s frightened that he ran away withut anther thught. Then...
浙江省高考真题 2020年1月
Paragraph 2：The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and Arthur...
Paragraph 1：As he was running, Arthur heard the yung man shuting behind, “Stp, stp!”
Paragraph 1
As he was running, Arthur heard the yung man shuting behind, “Stp, stp!” Hwever, Arthur cntinued running faster just as realizing the yung man fllwing behind was the real bank rbber. Arthur stpped a taxi and went int it fleetly. He asked the taxi driver t g t the plice statin as fast as pssible and tld the driver what had happened.
As he was running, Arthur heard the yung man shuting behind, “Stp, stp!” Hwever, Arthur cntinued running faster just as realizing the yung man fllwing behind was the real bank rbber.Arthur stpped a taxi and went int it fleetly. He asked the taxi driver t g t the plice statin as fast as pssible and tld the driver what had happened.
Paragraph 2
The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and Arthur rushed ut f the taxi and ran t the plice ffice straightly. There, the plice gt t knw what had happened t him. Arthur returned t the spt, accmpanied by the plice. The plice fund the yung man wh was surrunded by the peple. After hearing the yung man’s states, everyne was relieved that the yung men was nt the bank rbber and the lud nise f the alarm was incrrectly made by the bank’s system. Arthur smiled at the yung man and passed him his suitcase.
The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and ut f the taxi and ran t the plice ffice straightly. There, the plice gt t knw what had happened t him. Arthur returned t the spt , accmpanied by the plice. The plice fund the yung man wh was surrunded by the peple.
The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and ut f the taxi and ran t the plice ffice straightly. There, the plice gt t knw what had happened t him. Arthur returned t the spt , accmpanied by the plice. The plice fund the yung man wh was surrunded by the peple. After hearing the yung man’s states, everyne was relieved that the yung men was nt the bank rbber and the lud nise f the alarm was incrrectly made by the bank’s system. Arthur smiled at the yung man and passed him his suitcase..
went int the taxi fleetly --- rlled nt it and slammed the dr shut.In a flurry f activities, Arthur stpped a taxi, rlled nt it and slammed the dr shut.
---and said: “Hurry up! Plice statin, please.” ---stammered, “ the plice statin, ... hurry up!”---utter 以口发出声音
he culd hardly utter a cmplete sentence, but stammered, “ the plice statin, ... hurry up!”
tell the stry t the plice fficer — narrated the whle stry t the plice fficer narrated the whle stry t the plice fficer in great detail. narrate 更好的表达了细节表达— Arthur 着急把所 有发生的事情讲出来
---fund the yung man---recgnized the yung man ---the plice, Arthur returned t the spt where the incident happened and immediately recgnized the yung man wh he suspected was the bank rbber.
着急(连贯的身体动作)In a flurry f activities, Arthur stpped a taxi, rlled nt it and slammed the dr shut.
着急(动作表明着急紧张) Running inside withut pausing fr breath, Arthur narrated the whle stry t the plice fficer in great detail. 保持了正片续写文章的情绪和节奏。
形式主语：It suddenly dawned n him that强调：It was nly after the taxi screeched frward, leaving the yung man far behind, that Arthur caught his breath.
独立主格： Lips quivering and face muscles twitching, he culd hardly utter a cmplete sentence, but stammered, …定语从句： ... recgnized the yung man ... wh he suspected was the bank rbber.
As he was running, Arthur heard yung man shuting behind. 【1】Hwever, Arthur ignred it and cntinued running at full speed, hlding the suitcase tightly. 【2】It suddenly dawned n him that the yung man fllwing behind might be the real bank rbber. 【3】In a flurry f activities, Arthur stpped a taxi, rlled nt it and slammed the dr shut. 【4】Lips quivering and face muscles twitching, he culd hardly utter a cmplete sentence, but stammered, “ the plice statin, ... hurry up!” 【5】It was nly after the taxi screeched frward, leaving the yung man far behind, that Arthur caught his breath and tld the driver what had happened just nw.
The taxi stpped in frnt f the plice statin and Arthur jumped ut f the taxi. 【1】Running inside withut pausing fr breath, Arthur narrated the whle stry t the plice fficer in great detail.【2】 Accmpanied by the plice, Arthur returned t the spt where the incident happened and immediately recgnized the yung man wh he suspected was the bank rbber. 【3】It is nt until they hearing the yung man’s explantin that everyne knew the yung men was inncent and the alarm in the bank was actually falsely triggered. 【4】Smiling aplgetically at the yung man, Arthur passed him his suitcase.
Hwever, Arthur ignred it and cntinued running at full speed, hlding the suitcase tightly. It suddenly dawned n him that the yung man fllwing behind might be the real bank rbber.
In a flurry f activities, Arthur stpped a taxi, rlled nt it and slammed the dr shut. Lips quivering and face muscles twitching, he culd hardly utter a cmplete sentence, but stammered, “ the plice statin, ... hurry up!”
It was nly after the taxi screeched frward, leaving the yung man far behind, that Arthur caught his breath and tld the driver what had happened just nw.
Running inside withut pausing fr breath, Arthur narrated the whle stry t the plice fficer in great detail.
Accmpanied by the plice, Arthur returned t the spt where the incident happened and immediately recgnized the yung man wh he suspected was the bank rbber.
It is nt until they hearing the yung man’s explantin that everyne knew the yung men was inncent and the alarm in the bank was actually falsely triggered.