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（2021·河北省邯郸市高一下期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Once there was a little girl named Emily. Althugh her singing was very pleasant t hear, lacking curage, she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers. One summer, the neighbrhd where she lived wuld hld a singing cmpetitin. Her best friend, Lucy, came t invite her t participate in the cmpetitin, but Emily said, “I’m afraid t take part in it.” Her mther said, “It’s kay; just d it bravely.” Emily fllwed her mama’s advice and decided t give it a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went t the cmpetitin site. But she was t timid (胆小的) t walk nt the stage. She had been waiting until thers finished singing. She shakily frced herself t stand n the stage. She started t sing, but her vice was s lw. What’s wrse, she was s nervus that she frgt the lyrics (歌词) after singing a few wrds. She was laughed at by thers. Embarrassed and shy, she ran away frm the stage. Sme naughty bys ran after her and said, “Emily, cward (胆小鬼)! Emily, cward!” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was t g back hme as quickly as she culd. Finally, she rushed int the huse, hugged her mm and cried sadly.
“Well, my pr girl. Dn’t cry. Tell me what happened t yu,” asked her mm. Emily lked up at her mther and tld her what she had experienced. Listening t her, her mm cupped her face in her hands and said, “It desn’t matter, my girl. As lng as yu practice singing mre in frnt f strangers, yu will becme braver little by little. S, my girl, dn’t be beaten by a failure. Yu can g ut t practice singing every day. N matter wh is listening t yu, g n singing and never stp. I believe there will be a harvest fr yu.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Emily唱歌很好听，但是她没有勇气在陌生人面前唱歌。一年夏天，Emily参加了一个歌唱比赛。由于胆小，她唱歌的声音很小，甚至忘词。淘气的男孩们嘲笑她是胆小鬼。Emily哭着跑回了家。妈妈知道后，鼓励她通过练习在陌生人面前唱歌来让自己逐渐变得勇敢。
Althugh her singing was very pleasant t hear, lacking curage, she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers. 虽然她唱歌很好听，但由于缺乏勇气，她从来不敢在陌生人面前唱歌。 本句是主从复合句。althugh引导让步状语从句，主句是主谓宾结构，其中“lacking curage”作原因状语。
续写第一段开头：“Emily认真地听妈妈讲话，并听从了妈妈的建议。”通过原文我们可以知道妈妈给Emily的建议是在陌生人面前练习唱歌。那么，接下来可以按照这样的思路来写： 1. What did Emily d? She began t practice singing utside. （与母亲的建议“Yu can g ut t practice singing every day.”一致。） 2. What changes tk place？ Her curage?（与母亲让Emily练习的目的“yu will becme braver little by little”一致）；Her vice/singing?（与原文中的“her vice was s lw”形成对比）；The result?（与原文中的“she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers”相对） 3. What happened while she was practicing?（合理发挥想象，充实第一段的情节。） 提示：由续写第二段开头的“Ging n singing”可以联想到应该是Emily在练习唱歌时被发生的某件事打扰了。 续写第二段开头：“她继续唱着歌，走进了公园，那里有很多人在唱歌跳舞。”不难想象，Emily唱着歌，公园里的人自然会听到她的歌声。那么，接下来可以想象： 1. What was peple’s reactin t Emily’s singing?（根据原文中对Emily唱歌的描述“her singing was very pleasant t hear”可猜想，人们应该是欣赏她唱歌的。） 2. Hw did Emily feel?（可以接着描写Emily在看到人们反应后的感受。） 3. Hw did Emily behave when participating in a singing cmpetitin again?（原文用了大量笔墨描写Emily参加比赛的过程，此处可以写她再次参加歌唱比赛的表现。）
Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. She gt up early the next mrning and began t practice singing utside. Gradually, her curage became ①greater and greater, and her vice was als luder and luder. Mnths later, she was nt afraid at all t sing in frnt f crwds. ②One f the naughty bys wh had laughed at her befre cried t her, “Emily, cward! Emily, cward!” Hwever, she chse t ignre his behavir.
①“greater and greater”与“luder and luder”反映了Emily按照母亲的建议去做后发生的变化，她变得越来越勇敢与自信。这与原文最后一段中的“yu will becme braver little by little”呼应。②巧妙运用原文中的场景，通过Emily面对同种情况时的不同反应，从侧面反映了她的变化，“ignre”与她之前的做法形成对比。
Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. Hearing her beautiful vice, sme stpped t enjy her singing and clapped when she finished the sng. Emily felt ③encuraged and was pleased that she culd finally sing ④cnfidently in frnt f strangers. The secnd year, the neighbrhd held a singing cmpetitin again and Emily signed up fr it. This time, Emily stepped nt the stage bravely, and her lud and beautiful vice f singing mved the audience present. They all ⑤cheered her, including thse wh had laughed at her. Her mther was delighted t see ⑥the timid girl had becme a brave ne.(161 wrds)
③心理描写：人们的反应让Emily受到了鼓舞（“encuraged”）；“pleased”表达出Emily对自己能在陌生人面前自信地唱歌而感到喜悦。④副词“cnfidently”与“bravely”呈现了上一段“Emily的勇气不断增加，歌声越来越响亮”的结果，说明Emily变得自信又勇敢。⑤动词“cheer”反映了人们对Emily的表现的认可。⑥呼应开头，在故事开始时，Emily是 “lack curage”的女孩，“the timid girl”与之呼应；后来，“brave”与“timid”形成对比，说明Emily最终完成了蜕变。
1. be afraid t d sth. 害怕做某事2. laugh at 嘲笑3. cheer vt. 为……欢呼4. be delighted t d sth. 高兴做某事
Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. She ften went utside t practice singing in frnt f strangers. At first, she was very nervus but after sme time, she seemed nt afraid f ding s. One day, while singing, she met sme f thse naughty bys, wh shuted “Emily, cward!” again. This time, hwever, Emily ignred their shuts as if she had heard nthing. Seeing Emily didn’t care abut their shuts, the bys, wh had intended t make Emily feel ashamed, went away in embarrassment. Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. This was the best place t practice singing in frnt f a crwd. Her beautiful vice sn attracted the attentin f sme peple, wh gave her admiring glances, and as she finished the sng, they clapped wildly. Emily was glad she culd sing cnfidently in public. When the secnd singing cmpetitin was held, she entered it again. The big day arrived! Emily, wh was the last t sing, perfrmed perfectly and the audience brke int lud applause. Lucy and Emily’s mther, wh were als present, waited anxiusly fr the results. The winners were annunced and Emily wn first prize.(176 wrds)
1. 续写自然流畅、情节合理：作者能够在阅读前文和提示句的基础上展开合理的想象，设计的情节符合逻辑，衔接顺畅。2. 描写细致、语言生动、表达准确，较好地完成了写作任务。3. 使用了大量高级词汇和短语，如“ignre”“care abut”“intend t d”“admiring”“give sb. a glance”等。4. 使用了许多高级句型，如wh引导的非限制性定语从句、as引导的时间状语从句等，还使用了复杂结构，如“现在分词+宾语从句”作状语。
be delighted at 对……感到很高兴/满意be fascinated by sth. 对……入迷be keen n sb./(ding) sth. 喜爱，对……着迷an extremely happy cuple 极其幸福的一对dance/jump fr/with jy 高兴地舞/跳起来be wild with delight 欣喜若狂an encuraging respnse 一个令人鼓舞的回应a pleasant evening 一个令人愉快的夜晚be/feel n tp f the wrld 心满意足，非常幸福
t ne’s great jy 令某人非常高兴的是a mixture f excitement and happiness 既兴奋又开心in cheerful/high spirits 心情愉快/情绪高涨keep ne’s spirits up 振作精神；保持高昂的情绪a satisfied lk 满意的表情be cntent/satisfied with 对……感到满意
be full f hpe 大有希望have high hpes fr sb. 对某人寄予厚望have hpes f ding sth. 抱有……的希望exceed ne’s expectatins 超出某人的预期live up t expectatins 不负众望with great expectatins 满怀希望地feel hpeful 抱有希望be (very) hpeful abut sth. 对……抱有（很大）希望
be verjyed at sth./t d sth. 对……感到非常高兴shed tears f happiness 喜极而泣yell with delight 乐得大叫be in a gd md 心情很愉快set ne’s mind at rest 使某人安心feel inspired/encuraged 受到鼓舞的perfectly happy 幸福极了，幸福美满a glimmer f hpe 一线希望
During the camping trip, we were all in high spirits. 野营旅行过程中，我们都兴致勃勃。Her eyes sparkled/twinkled with pleasure. 她的眼里闪耀着喜悦的光芒。I am feeling n tp f the wrld. 我觉得非常幸福。I was pleased beynd descriptin. 我的高兴无法形容。She was in seventh heaven when she met him. 她见到他时异常开心。The girl was wild with delight. 那个女孩欣喜若狂。Happiness and jy shwed clearly n his weather-beaten face. 他那饱经风霜的脸上洋溢着幸福与喜悦。Her heart was glwing with happiness. 她的心中洋溢着幸福。
All her heart went up in flames f jy. 她心花怒放。He ndded, and was filled with jy. 他点了点头，满心欢喜。Tears f happiness flwed dwn her cheeks. 幸福的泪水顺着她的脸颊流淌。When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, she gave a smile f sweetness. 当妈妈亲吻宝贝的脸颊时，她露出甜蜜的微笑。They led a happy life with their three children. 他们和三个孩子过着幸福的生活。Yur future is full f hpe. 你的前途大有希望。He was very hpeful abut the utcme f the interview. 他对面试结果抱有很大希望。
shake/tremble vi. 发抖，颤抖stress ut （使）焦虑不安mental stress 思想压力be/feel stressed (ut) 焦虑不安
nervus adj. 紧张的be desperately nervus 极度紧张uneasy adj. 不安的
tense adj. 神经紧张的anxius adj. 焦急的tensin n. 紧张，不安be n edge 紧张不安
He lked anxius when he saw his mther in cmpany with his teacher. 当看见妈妈和他的老师在一起时，他流露出焦虑不安的神色。Exercise will help imprve yur physical health and help yu cpe with stress better. 锻炼有助于改善你的身体健康，帮助你更好地应对压力。
S nervus was I abut my exams that I culdn’t sleep. 我为考试紧张得睡不着觉。With my heart in my muth, I went fr the jb interview. 我提心吊胆地前去参加面试。Whenever I have t speak in public, I get butterflies in my stmach and my hands are sweaty. 每当我要在公共场合发言的时候，我心里就直打鼓，手心都是汗。He was pacing the rm nervusly. 他正紧张地在房间里走来走去。Tny had had a hard day and his nerves were n edge. 托尼累了一天，神经很紧张。
She tried t hide her nervusness, but it was clear that she wasn’t cmfrtable when making the speech. 她试图掩饰自己的紧张，但是她演讲的时候显然很不自然。
Everyne waited anxiusly fr the winner’s name t be annunced. 每个人都在紧张地等待着宣布获胜者的名字。His vice was full f anxiety. 他的声音饱含焦虑。She lked at the clck with grwing uneasiness. 她看着钟，心里越来越不安。There was a shrt perid f uneasy calm thrughut the regin. 整个地区有一段短暂的令人不安的平静时期。His term paper has been really stressing him ut—he just desn’t knw what t write! 他的学期论文让他非常焦虑——他就是不知道要写什么！She wndered uneasily what he was thinking. 她很不安，想知道他在想什么。
the jys and srrws f childhd 童年的欢乐与悲伤cme as smething f a surprise 有点惊讶be verwhelmed by… 对……感到不能自持be in lw spirits 情绪低落lse heart 丧失信心；泄气ne’s heart sinks 心里一沉murn (fr) sb./sth.因失去某人或某物而哀悼/忧伤
a strng sense f lss 强烈的失落感fall int despair 陷入绝望be in a bad md 心情不快a sense f release 解脱感ease the pain 减轻痛苦a brken heart 破碎的心heartbrken adj. 极为悲伤的，心碎的be vercme with grief 悲痛欲绝with a heavy/sinking heart 心情沉重地
He came t me with a lng face. 他哭丧着脸来找我。I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness. 我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。I didn’t want t break dwn in frnt f the children. 我不想在孩子们面前失控痛哭。Jane turned t me with tears in her eyes, and begged me t help her. 简眼含泪水地转向我，恳求我帮助她。Upn hearing the bad news, Mary felt seized by a burst f sadness and culdn’t help weeping bitterly. 听到那个坏消息，玛丽感到一阵悲伤，忍不住痛哭起来。Wrds cannt express my srrw. 言语无法表达我的哀伤。
She held the letter, her hands shaking/shivering and her eyes shwing deep srrw. 她拿着信，双手颤抖，眼睛流露出深深的悲伤。When he heard the news f his friend’s accident, his face cluded ver. 当听说朋友出了事故时，他的脸色阴沉下来。
The dg lay at his feet, lking up frm time t time with big murnful eyes. 那条狗趴在他脚边，不时地抬起头来看看， 大大的眼睛里充满了忧伤。
be speechless with rage 气得说不出话rage at sb. 对某人发火cmplain cnstantly 不断地抱怨panic vi. & vt. （使）惊慌 n. 惊慌，恐慌flame with anger （脸）气得通红fly int a rage 勃然大怒，暴跳如雷be shaking/trembling with rage/anger 气得发抖be dark/purple with rage/anger（脸色）气得发青/发紫get irritated 被激怒get mad at sb. 对某人很生气
afraid adj. 害怕的，担心的be afraid f sb./sth. 害怕某人/某物frightened adj. 受惊的shcked adj. 震惊的hrrified adj. 充满恐惧的，震惊的startled adj. 吃惊的，受惊的fearful adj. 可怕的；恐惧的；担忧的alarmed adj. 担忧的；恐慌的terrible adj. 可怕的；非常严重的；糟糕的freeze/stiffen with fear/terrr/hrrr 吓呆be easily annyed at trifles 易为琐事恼火
feel numb with hrrr 惊呆a resentful lk 充满怨恨的眼神be paralysed with fear吓得呆若木鸡
drive sb. crazy/mad 使某人发疯be furius with sb. 生某人的气stamp ne’s ft in anger 气得跺脚get annyed 恼火
His remark left his bss speechless with anger. 他的那番话气得老板哑口无言。Filled with anger, Jim was unable t say a single wrd. 吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。He was silent, a fire f rage burning in his heart. 他沉默着，一股怒火在心中燃烧。Seeing the rm was in a mess, he trembled with anger frm head t ft. 看到房间杂乱不堪，他气得浑身发抖。
Mum will be angry with us when she finds ut abut the brken vase. 妈妈知道花瓶被打破了会生我们的气的。She was white with anger and culd nt speak. 她气得脸色发白，说不出话来。And then the fierce, buried anger surged up int his thrat. 然后，埋藏在心头的满腔怒火直冲到他的喉咙里。Biling with rage, Jim shk his fist at me. 吉姆怒火中烧，朝我挥拳。Filled with fury, Jim was unable t utter a single wrd. 吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。He lked as if he were ging t burst. 他看上去快要气炸了。His face cluded ver with anger. 他怒容满面。
Sam strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him. 萨姆冲出房间，狠狠地摔上门。Sally was mad at the children fr making s much nise. 萨莉对于孩子们那么吵闹非常生气。The yung man’s face flushed angrily. 那个年轻男子的脸气得绯红。A fld f fear welled up inside him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。At the sight f the fierce wlf, I frze with hrrr, t scared t mve an inch. 看到那只凶恶的狼时，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。Dan rushed ut f the rm, terrr in her eyes. 丹从屋子里冲出来，眼里显出害怕的神色。Fear flded ver him. 他心中充满恐惧。
He suddenly realized t his hrrr that the brakes weren’t wrking. 突然间，他惊恐地意识到刹车失灵了。He turned t me, with his eyes full f hrrr. 他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。He was s frightened that his knees were kncking. 他吓得两个膝盖直打哆嗦。I std still, scared t mve frward and scared t g back. 我站着不动，不敢前进，也不敢后退。Their faces were white, and their eyes were filled with terrr. 他们脸色惨白，眼里充满恐惧。It made my hair stand n end. 它吓得我毛骨悚然。I was frightened t mve in case the branch brke. 我不敢动，怕树枝断掉。
I was terrified that my father wuld find ut I had lied t him. 我很害怕父亲会发现我对他撒了谎。Tm turned white, a lk f hrrr n his face. 汤姆脸色变得苍白，脸上露出惊恐的表情。She gt int a real panic when she thught she’d lst the ticket. 当以为自己把票弄丢了时，她着实惊慌起来。When he came back he lked scared stiff, as if he’d seen a ghst. 他回来时看上去害怕得要命，好像见了鬼似的。
unfulfilled adj. 未满足的，未实现的upset n. 失望，沮丧 adj. 失望的，难过的discuraged adj. 沮丧的，气馁的discntent n. 不满；不满足glmy adj. 沮丧的let sb. dwn 使某人失望feel let dwn 感到沮丧be depressed abut sth. 对某事感到沮丧depressing news 令人沮丧的消息
disappint vt. 使失望 → disappinted adj. 失望的，沮丧的 → disappinting adj. 令人失望的 → disappintment n. 失望，扫兴despair vi. 绝望 → despairing adj. 无望的；感到绝望的displease vt. 使不愉快 → displeased adj. 不满意的hpeless adj. 绝望的 → hpelessness n. 绝望desperate adj. 绝望的 → desperatin n. 绝望dissatisfied adj. 不满意的
He felt very disappinted abut his failure t pass the exam. 他对没有通过考试感到非常失望。She was cmpletely vercme by disappintment. 她完全被失望的情绪压倒。Wrds cannt express hw disappinted I was. 言语无法形容我是多么失望。She swallwed her sigh f disappintment and lked at her dancing partner. 她忍住失望的叹息，望着她的舞伴。I wuld think it was a very tearful and desperate time fr him. 我认为这对他来说是一个非常令人伤心和绝望的时刻。
A plice fficer gave evidence that n arrival at the plice statin, the cmplainant was very upset and tearful. 一名警官作证说，起诉人一到警察局就感到非常沮丧，而且泪流满面。Lucy gave a frwn f disappintment and shk her head after a mment. 露西失望地皱了皱眉头，一会儿又摇了摇头。“I despair f her,” he sighed. “我对她感到绝望。”他叹息道。Finally, never leave the examinatin hall in despair, hwever hpeless things may seem. 最后，永远不要绝望地离开考场，无论事情看起来多么无望。I was smewhat glmy and depressed thse days, but I felt refreshed by the surrunding trees and flwers. 那些日子我有些阴郁和沮丧，但周围的树木和花朵使我感到神清气爽。
Every nerve in my bdy is tense. 我的每根神经都绷得紧紧的。My heart is as sweet as hney. 我心里像喝了蜜一样，甜滋滋的。Her heart almst leapt int her thrat. 她的心快要跳到嗓子眼了。A smile lit up her face. 微笑使她容光焕发。A ripple f sadness welled up inside him. 他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。His heart was punding with excitement. 他激动得心怦怦直跳。Lneliness and grief cme in waves. 孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。S angry was she that she went red in the face. 她气得面红耳赤。I felt as if a knife were piercing my heart and my tears kept running dwn. 我心如刀绞，眼泪不住地往下流。
She felt extremely excited and delighted, her eyes glittering/sparkling with jy and sweetness. 她感到极度兴奋和喜悦，她的眼睛因喜悦和甜蜜而闪闪发光。She bit her lwer lip t keep it frm trembling and then tears filled her eyes and started running dwn her cheeks. 她咬着下唇不让它发抖，然后眼泪充满了双眼，开始顺着脸颊往下流。Her eyes misted ver as she immersed herself in their gd memries. 当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆中时，泪水模糊了她的眼睛。At the sight f the fierce wlf, I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr and my palms were sweating.一看到那匹凶猛的狼，我就被一股强烈的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心怦怦跳。
（2021·河北省邯郸市高一下期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Once there was a little girl named Emily. Althugh her singing was very pleasant t hear, lacking curage, she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers. One summer, the neighbrhd where she lived wuld hld a singing cmpetitin. Her best friend, Lucy, came t invite her t participate in the cmpetitin, but Emily said, “I’m afraid t take part in it.” Her mther said, “It’s kay; just d it bravely.” Emily fllwed her mama’s advice and decided t give it a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went t the cmpetitin site. But she was t timid (胆小的) t walk nt the stage. She had been waiting until thers finished singing. She shakily frced herself t stand n the stage. She started t sing, but her vice was s lw. What’s wrse, she was s nervus that she frgt the lyrics (歌词) after singing a few wrds. She was laughed at by thers. Embarrassed and shy, she ran away frm the stage. Sme naughty bys ran after her and said, “Emily, cward (胆小鬼)! Emily, cward!” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was t g back hme as quickly as she culd. Finally, she rushed int the huse, hugged her mm and cried sadly.
“Well, my pr girl. Dn’t cry. Tell me what happened t yu,” asked her mm. Emily lked up at her mther and tld her what she had experienced. Listening t her, her mm cupped her face in her hands and said, “It desn’t matter, my girl. As lng as yu practice singing mre in frnt f strangers, yu will becme braver little by little. S, my girl, dn’t be beaten by a failure. Yu can g ut t practice singing every day. N matter wh is listening t yu, g n singing and never stp. I believe there will be a harvest fr yu.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Emily唱歌很好听，但是她没有勇气在陌生人面前唱歌。一年夏天，Emily参加了一个歌唱比赛。由于胆小，她唱歌的声音很小，甚至忘词。淘气的男孩们嘲笑她是胆小鬼。Emily哭着跑回了家。妈妈知道后，鼓励她通过练习在陌生人面前唱歌来让自己逐渐变得勇敢。
Althugh her singing was very pleasant t hear, lacking curage, she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers. 虽然她唱歌很好听，但由于缺乏勇气，她从来不敢在陌生人面前唱歌。 本句是主从复合句。althugh引导让步状语从句，主句是主谓宾结构，其中“lacking curage”作原因状语。
续写第一段开头：“Emily认真地听妈妈讲话，并听从了妈妈的建议。”通过原文我们可以知道妈妈给Emily的建议是在陌生人面前练习唱歌。那么，接下来可以按照这样的思路来写： 1. What did Emily d? She began t practice singing utside. （与母亲的建议“Yu can g ut t practice singing every day.”一致。） 2. What changes tk place？ Her curage?（与母亲让Emily练习的目的“yu will becme braver little by little”一致）；Her vice/singing?（与原文中的“her vice was s lw”形成对比）；The result?（与原文中的“she never dared t sing in frnt f strangers”相对） 3. What happened while she was practicing?（合理发挥想象，充实第一段的情节。） 提示：由续写第二段开头的“Ging n singing”可以联想到应该是Emily在练习唱歌时被发生的某件事打扰了。 续写第二段开头：“她继续唱着歌，走进了公园，那里有很多人在唱歌跳舞。”不难想象，Emily唱着歌，公园里的人自然会听到她的歌声。那么，接下来可以想象： 1. What was peple’s reactin t Emily’s singing?（根据原文中对Emily唱歌的描述“her singing was very pleasant t hear”可猜想，人们应该是欣赏她唱歌的。） 2. Hw did Emily feel?（可以接着描写Emily在看到人们反应后的感受。） 3. Hw did Emily behave when participating in a singing cmpetitin again?（原文用了大量笔墨描写Emily参加比赛的过程，此处可以写她再次参加歌唱比赛的表现。）
Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. She gt up early the next mrning and began t practice singing utside. Gradually, her curage became ①greater and greater, and her vice was als luder and luder. Mnths later, she was nt afraid at all t sing in frnt f crwds. ②One f the naughty bys wh had laughed at her befre cried t her, “Emily, cward! Emily, cward!” Hwever, she chse t ignre his behavir.
①“greater and greater”与“luder and luder”反映了Emily按照母亲的建议去做后发生的变化，她变得越来越勇敢与自信。这与原文最后一段中的“yu will becme braver little by little”呼应。②巧妙运用原文中的场景，通过Emily面对同种情况时的不同反应，从侧面反映了她的变化，“ignre”与她之前的做法形成对比。
Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. Hearing her beautiful vice, sme stpped t enjy her singing and clapped when she finished the sng. Emily felt ③encuraged and was pleased that she culd finally sing ④cnfidently in frnt f strangers. The secnd year, the neighbrhd held a singing cmpetitin again and Emily signed up fr it. This time, Emily stepped nt the stage bravely, and her lud and beautiful vice f singing mved the audience present. They all ⑤cheered her, including thse wh had laughed at her. Her mther was delighted t see ⑥the timid girl had becme a brave ne.(161 wrds)
③心理描写：人们的反应让Emily受到了鼓舞（“encuraged”）；“pleased”表达出Emily对自己能在陌生人面前自信地唱歌而感到喜悦。④副词“cnfidently”与“bravely”呈现了上一段“Emily的勇气不断增加，歌声越来越响亮”的结果，说明Emily变得自信又勇敢。⑤动词“cheer”反映了人们对Emily的表现的认可。⑥呼应开头，在故事开始时，Emily是 “lack curage”的女孩，“the timid girl”与之呼应；后来，“brave”与“timid”形成对比，说明Emily最终完成了蜕变。
1. be afraid t d sth. 害怕做某事2. laugh at 嘲笑3. cheer vt. 为……欢呼4. be delighted t d sth. 高兴做某事
Paragraph 1: Emily listened t her mther carefully and fllwed her mm’s suggestin. She ften went utside t practice singing in frnt f strangers. At first, she was very nervus but after sme time, she seemed nt afraid f ding s. One day, while singing, she met sme f thse naughty bys, wh shuted “Emily, cward!” again. This time, hwever, Emily ignred their shuts as if she had heard nthing. Seeing Emily didn’t care abut their shuts, the bys, wh had intended t make Emily feel ashamed, went away in embarrassment. Paragraph 2: Ging n singing, she walked int the park, where many peple were singing and dancing. This was the best place t practice singing in frnt f a crwd. Her beautiful vice sn attracted the attentin f sme peple, wh gave her admiring glances, and as she finished the sng, they clapped wildly. Emily was glad she culd sing cnfidently in public. When the secnd singing cmpetitin was held, she entered it again. The big day arrived! Emily, wh was the last t sing, perfrmed perfectly and the audience brke int lud applause. Lucy and Emily’s mther, wh were als present, waited anxiusly fr the results. The winners were annunced and Emily wn first prize.(176 wrds)
1. 续写自然流畅、情节合理：作者能够在阅读前文和提示句的基础上展开合理的想象，设计的情节符合逻辑，衔接顺畅。2. 描写细致、语言生动、表达准确，较好地完成了写作任务。3. 使用了大量高级词汇和短语，如“ignre”“care abut”“intend t d”“admiring”“give sb. a glance”等。4. 使用了许多高级句型，如wh引导的非限制性定语从句、as引导的时间状语从句等，还使用了复杂结构，如“现在分词+宾语从句”作状语。
be delighted at 对……感到很高兴/满意be fascinated by sth. 对……入迷be keen n sb./(ding) sth. 喜爱，对……着迷an extremely happy cuple 极其幸福的一对dance/jump fr/with jy 高兴地舞/跳起来be wild with delight 欣喜若狂an encuraging respnse 一个令人鼓舞的回应a pleasant evening 一个令人愉快的夜晚be/feel n tp f the wrld 心满意足，非常幸福
t ne’s great jy 令某人非常高兴的是a mixture f excitement and happiness 既兴奋又开心in cheerful/high spirits 心情愉快/情绪高涨keep ne’s spirits up 振作精神；保持高昂的情绪a satisfied lk 满意的表情be cntent/satisfied with 对……感到满意
be full f hpe 大有希望have high hpes fr sb. 对某人寄予厚望have hpes f ding sth. 抱有……的希望exceed ne’s expectatins 超出某人的预期live up t expectatins 不负众望with great expectatins 满怀希望地feel hpeful 抱有希望be (very) hpeful abut sth. 对……抱有（很大）希望
be verjyed at sth./t d sth. 对……感到非常高兴shed tears f happiness 喜极而泣yell with delight 乐得大叫be in a gd md 心情很愉快set ne’s mind at rest 使某人安心feel inspired/encuraged 受到鼓舞的perfectly happy 幸福极了，幸福美满a glimmer f hpe 一线希望
During the camping trip, we were all in high spirits. 野营旅行过程中，我们都兴致勃勃。Her eyes sparkled/twinkled with pleasure. 她的眼里闪耀着喜悦的光芒。I am feeling n tp f the wrld. 我觉得非常幸福。I was pleased beynd descriptin. 我的高兴无法形容。She was in seventh heaven when she met him. 她见到他时异常开心。The girl was wild with delight. 那个女孩欣喜若狂。Happiness and jy shwed clearly n his weather-beaten face. 他那饱经风霜的脸上洋溢着幸福与喜悦。Her heart was glwing with happiness. 她的心中洋溢着幸福。
All her heart went up in flames f jy. 她心花怒放。He ndded, and was filled with jy. 他点了点头，满心欢喜。Tears f happiness flwed dwn her cheeks. 幸福的泪水顺着她的脸颊流淌。When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, she gave a smile f sweetness. 当妈妈亲吻宝贝的脸颊时，她露出甜蜜的微笑。They led a happy life with their three children. 他们和三个孩子过着幸福的生活。Yur future is full f hpe. 你的前途大有希望。He was very hpeful abut the utcme f the interview. 他对面试结果抱有很大希望。
shake/tremble vi. 发抖，颤抖stress ut （使）焦虑不安mental stress 思想压力be/feel stressed (ut) 焦虑不安
nervus adj. 紧张的be desperately nervus 极度紧张uneasy adj. 不安的
tense adj. 神经紧张的anxius adj. 焦急的tensin n. 紧张，不安be n edge 紧张不安
He lked anxius when he saw his mther in cmpany with his teacher. 当看见妈妈和他的老师在一起时，他流露出焦虑不安的神色。Exercise will help imprve yur physical health and help yu cpe with stress better. 锻炼有助于改善你的身体健康，帮助你更好地应对压力。
S nervus was I abut my exams that I culdn’t sleep. 我为考试紧张得睡不着觉。With my heart in my muth, I went fr the jb interview. 我提心吊胆地前去参加面试。Whenever I have t speak in public, I get butterflies in my stmach and my hands are sweaty. 每当我要在公共场合发言的时候，我心里就直打鼓，手心都是汗。He was pacing the rm nervusly. 他正紧张地在房间里走来走去。Tny had had a hard day and his nerves were n edge. 托尼累了一天，神经很紧张。
She tried t hide her nervusness, but it was clear that she wasn’t cmfrtable when making the speech. 她试图掩饰自己的紧张，但是她演讲的时候显然很不自然。
Everyne waited anxiusly fr the winner’s name t be annunced. 每个人都在紧张地等待着宣布获胜者的名字。His vice was full f anxiety. 他的声音饱含焦虑。She lked at the clck with grwing uneasiness. 她看着钟，心里越来越不安。There was a shrt perid f uneasy calm thrughut the regin. 整个地区有一段短暂的令人不安的平静时期。His term paper has been really stressing him ut—he just desn’t knw what t write! 他的学期论文让他非常焦虑——他就是不知道要写什么！She wndered uneasily what he was thinking. 她很不安，想知道他在想什么。
the jys and srrws f childhd 童年的欢乐与悲伤cme as smething f a surprise 有点惊讶be verwhelmed by… 对……感到不能自持be in lw spirits 情绪低落lse heart 丧失信心；泄气ne’s heart sinks 心里一沉murn (fr) sb./sth.因失去某人或某物而哀悼/忧伤
a strng sense f lss 强烈的失落感fall int despair 陷入绝望be in a bad md 心情不快a sense f release 解脱感ease the pain 减轻痛苦a brken heart 破碎的心heartbrken adj. 极为悲伤的，心碎的be vercme with grief 悲痛欲绝with a heavy/sinking heart 心情沉重地
He came t me with a lng face. 他哭丧着脸来找我。I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness. 我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。I didn’t want t break dwn in frnt f the children. 我不想在孩子们面前失控痛哭。Jane turned t me with tears in her eyes, and begged me t help her. 简眼含泪水地转向我，恳求我帮助她。Upn hearing the bad news, Mary felt seized by a burst f sadness and culdn’t help weeping bitterly. 听到那个坏消息，玛丽感到一阵悲伤，忍不住痛哭起来。Wrds cannt express my srrw. 言语无法表达我的哀伤。
She held the letter, her hands shaking/shivering and her eyes shwing deep srrw. 她拿着信，双手颤抖，眼睛流露出深深的悲伤。When he heard the news f his friend’s accident, his face cluded ver. 当听说朋友出了事故时，他的脸色阴沉下来。
The dg lay at his feet, lking up frm time t time with big murnful eyes. 那条狗趴在他脚边，不时地抬起头来看看， 大大的眼睛里充满了忧伤。
be speechless with rage 气得说不出话rage at sb. 对某人发火cmplain cnstantly 不断地抱怨panic vi. & vt. （使）惊慌 n. 惊慌，恐慌flame with anger （脸）气得通红fly int a rage 勃然大怒，暴跳如雷be shaking/trembling with rage/anger 气得发抖be dark/purple with rage/anger（脸色）气得发青/发紫get irritated 被激怒get mad at sb. 对某人很生气
afraid adj. 害怕的，担心的be afraid f sb./sth. 害怕某人/某物frightened adj. 受惊的shcked adj. 震惊的hrrified adj. 充满恐惧的，震惊的startled adj. 吃惊的，受惊的fearful adj. 可怕的；恐惧的；担忧的alarmed adj. 担忧的；恐慌的terrible adj. 可怕的；非常严重的；糟糕的freeze/stiffen with fear/terrr/hrrr 吓呆be easily annyed at trifles 易为琐事恼火
feel numb with hrrr 惊呆a resentful lk 充满怨恨的眼神be paralysed with fear吓得呆若木鸡
drive sb. crazy/mad 使某人发疯be furius with sb. 生某人的气stamp ne’s ft in anger 气得跺脚get annyed 恼火
His remark left his bss speechless with anger. 他的那番话气得老板哑口无言。Filled with anger, Jim was unable t say a single wrd. 吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。He was silent, a fire f rage burning in his heart. 他沉默着，一股怒火在心中燃烧。Seeing the rm was in a mess, he trembled with anger frm head t ft. 看到房间杂乱不堪，他气得浑身发抖。
Mum will be angry with us when she finds ut abut the brken vase. 妈妈知道花瓶被打破了会生我们的气的。She was white with anger and culd nt speak. 她气得脸色发白，说不出话来。And then the fierce, buried anger surged up int his thrat. 然后，埋藏在心头的满腔怒火直冲到他的喉咙里。Biling with rage, Jim shk his fist at me. 吉姆怒火中烧，朝我挥拳。Filled with fury, Jim was unable t utter a single wrd. 吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。He lked as if he were ging t burst. 他看上去快要气炸了。His face cluded ver with anger. 他怒容满面。
Sam strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him. 萨姆冲出房间，狠狠地摔上门。Sally was mad at the children fr making s much nise. 萨莉对于孩子们那么吵闹非常生气。The yung man’s face flushed angrily. 那个年轻男子的脸气得绯红。A fld f fear welled up inside him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。At the sight f the fierce wlf, I frze with hrrr, t scared t mve an inch. 看到那只凶恶的狼时，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。Dan rushed ut f the rm, terrr in her eyes. 丹从屋子里冲出来，眼里显出害怕的神色。Fear flded ver him. 他心中充满恐惧。
He suddenly realized t his hrrr that the brakes weren’t wrking. 突然间，他惊恐地意识到刹车失灵了。He turned t me, with his eyes full f hrrr. 他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。He was s frightened that his knees were kncking. 他吓得两个膝盖直打哆嗦。I std still, scared t mve frward and scared t g back. 我站着不动，不敢前进，也不敢后退。Their faces were white, and their eyes were filled with terrr. 他们脸色惨白，眼里充满恐惧。It made my hair stand n end. 它吓得我毛骨悚然。I was frightened t mve in case the branch brke. 我不敢动，怕树枝断掉。
I was terrified that my father wuld find ut I had lied t him. 我很害怕父亲会发现我对他撒了谎。Tm turned white, a lk f hrrr n his face. 汤姆脸色变得苍白，脸上露出惊恐的表情。She gt int a real panic when she thught she’d lst the ticket. 当以为自己把票弄丢了时，她着实惊慌起来。When he came back he lked scared stiff, as if he’d seen a ghst. 他回来时看上去害怕得要命，好像见了鬼似的。
unfulfilled adj. 未满足的，未实现的upset n. 失望，沮丧 adj. 失望的，难过的discuraged adj. 沮丧的，气馁的discntent n. 不满；不满足glmy adj. 沮丧的let sb. dwn 使某人失望feel let dwn 感到沮丧be depressed abut sth. 对某事感到沮丧depressing news 令人沮丧的消息
disappint vt. 使失望 → disappinted adj. 失望的，沮丧的 → disappinting adj. 令人失望的 → disappintment n. 失望，扫兴despair vi. 绝望 → despairing adj. 无望的；感到绝望的displease vt. 使不愉快 → displeased adj. 不满意的hpeless adj. 绝望的 → hpelessness n. 绝望desperate adj. 绝望的 → desperatin n. 绝望dissatisfied adj. 不满意的
He felt very disappinted abut his failure t pass the exam. 他对没有通过考试感到非常失望。She was cmpletely vercme by disappintment. 她完全被失望的情绪压倒。Wrds cannt express hw disappinted I was. 言语无法形容我是多么失望。She swallwed her sigh f disappintment and lked at her dancing partner. 她忍住失望的叹息，望着她的舞伴。I wuld think it was a very tearful and desperate time fr him. 我认为这对他来说是一个非常令人伤心和绝望的时刻。
A plice fficer gave evidence that n arrival at the plice statin, the cmplainant was very upset and tearful. 一名警官作证说，起诉人一到警察局就感到非常沮丧，而且泪流满面。Lucy gave a frwn f disappintment and shk her head after a mment. 露西失望地皱了皱眉头，一会儿又摇了摇头。“I despair f her,” he sighed. “我对她感到绝望。”他叹息道。Finally, never leave the examinatin hall in despair, hwever hpeless things may seem. 最后，永远不要绝望地离开考场，无论事情看起来多么无望。I was smewhat glmy and depressed thse days, but I felt refreshed by the surrunding trees and flwers. 那些日子我有些阴郁和沮丧，但周围的树木和花朵使我感到神清气爽。
Every nerve in my bdy is tense. 我的每根神经都绷得紧紧的。My heart is as sweet as hney. 我心里像喝了蜜一样，甜滋滋的。Her heart almst leapt int her thrat. 她的心快要跳到嗓子眼了。A smile lit up her face. 微笑使她容光焕发。A ripple f sadness welled up inside him. 他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。His heart was punding with excitement. 他激动得心怦怦直跳。Lneliness and grief cme in waves. 孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。S angry was she that she went red in the face. 她气得面红耳赤。I felt as if a knife were piercing my heart and my tears kept running dwn. 我心如刀绞，眼泪不住地往下流。
She felt extremely excited and delighted, her eyes glittering/sparkling with jy and sweetness. 她感到极度兴奋和喜悦，她的眼睛因喜悦和甜蜜而闪闪发光。She bit her lwer lip t keep it frm trembling and then tears filled her eyes and started running dwn her cheeks. 她咬着下唇不让它发抖，然后眼泪充满了双眼，开始顺着脸颊往下流。Her eyes misted ver as she immersed herself in their gd memries. 当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆中时，泪水模糊了她的眼睛。At the sight f the fierce wlf, I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr and my palms were sweating.一看到那匹凶猛的狼，我就被一股强烈的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心怦怦跳。
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