高中人教版 (2019)Unit 5 Working the Land课时练习

这是一份高中人教版 (2019)Unit 5 Working the Land课时练习，共22页。试卷主要包含了　　　　　　　 10， Mr，slutin　考查名词等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1.With the glbalizatin f the ecnmy, fd security has becme a (广泛的) cncern fr mst peple arund the wrld.
2.Plitical decisins and activities affect all (方面) f peple's lives.
3.Let yur child make sme small decisins. Fr i , allw him t chse what clthes t wear at the weekend.
Ⅱ.一词多义
1.Perseverance(坚持不懈) is a preciuscharacteristic.词性: ;词义:
2.The grup shared necharacteristic—they were all under 30.词性: ;词义:
3.Bananas have their wn characteristic smell.
词性: ;词义:
4.Black tea can help yur stmach digest fd easily. 词性: ;词义:
5.He paused, waiting fr her t digest the infrmatin. 词性: ;词义:
6.The magazine, Reader's Digest, is famus fr making cmplicated subjects understandable t millins f readers.词性: ;词义:
Ⅲ.单句语法填空
1.【易错题】The path extended int the (deep) f the frest.
2.All theries riginate frm practice and turn serve practice.
3.Fd prduced frm chemical farming is nt (nutritin).
4.(2024山东省实验中学调研) The great advantage f telling the truth is that ne is mre likely t sund (cnvince).
5.(2024广东广州二中月考)All her time devted t (d) experiments, she has n time fr entertainment.
6.Rted scientific research, the new treatment ffers hpe t patients with rare diseases.
7.We're lking fr a headmaster, ne wh will devte himself (entire) t the cause f educatin.
8.It is essential that he (get) sme reliable infrmatin befre making inferences.
Ⅳ.完成句子
1.我们尽力使我们的房间干净整洁。(make+宾语+宾补)
We try ur best t .
2.(2023新课标Ⅰ写作)我确信把我们随机分组不是一个好主意。(cnvince)
it is nt a gd idea t pair us up randmly.
3.我不知道该如何处理这个问题,所以我别无选择,只好向你求助。(alternative)
I didn't knw hw t deal with the prblem, s I yu fr help.
4.据估计,过了三个小时这对夫妻才被发现并从山洞中救出来。(estimate)
it was three hurs befre the cuple was fund and saved frm the cave.(读后续写—脱险)
5.(2022全国乙写作)可以很容易地看出,选择听英语歌曲和看英语电影的学生的百分比分别为65%和50%。(it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
the percentages f students wh chse t listen t English sngs and watch English mvies are 65% and 50% respectively.
能力提升练
Ⅰ.课文语法填空
Given the fact that chemical pesticides and artificial fertilisers can fight crp diseases and increase prductin, they 1 (be) in widespread use since the 1950s. When they were first intrduced, many farmers cnsidered them as a great way. Hwever, with time 2 (g) by, they have been prved harmful t the envirnment and peple's health if 3 (use) fr a lng time. 4 (tackle) this prblem, sme farmers have switched t rganic farming 5 an alternative. And rganic fd has becme 6 favrite fr many custmers. Farmers wh grw rganic prducts rely n it that 7 (nature) means culd keep their sil fertile and free f disease. Different rganic methds have cme up, 8 gal is t grw gd fd while aviding damage t the envirnment r t peple's health. Hwever, rganic farming cannt replace chemical farming 9 (instant), fr it's feeding a huge number f peple wrldwide nw. There is still a lng way t g befre scientists find a suitable 10 (slve) that can serve the high demand fr fd arund the wrld while prtecting the envirnment.
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Ⅱ.语法填空
(2024山东青岛期中)
Rice, cmmnly planted in many cuntries, serves 1 a majr surce f fd fr mre than half f the glbal ppulatin.
Peple in ancient China 2 (begin) grwing wild rice, learning hw t cultivate(种植) rice in fields and imprve its quality. 3 is widely believed that the cultivatin f rice riginated in China's Yangtze River basin, arund 13,500 t 8,200 years ag. Since then, rice 4 (pass) arund the wrld thrugh migratin and trade.
Arund 4,000 t 3,000 BC, rice was intrduced t Sutheast Asia, and during the Middle Ages peple frm India and suthern Eurpe gt t knw the plant and tk it hme. Currently, half f the wrld's ppulatin cnsumes rice, 5 (primary) in Asia, suthern Eurpe, and certain trpical regins in America and Africa. Over time, 6 (variety) f rice were develped t suit different regins and preferences. There are different rice dishes 7 (find) all ver the wrld, including paellas, sushi, bibimbap, ristt and jambalaya.
Tday, rice plays a vital rle in feeding billins f peple while fd 8 (shrt) are a wrldwide prblem. China is the wrld's largest prducer and cnsumer f rice. Yuan Lngping, a renwned Chinese scientist 9 devted his life t develping high-yielding rice, made significant cntributins t imprving rice quality and meeting the 10 (rise) demand fr fd arund the wrld.
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Ⅲ.阅读理解
(2024山东滕州一中月考)
In a street largely unchanged since it was built in the 1800s, Hbart's Battery Pint is prbably the last place yu wuld expect t find a farm.
In ne crner f Peter Handy's backyard is a cntrlled envirnment unit that huses the vertical farm(垂直农场), the first f its kind in the suthern hemisphere (半球). Mr. Handy is changing the definitin f what it means t be a farmer. “I knw it's really funny, because when peple say t me, ‘Where's yur farm?’, I'll say, ‘It's in Battery Pint.’ and they're like, ‘N, there's n farm in Battery Pint.’,” he said. “Peple think the Martians(火星人) have landed because we've gt this massive pink light that cmes ut f it frm the bttm, but ther than that, they have n idea.”
Nt just a backyard prject, Mr. Handy is running a business. “It's here because I need t be as clse as pssible t my custmers, the chefs and restaurants f Hbart,” he said. “I aim t use the fewest fd miles and make this a super-efficient business.”
Using LED lights and hydrpnic nutrients, the farm grws leafy greens, rt vegetables and flwering plants. “I dn't have t wrry abut flds, winds, wild animals, electric fences, turning the sil ver,” Mr. Handy said. Using 95 percent less water than traditinal farming, the farm ticks all the bxes envirnmentally. “I mean, this is definitely nt the answer t fd sustainability(可持续性) in the wrld. But it's definitely part f it.”
Science writer Julian Cribb believes a wrld fd crisis is cming, due t a cmbinatin f lss f water, lss f tpsil, climate change and veruse f chemicals. “We're ging t need t change the way we prduce fd and change the human diet at the same time,” he said, “and new urban farming methds wuld make mst f the wrld's great cities feed themselves.”
Mr. Cribb said Australia was still quite a way ff frm adpting urban farming. But he believes that it pses a rather unique pprtunity fr Australian farmers t sell their prfessinal knwledge t cities, teaching peple t grw fd in urban envirnments.
1.What might peple think f Mr. Handy's farm?
A.Scary. B.Impressive. C.Disappinting. D.Cnfusing.
2.What des Mr. Handy say abut his farm?
A.It is nt affected by weather. B.It mainly prduces flwers.
C.It serves custmers frm near and far. D.It is the slutin t fd shrtages.
3.What's the purpse f Mr. Cribb's wrds in Paragraph 5?
A.T praise his cntributin t science.
B.T explain hw urban farming wrks.
C.T stress the necessity f urban farming.
D.T present the seriusness f the fd crisis.
4.What's the passage mainly abut?
A.Cities are struggling t get fd.
B.Technlgy is changing peple's life.
C.Peter Handy is a successful businessman.
D.Fd prductin is being mved int cities.
Ⅳ.七选五
(2024山西大同月考)
Americans cver millins f acres f valuable agricultural land arund their hmes with lawn, bushes r trees. Yet as a landscape designer, I knw mst edible(可食用的) plants are beautiful and that hmewners culd grw a meaningful amunt f fd in their yards. I'm cnvinced that an edible landscape is the mst interesting landscape cncept fr the future. 1 .
Fd Safety. Yu knw which chemicals yu use, and huge batches f vegetables wn't be cmbined and therefre can't make each ther dirty.
2 . Fd frm yur yard requires n shipping and little refrigeratin, and less energy is used t plw, sw the seeds, spray the plants, and harvest the prduce.
Water Savings. Tests shw that mst hme gardeners use less than half f the water agricultural prductin needs t prduce a crp. 3 . And unlike in agriculture, fields aren't flded and huge barrels(桶) f water aren't needed t cl dwn the harvest.
Mney Savings. Yu can grw an unbelievable amunt f fd in a beautiful small space. See Grw $700 f Fd in 100 Square Feet and my website fr exact figures fr sme ppular crps.
Better Nutritin. 4 , fully ripe, just-picked, hmegrwn fruits and vegetables have mre vitamins than supermarket prduce that is usually picked under-ripe and is days r weeks ld when yu eat it.
If yu'd like t try a fun, helpful garden planning tl, as yu get started n yur edible landscape, 5 .
A.Time Savings
B.Energy Savings
C.If eaten sn after picked
D.yu can start yur edible landscape
E.Drip irrigatin(滴灌) saves even mre water
F.Edible landscapes ffer incredible benefits
G.check ut the new Vegetable Garden Planner
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Ⅴ.读后续写
(2023广西南宁三校联合调研)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I grew up in a pr family with six brthers, three sisters, my father and mther. We had little mney and few gds, but plenty f lve and attentin. I was happy and energetic. I understd that n matter hw pr a persn was, he culd still affrd a dream.
My dream was t be an athlete. By the time I was sixteen, I culd thrw a ninety-mile-per-hur fastball and hit anything mving n the baseball field. And I was s lucky that my high schl cach was Ollie Jarvis, wh nt nly believed in me, but ften tld me “Dream is priceless.” Hwever, when I was abut t get ff the grund, ne particular incident happened, which almst ruined my lng-held dream.
It was the summer hliday in Senir Tw and a friend recmmended me fr a summer jb. I was ffered $12.25 per hur. Cmpared with the average $3.5, that was a big sum. I was s excited, because this meant a chance f mney in my pcket, certainly mney fr a new bike and new clthes, and the start f savings fr a huse fr my mther. The prspect(前景) f the jb was inviting, and I jumped at the pprtunity.
Then I realized I wuld have t give up summer baseball training t handle the wrk schedule. I didn't dare t tell my cach. I thught f the advice my mther ften gave me when I lacked curage, “If yu make yur bed, yu have t lie n it.” I decided t talk t my cach in persn. After all, my dream f buying my mm a huse and having mney in my pcket was wrthy f his disappintment.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
I gathered my curage and kncked at his dr.






That questin reminded me f what my cach used t say.







答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 3 Using Language, AssessingYur Prgress & Vide Time
基础过关练
Ⅰ 2.aspects 3.instance
Ⅱ.1.名词;品质 句意:坚持不懈是一种宝贵的品质。
2.名词;特点,特征 句意:这群人有一个共同的特点——他们都在30岁以下。
3.形容词;特有的,独特的 句意:香蕉有它们自己独特的气味。
4.动词;消化 句意:红茶可以帮助你的胃容易地消化食物。
5.动词;领会,理解 句意:他停顿了一下,等着她领会这个信息。
6.名词;文摘 句意:《读者文摘》杂志以使复杂的话题为数百万读者所理解而闻名。
Ⅲ 考查名词。句意:小路一直延伸到森林深处。由设空处前后的“”结构可知,设空处是中心词,应用名词形式。the depths f the frest意为“森林深处”。故填depths。
易错归因 本题易误填depth。注意这里表示“深处”,应用复数形式。单数形式depth表示“深度”。
2.in 考查介词。句意:所有理论都源于实践,并反过来为实践服务。in turn意为“反过来;转而”。故填in。
3.nutritius 考查形容词。设空处在句中作表语,表示主语Fd的性质,所以应填形容词形式,故填nutritius,表示“有营养的;营养丰富的”。
4.cnvincing 考查形容词。句意:说真话最大的优势就是听上去更可能令人信服。设空处作表语,表示“令人信服的”,应用-ing形式的形容词。故填 cnvincing。
5.ding 考查动名词。句意:由于她所有的时间都用于做实验,她没有时间娱乐。分析句子结构可知,整个句子为一个简单句,逗号前构成独立主格结构,空前的All her time与devte之间为被动关系,主动语态为devte all her time t (d) experiments,所以设空处应使用动名词形式。故填ding。
6.in 考查介词。句意:这种新疗法植根于科学研究,为罕见病患者带来了希望。be rted in表示“根源在于……”。故填in。该句中 Rted in scientific research位于句首作状语。
7.entirely 考查副词。句意:我们正在寻找一位校长,一个要完全致力于教育事业的人。设空处作状语修饰动词devte,应用副词形式,表示“完全地”。故填entirely。
8.get 考查虚拟语气。It is essential that...句式中,It作形式主语,essential为表语,that引导主语从句,从句需用虚拟语气,谓语使用“shuld+动词原形”的形式,其中shuld可以省略。故填get。句意:在作出推论之前,他获得一些可靠的信息是很重要的。
Ⅳ ur rm(s) clean and tidy 2.I'm cnvinced that 3.had n alternative but t turn t 4.It is/was estimated that 5.It can easily be seen that
能力提升练
Ⅰ been 考查动词的时态及主谓一致。此处指自20世纪50年代以来,它们就已经被广泛使用。由since the 1950s可知此处应用现在完成时,主语为they,故填have been。
2.ging 考查现在分词。time与g by之间为主动关系,with time ging by意为“随着时间的流逝”。故填ging。
3.used 考查过去分词。此处指如果长时间使用,它们对环境和人体健康是有害的。use与其逻辑主语they之间为被动关系,应用过去分词,故填used。
4.T tackle 考查动词不定式。此处指为了解决这个问题,一些农民已经转向有机农业作为替代。设空处表示目的, 故填T tackle。
5.as 考查介词。此处表示“作为”, 应用介词as。
6.a 考查冠词。favrite在这里作名词,表示“特别喜爱的事物”,此处第一次提到,表泛指,且favrite的发音以辅音音素开头,故用不定冠词a。
7.natural 考查形容词。设空处作定语修饰名词means,故用形容词形式natural。
8.whse 考查定语从句。设空处无提示词且前面有逗号,逗号前面是一个完整的句子,故推测设空处引导非限制性定语从句,此处表示“不同的有机(耕作)的方法已经被提出,这些方法的目的是在种植优质食物的同时避免对环境和人们的健康造成损害”,结合此处表达的意思可知,此处非限制性定语从句的先行词为Different rganic methds,关系词在从句中作定语。故填whse。
9.instantly 考查副词。设空处作状语,所以应该用副词形式,故填instantly。
10.slutin 考查名词。此处指科学家在找到合适的解决办法之前还有很长一段路要走。设空处作动词find的宾语,且由前面的不定冠词a可知此处应用单数名词slutin。
Ⅱ.◎语篇解读 本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了稻米的历史以及重要作用。
1.as 考查介词。serve as为固定搭配,表示“用作;起……作用”。故填as。句意:在许多国家广泛种植的水稻是全球一半以上人口的主要食物来源。
2.began 考查时态。设空处为本句谓语,由句中的状语in ancient China可推知,此处表示过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。故填began。句意:中国人在古代就开始种植野生稻,学习如何在田里种植水稻并提高其质量。
3.It 考查代词。本句使用了“It is believed that...”结构,意为“人们认为……,据信……”,其中It作形式主语,that引导主语从句。故填It。句意:人们普遍认为,水稻种植起源于中国的长江流域,距今约13,500年至8,200年。
4.has been passed 考查时态、语态和主谓一致。设空处为本句谓语,由句中的时间状语Since then可推知,空处应该用现在完成时。pass在句中表示“传递;使流通”,为及物动词,主语rice与其为被动关系,故用被动语态。主语rice为不可数名词,所以谓语动词应用单数形式,故填has been passed。句意:从那时起,大米就通过迁徙和贸易在世界各地流通。
5.primarily 考查副词。设空处修饰空后的介词短语,作状语,应用副词形式。故填primarily。句意:目前,世界上一半的人口食用大米,主要分布在亚洲、南欧以及美洲和非洲的某些热带地区。
6.varieties 考查名词复数。句意:随着时间的推移,多种多样的米饭被开发出来,以适应不同的地区和偏好。varieties f=a variety f,表示“各种各样的”。故填varieties。
7.fund 考查过去分词。句意:世界各地可以找到不同的米饭菜肴,包括西班牙什锦饭、寿司、石锅拌饭、意大利调味饭和美国南部的什锦饭。本句是there be结构,所以设空处应用非谓语动词形式。根据句子结构可知设空处作后置定语,修饰名词短语rice dishes,且两者有被动关系,所以用过去分词。故填fund。
8.shrtages 考查名词。设空处与fd构成名词短语,作主语,应用名词形式,结合系动词使用了复数形式are可知,空处用shrtages,意为“缺少,不足”。fd shrtages意为“粮食短缺”。
9.wh/that 考查定语从句。句意:袁隆平是著名的中国科学家,他毕生致力于研发高产水稻,为改善稻米品质和满足世界各地日益增长的粮食需求做出了重大贡献。设空处引导限制性定语从句,修饰人,关系词在从句中作主语,所以用关系代词wh或that。
10.rising 考查现在分词。该句为含有定语从句的主从复合句,主句中已有谓语made,所以设空处应用非谓语动词。设空处作定语修饰名词demand,rise与demand之间有主动关系,且表示正在进行的动作,所以用现在分词形式。故填rising。
【高频词汇】 1.quality n.质量;品质 2.riginate v.起源,发源 3.currently adv.目前,当下 4.preference n.爱好;偏爱 5.vital adj.极其重要的 6.significant adj.有重大意义的;显著的 7.demand n.要求;需求 v.强烈要求;需要
【差距词汇】 1.migratin n.迁移;迁徙;移居
2.renwned adj.有名望的;著名的
长难句
原句 Yuan Lngping, a renwned Chinese scientist wh/that devted his life t develping high-yielding rice, made significant cntributins t imprving rice quality and meeting the rising demand fr fd arund the wrld.
分析 这是一个主从复合句。主句主语为Yuan Lngping, a renwned Chinese 为主语的同位语。wh/that devted his life t develping high-yielding rice为定语从句,修饰先行词scientist,其中动名词develping是介词t的宾语;主句谓语部分是made significant cntributins t,其中介词t的宾语是由and连接的并列结构构成(imprving...和meeting...);现在分词rising作定语,修饰名词demand。
译文 袁隆平是著名的中国科学家,他毕生致力于研发高产水稻,为改善稻米品质和满足世界各地日益增长的粮食需求做出了重大贡献。
Ⅲ.◎语篇解读 本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了Peter Handy的城市农场,以及在城市里种植的必要性。
1.D 推理判断题。根据第二段最后两句可知,人们认为Battery Pint没有农场;垂直农场发出的巨大的粉红色光线让人们误认为是火星人着陆了。故可推知,人们对Handy先生的农场感到困惑。故选D。
2.A 推理判断题。根据第四段的第二句Handy先生所说的话“我不必担心洪水、风、野生动物、电栅栏、翻土”可推知,Handy先生的农场不会受到天气的影响。故选A。
3.C 推理判断题。第五段中Cribb 认为,一场世界粮食危机即将到来。我们将需要改变我们生产食物的方式,同时改变人类的饮食,而新的城市农业方法会使世界上大多数大城市都能自给自足。由此可推知,Cribb的话的目的是强调发展城市农业的必要性。故选C。
4.D 主旨大意题。文章第一段提到农场建在了城市的街道;第二、三、四段具体介绍了该农场;第五段讲了在城市建农场的必要性;最后一段提到澳大利亚采用城市农场的方法还需要相当长的时间,但它为农民提供了一个机会,可以向城市出售他们的专业知识,教人们在城市环境中种植粮食。由以上信息可推知,本文主要讲了农业种植向城市发展。D项“粮食生产正在向城市转移”能够概括文章内容。故选D。
【高频词汇】 1.massive adj.巨大的;非常严重的
2.definitely adv.肯定;确实 3.due t由于 4.lss n.失去,损失 5.adpt v.采用;采取;采纳;领养 6.unique adj.独特的;唯一的;特有的
【熟词生义】 1.huse v.容纳,提供地方 2.greens n.绿叶蔬菜
【差距词汇】 hydrpnic adj.水栽的
长难句
原句 Peple think the Martians have landed because we've gt this massive pink light that cmes ut f it frm the bttm, but ther than that, they have n idea.
分析 本句是一个并列复合句。并列连词but连接前后表示转折意义的两个分句。在第一个分句中,think 后的the Martians have landed是一个省略连接词的宾语从句;连词because引导原因状语从句;light后的 that引导定语从句且在从句中作主语。在第二个分句中,ther than that为状语。
译文 人们认为火星人着陆了,因为从垂直农场的底部发出了巨大的粉红色光线,但除此之外,他们一无所知。
Ⅳ.◎语篇解读 本文是一篇说明文。作为景观设计师的作者向人们建议在自己的院子里种植既可食用又美观的植物。
1.F 过渡句。根据上句“I'm cnvinced that an edible landscape is the mst interesting landscape cncept fr the future.”可知,作者认为可食用景观有发展前景。结合下文段落主旨句 “Fd Safety(食品安全)”“Water Savings.(节约水)”“Mney Savings.(节约钱)”以及“Better Nutritin.(更好的营养)”可知,下文提到的都是可食用景观的好处。F项“可食用景观提供了难以置信的好处”引出下文可食用景观的好处,符合逻辑,其中benefits为关键词。故选F。
2.B 主旨句。设空处在段首,根据语篇结构可知,设空处为主旨句。根据下文提到的“你院子里的食物不需要运输,需要很少的冷藏,更少的能源用来耕地、播种、喷洒和收获”可推知,种植在自己院子里的可食用景观更加节能。故B项“节约能源”能够概括本段内容。故选B。
3.E 细节句。根据本段主旨句“Water Savings.”可知,本段内容应是在自己的院子里种植可以节约水。分析选项可知,E项“滴灌甚至会节约更多的水”与节约水有关,符合逻辑。故选E。
4.C 细节句。设空处为前半句,后半句讲到完全成熟的、刚采摘的、家种的水果和蔬菜要比超市里那些通常是在未成熟的时候采摘的、几天或几周后才吃的水果和蔬菜含有更多的维生素。结合选项可推知,C项 “如果采摘后立即食用”能与下文连成一句,整句将家里种植的水果和蔬菜与超市的水果和蔬菜进行比较。故选C。
5.G 细节句。设空处为后半句,由空前的逗号可知,空处选项首字母不可以大写。分析选项可知,仅能从D项和G项中选择,而D项内容与前文“as yu get started n yur edible landscape”有较大重复,所以排除D项。故选G。
【高频词汇】 1.landscape n.风景,景色 2.therefre adv.因此 3.harvest v.& n. 收获 4.figure n.数字;人物;身材 5.vitamin n.维生素 6.incredible adj.难以置信的 7.check ut查看
【差距词汇】 1.plw v.耕(地) 2.spray v.向……喷洒
长难句
原句 If eaten sn after picked, fully ripe, just-picked, hmegrwn fruits and vegetables have mre vitamins than supermarket prduce that is usually picked under-ripe and is days r weeks ld when yu eat it.
分析 这是一个主从复合句。句子主干是fully ripe, just-picked, hmegrwn fruits and vegetables have mre vitamins than supermarket prduce;If eaten...是状语从句的省略形式,还原后为If fruits and vegetables are eaten sn after they are picked,作条件状语;that引导定语从句,修饰先行词prduce,定语从句的谓语由并列连词and连接;连词when引导时间状语从句。
译文 如果即摘即吃,完全成熟的、刚采摘的、家种的水果和蔬菜要比超市里那些通常是在未成熟的时候采摘的、几天或几周后才吃的水果和蔬菜含有更多的维生素。
Ⅴ.
One pssible versin:
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That questin reminded me f what my cach used t say. Yes, the dream is priceless. It's stupid t earn pcket mney at the expense f my dream. I held my head high and said firmly, “Srry, Mr. Jarvis. I knw what t d next.” My cach smiled with great satisfactin. That summer I dedicated myself t baseball training. And ne year later, I btained a baseball schlarship t the university. I knew I wuld sn buy my mm a huse. Thankfully, I made a right chice. Withut Mr. Jarvis, I wuld never knw I culd affrd a dream.写作指导
情节线
情感线
故事要素
Time
the summer hliday in Senir Tw
开心、充满活力
感激、充满期待
兴奋
忐忑
教练的态度
(失望、难过、
生气)?
“我”的反应
(羞愧)?
Place
in the cach's rm
Character
I, a friend f mine, my mther, my cach
情节
Backgrund
“我”的家里条件不好,但充满爱和关怀。“我”梦想成为一名运动员。“我”遇到了一个好教练,教练告诉“我”梦想是无价的。
Beginning
高二暑假,朋友给“我”推荐了一份暑期工作,工资很可观。
Develpment
“我”想抓住机会打工赚钱,但要放弃夏季棒球训练。“我”决定当面跟教练说明情况。
续写方向
Para. 1
I gathered my curage and kncked at his dr.
①教练同意了吗?
②他说了什么?做了什么?
③“我”如何表现?
Para. 2
That questin reminded me f what my cach used t say.
①教练过去说过什么?(联系上文)
②“我”的想法发生了什么变化?
③“我”是如何做的?
④结果如何?