2024届高三英语基础写作课件：基础写作-向外教建议庆祝方式

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假定你是李华，你班在校英语戏剧节中获得一等奖，外教James打算为此庆祝，并委托你调查同学们喜欢的方式。请你根据调查结果，给外教写一封邮件，内容包括:1. 表达感谢;2. 提出个人建议;3. 说明理由。注意:1.词数 80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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再次表达感谢，希望建议对外教有帮助
调查结果＋提出个人建议＋理由
表达感谢之情多样句式I am writing this letter t thank yu fr …I am writing t express my sincere thanks ’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude wuld like t cnvey in this letter my heartfelt thanks t yu fr… With deepest gratitude I write yu this letter t express…I am bliged /əˈblaɪdʒd/ 感激的 t yu we yu a great deal fr ...
方向1---感谢老师庆祝班级胜利，感谢老师考虑我们的喜好【1】我写这封信是为了表达我衷心的感谢，感谢您打算庆祝我们班在学校英语戏剧节上的胜利。I’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur intentin t celebrate ur class’s victry in the schl English drama festival.【2】我想在这封信中衷心感谢您在策划我们的英国戏剧节胜利庆典时考虑到我们的喜好。I wuld like t cnvey in this letter my heartfelt thanks t yu fr cnsidering ur preferences in planning the celebratin fr ur English drama festival win.
方向1---感谢老师庆祝班级胜利，感谢老师考虑我们的喜好【3】我感谢您为我们的英国戏剧节的成功举办庆典所做的努力。I appreciate yur effrts in arranging a celebratin fr ur English drama festival success. 【4】感谢您考虑我们对如何庆祝我们在英国戏剧节上获得第一名的意见。Thank yu fr cnsidering ur pinins n hw t celebrate ur first-place win at the English drama festival.
方向2---感谢老师的信任【5】我很感激委托我调查同学们对庆祝英国戏剧节胜利的偏好。I’m grateful fr entrusting me with the task f surveying ur classmates’ preferences fr celebrating ur English drama festival victry. Thank yu fr entrusting me with the task f surveying ur classmates’ preferences fr celebrating ur first-place win at the English drama festival.cmmissin me t cnduct/ carry ut/ undertake a survey n/ int sth.
“表达/ 阐述/ 说明/ 展示/ 体现" 的表达方式display/ represent/ demnstrate/ shw/ cnvey/ illustrate/ indicate/ describe/ reflect/ reveal/ utline 概述某事物
描述占比句式1：我们看到，...比例最大/小，高/低达/占…%。We cannt fail t see that the biggest/ least share is..., with a prprtin as high/ lw as / accunting fr...%.【6】我们看到周末郊游所占比例最大，比例为88%。We cannt fail t see that the biggest share is an uting at weekends, with a prprtin as high as 88%.
句式2：调查结果显示，绝大多数人...更倾向于...，其次是... %，以及是... %。The survey results shw an verwhelming preference fr..., with ...% f the vtes, fllwed by ... at ...%, and... at...%.【7】调查结果显示，绝大多数人 (88%) 更倾向于周末出游，其次是观看英语电影 (59%)，以及分享食物和饮料 (32%)。The survey results shw an verwhelming preference fr a weekend uting, with 88% f the vtes, fllwed by watching English mvies with 59%, and sharing fd and drinks with 32%.
句式3：...居首 /二/ 三位，占比…%。The amunt f  first/secnd/third/last, the percentage being ...%.【8】周末外出的比例排名第一，占 88%。观看英语电影排名第二，比例为 59%。分享食物和饮料排名第三，比例为 32%。The prprtin f uting at weekends ranks first, the percentage being 88%. The prprtin f watching English mvies ranks secnd, the percentage being 59%. The prprtin f sharing fd and drinks ranks third, the percentage being 32%.
句式4：...占比最多/少：Regarding the preferred..., make up/ take up/ accunt fr the largest/ least number/ percentage f …【9】关于选择庆祝活动，周末郊游所占比例最大，为 88%；观看英语电影所占比例为 59%；分享食物和饮料所占比例最小，为 32%。Regarding the preferred celebratin activities, uting at weekend accunts fr the largest percentage f 88%, watching English mvies ccupies the percentage f 59%, sharing fd and drinks takes up the least percentage f 32%.
句式5：也不难发现。。。分别占据 is als nt difficult t find that ... accunt fr ...%, ...%and ...% respectively.【10】我们不难发现，分别周末郊游，观看英语电影，分享食物和饮料分别占 88%， 59%和 32%。It is als nt difficult t find that uting at weekends, watching English mvies and sharing fd and drinks accunt fr 88%, 59%, 32% respectively.
句式6：在调查我们的同学后，我发现…%更喜欢，…%更喜欢，…%更喜欢 surveying ur classmates, I find that ...% prefer ..., ...% enjy ..., and ...% favr...【11】在对同学的调查中，我发现 88% 的人喜欢在周末外出游玩，59% 的人喜欢看英语电影，32% 的人喜欢分享食物和饮料。Upn surveying ur classmates, I find that 88% prefer an uting at weekends, 59% enjy watching English mvies, and 32% favr sharing fd and drinks.
句式7：如图所示，大多数受访学生喜欢...，占 ...%。相比之下，喜欢...和...分别占 ...% 和...%.As is clearly shwn n the chart, the majrity f the students surveyed..., accunting fr cntrast, the students fr...【12】如图所示，大多数受访学生喜欢周末外出，占 88%。相比之下，喜欢看英文电影和分享食物和饮料的学生分别占 59% 和 32%。As is clearly shwn n the chart, the majrity f the students surveyed like ging uting at weekends, accunting fr 88%. By cntrast, the students wh enjy watching English mvies and sharing fd and drinks accunt fr 59% and 32% respectively.
1. Frm my pint f view, it is better fr us t... 2. As far as I am cncerned, I am really/ cmpletely in favr I take/ hld a psitive view f… 4. In my pinin, I believe that ... wuld be a gd chice.
方向1：同意占比最高的方式
【13】考虑到人们对郊游的强烈偏好，我也相信这将是一种理想的庆祝方式。它不仅提供了一个放松和愉快的氛围，还培养了我们之间的情谊和团结。此外，它还让我们从日常生活中解脱出来，让我们放松和充电。Given the strng preference fr an uting at weekends, I als believe it wuld be an ideal way t celebrate. Nt nly des it prvide a relaxing and enjyable atmsphere but it als fsters a sense f friendship and unity amng us. Furthermre, it ffers a break frm ur daily rutine, allwing us t relax and recharge urselves.
【15】虽然所有的选择看起来都很吸引人，但我建议组织一次郊游。这将为我们提供一个绝佳的机会，让我们在轻松的环境中建立联系，享受彼此的陪伴。这也将给我们一个机会，让我们摆脱日常生活，一起庆祝我们的成就。While all the ptins seem appealing, I wuld recmmend rganizing an uting at weekends. Nt nly des it prvide an excellent pprtunity fr us t bnd with each ther and enjy each ther’s cmpany in a relaxed setting, but it als gives us a chance t step away frm ur daily rutine and celebrate ur achievement tgether.
【16】再次感谢你们为组织这次庆祝活动所做的努力。我相信，无论采取何种形式，这都将是一次难忘的活动。Thank yu again fr yur effrts in rganizing this celebratin. I am cnfident that whatever frm it takes, it will be a memrable ne.【17】我相信这次郊游会给我们留下永恒的记忆，并加强我们班级的团结。再次感谢你们考虑我们的意见。I believe this uting will create lasting memries and strengthen ur class unity. Thank yu again fr cnsidering ur pinins.
【18】我们很高兴能以这种有意义的方式l来庆祝我们取得的成绩。希望我的建议对您组织这次活动有益。We are excited abut the prspect f celebrating ur achievement in such a meaningful way. Hpe that my suggestin culd help with yur management f this acvitity. 【19】再次感谢您的支持和指导，如果我的建议能够得到考虑，我将不胜感激。Once again, thank yu fr yur supprt and guidance, and I wuld appreciate it if my suggestin culd be taken int accunt/ cnsideratin.
Dear James, I hpe this email finds yu well. We are grateful fr yur enthusiasm in celebrating ur class winning the first prize at the English Drama Festival. Yur supprt means a lt t us!Based n the survey I cnducted, 88% f us are enthusiastic abut a weekend uting, while 59% favur an English mvie night, fllwed by 32% wh prefer a fd party. My preference is in line with 与相一致 the majrity, s I suggest a hiking trip alng the nearby greenway, which has lively plants and stunning views. Such an uting is perfect fr us t take a break frm study rutines, strengthen friendship and make ur success mre memrable. Thanks again fr yur thughtful gesture. Lking frward t ur exciting celebratin! Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
Dear James, I wuld like t cnvey in this letter my heartfelt thanks t yu fr cnsidering ur preferences in planning the celebratin fr ur English drama festival win. As is clearly shwn n the chart, the majrity f the students surveyed like ging uting at weekends, accunting fr 88%. By cntrast, the students wh enjy watching English mvies and sharing fd and drinks accunt fr 59% and 32%. Given the strng preference fr an uting, I als believe it wuld be an ideal way t celebrate. Nt nly des it prvide a relaxing and enjyable atmsphere but it als fsters a sense f cnnectin and unity amng us. Furthermre, it ffers a break frm ur daily rutine, allwing us t relax and recharge urselves.Thank yu nce again fr yur cnsideratin and fr making this celebratin pssible. Sincerely hpe that my suggestin culd help with yur management. Best wishes! Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
Dear James, Thank yu fr trusting me t survey ur classmates’ preferred activities fr celebrating ur success at the English Drama Festival. Here are the results and my persnal pinin. Frm the survey, utings n weekends and English mvie nights are favred by 88% and 59% f us respectively, with 32% keen n sharing fd and drinks. T meet the varied interests, I wuld recmmend we rganize an utdr gathering at the city park, where we can bring varius fds and drinks t share. I believe this plan wuld ideally satisfy thse seeking an adventure and thse wh wish t relax and enjy gd cmpany. Thank yu nce again fr yur supprt and fr cnsidering my suggestin! Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
学校英文报正在开展以 Learning English Beynd the Classrm为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述;2. 简单评论;3. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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Learning English is an essential skill fr students, and it’s imprtant t explre ways t imprve language prficiency beynd the restrictin f the classrm.It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.But frm my pint f view, t cmbine the advantage f all kinds f methds, such as listening, speaking, reading, viewing and writing is the mst efficient.Thus it is learning English beynd the classrm that assists students t braden their hrizns and becme the high quality talents.
Learning English is ___________ (一项基本技能) fr students, and it’s imprtant t explre ways t ___________ (提高语言能力) beynd the cnfines f the classrm.___________ (不难看出)the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is ___________ (分别)65% and 50%. Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites ___________ (只占) 18% and 12%.But frm my pint f view, ___________ (结合各种方法的优势), such as listening , speaking, reading, viewing and writing is ___________ (最有效的).Thus it is learning English beynd the classrm that assists students t ___________ (开阔视野) and ___________ (成为高素质人才).
学校英文报正在开展以“Hw wuld yu use yur smart phne?”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 调查结果的描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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Hw wuld yu use the smart phne?A survey n hw students wuld use the smart phne has been cnducted recently. As is illustrated in the bar chart, frty-six percent f the students use the smart phne t play nline games while seventy-five percent f the students tend t watch vides with their phnes. Students wh chse t keep in tuch with their friends by phne accunt fr eighteen percent and in the meanwhile thirty percent f the students prefer t use their phnes as learning tls.The result f the survey reveals an unquestinable fact that students tend t use their phnes mre fr entertainment than fr cmmunicatin r educatin. They are likely t veruse their phnes r even wrse get addicted t them, especially fr thse wh use phnes t play games. Frtunately, a wide range f learning apps have bsted the ppularity f using phnes t prmte academic perfrmance.Frm my pint f view, if yu are a smart phne addict, it is high time that yu set aside the phne and diverted /daɪˈvəːt/ 转移 yur attentin away frm it. I think it wise t use the phne ratinally. When yu want t get relaxatin, spend mre time n utdr activities, which will leave yu mre refreshed and energetic.