2024届高三英语基础写作课件：基础写作-读后续写低分

这是一份2024届高三英语基础写作课件：基础写作-读后续写低分，共10页。
审题：Para.1：写作背景+目的读后续写16分偏低，我非常困惑，向老师寻求帮助解惑Para.2: 说明问题和理由读后续写给的分数偏低，我不认可，阐释理由说明作文应该不止16分的原因 (作文做得好的方面)Para.3: 寻求老师的建议+结束语老师指出为何是16分且给出修改建议
Para. 1对很困惑be cnfused/ bewildered abutbe at a lss a state f bewildermentthrw me int ttal cnfusin/ bewilderment 出乎意料against/ cntrary t my expectatinsbelw my expectatins 如何表示礼貌with all due respectterribly srry t bther yu
Para. 2 说明问题并给出理由1) 我投入了很多时间和精力，我读后续写分数很稳定 invest/ pur a lt f time and effrt int my cntinuatin writing dedicate a significant amunt f time and effrt t sth. maintain the scre at 20 2) 主题与原文/ 范文主题一致 be cnsistent with be in line with be aligned with the theme cnveyed in mdel essays/ samples3) 书写 neat and tidy beautify my handwring in crrespndence with the criteria
4) 语法错误和拼写错误 grammatical and spelling mistakes 5) 高级词汇和丰富多样的句式 advanced wrds and varius sentence patterns apply/ adpt/ plish make it mre readable6) 文本/ 情节的连贯性/ 合理性/ 逻辑性 arrange the cntent/ plt prperly and lgically t make it cherent detailed and lgic descriptin f the plt t make it aligned with... 7) 文本理解透彻到位 have a thrugh understanding f the riginal text get a better/ deep insight int the assigned text