2025届高中英语译林版全程复习构想检测40分写作训练一

这是一份2025届高中英语译林版全程复习构想检测40分写作训练一，共4页。
[2024·山东省济南市高三上学期1月期末]
假定你是李华，昨天你校组织全体师生进行了一次消防演练活动。请为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1．演练经过；
2．活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
A Firefighting Drill
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第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2024·山东省济南市高三上学期1月期末]
At the beginning f this year, my daughter Helen spent a mnth in the hspital fighting fr her life. Since then, she has had t deal with the disease as well as many side effects. She has met each challenge, disappintment and setback with curage.
With her 16th birthday appraching, Helen dreamt f a party and campfire at the beach with friends, relatives, and her belved dg, Ginger. It tk a while, but I finally fund a gd beach that allwed dgs and campfires and had easy access. Hwever, a week befre her party, Helen's disease wrsened.
Our friend Ian called the night befre the party and turned ur plans upside dwn. The small beach we'd selected and the surrunding beaches wuld hst a 30，000persn event n the party night and wuld be clsed. It was a disaster because we had researched n ther nearby beach wuld wrk.
Helen had her heart set n having her dg and a campfire at the beach, but as usual, she didn't cmplain. In her yung life, she's dealt with much wrse things than a destryed birthday party. She sat dwn and began t quietly cry. After a while Helen decided she'd rather have the party at ur hme s she culd have her dg and a campfire. We called the invitees with the changed plans.
Hw t design a party at hme with dgs and campfire was a challenge. It ccurred t us that we culd make full use f ur yard. Ian's wife Jayme came first with sme small signs, which read: “Welcme t Campbell Beach, where dgs and campfires are welcme. Where the beach is small and the waves are s far away, yu must clse yur eyes t see them, but nt s the lve fr Helen and her little dg. Happy Birthday, Helen！”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
An hur later, Ian arrived with a laded truck.________________________________________________________________________
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Helen and her friends culdn't wait t play n the sand.________________________________________________________________________
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40分写作训练一
第一节
答案：
A Firefighting Drill
Yesterday, a firefighting drill was cnducted in ur schl fr all teachers and students. The drill started with an alarm, and everyne quickly evacuated the classrms in an rderly manner. The fire escape rutes were clearly marked, and fire extinguishers were readily available thrughut the schl.
The activity received a psitive respnse frm bth teachers and students. They appreciated the pprtunity t learn abut fire safety. Many expressed gratitude fr the schl's initiative in rganizing such a drill, as it increased their cnfidence and awareness in dealing with ptential fire hazards.
第二节
【导语】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者女儿Helen因为疾病而饱受折磨，当她16岁生日来临时，她希望能在海滩带着她的狗举办篝火晚会，但是事与愿违，最后作者决定在自家院子举办篝火晚会，在朋友们的帮助下，完成了女儿Helen的愿望。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一个小时以后；伊恩开着一辆满载货物的卡车来了。”可知，第一段可描写作者和朋友一起把院子布置成海滩的样子，并准备篝火晚会。
②由第二段首句内容“孩子们迫不及待地想在沙滩上玩耍。”可知，第二段可描写篝火晚会的过程。
2．续写线索：想在海滩举办篝火晚会——遇到各种困难——决定在院子里举办——布置院子——举办篝火晚会——完成女儿愿望
答案：
An hur later, Ian arrived with a laded truck. Hardly had Ian arrived when we began t unlad frm the truck, which was filled with plenty f sand, palm trees, beach tys, trches, and ther necessities fr the party. I was verwhelmed with a mixture f surprise and gratitude. We made an effrt t set everything up in the yard, small signs hanging. Small as the beach was, Helen culdn't cntain her jy and excitement. With all the things arranged well, the guests arrived.
Helen and her friends culdn't wait t play n the sand. Nt nly did they build their sand castles, but they als lit trches and enjyed the cmpany f the campfire. With the dg barking happily, the children heartily laughed and played n the “beach” arund the campfire. When the birthday cake was ready, all the friends sang sngs tgether t express their blessings t Helen. The birthday girl was in high spirits. It was the “beach” built with s much lve that made her blessed with an unfrgettable birthday.
40分写作训练二
第一节
答案：
Dear fellw students，
The Great Wall stands as a reminder f China's ancient civilizatin. Hwever, it is suffering frm human damage, such as graffiti and lettering, which als happens t ther cultural relics.
T address these issues, I think the mst imprtant thing is t raise peple's awareness. When visiting cultural relics, d nt tuch the exhibits unless allwed. Besides, digital turism can be used as an alternative. Travelling n the net is just like being persnally n the scene; meanwhile, we can have a deeper understanding f the cultural relics.
Only with ur jint effrts can all the cultural relics be well preserved.S let's jin hands t d sme bits right nw!
Li Hua
第二节
【导语】 本文以人物为线索展开，文章主要讲述了作者的儿子两岁时，被诊断出患有二型糖尿病，病情严重后，他被送到医院，作者担当了照顾他的任务。看见儿子痛苦，作者也很难过。他们搬到一个新家，家后院有个花园。作者和儿子通过种植花园，感受到生活的乐趣。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们搬进来后不久，我和儿子决定种一个花园。”可知，第一段可描写作者和儿子种花园的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“这个小花园让我们俩都活了过来。”可知，第二段可描写作者从花园中得到的东西和启示。
2．续写线索：决定种一个花园——和儿子种花园的过程——小花园让作者和儿子都活了过来——花园给作者带来的快乐——感悟
答案：
Sn after we mved in, my sn and I decided t plant a garden. He wrked ut plans with his drawings. Sn after we started digging, slwly seeing the bnes f his dream becme reality. We used what we culd find. We taught urselves hw t build pnds, and hw t grw fd. Fr plants, we rescued the weeds that wuld therwise be dug up. My sn tenderly transplanted these int ur new beds with a welcme, as if each were the mst delicate f flwers. Plant by plant, ur garden grew, creating a place f magic and medicine, fr all that lived there—plants, animals and humans.
This small garden let us bth live again. He brught delight int my wrld, and I scattered int his the magic f small seeds. As ur little garden tk shape, we bth discvered an imprtant thing: that even thugh things might nt be perfect, even thugh there might be things that are hard and hurt, even thugh the grund may be brken, this sil still hlds the ptential t nurture and grw ur dreams. We imagined urselves a secret garden that began with the simplest f things: a weed. Frm it, we grew jy.