2025届高中英语人教版全程复习构想检测40分写作训练一（Word版附解析）

这是一份2025届高中英语人教版全程复习构想检测40分写作训练一（Word版附解析），共3页。
1.演练经过；
2.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
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A Firefighting Drill
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第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2024·山东省济南市高三上学期1月期末]
At the beginning f this year， my daughter Helen spent a mnth in the hspital fighting fr her life. Since then， she has had t deal with the disease as well as many side effects. She has met each challenge， disappintment and setback with curage.
With her 16th birthday appraching， Helen dreamt f a party and campfire at the beach with friends， relatives， and her belved dg， Ginger. It tk a while， but I finally fund a gd beach that allwed dgs and campfires and had easy access. Hwever， a week befre her party， Helen's disease wrsened.
Our friend Ian called the night befre the party and turned ur plans upside dwn. The small beach we'd selected and the surrunding beaches wuld hst a 30，000­persn event n the party night and wuld be clsed. It was a disaster because we had researched n ther nearby beach wuld wrk.
Helen had her heart set n having her dg and a campfire at the beach， but as usual， she didn't cmplain. In her yung life， she's dealt with much wrse things than a destryed birthday party. She sat dwn and began t quietly cry. After a while Helen decided she'd rather have the party at ur hme s she culd have her dg and a campfire. We called the invitees with the changed plans.
Hw t design a party at hme with dgs and campfire was a challenge. It ccurred t us that we culd make full use f ur yard. Ian's wife Jayme came first with sme small signs， which read： “Welcme t Campbell Beach， where dgs and campfires are welcme. Where the beach is small and the waves are s far away， yu must clse yur eyes t see them， but nt s the lve fr Helen and her little dg. Happy Birthday， Helen！”
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An hur later， Ian arrived with a laded truck.________________________________________________________________________
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Helen and her friends culdn't wait t play n the sand.________________________________________________________________________
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40分写作训练一
第一节
答案：
A Firefighting Drill
Yesterday， a firefighting drill was cnducted in ur schl fr all teachers and students. The drill started with an alarm， and everyne quickly evacuated the classrms in an rderly manner. The fire escape rutes were clearly marked， and fire extinguishers were readily available thrughut the schl.
The activity received a psitive respnse frm bth teachers and students. They appreciated the pprtunity t learn abut fire safety. Many expressed gratitude fr the schl's initiative in rganizing such a drill， as it increased their cnfidence and awareness in dealing with ptential fire hazards.
第二节
【导语】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者女儿Helen因为疾病而饱受折磨，当她16岁生日来临时，她希望能在海滩带着她的狗举办篝火晚会，但是事与愿违，最后作者决定在自家院子举办篝火晚会，在朋友们的帮助下，完成了女儿Helen的愿望。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一个小时以后；伊恩开着一辆满载货物的卡车来了。”可知，第一段可描写作者和朋友一起把院子布置成海滩的样子，并准备篝火晚会。
②由第二段首句内容“孩子们迫不及待地想在沙滩上玩耍。”可知，第二段可描写篝火晚会的过程。
2.续写线索：想在海滩举办篝火晚会——遇到各种困难——决定在院子里举办——布置院子——举办篝火晚会——完成女儿愿望
答案：
An hur later， Ian arrived with a laded truck. Hardly had Ian arrived when we began t unlad frm the truck， which was filled with plenty f sand， palm trees， beach tys， trches， and ther necessities fr the party. I was verwhelmed with a mixture f surprise and gratitude. We made an effrt t set everything up in the yard， small signs hanging. Small as the beach was， Helen culdn't cntain her jy and excitement. With all the things arranged well， the guests arrived.
Helen and her friends culdn't wait t play n the sand. Nt nly did they build their sand castles， but they als lit trches and enjyed the cmpany f the campfire. With the dg barking happily， the children heartily laughed and played n the “beach” arund the campfire. When the birthday cake was ready， all the friends sang sngs tgether t express their blessings t Helen. The birthday girl was in high spirits. It was the “beach” built with s much lve that made her blessed with an unfrgettable birthday.