高考英语语法第63讲：_审题-立意-表达_塑造满分作文

这是一份高考英语语法第63讲：_审题-立意-表达_塑造满分作文，共6页。试卷主要包含了宽容心强2， 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，房间及价格， 请在答题卡上作答等内容，欢迎下载使用。
参考范文：
Hi, this is li hua, in hliday I participated in the sin-us student summer
camp, fr American students have a further understanding, mst American students
g t schl at eight 'clck in the mrning, they usually befre schl this
time sme sprts, such as running, playing badmintn, in their curses in schl
is very wide, and have dabbled in terms f Chinese histry teacher special, it
makes me very is prud that ur cuntry als really int the wrld, and the
wrld als start t listen t China, afternn when teachers ften will take the
students d sme practice, because they think that practice is the best teacher.
In the United States, teachers shuld pay mre attentin t student's character,
they think that a persn can learn bad, but must have gd manner. In this camp,
I recgnize the sin-us differences, als mre students t learn my firm, wrk
fr ur cuntry in the future, make the cuntry strnger. FRm Jzne.cm.
参考翻译：
大家好，我是李华，在假期中我参加了中美学生夏令营，对于美国的中学生有了进一步的了解，美国的中学生早上大都八点去上学，他们通常会在上学前的这段时间做一些运动，例如跑步、打羽毛球等，在学校中他们的课程涉猎非常广泛，并且有专门的老师来讲中国历史，这让我很是自豪，我们的国家也真正融入了世界，世界也开始倾听中国了，下午的时候老师们通常会带学生们做一些实践活动，因为他们认为实践是最好的老师。在美国，老师们更加注重学生的品行，他们认为一个人可以学习不好，但一定要拥有良好的品行。在这次夏令营中，我认识到了中美学生的差异，也更让我坚定要好好学习，将来报效祖国，使祖国更加强大。
四川2012年高考英语满分作文
2012四川高考英语提纲：假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师MsLi希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1、对英语学习的认识;
2、自己目前的英语水平;
3、自己英语学习存在的主要问题;
4、对英语教学的两点建议。
作文地带提示您注意：
1、词数100左右;
2、信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I'm very happy t have yu as ur English teacher.
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Thank yu!
Li Hua
One Pssible Versin:
Dear Ms Li,
I'm very happy t have yu as ur English teacher.
As the wrld is becming a glbal village, English is getting mre and mre
imprtant, s mastering English means we can see the wrld thrugh a new
windw.
My English is just OK and the tw main prblem in my study are that I feel
it difficult t learn wrds by heart, and that I ften feel nervus when
speaking English. I really hpe that yu can give me gd advice n hw t
memrize new wrds. Anther suggestin is t give us mre chances t practice
speaking. I believe we can make much prgress in English with yur help.
Thank yu!
【北京卷】
美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。
注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua frm Beijing Hngxing Middle Schl. I’m very happy t learn that yu’re ging t stay with my family while yu’re in Beijing.
While yu are here, we’ll prvide yu with a rm f yur wn with a bed, a desk, a cuple f chairs and a TV. Yu’ll als have yur wn bathrm. Our schl is quite clse t ur hme, s we culd g t schl tgether by bike. At nn we’ll eat at the schl dining hall. I’m sure yu’ll like the delicius Chinese fd there, and enjy talking with friends ver lunch. Classes in ur schl usually finish at 4 in the afternn. Yu can then jin ther students in playing ball games r swimming. It’ll be a lt f fun.
If yu have any questins r requests, please let me knw. We’ll try ur best t make yur stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【安徽卷】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：
l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—clumn
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited t learn that we are ging t start a magazine tgether. That sunds great! And I definitely agree with yu n that.
Sme f the clumns which yu mentined in the letter are really my cup f tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding f the wrld. Since peple frm different parts f the wrld have different values, it’s necessary t learn frm each ther. This will ffer a wnderful chance. Apart frm that, “blurt ut” is pretty gd fr Chinese students t learn English idims and imprve ral English. Last but nt least, “entertainment” is s cl! The ppular singers, actrs and celebrities are s catchy and attractive that yu abslutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fnd f the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list mre. I really can’t wait t read that magazine!
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【全国卷】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。
例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings frm China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lver since I was a child. Abut three years ag I was delighted t learn that Baiyun gave birth t her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grw n yur website,. Nw she’s ging t be three. I’d like t wish her a happy birthday and t express my thanks t yu fr yur hard wrk, because f which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, culd I have a pht f Sulin taken n her third birthday? Thank yu very much in advance.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【全国卷II】
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米;
2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Welcme t Baishan Muntain Htel!
Baishan Muntain Htel is nw pen fr business.
500 meters far frm the entrance f Baishan Muntain, it prvides singlepersn rm, f which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 duble persn rms, with a price f RMB 150 yuan per day. It als prvides ht water bath service. Yu can enjy bth Chinese and western fd in the restaurant and drink cffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pl is pen fr free the whle day. All these services can bring great cnvenience t yu and are very enjyable. S cme t enjy yurself!
Welcme t bk rms in Baishan Muntain.
【重庆卷】
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
自我介绍
得知的情况
表示鼓励
打算为她做什么
祝她早日康复
注意：
1. 信的格式已为你写好
2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua frm Xinhua Middle Schl f China. I’m srry t hear that yu gt the lung cancer which brught yu great pain. But yu shuld realize that yu are yung and have a prmising great future. S, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure yu will win. It is reprted that the America anti-cancer assciatin will dnate three cents upn every cmfrt letter yu receive. S I will tell yur situatin t all my friends and ask them t write t yu. In that way, yu will get enugh mney fr yu t be cured. Hpe yu can be well sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【江苏卷】
2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
u 每天锻炼一小时
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：
1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a natinal student sprts prgram;
教育部——the Ministry f Educatin
Gd afternn, everyne,
The natinal student sprts prgram, waged by the Ministry f Educatin and aimed at imprving students health, was held frm 10：00a.m.~ April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schls all ver China. Almst 11 millin students in Jiangsu prvince participated in this prgram.
The Ministry f Educatin advcates that we d exercises fr ne hur a day and can wrk healthily fr 50 years. Our whle life will be very enjyable.
In my pinin, we senir high schl students shuld d exercises fr ne hur a day even thugh ur spare time is limited. Health is a basic cnditin fr ur study. If we did nt d exercises, we wuldn’t be able t get gd study recrds. S every ne f yu, jin the prgram nw!
Thank yu!