高考英语作文专题复习：写作复习课件

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２００５年湖南高考英语写作 题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你的意见．请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式给予答复。
注意：１选择适合你的时间　　并说明理由．２选择两项你喜欢的活动并说明理由．３对活动的内容提出至少一个建议或要求．４词数１００左右．５信的开头和结尾已经给出．
考生作品Dear Sir r Madame, zxxk I am very glad t be invited t the English summer camp. I prefer t g in August, because I am free at that time. I like t take part in English Crner and learn t sing English sngs. I like English crner because I want t use English t talk with thers. I like English sngs because my parents are artists. At the same time, I suggest that all the activities shuld be rganized tgether and then we will have a gd time tgether. Thanks a lt. Yurs truly, Li Ping
优点：完成了试题规定的任务．应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求．应用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写作目的。缺点：没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。
　　　　　　参考范文Dear Sir r Madame, I am very glad t be invited t the English summer camp. I prefer t g in July because I will have t prepare myself fr the new schl term in August. It seems all the activities yu ffer are attractive and meaningful, but I’d like t attend the English lectures, frm which I can get mre infrmatin n British and American culture. With the cming f the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games mre and mre freigners are eager t knw abut China. S I hpe t teach freigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. It’s been a dream fr me t visit Beijing. Culd yu rganize a tur arund the city during the camp. Thank yu very much．　　　　　　　　　Yurs truly, Li Ping
高分作文的标准（２１－２５分）：１．完全完成了规定任务；２．覆盖所有内容要点 zxxk；３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力；５．有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；６．完全达到了预期的写作目的．
简单句 (The simple sentence)
并列句 (The cmpund sentence)
复合句 (The cmplex sentence)
请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。1. I turned n the TV.I watched it. 2. I bught my sister a present.She didn’t like it.
I turned n the TV and watched it.
I bught my sister a present,but she didn’t like it.
3.He was tired. He went t bed. 4.The child hid behind his mther's skirt. He was afraid f the dg.
He was tired, s he went t bed.
The child hid behind his mther's skirt,fr he was afraid f the dg.
3.He made a prmise.He didn’t keep it.
He made a prmise, but he didn’t keep it.
4.Mary is pening the dr.Jhn is greeting her guests.
Mary is pening the dr,and Jhn is greeting her guests.
请用括号中所给的词把此组句子连接为一个复合句。
I still remember the day .I first came t Beijing n that day.(when)
I still remember the day when I first came t Beijing.
Ⅱ特殊句式１．ＩＴ句型２．强调句型３．倒装句型４．ＷＩＴＨ复合结构５．独立主格结构６．省略句型
将下列句子变成强调句或者倒装句1.I didn’t realize the mistake until I grw up.(强调划线部分）2.We can make ur cuntry strnger and strnger in this way.（倒装句）
It was nt until I grw up that I realized the mistake．
Only in this way can we make ur cuntry strnger and strnger.
III. 汉语中的逗号与在英语中的作用并非一致 英语中句与句之间的联系绝不依靠逗号, 而是借助连接词。缺少连接词, 句与句之间也就不存在其合理性.　例如:老师问了我一个问题, 我不会回答。 The teacher asked me a questin, I culdn't answer it. × The teacher asked me a questin, and/but I culdn't answer it.√
英语逗号用法与提升英语作文品质 --NMET考生容易忽视或误用的英语写作常识 Dear Dick, Hw nice t hear frm yu again. Yu want t knw what is ging n in schls in China? In shrt, things have begun t imprve since schls were called n t reduce learning lad. I dn't knw abut thers, but I used t wrk even at weekends ding endless hmewrk and attending classes as well. Nw I have mre free time. I can fllw my wn interests such as reading bks, visiting museums,
and taking cmputer lessns. In the evenings I can watch news n TV r read newspapers. What's mre, I can g t bed earlier. As far as I knw, everyne is happy abut this new arrangement f things. Best wishes, Li Hua 其中含逗号用法的情形: (1) Dear Dick, (2) In shrt, (3) I dn't knw abut thers, but... (4) I can fllw my wn interests such as reading bks, visiting museums, and taking ...
(5) What's mre, (6) As far as I knw, (7) Best wishes,
启示与结论: 凡逗号出现的场合和时机无不体现英语的使用习惯或固定的表达方式, 也与“为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇, 具有较强的语言运用能力”, 以及实现“上下文的连贯性, 即有效地使用语句间的连接成分, 全文结构紧凑, 语言的得体性”这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号为主线, 研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式, 有可能使得写作快速步上新的台阶, 从而收到事半功倍的效果。
【要点1】插入语前后须用逗号隔开 1. It is, after all, due t his negligence. 毕竟这是由于他的疏忽． 2. She is, as I have tld yu befre, very fnd f cllecting stamps. 就像我以前告诉过你的她很喜欢集邮 3. I am ,therefre, very careful when crssing the rad. 　　　　 因此我过马路时非常小心．4. They, Mr. and Mrs. White, will be there in Beijing tmrrw. 他们（怀特先生和太太）明天就到达北京．5. He is, t be exact, sixteen years ld and is nt ld enugh t jin the army.确切的说，他才十六岁，还没有达到参军的年龄．
【要点2】副词从句和逗号 (1) 句首的副词从句用逗号隔开。 If it rains tmrrw, I will nt g. 明天下雨的话，我就不去了。 When they met, they used t nd t each ther. 他们见面时, 会互相点头。 (2) 副词从句出现在主句之后, 一般不用逗号，但附加的语意强时，就用逗号。 He is lved by all, because he is hnest. 他人很诚恳，受到大家的爱戴。 He wrks hard, s that he may pass. 他很用功，想必能考及格。 (3) 短的住所、时间副词从句可不用逗号。 When it rains he stays at hme 下雨时他待在家里。 When passing (=When he was passing) he lked in. 他路过时顺便进来坐了一会儿。
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My Opinin n Cheating In Exams It is knwn t us all that sme students cheat in exams at schl. As students, we ften take exams at schl, but smetimes we have t many exams which are t difficult fr us. On the ther hand, sme f us are lazy and dn’t wrk hard at their lessns. S when taking exams they smetimes cheat in rder t get better results t please their parents and teachers. In my pinin, it is wrng t cheat in exams because it breaks the rules f schls. We students shuld be hnest and try t get gd results by studying hard instead f cheating in exams. What’s mre, we shuld imprve ur study methds and get well prepared fr exams.
One day, I was n my way t schl and a man was riding alng the street. Suddenly, a car ran fast twards the man. The car hit the bike heavily and the man fell t the grund wunded. The driver caused an accident. He was s frightened that he ran away quickly with his car.
Because I saw what had happened and remembered the number f the car as well, I reprted this t the pliceman at nce. As a result, the driver was caught and he was punished fr what he had dne.
　如何算是一篇好文章？－覆盖了所有的要点－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）
巧用逗号，提升作文品质