新高考英语二轮复习题型专练30 读后续写故事拓展策略(2份打包,原卷版+解析版)
展开【策略1:烘托情节特征】
在读后续写中,运用侧面描写,可以对人物进行多角度映照和多层次烘托,人物的描写就会达到“横看成岭侧成峰”的丰富境界。 侧面描写有“以旁面写正面”、“以对面写正面”、“以反面写正面”三种方法。如果从一个侧面去描写,人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写,人物形象就容易丰满。在写作中,我们可以尝试以下几种侧面烘托法:景物烘托法——通过对自然景物的描绘,来烘托人物心情;他人反映法——听听他人的反映,去了解主人公的个性特征;借人写人法——通过对受影响者的刻画,间接地表现主人公的思想品质。
一、场景拓展思维1:选择关键词
1.关键词语
blw 吹
hwl 咆哮
crash 碰撞
stir 搅动
darken 使变黑
envelpe 信封,包裹
glmy 阴郁的
dip 蘸
pur 泼
sunshine /sunlight 阳光
breeze 微风
dim 昏暗的
faint 微弱的
winding 蜿蜒的
frighten 是某人害怕
chilling 寒冷的
thunder 雷,打雷
lightening 闪电
frsty 寒冷的
melt 融化2.常用短语
be bathed in 沐浴在
amber-like sunshine 琥珀色的阳光
stretch ff 延伸
凉爽清新的风cl and refreshing breeze
落日the setting sun
strll dwn the street在街上漫步
the first ray f sunlight第一缕阳光
fld int涌入
gentle breeze微风
多雨的季节a rainy seasn
暴风雨之夜a strmy night
在茫茫大雨中in the blinding rain
在春天温暖的阳光里
in the warm spring sunshine
难以忍受的热unbearable ht
放晴了clear up
木日光浴bathe in the sunshine
一个偏僻的小村庄
a small village ff the map
离海滨仅咫尺之遥
be dtted with 点缀着
二.场景拓展思维2:景色特征烘托人物心情
(一)阳光明媚的景色烘托生命美好与心情的愉悦
【典例赏析】
The beach t yur right stretches ff(延伸) t the hrizn, slwly narrwing t nthingness(虚无), nly t re-emerge(重新出现) again n yur left.
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch f my skin.
The sun drpped thrugh and laid n his head and shulders.太阳下山,温和的光线落在肩头。
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flded in. 阳光倾斜而入
The clear blue sky was dtted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗,碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
I was immediately stunned by the azure sky with thick silver lining cluds drifting arund. 我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。
White cluds flw in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in brad cean.
A gust f wind blew and parted the drping branches f the weeping willw like a curtain. 一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条,就像那卷起的窗帘。
The wind, sft and cld, clicked thrugh tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled (撒、点缀)the slpe. 风,轻柔而清冷,轻点这树枝,搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。
There are many kinds f flwers blming in the crner f the park, even in autumn, I smell the fresh scent with cl breeze. Hw sweet!
It was Saturday mrning, and all the summer wrld was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a sng in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell f flwers. Cardiff Hill, beynd the village and abve it, was green with trees and lked beautiful.
(二)暴风骤雨的场景烘托心情的抑郁
【典例赏析】
The sky is vercast, darkened with glmy cluds,(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whle wrld seemed t be envelped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
The thin trees were blwing wildly, and untidy gray cluds were sailing past a pale, sicky mn(苍白昏暗的月亮).
The frsty air (寒冷的空气)blew in, cutting like knife.
The frigid gusts f wind stung their faces. 一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。 Stung 的原形为sting“叮咬”
The summer breeze gently mved thrugh the leaves with a sighing sund. 叹息的声音
There was a deathly stillness in the huse. 死寂
The evening f this day was very lng, and melanchly(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it culd f glm. A cld strmy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nthing f July appeared but in the trees and shrubs(灌木丛), which the wind was despiling(摧残), and the length f the day, which nly made such cruel sights the lnger visible.(白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象)
(三)烦闷焦躁的景色烘托心理的急躁等
【典例赏析】
It’s ht enugh t melt hell. 天热得能融化地狱。
The air that has been ht all day becmes heavy. It hangs ver the trees, presses the heads f the flwers t the grund, and sits n my shulders. 整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木,逼得花朵垂向地面,也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。
(四)凄风苦雨与狂风暴雨烘托恐惧、阴冷与害怕
【典例赏析】
On the dark and strmy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were hwling(嚎叫).
The rain came puring dwn, the streams rse, and the winds blew and beat against the huse.大雨倾盆,洪流暴涨,狂风肆意冲击房屋。
The bys were frightened as the wind blew several trees n their side and the light cntinued t cme and g in the sky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).
There was nw a fine, cld drizzle falling(寒冷的细雨), and the wind had risen frm its uncertain(模糊的) puffs (一阵阵小风)int a steady blw. The few ft passengers astir (活动的)in that quarter hurried dismally(沉闷地) and silently alng with cat cllars turned high and pcketed hands(踹口袋里的手).
三.场景拓展思维3:精细化用语再现场景与心理的交织
(一)细节描述之“describe a peaceful scene”
【典例赏析】
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch f my skin. (沐浴在阳光下;琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤)
Mist-cvered muntains were dtted with small farms and villages. (点缀着)
The sund f my ftsteps was accmpanied nly by the gracefully waving reeds. (优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇)
(二)细节描述之“describe strmy weather”
【典例赏析】
The sky is vercast, darkened with glmy cluds.(乌云密布;黑云压顶)
On that dark and strmy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were hwling. (海浪肆意拍打;劲风咆哮)
The rain came puring dwn, the streams rse, and the winds blew and beat against the huse. (暴风骤雨)
(三)Gd setting descriptin fr appreciatin (佳“景”赏析)
【典例赏析】
The huse smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghsts f lng-dead ckies.
The sun kept dipping dwn int the cean and the lights came n at the harbr, casting sudden shadws n the grund, illuminating the faces that were just a secnd ag silhuettes. The sky was glden and purple, the cean a darker shade f vilet.
The sun had set, but a faint pastel haze lingered in the mid-summer sky.
They rlled up the path, tree branches raking the windshield like angry wardens.
Outside, the air filled with cricket nise, as the sun reddened in its descent.
A restaurant verlking a starlit night sprang t my imaginatin like smething ut f an illuminated manuscript frm the late Middle Ages.
The mn went slwly dwn in lveliness; she departed int the depth f the hrizn, and lng veil-like shadws crept up the sky thrugh which the stars appeared.
All brightness was gne, leaving nthing. We stepped ut f the tent nt nthing. Sledge and tent were there, Estraven std beside me, but neither he nr I cast any shadw. There was dull light all arund, everywhere. When we walked n the crisp snw n shadw shwed the ftprint. We left n track. Sledge, tent, himself, myself: nthing else at all. N sun, n sky, n hrizn, n wrld.
Night had fallen fast upn the land. N mre than an hur ag the sky was painted with hues f red, range and pink, but all clr had faded leaving nly a matt black canvas with n stars t be lked upn.
It wuld be a cld mnless night. The sky was dark and lw, the air s chilled it hurt t breathe. Already the grund was laid white with frst and any water that had been liquid under the winter sun had becme ice.
四、四季与自然景观的描写的精细化
【典例赏析】
we used t live in a beautiful village, and there were trees and flwers and green grass, and the air was s sweet.我们以前住在一个漂亮的村舍里,那里树很多,还有花花草草,连空气都是甜的。
The sight f a large crnfield in the latter part f summer, with all its green banners waving and its tasseled plumes ndding, is ne t admire, and nt t be frgtten.盛夏时节,一望无际的玉米地,绿色的叶子像旗帜一样迎风飞舞,抽穗的包谷随风点头,这是多么赏心悦目而又令人难忘的景色啊!
In the spring its branches are cvered with bunches f creamy flwers,春天里,栗子树的枝干上开满了一簇簇奶油般的花朵,
Befre this, he had lived in a warm cuntry, where the sun shines dwn n beautiful range grves, and fields always sweet with flwers.在这之前,他一直住在一个天气暖和的乡村。那里,阳光洒满美丽的满是橘子的山坡,田野里到处是芳香扑鼻的鲜花。
Last night, the cld nrth wind blew great snw cluds ver the sky. Nt a star, nt a bit f blue sky culd be seen.昨天夜里,北风呼啸,乌云密布。看不见一颗星星,整个天空也不见一丝蓝色。
It is winter. The cld wind whistles thrugh the branches f the trees.正值冬季,寒风呼啸着吹过树枝。
Jhnny lked thrugh the glass. There lay the pure, feathery snwflake like a lvely little star.乔尼透过玻璃看着雪花,那片纯洁轻柔的雪花就像一颗可爱的小星星。
Sn the tiny flakes flated sftly dwn, like flcks f little white birds. 不久,小小的雪花静悄悄地飘落下来,就像一群白色的小鸟。
The sun must have been pleased with what he saw, fr he smiled such a bright, sweet smile, that the whle white wrld sparkled as if it were made f little stars.太阳一定对雪花们的作品非常满意,因为他笑得如此灿烂和甜蜜。整个洁白的世界闪闪发光,就像一颗颗小星星在眨眼睛。
(五)早中晚场景举例
【典例赏析1】
早上:(部分描写也可用于其它时间)
The sweetness f the sun fills my lungs.
The first ray f sunlight is t fragile t tuch.
Spring breeze draws the curtain f cluds and the sunshine flds int the classrms.
The whle wrld blssms with ne breath f the sunshine.
Snw blanketed every rftp and weighed n the branches f ld trees. 雪覆盖了每一个屋顶,压在老树枝上。
Kissed by the rain and shining, the wet grund is cld under ft. The birds busy themselves arund me, nt caring that I'm there.潮湿的地面走起来很冷,被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着,不关心我在那儿。
A dense earthly sweet smell rse frm the grund, envelping everything within its sft embrace.一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起,把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flded in. 阳光倾斜而入.
Glden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea f fragrant flwers crwd int my eyes. Walking int the painting, I am ttally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) f birds. Sn the delicate (纤弱的,精致的)air and sft raindrps melt my heart.
It was Saturday mrning, and all the summer wrld was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a sng in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell f flwers. Cardiff Hill, beynd the village and abve it, was green with trees and lked beautiful.
黄昏:(部分描写也可用于其它时间)
As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, (天空越来越黑,光线越来越暗)he quickened his steps.
The sun hid himself behind the muntains, making it hard t see anything in the thick darkness.
Falling leaves fluttered dwn in the cl mid-autumn air, bidding farewell t sweet summer and beckning the autumn in.秋天的树叶在凉爽的中秋空气中飘落,告别甜美夏天,召唤秋天的到来。
It's dark nw and the snw is still falling, clumps f wet flakes drifting mindlessly dwn, the air mist, the sidewalk mushy underft.现在天黑了,雪还在落下,一团团的雪花随风飘落,空气潮湿,走在人行道上,脚底粘糊糊的。
The rain drummed n the windw, bidding farewell t the last beam f sunlight.
雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓,向最后一缕阳光告别.
The lingering sunlight was bliterated by the rapidly falling night,resembling a pitch-black curtain draped ver the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除,像是天空被一层漆黑幕布覆盖。
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strlled dwn the street. Occasinally, ne wuld fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it t the grund.
我在街上漫步时,树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔,有叶子会从我身边掉下来,轻轻地摇晃,因为空气轻轻地把它吹到地上。
The lake mirrred the sky abve, bth f them blameless blue and shimmering. 湖面映照着上方的天空,它们都是无比湛蓝,并且闪闪发光。
The sunset was like range paint n a blue canvas. 日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.
The strng sun n my black hair wuld burn me in minutes if I culdn’t find shelter. 如果我找不到庇护所,我黑发上强烈的阳光几分钟后就会把我烧焦
The sun drpped thrugh and laid n his head and shulders.太阳下山,温和的光线落在肩头。
晚上:(部分描写也可用于其它时间)
Frm the distance, he saw sme dim light (昏暗的灯光) in the village.
Silence between dad and me made me mre nervus and scared. At that mment, it was cmpletely dark except the faint light given ut by a few stars in the sky.
The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering cluds held me entirely in their pwer.
The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality, and the stars that dtted the sky lit up the night.天空,午夜蓝,给了这一场景一个童话般的质量,星星点点的天空照亮了夜晚。
The clear blue sky was dtted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗,碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
The wind was hwling dreadfully and the rain was puring frm the heaven, whipping against the branches f lined trees. The wrld was burdened with a sea f drakness. I was seized with the raring pwer f nature, a sense f hrrr creeping up n me. I immediately turned arund t slide int the bed and curled up.
The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering cluds held me entirely in ther pwer.
The evening f this day was very lng, and melanchly(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it culd f glm. A cld strmy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nthing f July appeared but in the trees and shrubs(灌木丛), which the wind was despiling(摧残), and the length f the day, which nly made such cruel sights the lnger visible.(白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象)
The sky is vercast, darkened with glmy cluds,(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whle wrld seemed t be envelped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
The thin trees were blwing wildly, and untidy gray cluds were sailing past a pale, sicky mn(苍白昏暗的月亮). The frsty air (寒冷的空气)blew in, cutting like knife.
【典例赏析2】
I clsed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lfty muntains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascinatin.
The gentle breeze (微风) strked his head , as if cmfrting all his tiredness.
Familiar smells f the earth rse up t greet her. Wandering in the wds, Ally slwed her pace t find the little guy in the mixed air. The sun lked at her with a glwing smile and the flwers ndded merrily twards her. The breeze patted her n the face, warm and cmfrtable.
The wind was hwling dreadfully and the rain was puring frm the heaven, whipping against the branches f lined trees. The wrld was burdened with a sea f darkness. I was seized with the raring pwer f nature, a sense f hrrr creeping up n me. I immediately turned arund t slide int the bed and curled up.
On the day back t schl, dark cluds hung lw in the sky. The rain pured dwn, with cld drps and angry winds slapping (拍;掴) my face. I was drwned in flds f warm tears and freezing rain.
Spring, like an amazing artist, paints ur campus with richer and deeper clrs. Glden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea f fragrant flwers crwd int my eyes. Walking int the painting, I am ttally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) f birds. Sn the delicate 纤弱的,精致的 air and sft raindrps melt my heart. Oh, I’m lst… in the masterpiece f Spring!
【策略2:构筑故事高潮】
文学故事中的高潮(climax)----故事的主要场景(key scene)也通常是故事的转折点(turning pint),是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的 "危机" 点。有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。
【典例赏析】
1.常见故事高潮
A little girl has been searching fr her lst dg. All f a sudden, she hears a bark cming frm arund the crner, and she lks arund t see . . .
Kevin has wrked very hard t try ut fr the sccer team at schl. The cach has psted a list f this year's team members n his ffice dr. Kevin walks frward t lk at the list . . . .
Mary's parents have been discussing whether r nt t mve t anther state. They call Mary and her sister dwn t talk with them abut their decisin . . .
Lis has perfrmed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiusly t hear the names f the winners. The annuncer says, "And first place ges t . . ."
2.文学名著中的一些故事高潮
The deaths f Rme (wh kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (wh kills herself when she awakes and sees Rme dead). Rme and Juliet, Shakespeare (《罗密欧和朱丽叶》)
When Gastn and the twnspeple cme t attack the beast, and Belle admits her lve fr the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney (《美女与野兽》)
In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the cnfrntatin between the third pig and the wlf. This cnfrntatin is the climax.(三只小猪) Hw t create a climax f a stry?
一、高潮冲突思维1:.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。
1.角色之间的冲突 (人物观点差异, 竞争需要等)
【真题再现】
(2017年11月浙江英语高考)On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn't we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. 开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张,心有不悦(母子的观点不一)
2.角色与环境之间的冲突
【真题再现】
(2017年6月浙江英语高考) Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. ……he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf: quickly catching up with him. Mac's heart jumped. ……, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, ……. Then it ……, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back …… Mac骑车独自行,路遇饿狼,与之搏斗,险象环生。(人(角色)----狼(环境)大战)
3.时间依赖的发展 :决策变得紧急
【真题再现】
(2017年6月浙江英语高考)The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. "Get int the car." Paul shuted at Mac. Mac jumped ff the bike and slid int the car withut delay as the wlf was just tw steps away and was abut t tear Mac int pieces. What a narrw escape! 骑车突停面前---急喊上车---Max上车避险---饿狼近在咫尺(此情此景,刻不容缓)
4.增加的障碍:人物角色必须克服 挑战, 以达到他们的目标
【真题再现】
(2018年6月浙江英语高考)But befre we jumped ff the hrses, we fund that we had been ff the beaten track and gt lst. We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wndered if we culd find ur way back. 小兔突现---马儿受惊---草原迷路(障碍1)----天色渐黑(障碍2)----又累又饿(障碍3)----心理恐慌(障碍4)
二、高潮冲突思维2:放大内心冲突 放大内心冲突(你的角色的内心斗争)也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。
【真题再现】
(2016年10月浙江英语高考) Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn't be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes. 夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及(内心冲突的刻画)内心独白(往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一)
三、高潮冲突思维3:使用环境描写增加不确定性 充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用,具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能。当故事角色在碰到困难时候,我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗,恐怖和不祥。强化环境描写增强了高潮元素。我们感受到了紧张的倍增。
【典例赏析】
Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest(黑暗). Even wrse, the temperature suddenly drpped dramatically. (寒冷)
It didn’t take lng fr the frest t be envelped in darkness(黑暗). Her rasping breath steamed(寒冷) in the mnlight and her thrat was parched frm thirst.
【真题再现】【2020年1月·浙江卷】
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm ging t miss yu s much, Pppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins(情绪)get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?"His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by's mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn't.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. "What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mm.” Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let's get a little dg fr Pppy."
It didn't take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
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Para 2. A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
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【参考范文】
Dad put the bx n the grund and pened the tp. A shiny little wet nse ppped up. Then tw fluffy paws. Next the bx tipped ver sideways, and ut tumbled a mass f wiggly glden silliness. Pppy was amazed. She wagged furiusly. She barked with jy. She smiled, her tngue llling ut as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was nt shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping arund the lder dg. “That didn’t take lng,” remarked Mm, as bth dgs went raring arund the huse in an imprmptu game f chase. Dad laughed.
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. He had missed Pppy and was lking frward t seeing her. When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t. “Oh my gsh, wh is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed at the lk f shck n his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe yu gt yurselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mm. “This puppy is fr Pppy!”
【写作分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知,文章讲述了男孩要去上大学,和自己的狗Pppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里,Pppy也非常想念男孩,于是男孩父母决定给Pppy买一条小狗作伴。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:爸爸打开盒子,一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况;第二段开头是:几个星期后,男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应,以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Pppy的。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【范文点评】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:a mass f,with jy,lk frward t等高级词汇;非谓语动词的运用The little pup was nt shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping arund the lder dg.;时间状语从句When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t.等高级句式。
【题型演练】
1
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a rainy Nvember mrning. Overcme with anger I knew if I didn’t leave the huse sn I wuld lse my temper with my husband, Je. As rain came dwn in sheets, Je ffered t take me t wrk. I struggled int my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignred him.
He insisted and reached fr his bts. I lked at the piles f newspapers and the dirty dishes sill n the table. “Dn’t yu have enugh t d? I can take care f myself. ” I strmed ut, nt even kissing him gd-bye. Je shuted after me nt t take the shrtcut.
Je and I had been eagerly lking frward t ur retirement when a heart attack that past spring frced him t leave his jb earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills munted we realized I wuld have t cntinue wrking full-time while Je stayed hme and tk ver the husewrk.
The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day f full wrk, all I wanted was a ht hme-cked meal and a gd night’s sleep. Hwever, what greeted me at the table was a micrwave package. Smetimes he wuld serve atmeal(燕麦)fr several nights in a rw. One night when I dragged myself t bed, I was terrified t discver Je had turned ur white sheets blue. He tld me he had fund ut hw t save n water, sap and electricity. He patted his blue trusers and annunced prudly washing everything tgether was just the secret.
Ten minutes later, ignring Je s warning, I turned ff the main rute. I thught it hadn’t rained enugh t fld the rad, but as I runded the crner water rushed acrss my path. After a few feet, the car gt stuck. I pened the dr and water pured in. I hurriedly clsed the dr. I culdn’t risk walking in this. Almst 20 minutes passed. The car began t shake. I gt frightened t death when I heard three lng hnks(喇叭声).
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lking ver my shulder, I stared int the flashing lights f a truck.
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I screamed at Je that I culdn’t make it.
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2
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny stared at the stre windw lngingly. There was nthing in this wrld that she wanted mre than a Happy Hannah dll and all that currently separated her frm the httest dll f the hliday seasn was a thin piece f glass and S29.95 plus tax. Unfrtunately, Jenny didn't even have the 95 cents, s she let ut a deep sigh and cntinued walking hme.
Suddenly, a pink rectangle(矩形)in the snw caught her eye. Jenny walked ver and realized it was a leather wallet. She remved it frm the snw, and pened the wallet t find a thick pile f flded green bills and tw plastic cards. One was a credit card and the ther an ID.
Jenny stared at the ld wman in her ID pht. The wman had a beautiful smile that reminded Jenny f her grandma. Jenny sighed and then she put the wallet int her purse. She turned arund and walked in the directin frm which she came.
Jenny's heart beat quickly as she entered the stre. She had lng dreamed abut this mment, but smething didn't feel right abut it As she apprached a neat pile f Happy Hannah dlls, she pushed away her feelings. She grasped ne Happy Hannah dlly.
As Jenny apprached the register, the Happy Hannah Shw theme sng began playing. It was her mbile pne. It was her grandma In ne hand she held the Happy Hannah dll and in the ther she held the phne n which her grandma was calling. Jenny’s heart was filed with lve and appreciatin as she thught f her sweet ld grandma She put the dll dwn and picked up the phne call.
“Hi Grandma? I'm ging t be a little bit late tnight. I've gt t drp smething ff... Yeah, it was lve yu t.”. Jenny left the stre and walked thrugh the melting snw all the way t the ther side f the twn. She thugh f her grandma as she rang the bell at 301 West Street.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
The wman wh answered the dr had been crying recently and lked upset and anxius.
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Paragraph 2:
The wman tk the wallet smilingly.
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3
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lng lng ag in a twn, a newly-elected mayr was determined t d smething effective t make the twn better than befre.
The mayr was acutely aware that his gal shuld be achieved nt nly by laws but als mrals as well. He was a firm believer f the thught that nthing gd culd cme t a twn whse peple nly cmplained and expected thers t slve their wn prblems! One day, a new idea suddenly struck him.
Early ne mrning, the mayr dressed himself up and went t a village nearby. He secretly placed a large stne in the middle f the main street and hid a gld cin under the stne. The instant every preparatin was dne, he hid himself behind a huge maple tree and watched clsely, wndering what wuld happen befre lng.
The first persn dwn the street was a milkman with his cart. He tk n ntice f it and the cart vilently crashed int the stne, spilling the milk everywhere. "What fl put this stne here?" he shuted ludly. He picked himself up and angrily went away.
After a while, a grup f wmen came alng, each balancing a pt f water n her head and paying n attentin t the rad. One wman tripped ver the stne and her water pt went crashing t the grund. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. Neither she nr her friends thught abut mving the stne ut f the rad.
The mayr watched all day as many peple passing t and fr cmplained abut the stne but he fund nbdy making an attempt t mve it and have the rad cleared f the bstacle. The mayr was disappinted and even in despair. "Is there n ne in this village wh feels any respnsibility t keep their neighbrs frm harm?"
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Just then, the mayr saw a yung girl cming alng.
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At that mment, the mayr stepped ut frm behind the tree.
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4
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One spring mrning many years ag, I had been searching fr gld alng Ch Creek n sutheastern Alaska’s Kuprean f Island, and as I emerged frm a frest f spruce(云杉) and hemlck tree, I frze in my tracks. N mre than 20 paces in the bg(沼泽) was a huge Alaskan timber wlf - caught in ne f Trapper Gerge’s traps.
Old Gerge had died the previus week f a heart attack, s the wlf was lucky. Cnfused and frightened at my apprach, the wlf backed away. Then I nticed smething else: It was a female, and her teats were full f milk. Smewhere there was a den f hungry pups (小狼) waiting fr their mther.
Frm her appearance, I guessed that she had been trapped nly a few days. That meant her pups were prbably still alive. But I suspected that if I tried t release the wlf, she wuld turn aggressive and try t tear me t pieces.
S I decided t search fr her pups instead and began t lk fr tracks that might lead me t her den. Frtunately, there were still a few remaining f snw. After several mments, I sptted pups’ marks n a trail.
The tracks led a half mile thrugh the frest, then up a slpe cvered with many rcks. I finally sptted the den at the base f an enrmus spruce, There wasn’t a sund inside. Wlf pups are shy and cautius, and I didn’t have much hpe f inviting them utside, But I had t try. S I began imitating the high-pitched(声音很尖锐的) sund f a mther wlf calling her yung. N respnse. A few mments later, after I tried anther call, fur tiny pups appeared. They culdn’t have been mre than a few weeks ld.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
I extended my hands.
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Paragraph 2:
With her yung t prtect, she was becming aggressive.
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5
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
September is mst beautiful in Strathry, where peple whleheartedly enjy the simple pleasures f life and nature.
Rland was n exceptin. He was a magnificent German Shepherd (德国牧羊犬), a little lazy and ver-weight thugh. He lved t dze in the backyard. He yawned and stretched his bdy as he heard the slwly appraching ftsteps f Mrs. Prudft. “Cme have yur lunch dear!” said Mrs. Prudft with her usual fndness fr him and he wagged his tail affectinately in return.
Rland was licking the last piece f meat in his plate when the drbell burst int music. Mrs. Prudft hurried t answer the dr. Rland std alert by her side.
“Gd nn Mrs. Prudft”. It was Sam, her teenage neighbr. “My! My! Yu lk pale! What happened?” asked Mrs. Prudft with genuine wrry. She immediately waved him in and clsed the dr behind. Mrs. Prudft was a lnely widw, but was well lved in her neighbrhd especially by kids, thugh she had n kids t call her wn.
Once encuraged, Sam disclsed his dilemma. “My friend Barry lst a rare bk f schl library. It csts 150 dllars, but he has nly 55 dllars and his pr parents can’t affrd t pay the rest. Barry is wrking part time but that’s far frm enugh.” With a dramatic sigh he cntinued, “If he didn’t refund the lss befre the end f term, he will be dismissed frm final exams. That will ruin his future! I have t help him, whatever it takes. He is my best friend.”
“Dn’t wrry, Sammy. Yu want me t pay…” but Mrs. Prudft was interrupted. “N, N, Mrs. Prudft. This is nt what I came here fr. I’ll wrk fr yu. Wuld yu favr me t walk yur dg please? Fr 2 dllars a day.” He lked up with begging eyes.
Mrs. Prudft clapped her hands in agreement, “That can’t be better! I’ve been wrried abut Rland lately. He des need sme exercise! It’s nice f yu t make such an ffer.”
Sam thanked her ver and ver, “I will start tmrrw mrning.”
注意:1、所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2、续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
Sam arrived very early the next mrning.
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Paragraph 2:
A mnth later, Mrs. Prudft was delighted t find Rland fit and energetic.
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