【2024年中考英语真题满分作文精选】热点话题03 意见建议类(练习，原卷版+解析版)

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（一）
（2024·山东烟台·中考真题）假如你是光明中学英语社团成员，本周末社团将演出课本剧《愚公移山》，校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看，请你用英语写一篇广播稿。
主要内容包括：
1.演出时间、地点；
2.课本剧内容简介及意义；
3.欢迎对演出提出意见建议。
要求：
1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。
提示词汇：课本剧 textbk drama；《愚公移山》Yu Gng Mves the Muntains
Gd mrning, everyne!
This is an annuncement fr all the freign students visiting ur schl.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks fr yur attentin!
【答案】例文
Gd mrning, everyne!
This is an annuncement fr all the freign students visiting ur schl. A textbk drama called Yu Gng Mves the Muntains will be held in ur schl hall this weekend. It is a stry abut an ld man named Yu Gng. Tw high muntains stpped his family frm walking t the ther side. Yu Gng decided t mve the muntains with his family. Many peple laughed at him, but he never gave up. He believed that his sns and grandsns wuld cntinue t mve the muntains after he died. Then a gd was mved by Yu Gng s he sent tw gds t help him mve the muntains. The stry reminds us that nthing is impssible as lng as we wrk hard. We shuld nt give up.
After watching the drama, yu are welcme t give yur pinins and suggestins n it.
Thanks fr yur attentin!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍课本剧表演的时间和地点；
第二步，讲述《愚公移山》的故事以及从这个故事中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①stp sb frm ding sth阻止某人做某事
②give up放弃
③as lng as只要
[高分句型]
①A textbk drama called Yu Gng Mves the Muntains will be held in ur schl hall this weekend.（一般将来时被动语态）
②He believed that his sns and grandsns wuld cntinue t mve the muntains after he died.（宾语从句）
（二）
（2024·黑龙江绥化·中考真题）当毕业的歌声再次响起，即将离校的你一定有许多心里话要说……假如你是李华，请假据你初中四年的经历，给学弟、学妹写一封信，对他们的学习和生活提几点建议。
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 词数不少于80词。（信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Hw is it ging? It’s time fr me t leave schl. Here is my advice fr yu.
First, as students, it’s imprtant fr yu t study hard at schl. Yu must listen t the teacher carefully in class and d yur hmewrk carefully after schl. Secnd, it’s als imprtant t keep healthy. T keep healthy, yu can exercise ften and eat regularly. Third, yu must fllw rules bth in and ut f schl. Fr example, fllwing the rules at schl can make yu behave well.
Fllwing the traffic rules can make yu safe. Last, yu can develp a hbby. It can make yur life interesting and full.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给学弟学妹们的建议”来引出下文中对具体建议的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“努力学习、保持健康和遵守规则”三方面入手，给出具体的建议；
③第三步，书写结语。希望学弟学妹们的生活能有趣充实。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康
② 两者都
[高分句型]
First, as students, it’s imprtant fr yu t study hard at schl.（it作形式主语）
（三）
（2024·山东东营·中考真题）假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Take care f yurself (照顺好自己)”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点：
1.我们应从哪些方面做起，比如：身体健康（饮食、锻炼等）、生活技能（洗衣，做饭等）、心理健康（心态，抗挫等）……
2.具体应该怎么做；
3.这样做的好处是什么。
要求：
1.至少从两个方面给出自己的看法；
2文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；
3.照抄试卷内容不得分。
Take care f yurself
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【答案】例文
Take care f yurself
As we all knw, health is very imprtant in ur life. S yu shuld take care f yurself.
It is imprtant t have physical health. S yu shuld try t have a healthy diet. Als, yu shuld keep ding exercise. Having enugh sleep is necessary as well. They are gd fr yur health and have a strng bdy. What’s mre, learning sme life skills is f great imprtance. Yu can learn hw t wash clthes, ck and s n. They help yu be independent. At the same time, yu shuld d yur best t keep yur mental health. Yu shuld have an active attitude when yu have failures and prblems. In this way, yu will have mre curage t face the challenges ahead.
Take care f yurself and yu will have a better future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Take care f yurself”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍应该怎么做以及这样做的好处；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a healthy diet 饮食健康
②What’s mre 此外
③At the same time 同时
④face the challenges ahead 面对未来的挑战
[高分句型]
①Yu shuld have an active attitude when yu have failures and prblems.（when引导的时间状语从句）
Take care f yurself and yu will have a better future!（祈使句）
（四）
（2024·河北·中考真题）假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(Class Recrd)，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
注意：(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。
Well dne, Zhang Jun! Yu listened t the teacher carefully in class and__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Well dne, Zhang Jun! Yu listened t the teacher carefully in class and answered questins actively. S yu gt high marks in mst f yur subjects. Yu wrked well in yur grup and yu shwed yur ability t us. Hwever, yu didn’t ask any questins and yu didn’t take ntes. S we culdn’t knw if yu needed help.
In my pinin, yu shuld ask questins if yu have any s that yu can slve prblems in time. What’s mre, yu shuld take ntes s that yu can review and digest what yu dn’t understand. I hpe my advice is f help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单评价张军的课堂表现；
第二步，就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①gt high marks 得高分
②take ntes 做笔记
③In my pinin 在我看来
④s that 以便
[高分句型]
①S we culdn’t knw if yu needed help.（宾语从句）
②What’s mre, yu shuld take ntes s that yu can review and digest what yu dn’t understand.（目的状语从句和宾语从句）
（五）
（2024·四川南充·中考真题）假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友Eric发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达希望。
Frm: Eric
T: Li Ming
Subject: Give me a hand!
Dear Li Ming,
Yu knw I’m studying in a new schl nw and I dn’t knw anyne here. I find it hard t get n well with my classmates. Wuld yu please give me sme advice?
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Eric
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
T: Eric
Frm: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ming
【答案】参考范文
Dear Eric,
I’m srry t hear that yu have truble in getting n with yur classmates. It is understandable fr new students t have such prblems
I have sme suggestins fr yu. Firstly, I strngly advise yu t keep smiling. It’s a way t shw yu’re friendly. What’s mre, yu are suppsed t be helpful. Everybdy wants t make friends with peple wh always help thers. Finally, try t find smene wh has the same interest. If yu have the same hbbies, yu will have mre t talk abut. Then yu will be friends sn.
Abve are my suggestins fr yu. I really hpe yu will get n well with yur classmates and live a happy schl life.
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给邮件内容完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己很抱歉听到这个消息；
第二步，具体给出自己的建议；
第三步，最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① advise sb t d sth建议某人做某事
② what’s mre而且
③ try t d sth尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①Everybdy wants t make friends with peple wh always help thers.（定语从句）
②If yu have the same hbbies, yu will have mre t talk abut.（条件状语从句）
（六）
（2024·四川遂宁·中考真题）今年5月第五届“中国好家风”全国启动仪式在北京隆重举行。传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，为响应号召，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇不少于80词的短文，向该专栏投稿。
注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 文章语句通顺，行文连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：virtue (n. 美德) accmpany (v. 陪伴) raise (v. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Lve and Respect the Elders
As we all knw, respecting and caring fr ur elders is nt nly a traditinal Chinese virtue but als ur duty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Lve and Respect the Elders
As we all knw, respecting and caring fr ur elders is nt nly a traditinal Chinese virtue but als ur duty. Grwing up, I’ve seen my grandparents’ selfless lve and dedicatin t ur family. They helped t lk after me and raise me s that my parents culd fcus n their wrk. Therefre, we shuld lve and respect ur elders.
T achieve this, we can help ur elders with their chres. Spending time cmmunicating with ur elders is imprtant s that they dn’t feel lnely. It’s als necessary t take them t d exercise, such as walking in the park, t keep them healthy.
In cnclusin, as everyne will grw ld ne day, it’s imprtant t take actin nw.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时和一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示信息，结合自己的生活进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，结合自己的生活介绍为什么要关爱及尊敬长辈；
第二步，介绍如何关爱及尊敬长辈；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家采取行动。
[亮点词汇]
①fcus n集中于
②spend time ding sth花时间做某事
③in cnclusin总之
[高分句型]
①They helped t lk after me and raise me s that my parents culd fcus n their wrk. (s that引导目的状语从句)
②Spending time cmmunicating with ur elders is imprtant s that they dn’t feel lnely. (动名词作主语)
（七）
（2024·吉林·中考真题）当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking fr Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性；
（2）寻求帮助的益处；
（3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例；
（4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Asking fr Help
There might be sme prblems r wrries in life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Asking fr Help
There might be sme prblems r wrries in life. When we encunter prblems r trubles that we cannt slve urselves, we shuld learn t actively seek help frm thers. It’s imprtant t ask fr help, and it will help yu relax.
Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because f this prblem, my English was nt gd. S I went t ask my English teacher fr help. With the help f my teacher and my wn effrts, my English scre has gradually imprved. Nw I’ve really learned hw t learn lessns myself.
In a wrd, it is nrmal t have prblems. When we meet prblems, we can ask peple arund us fr help, such as teachers, classmates r parents. In additin, we can als search the Internet fr slutins.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性以及寻求帮助的益处；
第二步，结合生活经历，简述自己寻求帮助的一个事例；
第三步，最后给出提供寻求帮助的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① ask fr help寻求帮助
② because f因为
③ in a wrd总之
[高分句型]
When we encunter prblems r trubles that we cannt slve urselves, we shuld learn t actively seek help frm thers.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句）
（八）
（2024·甘肃临夏·中考真题）阅读使人快乐，让人成长。为了鼓励同学们多读书，你校英语社团向同学们发出“爱读书、读好书、善读书”的倡议。请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈你的阅读收获。
写作要求：
1．内容包含提示中所有要点；
2．条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Bks are ur best friends. Reading bks can increase ur knwledge and make us wiser. It can braden ur hrizns and we can imprve urselves by reading.
We shuld read different kinds f bks, such as science bks, nvels, histry bks and s n. Secnd, it’s imprtant fr us t have a prper reading plan. We can read five days a week and ne hur a day. Keeping a gd reading habit helps us manage ur time and have a better understanding f bks. Reading in a quiet and cmfrtable place is als imprtant.
Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading nw.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明阅读的好处；
第二步，具体针对阅读给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①imprve urselves 提升我们自己
②different kinds f 不同种类的
③have a better understanding f 对……有了更好的了解
[高分句型]
①It can braden ur hrizns and we can imprve urselves by reading.（并列句）
Keeping a gd reading habit helps us manage ur time and have a better understanding f bks.（并列结构）
（九）
（2024·湖南·中考真题）英语课上老师要求以“Sprts make us better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华，将代表小组在全班发言，请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括：
1. 介绍你们各自喜欢的运动；
2. 谈谈运动对你们的影响。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
2. 写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hell, everyne,
I’m Li Hua frm Grup One. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank yu.
【答案】例文
Hell, everyne,
I’m Li Hua frm Grup One. Belw, n behalf f ur grup, I will reprt n ur discussin. Cindy’s favrite sprt is vlleyball. She ften plays vlleyball with her friends. By playing vlleyball, she has becme mre cnfident and healthy. Frank lves riding a bicycle best. By riding a bicycle, his bdy has becme strnger and strnger. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I ften g t the park t play basketball with my friends n weekends. Playing basketball has taught me the spirit f teamwrk and never giving up.
That’s all. Thank yu.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题介绍组内交流结果；
第二步，细节介绍组员们喜爱的运动以及运动带来的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①n behalf f代表
②strnger and strnger越来越强壮
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I will g t the park t play basketball with my friends n weekends.（条件状语从句）
Wrd bankphysical health身体健康
life skills生活技能
mental health心理健康
Class RecrdName: Zhang Jun
Questins
Yes
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Did yu listen t the teacher carefully?
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Did yu answer questins actively?
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Did yu ask any questins?
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Did yu wrk well in yur grup?
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Did yu take ntes?
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