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练习 专题20-读后续写5种常用修辞手法-读后续写高分微技能-备战高考英语【应用文+读后续写】讲练测（高考新题型）
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这是一份练习 专题20-读后续写5种常用修辞手法-读后续写高分微技能-备战高考英语【应用文+读后续写】讲练测（高考新题型），共14页。试卷主要包含了明喻等内容，欢迎下载使用。
修辞手法(figure f speech)是根据表达需要，运用有效的语言手段来提高语言的表达效果，使语言表达具有准确性、鲜明性和生动性的语言运用方式。恰当地使用修辞手段，可以使文章更加生动，更具有表现力，蕴意丰富，引人入胜。
常用的修辞手法有：夸张(Exaggeratin)、明喻(Simile)、暗喻(Metaphr)、拟人(Persnificatin)、平行法(Parallelism)、头韵(Alliteratin)、对比(Cntrast)、矛盾修辞法(Oxymrn)、双关(Pun)、移情(Empathy)等。对于高中生来说，最好能通过例句，结合具体的语境，体会修辞的表达效果。同时，要求学会欣赏并能模仿造句。学习和运用修辞手法，相信对高考新题型"读后续写"也有帮助。
Part I 种写作常用提分修辞之明喻
明喻Simile是一种最常见的修辞方法，是以两种具有共同特征的事物或现象进行对比，表明本体和喻体的关系。
基本构成：本体+比喻词+喻体
常见比喻词：like像； 和...一样；as就像；as if/thugh 好像；A is t B what C is t D A对于B而言就像C对于D而言
I culdn't mve my legs. It was as if they were stuck t the flr.（描写僵住的动作）
Then suddenly, an idea, shining and new, flashed like a cmet thrugh her brain.(描写突然有想法）
A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays f light glimmer and dance as if there was a fairytale wrld hidden deep within.（描写微风）
He is as timid as a hare.（描写人物胆小）
I was like a cat n ht bricks befre the interview. (描写紧张）
Harry scrambled t his feet, s happy he felt as thugh a large balln was swelling inside him.哈利感到特别高兴，仿佛胸中揣着的一个气球渐渐鼓了起来，使他飘飘欲仙了。（描写高兴）
The surface f the calm lake stirred the waves, and my md was as cheerful as a wave. 心情和浪花一样欢快。（描写高兴）
I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness. (描写悲伤）
She shk all ver, feeling like sitting n pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。（描写如坐针毡）
Ripping crystal streams stretched away int the distance frm the twering bluffs like the beautiful streamers f a fairy maid.（描写瀑布）
Then, n his back, with his tail lashing and his jaws clicking, the shark plwed ver the water as a speed-bat des.(描写鲨鱼）
The stars in the night sky sparkled like diamnds. (描写星空）
Clusters f stars decrated the vast sky like sparking jewels. (描写星空）
The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(描写寒风）
常见例句赏析
1. The snw was as thick as a blanket.
雪像地毯一样厚。
2. Last night, I slept like a lg.
昨晚我睡得像木头。
3. It seemed as if the wrld was at an end. 似乎是到了世界末日。
4. The grund is as hard as stne after the drught.
干旱之后土地硬得就像石头一样。
5. He wandered in t see me as if he had nthing else t d.
他遛遛达达进来看我，好像无事可做的样子。
6.Lve is like the wind, yu can't see it but yu can feel it.
爱如风，你看不见，但你能感受到它。
7. The cuntry, cvered with cherry tree flwers, lks as thugh it is cvered with pink snw.
地上覆盖着樱花，这个国家似乎覆盖着粉红色的雪。
8. I culdn't mve my legs. It was as if they were stuck t the flr.
我的腿动不了，就好像给固定在地板上似的。
9. He lks as thugh he hasn't had a square meal fr mnths.
瞧他那样子 好像几个月没好好吃过一顿饭似的。
10. The huse lks smething like a castle.
那房子看上去有点像一座城堡。
(smething like...有点像…)
11. Reading is t the mind what fd is t the bdy.
读书与思想的关系就好比食物与健康的关系。(A is t B what C is D "A之于B如同C之于D")
12. Searching fr ne man in this big city is like lking fr a needle in a haystack.
在这座大城市里寻找一个人犹如大海捞针。
13. Jhn saw the car cming and std still as a statue.
Jhn看到车子过来，像石像一样站着一动不动。
14. My mther's kitchen was like a hly place: yu culdn't wear yur shes, yu had t sit there at a certain time, and ccasinally we'd pray.
我妈的厨房像一个圣地：你不能穿鞋，你必须在某一个时候坐在那里，偶而我们会祈祷。
15.A rm withut bks is like a bdy withut a sul.
没有书的房间，如同没有灵魂的躯体。
16. The cluds were like ice-cream castles in the sky.
云朵就像是天空中的冰激凌城堡。
17. Kyle lked at the test with a stare as blank as his ntebk.
Kyle茫然地看着试卷，头脑如同笔记本一样的空白。
18. Then like a cld wave n a shre, cmes silence and she sings n mre.
然后沉默如同海滩上的寒潮般袭来，她不再唱歌。
19. As in depths f many seas, my heart was drwned in memries.
如同在大海深处，我的心里沉溺于回忆之中。
20. He sits there staring at the blank screen like a ghst searching fr his reflectin.
他坐在那里，盯着空白的屏幕，像是一个鬼魂在寻找他的影子。
21. He mved like lightening befre the plice came.
还没等警察到来，他像闪电一样地跑了。
22.She hung her head like a dying flwer.
她像是一朵枯萎的花低着头。
23. A huse withut bks is like a rm withut windws.
没有书的房子，如同没有窗户的房间。
24.I remember the whle thing as if it happened yesterday.
整个这件事我记得很清楚，就仿佛是昨天发生似的。
25. Life is like riding a bicycle. T keep yur balance, yu must keep mving.
人生如同骑自行车，要保持平衡你要不断向前。
26. A mind is like a parachute. It desn't wrk if it is nt pen.
思想如同降落伞，如果不打开就不起作用。
27. Life is like an nin; yu peel it ff ne layer at a time, and smetimes yu weep.
人生如同洋葱，你一次剥一层，有时你会流泪。
28. Fd is t the bdy as fuel is t the engine.
食物之于身体，如同燃料之于发动机。
29. The travellers have fallen in lve with lcal prduce. They cannt believe that the tmates are as big as apples, and the apples lk like the size f baseballs.
旅行者们已经爱上了的当地特产。他们不敢相信蕃茄大如苹果，而苹果看起来像棒球一樣大。
30. Gwen ften becmes green with envy whenever her classmates receive better grades r awards fr utstanding achievements, and she wuld turn int a green-eyed mnster.
每当她的同学们得到更好的成绩或领取杰出成就的奖，Gwen是嫉妒到脸都发绿，俨然变成一双绿眼怪兽了(表示非常嫉妒)!
Part II 暗喻
Metaphr也是也叫隐喻，是简缩了的明喻，但不用比喻词like或as作对比，是将某一事物的名称用于另一事物，通过比较形成，从而更生动，更深刻地说明事理，增强语言的表现力。
1）基本结构：本体 是 喻体。
名词型暗喻
Her hair was a flwing glden river streaming dwn her shulders.(描写肖像）
I was, inwardly, all white flag. (描写妥协）
Laughter is the sun that drives winter frm the human face. (描写笑的作用）
Kindness is a glden chain by which sciety is bund. (描写善良的作用）
动词型暗喻
I felt a lump in my thrat, tears welling up in my eyes. (描写伤心）
The by wlfed dwn the fd the mment he grabbed it. (描写饥饿时吃东西）
He melted int tears. (描写感动落泪）
A heavy silence blanketed the rm. (描写沉默寂静）
The ghstly winter silence had given way t the great spring murmur f wakening life.(描写万物复苏）
My heart was pumping. (心脏怦怦直跳）
2）常见例句赏析
1. Time is mney.
2. The stars are sparkling diamnds.
3. The curtain f night fell upn us.
4. Life is a jurney.
5. Laughter is the sun that drives winter frm the human face.
6. Bks are the keys t yur imaginatin.
7. Spending t much time with him is wrse than swimming in a sea f sharks.
8. Her hair was a flwing glden river streaming dwn her shulders.
9. I'm drwning in a sea f grief.
10. The typical teenage by's rm is a disaster area.
11. She's ging thrugh a rllercaster f emtins.
12. Kathy arrived at the grcery stre with an army f children.
13. Yu light up my life.
14. I was lst in a sea f nameless faces.
15. Life cntains nthing but clear skies up ahead.
16. My heart swelled with a sea f tears.
17. The cluds sailed acrss the sky.
18. Tday's lecture gave me a lt f fd fr thught.
19. Laughter is the music f the sul.
20. A blanket f snw cvered the grund.
22. The teacher planted the seeds f wisdm.
23. Bks are the mirrrs f the sul.
24. Eyes are windws t the sul.
25. Let us be grateful t peple wh make us happy, they are the charming gardeners wh make ur suls blssm.
26. The skies f his future began t darken.
27. Laughter is the best medicine.
Her vice is music t his ears.
Part III 拟人(Persnificatin)
拟人Persnificatin也是一种比喻，就是把无生命的事物当作有生命的事物来描写，赋予无生命之物以感情和动作或是把动物人格化，使语言生动，形象，更有感染力。
例：
The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (描写微风）
Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. (描写黑暗环境）
The drizzle kissed me n my cheeks gently. （描写细雨）
The leaves f trees whispered quietly. (描写抖动的树叶）
Curage deserted him. (描写失去勇气）
Excitement deprived me f all pwer f speech. (描写激动地说不出话）
White and black smke rse up in steady clumns, magic within the dark air.
Despair envelped Steve and Zach.绝望笼罩着史蒂夫和扎克。
Freezing winter marched int the village. (描写寒冬）
2）常见例句赏析
1. The stars danced playfully in the mnlit sky.
2. The first rays f mrning tipted (踮着脚走ˈtɪptəʊ) thrugh the meadw.
3. She did nt realize that pprtunity was kncking at her dr.
4. He did nt realize that his last chance was walking ut the dr.
5. The river swallwed the earth as the water cntinued t rise higher and higher.
6. Slwly, the city began t breathe again.
7. Time flew and befre we knew it, it was time fr me t g hme.
8. The mn winked at me thrugh the cluds abve.
9. The cean danced in the mnlight.
10. The wrds appeared t leap ff f the paper as she read the stry.
11. While making my way t my car, it appeared t smile at me mischievusly(淘气地ˈmɪstʃɪvəslɪ).
12. The news tk me by surprise.
13. The fire ran wild.
14. The thunder clapped angrily in the distance.
15. The strm attacked the twn with great rage.
16. I culd hear Hawaii calling my name.
17. The flwers danced in the gentle breeze.
18. The fire swallwed the entire frest.
19. The flwers were blming, and the bees kissed them every nw and then.
20. It was early mrning--I met a cat yawning and stretching in the street.
21. The skyscraper was s tall that it seemed t kiss the sky.
22. His car suffered a severe strke in the middle f the rad, and refused t mve frward.
23. New Yrk is the city that never sleeps.
24. The sunflwers ndded in the wind.
25. The brwn grass was begging fr water.
26. The candle flame danced in the dark.
27. He sang a lnely sng t the mnlight.
28. Sme peple might win awards fr their farm prduce, like the biggest watermeln r the mst handsme rster.
29. Mney is the nly friend that I can cunt n.
30. My stmach was punishing me fr nt eating n time.
31. Yu make my heart skip a beat!
32. The stars danced playfully in the mnlit sky.
33. The wildfire ran thrugh the frest at an amazing speed.
34. Seeing such extrardinary beauty, I think every cell in my bdy wke up.
35. It was quiet nw, the thunder had grumbled (隆隆响ˈgrʌmbl) away t the west.
36. The mn played hide and seek (捉迷藏)with the cluds.
37. My alarm clck yells at me every mrning.
38. The wind hwled (吼叫haʊl) in the night.
39. The curtains danced in the breeze.
40. The tree branch scratched and clawed at my windwsill, trying t break int the huse.
Part VI夸张
夸张法 (hyperblehaɪˈpɜ:bəli) 就是运用丰富的想象，过激的言词，渲染和装饰客观事物，以达到强调的效果。
数词表示
He had given his last unce f strength t swim twards the shre.（描写努力）
A fld f fear welled up in him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。（描写恐惧）
She regretted with tns f anxiety, and the became sleep with shining tears in her eyes.
用动词/名词/形容词/副词表示
I almst laughed my head ff. (描写大笑）
He nearly explded with indignatin. (描写特别生气）
Rted t the grund, he culd nly stammer ut sme brken sentences with a tied tngue.(描写紧张说不出话）
Staring at the shining dime in his palm, Bb grinned frm ear t ear, with his eyes beaming with jy.（描写高兴大笑）
Hearing this, he split his sides with laughter. （描写高兴大笑）
He was walking n air. (描写高兴）
On the stage, he fund scres f arrws piercing her chest. (描写痛苦难受）
He cried his heart ut n hearing the tragic news.听到这个噩耗，他哭得撕心裂肺。（描写伤心哭泣）
At the sight f the fierce wlf, I frze with terrr, t scared t an inch.看到凶猛的狼，我吓得一愣一愣的，吓得寸步难行
I had butterflies in my stmach during the last minute f the basketball game.篮球比赛的最后一分钟，我紧张地不行。（描写紧张）
My heart punded s hard that I thught my ribcage might explde.我的心扑通扑通跳得厉害，我觉得我的肋骨可能会爆炸。（描写紧张）
3）常见例句赏析
1. There's enugh fd in the cupbard t feed an entire army!
厨柜里有足够养活一支军队的食物。
2. I was walking alng the rad when suddenly this enrmus dg std in frnt f me. It was as big as an elephant.
我正沿着马路走着，这时一只大狗突然站在我前面。它有大象那么大。
3. My bld frze.
我的血液都凝固了。
4. I have wanted t kill myself a hundred times, but smehw I am still in lve with life.
我曾上百次地想自杀，可是不知怎么的，我仍热爱生活。
5. Chris wn't drive her hme because she lives n the ther side f the universe.
Chris不会开车送她回家，因为她坐在很远的地方。
6. When I tld ur father abut this, his heart burst.
当我将这件事告诉我们的父亲时，他的心几乎要迸出来。
7. Basketball is the nly thing that ever mattered t him.
足球是唯一对他重要的事。
8.They turned int an endless street
他们转入一条看不到尽头的街道。
9. My heart almst stpped beating when I heard my daughter's vice n the phne.
从电话里一听到我女儿的声音，我的心几乎停止跳动。
10. I was s hungry that I culd eat a hrse.
我很饿以致于可以吃掉一只马。
11. He was s sad that he wasdrwning in tears.
他如此伤心，泪流满面。
12. Old Mr. Jhnsn has been teaching here since the Stne Age.
老约翰逊先生自从石器时代就在这儿教书了。
13. It was s cld that…When the men spke, their wrds frze in the air. Everything they said remained frzen all winter lng, and did nt melt until spring.
天是如此之冷，以致于男人们说话时，他们的话在空中冻结。他们说的一切在整个冬天都冻结着，直到春天才会融化。
14. I'm dying fr a cup f tea.
我很想喝杯茶。
15. I culd smell the fragrance f flwers frm a mile away.
一里之外我就闻到花香。
16. When she heard the bad news, a river f tears pured ut.
当她听到这个坏消息时，她泪流成河。
Part V平行法
平行法Parallelism一般由三项或三项以上的词语或句子构成，其并列的结构相同或类似，意义相关，语气连贯，使得句子流畅，富有节奏感。
1. Yu need t wrk quickly and decisively.
2. This is nt nly just what I wanted, but als just what I needed.
3. Mther was very busy gathering the laundry, dusting the furniture and washing the dishes.
4. Hw yu live yur life is mre imprtant than hw many millins yu have.
5. T survive yu need: water, fd and shelter.
6. Whether in class, at wrk, r at hme, James was always busy.
7. Nancy read a bk while Je watched televisin.
8. They ffer fd, flwers and gifts t the dead.
9. Fr success in life, ne needs t pursue his gal with determinatin and perseverance.
10. T succeed in life, yu need t take advantage f pprtunities and t fllw yur dreams.
11. Flying is fast, cmfrtable, and safe.
12. My face is washed, my hair is cmbed and my teeth are brushed.
13. Yu may respnd by calling, visiting r e-mailing.
14. He likes televisin shws that have deep characters, interesting stries and gd actrs.
15. My fellw Americans, ask nt what yur cuntry can d fr yu, ask what yu can d fr yur cuntry
16.The plitical leader said, "The present gvernment has ruined the ecnmy; it has ruined the educatin system; and it has ruined the health system f ur cuntry."
17. The president prmised t refrm health care, preserve scial security, and a balanced budget.
18. I have t learn hw t use the phne, hw t pay bus fare, and hw t ask a shpkeeper fr things I didn't knw the English fr.
19. The mvie was thrilling, exciting, and suspenseful (悬疑的səs'pensfəl).
20. My parents did nt apprve f what I did nr what I said.
21. Olympic athletes usually like t practice, cmpete, and eat ice cream sandwiches.
22. What cunts isn't hw yu lk but hw yu behave.
序号
内容
Part 1
明喻(Simile)
Part 2
暗喻(Metaphr)
Part 3
拟人(Persnificatin)
Part 4
夸张法 (hyperble)
Part 5
平行法(Parallelism)
修辞手法(figure f speech)是根据表达需要，运用有效的语言手段来提高语言的表达效果，使语言表达具有准确性、鲜明性和生动性的语言运用方式。恰当地使用修辞手段，可以使文章更加生动，更具有表现力，蕴意丰富，引人入胜。
常用的修辞手法有：夸张(Exaggeratin)、明喻(Simile)、暗喻(Metaphr)、拟人(Persnificatin)、平行法(Parallelism)、头韵(Alliteratin)、对比(Cntrast)、矛盾修辞法(Oxymrn)、双关(Pun)、移情(Empathy)等。对于高中生来说，最好能通过例句，结合具体的语境，体会修辞的表达效果。同时，要求学会欣赏并能模仿造句。学习和运用修辞手法，相信对高考新题型"读后续写"也有帮助。
Part I 种写作常用提分修辞之明喻
明喻Simile是一种最常见的修辞方法，是以两种具有共同特征的事物或现象进行对比，表明本体和喻体的关系。
基本构成：本体+比喻词+喻体
常见比喻词：like像； 和...一样；as就像；as if/thugh 好像；A is t B what C is t D A对于B而言就像C对于D而言
I culdn't mve my legs. It was as if they were stuck t the flr.（描写僵住的动作）
Then suddenly, an idea, shining and new, flashed like a cmet thrugh her brain.(描写突然有想法）
A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays f light glimmer and dance as if there was a fairytale wrld hidden deep within.（描写微风）
He is as timid as a hare.（描写人物胆小）
I was like a cat n ht bricks befre the interview. (描写紧张）
Harry scrambled t his feet, s happy he felt as thugh a large balln was swelling inside him.哈利感到特别高兴，仿佛胸中揣着的一个气球渐渐鼓了起来，使他飘飘欲仙了。（描写高兴）
The surface f the calm lake stirred the waves, and my md was as cheerful as a wave. 心情和浪花一样欢快。（描写高兴）
I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness. (描写悲伤）
She shk all ver, feeling like sitting n pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。（描写如坐针毡）
Ripping crystal streams stretched away int the distance frm the twering bluffs like the beautiful streamers f a fairy maid.（描写瀑布）
Then, n his back, with his tail lashing and his jaws clicking, the shark plwed ver the water as a speed-bat des.(描写鲨鱼）
The stars in the night sky sparkled like diamnds. (描写星空）
Clusters f stars decrated the vast sky like sparking jewels. (描写星空）
The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(描写寒风）
常见例句赏析
1. The snw was as thick as a blanket.
雪像地毯一样厚。
2. Last night, I slept like a lg.
昨晚我睡得像木头。
3. It seemed as if the wrld was at an end. 似乎是到了世界末日。
4. The grund is as hard as stne after the drught.
干旱之后土地硬得就像石头一样。
5. He wandered in t see me as if he had nthing else t d.
他遛遛达达进来看我，好像无事可做的样子。
6.Lve is like the wind, yu can't see it but yu can feel it.
爱如风，你看不见，但你能感受到它。
7. The cuntry, cvered with cherry tree flwers, lks as thugh it is cvered with pink snw.
地上覆盖着樱花，这个国家似乎覆盖着粉红色的雪。
8. I culdn't mve my legs. It was as if they were stuck t the flr.
我的腿动不了，就好像给固定在地板上似的。
9. He lks as thugh he hasn't had a square meal fr mnths.
瞧他那样子 好像几个月没好好吃过一顿饭似的。
10. The huse lks smething like a castle.
那房子看上去有点像一座城堡。
(smething like...有点像…)
11. Reading is t the mind what fd is t the bdy.
读书与思想的关系就好比食物与健康的关系。(A is t B what C is D "A之于B如同C之于D")
12. Searching fr ne man in this big city is like lking fr a needle in a haystack.
在这座大城市里寻找一个人犹如大海捞针。
13. Jhn saw the car cming and std still as a statue.
Jhn看到车子过来，像石像一样站着一动不动。
14. My mther's kitchen was like a hly place: yu culdn't wear yur shes, yu had t sit there at a certain time, and ccasinally we'd pray.
我妈的厨房像一个圣地：你不能穿鞋，你必须在某一个时候坐在那里，偶而我们会祈祷。
15.A rm withut bks is like a bdy withut a sul.
没有书的房间，如同没有灵魂的躯体。
16. The cluds were like ice-cream castles in the sky.
云朵就像是天空中的冰激凌城堡。
17. Kyle lked at the test with a stare as blank as his ntebk.
Kyle茫然地看着试卷，头脑如同笔记本一样的空白。
18. Then like a cld wave n a shre, cmes silence and she sings n mre.
然后沉默如同海滩上的寒潮般袭来，她不再唱歌。
19. As in depths f many seas, my heart was drwned in memries.
如同在大海深处，我的心里沉溺于回忆之中。
20. He sits there staring at the blank screen like a ghst searching fr his reflectin.
他坐在那里，盯着空白的屏幕，像是一个鬼魂在寻找他的影子。
21. He mved like lightening befre the plice came.
还没等警察到来，他像闪电一样地跑了。
22.She hung her head like a dying flwer.
她像是一朵枯萎的花低着头。
23. A huse withut bks is like a rm withut windws.
没有书的房子，如同没有窗户的房间。
24.I remember the whle thing as if it happened yesterday.
整个这件事我记得很清楚，就仿佛是昨天发生似的。
25. Life is like riding a bicycle. T keep yur balance, yu must keep mving.
人生如同骑自行车，要保持平衡你要不断向前。
26. A mind is like a parachute. It desn't wrk if it is nt pen.
思想如同降落伞，如果不打开就不起作用。
27. Life is like an nin; yu peel it ff ne layer at a time, and smetimes yu weep.
人生如同洋葱，你一次剥一层，有时你会流泪。
28. Fd is t the bdy as fuel is t the engine.
食物之于身体，如同燃料之于发动机。
29. The travellers have fallen in lve with lcal prduce. They cannt believe that the tmates are as big as apples, and the apples lk like the size f baseballs.
旅行者们已经爱上了的当地特产。他们不敢相信蕃茄大如苹果，而苹果看起来像棒球一樣大。
30. Gwen ften becmes green with envy whenever her classmates receive better grades r awards fr utstanding achievements, and she wuld turn int a green-eyed mnster.
每当她的同学们得到更好的成绩或领取杰出成就的奖，Gwen是嫉妒到脸都发绿，俨然变成一双绿眼怪兽了(表示非常嫉妒)!
Part II 暗喻
Metaphr也是也叫隐喻，是简缩了的明喻，但不用比喻词like或as作对比，是将某一事物的名称用于另一事物，通过比较形成，从而更生动，更深刻地说明事理，增强语言的表现力。
1）基本结构：本体 是 喻体。
名词型暗喻
Her hair was a flwing glden river streaming dwn her shulders.(描写肖像）
I was, inwardly, all white flag. (描写妥协）
Laughter is the sun that drives winter frm the human face. (描写笑的作用）
Kindness is a glden chain by which sciety is bund. (描写善良的作用）
动词型暗喻
I felt a lump in my thrat, tears welling up in my eyes. (描写伤心）
The by wlfed dwn the fd the mment he grabbed it. (描写饥饿时吃东西）
He melted int tears. (描写感动落泪）
A heavy silence blanketed the rm. (描写沉默寂静）
The ghstly winter silence had given way t the great spring murmur f wakening life.(描写万物复苏）
My heart was pumping. (心脏怦怦直跳）
2）常见例句赏析
1. Time is mney.
2. The stars are sparkling diamnds.
3. The curtain f night fell upn us.
4. Life is a jurney.
5. Laughter is the sun that drives winter frm the human face.
6. Bks are the keys t yur imaginatin.
7. Spending t much time with him is wrse than swimming in a sea f sharks.
8. Her hair was a flwing glden river streaming dwn her shulders.
9. I'm drwning in a sea f grief.
10. The typical teenage by's rm is a disaster area.
11. She's ging thrugh a rllercaster f emtins.
12. Kathy arrived at the grcery stre with an army f children.
13. Yu light up my life.
14. I was lst in a sea f nameless faces.
15. Life cntains nthing but clear skies up ahead.
16. My heart swelled with a sea f tears.
17. The cluds sailed acrss the sky.
18. Tday's lecture gave me a lt f fd fr thught.
19. Laughter is the music f the sul.
20. A blanket f snw cvered the grund.
22. The teacher planted the seeds f wisdm.
23. Bks are the mirrrs f the sul.
24. Eyes are windws t the sul.
25. Let us be grateful t peple wh make us happy, they are the charming gardeners wh make ur suls blssm.
26. The skies f his future began t darken.
27. Laughter is the best medicine.
Her vice is music t his ears.
Part III 拟人(Persnificatin)
拟人Persnificatin也是一种比喻，就是把无生命的事物当作有生命的事物来描写，赋予无生命之物以感情和动作或是把动物人格化，使语言生动，形象，更有感染力。
例：
The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (描写微风）
Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. (描写黑暗环境）
The drizzle kissed me n my cheeks gently. （描写细雨）
The leaves f trees whispered quietly. (描写抖动的树叶）
Curage deserted him. (描写失去勇气）
Excitement deprived me f all pwer f speech. (描写激动地说不出话）
White and black smke rse up in steady clumns, magic within the dark air.
Despair envelped Steve and Zach.绝望笼罩着史蒂夫和扎克。
Freezing winter marched int the village. (描写寒冬）
2）常见例句赏析
1. The stars danced playfully in the mnlit sky.
2. The first rays f mrning tipted (踮着脚走ˈtɪptəʊ) thrugh the meadw.
3. She did nt realize that pprtunity was kncking at her dr.
4. He did nt realize that his last chance was walking ut the dr.
5. The river swallwed the earth as the water cntinued t rise higher and higher.
6. Slwly, the city began t breathe again.
7. Time flew and befre we knew it, it was time fr me t g hme.
8. The mn winked at me thrugh the cluds abve.
9. The cean danced in the mnlight.
10. The wrds appeared t leap ff f the paper as she read the stry.
11. While making my way t my car, it appeared t smile at me mischievusly(淘气地ˈmɪstʃɪvəslɪ).
12. The news tk me by surprise.
13. The fire ran wild.
14. The thunder clapped angrily in the distance.
15. The strm attacked the twn with great rage.
16. I culd hear Hawaii calling my name.
17. The flwers danced in the gentle breeze.
18. The fire swallwed the entire frest.
19. The flwers were blming, and the bees kissed them every nw and then.
20. It was early mrning--I met a cat yawning and stretching in the street.
21. The skyscraper was s tall that it seemed t kiss the sky.
22. His car suffered a severe strke in the middle f the rad, and refused t mve frward.
23. New Yrk is the city that never sleeps.
24. The sunflwers ndded in the wind.
25. The brwn grass was begging fr water.
26. The candle flame danced in the dark.
27. He sang a lnely sng t the mnlight.
28. Sme peple might win awards fr their farm prduce, like the biggest watermeln r the mst handsme rster.
29. Mney is the nly friend that I can cunt n.
30. My stmach was punishing me fr nt eating n time.
31. Yu make my heart skip a beat!
32. The stars danced playfully in the mnlit sky.
33. The wildfire ran thrugh the frest at an amazing speed.
34. Seeing such extrardinary beauty, I think every cell in my bdy wke up.
35. It was quiet nw, the thunder had grumbled (隆隆响ˈgrʌmbl) away t the west.
36. The mn played hide and seek (捉迷藏)with the cluds.
37. My alarm clck yells at me every mrning.
38. The wind hwled (吼叫haʊl) in the night.
39. The curtains danced in the breeze.
40. The tree branch scratched and clawed at my windwsill, trying t break int the huse.
Part VI夸张
夸张法 (hyperblehaɪˈpɜ:bəli) 就是运用丰富的想象，过激的言词，渲染和装饰客观事物，以达到强调的效果。
数词表示
He had given his last unce f strength t swim twards the shre.（描写努力）
A fld f fear welled up in him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。（描写恐惧）
She regretted with tns f anxiety, and the became sleep with shining tears in her eyes.
用动词/名词/形容词/副词表示
I almst laughed my head ff. (描写大笑）
He nearly explded with indignatin. (描写特别生气）
Rted t the grund, he culd nly stammer ut sme brken sentences with a tied tngue.(描写紧张说不出话）
Staring at the shining dime in his palm, Bb grinned frm ear t ear, with his eyes beaming with jy.（描写高兴大笑）
Hearing this, he split his sides with laughter. （描写高兴大笑）
He was walking n air. (描写高兴）
On the stage, he fund scres f arrws piercing her chest. (描写痛苦难受）
He cried his heart ut n hearing the tragic news.听到这个噩耗，他哭得撕心裂肺。（描写伤心哭泣）
At the sight f the fierce wlf, I frze with terrr, t scared t an inch.看到凶猛的狼，我吓得一愣一愣的，吓得寸步难行
I had butterflies in my stmach during the last minute f the basketball game.篮球比赛的最后一分钟，我紧张地不行。（描写紧张）
My heart punded s hard that I thught my ribcage might explde.我的心扑通扑通跳得厉害，我觉得我的肋骨可能会爆炸。（描写紧张）
3）常见例句赏析
1. There's enugh fd in the cupbard t feed an entire army!
厨柜里有足够养活一支军队的食物。
2. I was walking alng the rad when suddenly this enrmus dg std in frnt f me. It was as big as an elephant.
我正沿着马路走着，这时一只大狗突然站在我前面。它有大象那么大。
3. My bld frze.
我的血液都凝固了。
4. I have wanted t kill myself a hundred times, but smehw I am still in lve with life.
我曾上百次地想自杀，可是不知怎么的，我仍热爱生活。
5. Chris wn't drive her hme because she lives n the ther side f the universe.
Chris不会开车送她回家，因为她坐在很远的地方。
6. When I tld ur father abut this, his heart burst.
当我将这件事告诉我们的父亲时，他的心几乎要迸出来。
7. Basketball is the nly thing that ever mattered t him.
足球是唯一对他重要的事。
8.They turned int an endless street
他们转入一条看不到尽头的街道。
9. My heart almst stpped beating when I heard my daughter's vice n the phne.
从电话里一听到我女儿的声音，我的心几乎停止跳动。
10. I was s hungry that I culd eat a hrse.
我很饿以致于可以吃掉一只马。
11. He was s sad that he wasdrwning in tears.
他如此伤心，泪流满面。
12. Old Mr. Jhnsn has been teaching here since the Stne Age.
老约翰逊先生自从石器时代就在这儿教书了。
13. It was s cld that…When the men spke, their wrds frze in the air. Everything they said remained frzen all winter lng, and did nt melt until spring.
天是如此之冷，以致于男人们说话时，他们的话在空中冻结。他们说的一切在整个冬天都冻结着，直到春天才会融化。
14. I'm dying fr a cup f tea.
我很想喝杯茶。
15. I culd smell the fragrance f flwers frm a mile away.
一里之外我就闻到花香。
16. When she heard the bad news, a river f tears pured ut.
当她听到这个坏消息时，她泪流成河。
Part V平行法
平行法Parallelism一般由三项或三项以上的词语或句子构成，其并列的结构相同或类似，意义相关，语气连贯，使得句子流畅，富有节奏感。
1. Yu need t wrk quickly and decisively.
2. This is nt nly just what I wanted, but als just what I needed.
3. Mther was very busy gathering the laundry, dusting the furniture and washing the dishes.
4. Hw yu live yur life is mre imprtant than hw many millins yu have.
5. T survive yu need: water, fd and shelter.
6. Whether in class, at wrk, r at hme, James was always busy.
7. Nancy read a bk while Je watched televisin.
8. They ffer fd, flwers and gifts t the dead.
9. Fr success in life, ne needs t pursue his gal with determinatin and perseverance.
10. T succeed in life, yu need t take advantage f pprtunities and t fllw yur dreams.
11. Flying is fast, cmfrtable, and safe.
12. My face is washed, my hair is cmbed and my teeth are brushed.
13. Yu may respnd by calling, visiting r e-mailing.
14. He likes televisin shws that have deep characters, interesting stries and gd actrs.
15. My fellw Americans, ask nt what yur cuntry can d fr yu, ask what yu can d fr yur cuntry
16.The plitical leader said, "The present gvernment has ruined the ecnmy; it has ruined the educatin system; and it has ruined the health system f ur cuntry."
17. The president prmised t refrm health care, preserve scial security, and a balanced budget.
18. I have t learn hw t use the phne, hw t pay bus fare, and hw t ask a shpkeeper fr things I didn't knw the English fr.
19. The mvie was thrilling, exciting, and suspenseful (悬疑的səs'pensfəl).
20. My parents did nt apprve f what I did nr what I said.
21. Olympic athletes usually like t practice, cmpete, and eat ice cream sandwiches.
22. What cunts isn't hw yu lk but hw yu behave.
序号
内容
Part 1
明喻(Simile)
Part 2
暗喻(Metaphr)
Part 3
拟人(Persnificatin)
Part 4
夸张法 (hyperble)
Part 5
平行法(Parallelism)
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