练习 专题10+应用文投诉信（网购）+续写（自然灾害脱险）-新高考英语书面表达终极押题（应用文+读后续写）

这是一份练习 专题10+应用文投诉信（网购）+续写（自然灾害脱险）-新高考英语书面表达终极押题（应用文+读后续写），共10页。
投诉信是人们在生活中对服务、商品、关系等不满时向特定对象写的信件，通常还会要求对方做出相应的补救。投诉信的用词要恰当并且相对正式，语气要坚决。叙述问题时用过去时态，提出建议时用现在时态。
投诉信三步走：
提出问题->说明具体情况->提出解决问题的办法
投诉信模板
Dear ________，
I am ________ (自我介绍). I feel bad t truble yu but I am afraid that I have t make a cmplaint abut ________ (抱怨的事情)．
The reasn fr my dissatisfactin is ________ (总体介绍). In the first place, ________ (抱怨的第一个方面). In additin, ________ (抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)t ________ (抱怨的方面带来的后果)．
I appreciate it very much if yu culd________ (提出建议和请求), preferably ________ (进一步的要求), and I wuld like t have this matter settled by ________ (设定解决事情最后期限)．
Thank yu fr yur cnsideratin and I will be lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely，
Li Hua
必备短语：
1. express my disappintment / dissatisfactin / cncern abut 表达不满
2. bring abut incnveniences 带来不便
3. t make matters wrse 更糟糕的是
4. in a rude manner 态度恶劣
5. put up with/bear 忍受
6. lk int/investigate the matter 调查此次事件
7. take measures/actins 采取措施
8. deal with/slve the prblem 解决问题
9. a satisfying slutin 一个满意的解决方法
10. declare a refund 要求退款
必备句式：
1. I am writing t express my disappintment / dissatisfactin/cncern abut…我写这封信是为了表达我对于……的失望/ 不满/担心。
2. The reasn fr my dissatisfactin is ... Fr ne thing, … Fr anther, …我不满意的原因是……。一方面……，另一方面……
3. Under these circumstances, I find it difficult t ...在这种情况下，我很难……
4. I wuld like t have this matter settled by the end f this mnth.我希望在这个月底之前解决这件事。
5. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give due attentin t this matter.如果你可以给予此事足够的重视，我将不胜感激。
押题实战演练
假如你叫李华，最近在某个购物网站上购买了一件夹克，但在到货后发现夹克存在一些问题。请给该网站写一封投诉信，内容应包含如下要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 投诉内容：夹克颜色和尺寸出错等；
3. 期望得到的解决方式。
注意：
1. 书信内容包括以上要点；
2. 词数80左右（书信格式已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir r Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写
读后续写“八步走”万能模板
1. 情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。
2. 细节-----进一步描述。
3. 转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。
4. 转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。
5. 失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。
6. 想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。
7. 结局-----在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。
8. 点题-----呼应前文
备注： 这八步不是固定的，考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序，也可以略写个别环节。此步骤，可让续写有话可说，让情节续写跌宕起伏，前提是要读懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脉络。
模板素材之句式
1. 情绪描写＆细节描写
哭：
1. A lump came t his thrat.
2. Her eyes were red frm crying.
3. Her eyes brimmed with tears.
4. Tears cursed/trickled/streamed/ran dwn her cheeks.
害怕：
1. She was t frightened t tell her family what had happened.
2. His heart was punding, as if he were frightened.
3. Liza was s frightened that she culdn't make a sund.
4. I bwed my head timidly and dared nt lk at my father's cludy face.
5. My brain is blank. I just want t leave this hrrible place.
高兴、激动：
1. When she knew. . .she felt excited/thrilled.
2. When she knew. . .her eyes twinkled with excitement.
3. When she knew. . . her heart was punding with wild jy.
4. When she knew. . .a wild excitement tk hld f her.
5. felt a surge f excitement.
伤心、痛苦：
1. A sadness came ver her.
2. Her heart ached, tears streaming dwn her cheeks.
3. Numb with grief, she became speechless.
4. Feeling a surge f sadness, she culdn't help crying bitterly.
5. Sadness surging within her, she burst int tears.
生气、愤怒：
1. Sam std rted t the spt, his eyes blazing with anger.
2. He felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him.
3. Biling with rage, he shk his fist at me.
4. Filled with fury, she was unable t utter a single wrd.
2. 转折：个人努力或借助外界
鼓起勇气：
1. He summned up his curage and ldged a prtest with his father.
2. I finally plucked up the curage t ask her fr. .
毫不犹豫：
1. She culd hardly wait t. . .
2. Hardly thinking/Withut even thinking, he ran t. . .
3. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
1. It seemed as if/that smene was cming t save us.
2. Oftentimes ur tears f remrse reveal a glimmer f hpe.
3. A wave f relief flded thrugh me. . .
4. A wave f relief washed ver him. .
4. 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题
1. But bad luck fr me, I failed in my attempt t persuade her.
2. She clsed her eyes tightly in a vain attempt t hld back the tears.
3. All ur effrts were in vain.
4. She kept pacing, wndering what t d next.
5. With tears streaming dwn her face, she didn't knw what t d next.
6. With tears streaming dwn her face, she was unsure f what t d next.
7. She was at a lss what t d.
8. He was in a dilemma abut whether t d r nt.
5. 想法：突然有了一个想法
1. It suddenly ccurred t him that...
2. It hit me that I had a chice.
3. A thught struck her that. . .
4. It dawned that. . .
5. An idea ccurred/came t me that
6. A ludicrus thught/idea flashed/came thrugh Harry's mind.
6. 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折
1. It didn't take lng befre. . .
2. It tk sme time befre. . .
3. T my surprise enugh, it turned ut that...
7. 总结：点题，呼应前文
直到...意识到
倒装句：Nt until+时间状语＋did sb. realize/ntice that+从句
强调句：It was nly+时间状语＋that sb. realized that+从句
还记得某人的话：
1. One's wrds eched/rang ut in ne's ears.
2. One's wrds/vice/lingered/whispered in ne's mind/head
3. One's head was still full f. . .
经历与教训
1. What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lessn she taught me/I learned frm her!
2. What a/an enjyable/pleasant/wnderful/unfrgettable/memrable/valuable experience I had!
3. Dwn deep in my heart, it was an interesting experience I had ever had.
押题实战演练
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A hliday in Penang is an annual affair fr my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fnd f Penang fd. In December every year, we wuld drive up t the island t spend three days visiting their favrite fd haunts (常去的地方).
This year, we started ur jurney up nrth n a Friday mrning. It tk us six hurs t reach ur destinatin. We always stayed at ne f the htels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a shrt walk frm the htel entrance and ur rms had a lvely view f the sea. We spent ur first evening playing n the beach. After dinner, we returned t ur rms t play games. My parents had a rule fr ur hlidays which was that we were t spend time ding things tgether. There was t be n TV and n Internet.
The next mrning, we went t Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest f the afternn in twn visiting ur favrite hawker stalls (小贩摊位). As we were having tea at a cffee shp, we verheard peple talking abut an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indnesia. We headed back t the htel and then went t the beach. We tk a walk alng the beach, picking up seashells alng the way. Lking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew befre. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never ccurred t us that smething awful wuld take place. Suddenly, I nticed a strange thing. The sea seemed t be leaving frm the shre. I called my father t lk at the curius ccurrence. My father tk ne lk and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance mving twards the shre. It seemed t grw taller by the secnd.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My father shuted at us t run back t the htel.
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We waited a lng time befre ging dwnstairs.
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参考答案：
1．One pssible versin:
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m writing t cmplain abut the jacket which I bught frm yur website. This mrning I received the jacket n time. I regret t say that there’s smething wrng with it.
Firstly, I’m pretty sure I asked yu t send me a purple ne. The mment the mail bx arrived, I culdn’t wait t pen it, nly t find a red ne. T make things wrse, I need a size 170-88A while yu sent me a size 175-92B, which is t large fr me. Were I in it, I wuld be a clwn. And it is f such bad quality—the zipper desn’t wrk at all!
My cncern is whether yu will return me the mney r have the jacket replaced and I wnder wh will pay the pstage.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给某购物网站写一封投诉信，投诉在其网站购买的夹克颜色和尺寸出错并提出期望得到的解决方式。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
遗憾：be srry→regret
非常/相当：quite→pretty
邮寄：pst→send
归还：give back→return
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I’m writing t cmplain abut the jacket which I bught frm yur website.
拓展句：I’m writing t cmplain abut the jacket bught frm yur website.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The mment the mail bx arrived, I culdn’t wait t pen it, nly t find a red ne. (邮寄的箱子一到，我就迫不及待地打开，却发现是红色的。)该句中，“The mment”引导时间状语从句，“nly t find a red ne”为动词不定式做结果状语。
[高分句型2] T make things wrse, I need a size 170-88A while yu sent me a size 175-92B, which is t large fr me. (更糟糕的是，我需要170-88A的，而你给我的是175-92B的，这对我来说太大了。)该句中“while”作为并列连词，连接前后句，表转折关系；“which is t large fr me”为非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3] Were I in it, I wuld be a clwn.(如果我穿上，我就会是一个小丑。)该句使用了与将来事实相反的虚拟语气结构，且将虚拟条件句“if I were in it”中“if”省略，“were”置于句首，构成倒装句式。
2．One pssible versin:
My father shuted at us t run back t the htel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the htel gate, we heard a raring sund behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us twards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first flr when we heard the rar f rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us t keep climbing. We stpped n the furth flr and lked dwn at the water belw us. It had stpped rising. After sme minutes, it began t drp.
We waited a lng time befre ging dwnstairs. Hardly had the rushing water drpped when we saw the unrecgnizable htel gate. There was dirt and brken furniture everywhere. Sme peple wh were caught in the water were either uncnscius r burst int tears with pain. What we saw weakened ur heart and we decided t help the victims after a narrw escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerus vacatin befre. The special trip t Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了作者一家喜欢去海滩度假，一次在海边散步时，作者发现了大海的异常，海啸发生了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我父亲大声叫我们跑回旅馆”可知，第一段可描写父亲看到风雨欲袭的场面后，想方设法带领全家人脱险。
②由第二段首句内容“我们等了很长时间才下楼”可知，第二段可描写海水退去后旅馆一片狼藉的景象和我们从中的感悟。
2.续写线索：在父亲带领下逃生——海啸退却——旅馆一片狼藉——灾后感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①对……大喊：shut at/yell at
②抓住：grab/seize/hld
③下降：drp/fall
情绪类
①害怕，恐惧：fear/ fright
②令人激动的：thrilling/exciting
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As we reached the htel gate, we heard a raring sund behind us.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Sme peple wh were caught in the water were either uncnscius r burst int tears with pain. (运用了wh引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] What we saw weakened ur heart and we decided t help the victims after a narrw escape. (运用了what引导主语从句)