学案 专题 16 话题分类写作模板背诵+祝贺信(应用文写作)--高考书面表达话题分类背诵范文
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1.(2022年云南曲靖联考一模)
假定你是李华,近期你校举办了“成人礼”仪式。在仪式上,你和同学们都收到了父母的祝贺信。信里有父母的道贺、鼓励及期望……请给父母写一封回信,表示你最真诚的感谢。内容包括:
1. 感谢父母的照顾和引导;
2. 不负期望,真诚祝愿。
注意:1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:Cming-f-Age Ceremny 成人礼
Dear mm and dad,
Having heard frm yu at the Cming-f-Age Ceremny,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear mm and dad,
Having heard frm yu at the Cming - f - Age Ceremny, I am writing t cnvey my sincere gratitude t yu fr all yu have dne fr me.
The last 17 years has witnessed my amazing grwing up, which is due t yur greatest care f my daily life. Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, enabling me t embrace life actively. Withut yur selfless devtin t me, I culdn’t have such a bright life nw.
My dear mm and dad, my true appreciatin is beynd wrds nw. What I can d nw is just t wrk harder t reward yur lve, and genuinely wish yu all the best.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给父母回一封信,向父母表示最真诚的感谢。
第一步:词汇积累
表达:cnvey → express
目睹,见证:witness → see
此外:besides → furthermre
贡献:devtin → cntributin
第二步:句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, enabling me t embrace life actively.
转换句:Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, which enables me t embrace life actively.
第三步:高分句式
【高分句型1】
The last 17 years has witnessed my amazing grwing up, which is due t yur greatest care f my daily life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, enabling me t embrace life actively. (运用了现在分词作状语)
2.(2022年北京·模拟预测)
假设你是李华,请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌(Eileen Gu)写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌,为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.她在奥运会上的优异成绩;
3.个人感想。
注意事项:
1.词数:100词左右;
2.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing t cngratulate yu n yur achievements. The whle natin is prud f yu. Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.
The ther day, when watching the race n TV, I was fully attracted by yur excellent perfrmance in yur events. And I felt thrilled and cheered fr yu the mment yu reached yur gals skillfully and successfully. It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.
Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌(Eileen Gu)写一封祝贺信,祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌,为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
第一步:词汇积累
以……为骄傲:be prud f →take pride in
兴奋的:thrilled→excited
实现:reach→achieve
决定:decide t→be determined t
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
拓展句:Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
第三步:高分句式
【高分句型1】 Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.(运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句)
3.(2022年河北·高三联考测试)
假定你是李华,上周你的英国朋友Jhnsn在中文演讲比赛中获得第一名。请你用英文给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.分享喜悦;
3.表达希望。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jhnsn,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jhnsn,
I’m writing t ffer my sincere cngratulatins n yur winning the first place in the Chinese speech cntest.
T be hnest, I feel prud f yu. I believe yu really deserve the hnr, fr yu have been wrking hard n Chinese. I want yu t knw hw jyful I’m t witness yur success. Winning the first place will inspire yu t learn mre f Chinese, which is bund t make yu expert in using Chinese mre fluently. I hpe yu’ll cntribute t the spread f Chinese traditinal culture.
Sincere cngratulatins n yu again.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英文给在上周中文演讲比赛中获得第一名的英国朋友Jhnsn写一封祝贺信。
第一步:词汇积累
比赛:cntest →cmpetitin
鼓励:inspire →encurage
一定:be bund t →must
做贡献:cntribute t →make a cntributin t
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句:I’m writing t ffer my sincere cngratulatins n yur winning the first place in the Chinese speech cntest.
拓展句:I’m writing t ffer my sincere cngratulatins n yu, because yu wn the first place in the Chinese speech cntest.
第三步:高级句式
[高分句型1] I want yu t knw hw jyful I’m t witness yur success.(运用了hw引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Winning the first place will inspire yu t learn mre f Chinese, which is bund t make yu expert in using Chinese mre fluently.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.(2022年全国·高三专题练习)
假定你是李华,得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University),他来自贫困地区,是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信,要点如下:
1. 考上理想大学,父母骄傲;
2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务;
3. 对未来祝福。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Wang qiang,
Cngratulatins!
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Wang qiang,
Cngratulatins! I have learned with delight that yu are admitted t Peking University, yur ideal ne! I knw yu have wrked very hard in the past years, s I’m truly happy t knw that yu becme the first cllege student f yur village frm the pr areas. I am sure yur parents are greatly prud f yu. I just want yu t knw hw pleased I am t witness yur success.
This is a new start fr yu and it’s gd fr yu t study with s many excellent students and learn frm tp prfessrs. I wish yu greater success in university and serve fr the hmetwn in the future.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文,假定你是李华,就好友王强考上北京大学一事表示祝贺。
第一步:词汇积累
确信:be sure→ensure
高兴的:pleased→delighted
地区:area→regin
对……骄傲:be prud f→take pride in
第二步:句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I knw yu have wrked very hard in the past years, s I’m truly happy t knw that yu becme the first cllege student f yur village frm the pr areas.
拓展句:Knwing yu have wrked very hard in the past years, I’m truly happy t knw that yu becme the first cllege student f yur village frm the pr areas.
第三步:高级句式
[高分句型1] I just want yu t knw hw pleased I am t witness yur success. (运用了hw引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I have learned with delight that yu are admitted t Peking University, yur ideal ne! (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5.(2022年全国·高三专题练习)
假如你是李华,你的好友王芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容,给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1. 表达你的愉悦心情;
2. 向她表示祝贺;
3. 请她介绍成功的经验。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Cntest
Dear Wang Fang,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Wang Fang,
I hear that yu have wn first prize in the English Speech Cntest f Middle Schl Students, s I’m writing t give my sincere cngratulatins.
Yu dn’t knw hw excited I was when I heard the gd news. I am prud f yu! Yur prnunciatin and fluent English made a prfund impressin n me. It came as n surprise t me that yu wn the cntest. Culd yu share with me hw yu imprve yur spken English? Yur experience will be f great help t me in learning.
I will be grateful if yu can write me back and give me yur advice. I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给好友王芳写一封祝贺信,祝贺她在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。
第一步:词汇积累
高兴的:pleased→excited
消息:infrmatin→news
口头的:ral→spken
感激的:thankful→grateful
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am prud f yu!
拓展句:Because I am yur best friend, I am prud f yu!
第三步:高级句式
[高分句型1] Yu dn’t knw hw excited I was when I heard the gd news. (运用了宾语从句、感叹句式以及时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] It came as n surprise t me that yu wn the cntest. (运用了that引导的主语从句,It作形式主语)
6.(2022年全国·高三专题练习)
假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信,要点如下:
1. 天天练习讲汉语,从不会到流利,终于成功;
2. 继续努力,有机会来中国留学;
3. 希望见面和交流。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I wuld like t express my cngratulatins t yu n yur receiving the first prize f “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest.
I knw that yu were nt gd at Chinese at first. Hwever, yu practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying ges, “Everything cmes t him wh waits”. Finally, yu succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult fr a freign student. S I’m s surprised that yu becme champin f this cmpetitin. Ging n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China. At last, I hpe t see yu and cmmunicate with yu.
Sincere cngratulatins t yu again!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国笔友Peter写一封祝贺信,祝贺他获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖,表示你为他感到骄傲。
第一步:词汇积累
表达:express→ cnvey
惊讶:surprised→ amazed/astnished
冠军:champin→ winner
机会:pprtunity→ chance
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Ging n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China.
拓展句:If yu g n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China.
第三步:高级句式
【高分句型1】I knw that yu were nt gd at Chinese at first. (运用that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】S I’m s surprised that yu becme champin f this cmpetitin. (运用s…that…引导结果状语从句)
7.(2022年浙江高三联考测试)
假定你是李华,你的新西兰外教Jhn因为对学校所做的贡献而获得了嘉奖,请你用英语给他写一封祝贺信,内容包括:
1.祝贺获奖;
2.感谢付出;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Jhn,
I am writing t ffer my sincere cngratulatins t yu n yur winning the award. As yur student, I just want yu t knw hw glad I am at yur achievement.
Fr these years, yu’ve shwn great passin in teaching and kept n imprving ur English ability. It is yur humrus and instructive teaching that makes English learning an entertaining and eye-pening experience fr us. Withut yur selfless devtin, we culdn’t have made such great prgress. Thank yu fr yur cmpany.
I really hpe that yu can enjy yur stay here and make mre achievements.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Jhn写封祝贺信,表达对他因对学校作出贡献而嘉奖的祝贺以及祝愿。
第一步:词汇积累
表达:express→ffer
成就/成功:success→achievement
英语能力:English skills→English ability
有趣的:interesting→entertaining
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing t ffer my sincere cngratulatins t yu n yur winning the award.
拓展句:After I have learned that yu have wn the award, I am eagerly writing t ffer my cngratulatins t yu.
第三步:高级句式
[高分句型1] It is yur humrus and instructive teaching that makes English learning an entertaining and eye-pening experience fr us. (是您的幽默和有益的教学让我们的英语学习变得有趣和开阔的经验。) 运用了强调句“It is +强调部分+that+其他”,该句中强调主语“ yur humrus and instructive teaching ”。
[高分句型2]Withut yur selfless devtin, we culdn’t have made such great prgress. (没有您的无私奉献,我们不可能取得如此大的进步。)运用了虚拟语气,介词短语“Withut yur selfless devtin”构成含蓄虚拟条件,主句采用了与过去事实相反的虚拟句式。
8.(2022年全国·高三专题练习)
假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信,要点如下:
1. 天天练习讲汉语,从不会到流利,终于成功。
2. 继续努力,有机会来中国留学。
3. 希望见面和交流。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇:“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest
Dear Peter,
I wuld like t express my cngratulatins t yu n
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I wuld like t express my cngratulatins t yu n yur receiving the first prize f “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest.
I knw that yu were nt gd at Chinese at first. Hwever, yu practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying ges, "Everything cmes t him wh waits". Finally, yu succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult fr a freign student. S I'm s surprised that yu becme champin f this cmpetitin. If yu g n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China. At last, I hpe t see yu and cmmunicate with each ther.
Sincere cngratulatins t yu again!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
第一步:词汇积累
根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):express my cngratulatins (表达祝贺);the first prize(一等奖);“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest(“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛);be gd at(擅长);at first(起初);practice ding sth.(练习做某事);succeed(成功);surprised(惊讶的);champin(冠军);g n(继续……)等。
第二步:文章布局
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
第三步:高级句式
[高分句型1] I wuld like t express my cngratulatins t yu n yur receiving the first prize f “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest.非谓语动词的运用;
[高分句型2] If yu g n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩
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