学案 专题 20 话题分类写作模板背诵+道歉信（应用文写作）--高考书面表达话题分类背诵范文

这是一份学案 专题 20 话题分类写作模板背诵+道歉信（应用文写作）--高考书面表达话题分类背诵范文，共14页。学案主要包含了高分句型1，高分句型2等内容，欢迎下载使用。


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书信写作话题分类背诵模板
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书信写作话题分类高分佳句
1.（2022年全国·高三专题练习）
假如你是李华, 现因公司货品质量问题给Jhnsn写一封道歉信。要点如下：
1.表示要查漏补缺, 改进提高；
2.提出补救办法；
3.表明决心和意愿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Jhnsn,
First f all, thank yu fr infrming us f the quality issue. I sincerely aplgize t yu fr ur failure t prvide yu with satisfactry prducts.
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Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Jhnsn,
First f all, thank yu fr infrming us f the quality issue. I sincerely aplgize t yu fr ur failure t prvide yu with satisfactry prducts.
We'll study the prblem, find ut the cause f it, and try t avid the same bad thing. We assure yu that we will prvide yu with a free replacement f the ne yu bught. Mr. Lee f ur Business Department will cntact yu as sn as pssible.
We hpe yu understand that this is just an accidental event, and we will try t cntinually imprve ur prduct quality. We cherish the establishment f a lasting friendship with yu. At the same time, we will als cntinue t wrk hard t prvide high-quality and affrdable prducts and better after-sales service fr yu.
I sincerely aplgize again fr the truble this has caused yu.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封道歉信，就公司货品质量问题给Jhnsn道歉。
【详解】1.道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方原谅自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是在找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。
2.在写作时可以根据提示的要点按照三段式的模式谋篇布局：
首段：表明自己做错了事，表示歉意；主体段落：提出作为弥补的可行措施，措施要具体、合理；结尾段：再次表明承认错误的态度，请求收信人的谅解。
第一步：词汇积累
查明，确信：assure
珍惜：cherish
意外的：accidental
建立：establishment
买的起：affrdable
3.文章的结尾再次因给对方造成的不便而道歉，显得礼貌且态度诚恳。
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：we will prvide yu with a free replacement f the ne yu bught.
拓展句：We assure yu that we will prvide yu with a free replacement f the ne yu bught.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
At the same time, we will als cntinue t wrk hard t prvide high-quality and affrdable prducts and better after-sales service fr yu.(连接词at the same time的使用使上下文衔接自然，后文使用并列句并运用高级词汇如affrdable, after-sales等。)
[高分句型2]
I sincerely aplgize again fr the truble this has caused yu.句子副词sincerely的运用使得句子流畅自然，this has caused yu为省略关系代词的定语从句。
2.（2023年贵州统考一模）
假如你是李华，你和你的外籍好友Andrew约好了本周末去图书馆，但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分类，全民行动”志愿活动而不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一份道歉信。内容要点：
1.表达歉意；2.简要介绍活动内容和意义；3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I have signed up fr a vluntary activity themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned. I feel terribly srry and want t express my deepest aplgy.
As yu knw, we students shuld spare n effrts in implementing the plicy f garbage classificatin. S, I seized this pprtunity withut hesitatin. On that day, we will g t cmmunities t publicize the significance as well as methds f trash srting and direct the residents t accurately distinguish different kinds f rubbish, which will take a whle day. Cnsidering that, I’m afraid I can’t keep my wrd. Shall we put it ff till next Sunday?
I am srry fr any incnvenience caused and hpe yu can accept my heartfelt aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是道歉信。因参加学校组织的志愿者活动，而不能与好朋友Andrew周末一起去图书馆，要求考生为些给Andrew写一封道歉信。
第一步：词汇积累
计划：plan→schedule
表达：express→cvey
真诚地：heartfelt→sincere
希望：hpe→expect
第二步：句式拓展
句式升级
原句：I have signed up fr a vluntary activity themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned.
拓展句：I have signed up fr a vluntary activity which is themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am srry fr any incnvenience caused and hpe yu can accept my heartfelt aplgy.(运用了过去分词作后置定语和省略连词的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
On that day, we will g t cmmunities t publicize the significance as well as methds f trash srting and direct the residents t accurately distinguish different kinds f rubbish, which will take a whle day.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.（2022年广西玉林·统考模拟预测）
假定你是李华，你和你的朋友Mike约好了本周六去博物馆，但是由于你临时要参加“美丽市容，从我做起”(Beautiful city, Start frm me)的志愿者活动而不能与其同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意；
2.简介志愿者活动；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Having signed up fr a vluntary activity, I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday. Therefre, I’ writing t express my sincere aplgy fr the incnvenience caused all f sudden.
As yu knw, I’ve been waiting fr a chance t devte myself t raising public awareness f envirnmental prtectin. Cnsequently, when the pprtunity t vlunteer came, I seized it withut hesitatin. On that day, all the vlunteers will put up psters abut hw t lead a lw-carbn lifestyle and pick up the trash alng the rads, which will take a whle day. Cnsidering that, I am afraid that I wn't keep my wrd. It is pssible fr us t fixed anther date when yu are available.
Wrds fail t cnvey hw aplgetic I feel and I hpe that yu can accept my heartfelt and genuine aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike写信，告诉他你因参加“美丽市容，从我做起”志愿者活动而不能按时和他同去博物馆而表达歉意，并另行约定去博物馆的时间。
第一步：词汇积累
非常：terribly→ awfully
突然：all f a sudden→suddenly
机会：pprtunity→ chance
安排：fix→arrange
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having signed up fr a vluntary activity, I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday.
拓展句：I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday because I have signed up fr a vluntary activity.
第三步：高分句式
【高分句型1】
Having signed up fr a vluntary activity, I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】
Wrds fail t cnvey hw aplgetic I feel and I hpe that yu can accept my heartfelt and genuine aplgy. （运用了hw引导的宾语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
4.（2022年全国高三专题练习）
假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东Bb的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bb写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意；
2. 提出解决的办法；
3. 再次请求原谅。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Bb,
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Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bb,
I am writing t make an aplgy t yu, fr I frgt t return a music CD which I brrwed frm yu last week. Yesterday I came back frm England and fund it in my luggage. I am s srry that yu cannt listen t it at present.
The CD which I brrwed frm yu is made in England, s I believe yu can find anther ne in yur lcal stre. Hw abut yur buying anther CD by yurself and I will pay fr it? If yu cannt find a similar ne, I wuld send it back t yu thrugh a pst ffice. And if there are any ther slutins yu like, please let me knw.
I am terribly srry again fr my carelessness. Please frgive me fr any incnvenience caused.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就将房东Bb的光盘带走一事写一封道歉信。
第一步：词汇积累
相信：believe→ensure
购买：buy→purchase
发现：find→spt
解决办法：slutin→settlement
第二步：句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I am s srry that yu cannt listen t it at present.
拓展句：S srry am I that yu cannt listen t it at present.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am writing t make an aplgy t yu, fr I frgt t return a music CD which I brrwed frm yu last week. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
The CD which I brrwed frm yu is made in England, s I believe yu can find anther ne in yur lcal stre. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
5.（2022年北京高三专题练习）
假定你是李华，在澳大利亚留学期间，父母维修厨房时影响到了邻居James，请给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 解释原因。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear James,
We were very shcked t get yur letter cmplaining abut the nise frm ur flat. We didn't expect it spiled yur evenings and caused yu sme distress.We d hpe yu accept ur aplgies.
My parents are busy at wrk during daytime , s they have t refit ur kitchen in the evenings. What's mre, they are nt s expert at ding huse repairs that they have difficulty in getting things t fit prperly.
As the repair is still nt finished, we will call in a prfessinal wrker t finish the wrk this weekend.We prmise that he'll wrk nly during daytime hurs, s yu wn't be disturbed in the evenings again.
Srry t have caused these prblems.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，在澳大利亚留学期间，父母维修厨房时影响到了邻居James，请给他写一封道歉信。
第一步：词汇积累
希望：wish→ hpe
困难：truble→ difficulty
惊讶的： astnished→ shcked
促使，导致：result in→ cause
第二步：句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：My parents are busy at wrk during daytime, s they have t refit ur kitchen in the evenings.
拓展句： Because my parents are busy at wrk during daytime, they have t refit ur kitchen in the evenings
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
What's mre, they are nt s expert at ding huse repairs that they have difficulty in getting things t fit prperly.（s…that…引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]
We prmise that he'll wrk nly during daytime hurs, s yu wn't be disturbed in the evenings again.（that引导的宾语从句）
6.（2022河南高三专题练习）
假设你是高二学生陈伟，昨天，你和你的外籍同桌Bb关于用集体班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执，请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
1. 表达自己的歉意；
2. 阐述道歉的原因(至少2条)；
3. 表达自己的友好之情，提倡(advcate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
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【答案】
Dear Bb,
I am writing t express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt s srry fr what 1 did and said yesterday. I dnated all the mney t the students in the flded area withut discussing the plan with yu.
I culd have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the mney, yu happened t be away frm schl and later I didn't explain it t yu in an apprpriate way. What was wrse, I said that yu didn't care abut the cllectin, which hurt yu s much.
Nw I want t take back what I said. Please accept my aplgy fr being s impulsive yesterday, and I'd like yu t try t understand my situatin. I hpe ur friendship will last lng.
Yurs,
Chen Wei
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求你给同桌Bb写一封道歉信，表达歉意，阐述道歉原因并表达友好之情。
第一步：词汇积累
歉意：aplgy→regret
合适的：suitable→apprpriate
撤回：withdraw→take back
冲动的：htheaded→impulsive
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please accept my aplgy fr being s impulsive yesterday.
拓展句：Please accept my aplgy, fr I was s impulsive yesterday.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
I culd have dealt with it differently. (culd have dne，运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2]
What was wrse, I said that yu didn't care abut the cllectin, which hurt yu s much. (综合运用状语从句、宾语从句和非限制性定语从句)
7.（2022西藏高三模拟）
假定你是李华,因下周五要到机场接表妹,所以不能陪Tm去北京旅行。请你给Tm写一封道歉信。
内容主要包括：
1. 向Tm表达歉意。
2. 向Tm解释原因。
3. 祝Tm下周愉快并另约时间陪Tm去北京旅游。
注意:
1. 词数100 左右
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tm,
I am very srry that I can’t g n a trip t Beijing with yu next weekend, which I have prmised yu. I am writing t tell yu the reasn fr it.
Just nw, my cusin, Li Ying, wh went abrad fr further educatin last year, infrmed me that she wuld return the next Friday mrning. She asked me t pick her up at the airprt with her parents. As yu knw, we haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year, s I have t see her in the first place.
I really hpe that yu can accept my aplgy and understand me. I wuld appreciate it if yu allw me t fix anther time t shw yu arund sme places f interest in Beijing.
Wish yu have a gd time this weekend.
Yurs
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
第一步：词汇积累
出国深造: g abrad fr further educatin
接某人: pick sb up
首先: in the first place
带某人参观某地: shw sb arund smewhere
玩得开心: have a gd time
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year. I have t see her tin the first place.
拓展句：As yu knw, we haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year, s I have t see her in the first place.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am very srry that I can’t g n a trip t Beijing with yu next weekend, which I have prmised yu.（使用非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Just nw, my cusin, Li Ying, wh went abrad fr further educatin last year, infrmed me that she wuld return the next Friday mrning.（使用非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]
As yu knw, we haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year, s I have t see her in the first place.（使用非限制性定语从句和并列句）
[高分句型4]
I wuld appreciate it if yu allw me t fix anther time t shw yu arund sme places f interest in Beijing.（使用形式宾语）