专题19应用文写作之申请信（解析版）（考点归纳 易错分析 考点练透）-2025年高考英语二轮复习答题技巧

这是一份专题19应用文写作之申请信（解析版）（考点归纳 易错分析 考点练透）-2025年高考英语二轮复习答题技巧，共34页。试卷主要包含了表明身份，点明要申请的内容，强调自身优势及胜任理由，表达感谢，期盼获准等内容，欢迎下载使用。
考点归纳
申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。一般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者，加入俱乐部或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信是非常正式的信件，所用语言也应该正式，简洁和准确，语气要礼貌。
写作结构
常用表达句型积累
1、表明身份，点明要申请的内容
① I’m writing t apply fr yur recently advertised psitin f...
我写信是想申请贵公司最近登的…… 职位。
② Having learned frm the newspaper that yu are in need f..., I’m writing t express my interest in it.
从报纸上得知你们需要……，我写信是想表达我对此感兴趣。
③ Perfectly fit/ suitable / qualified fr..., I’m writing in reply t yur ntice fr...
完全符合……，我写信回复你……的启事。
④ Having learned that yur ffice needs..., I wuld like t apply fr the pst. / I’m nw writing t yu in the hpe f filling in the jb vacancy./I am interested in.. and wish t enter this significant prgram.
得知贵公司需要……，我想申请这个职位。/我写信给您是希望能够填补这个职位的空缺。/我对……感兴趣，并希望加入这个重要项目。
⑤ I’m lking fr a jb as.., and wuld be grateful if yu culd cnsider me fr such a pst in yur firm.
我正在找一份……的工作，如果您能考虑我在贵公司担任这个职位，我将不胜感激。
2、强调自身优势及胜任理由
（1）总述
① I am cmpetent t meet the requirements yu’ve listed.
我有能力满足你列出的要求。
② With gd academic perfrmance and wrking practical experience, I feel I’m the right persn yu’re lking fr.
我有很好的学习成绩和工作实践经验，我认为我就是你要找的人。
（2）资格
① I am cnfident that I’m suitable fr... / qualified t d... / equal t ding...
我确信我适合……/ 有资格做……/ 能胜任做……
② I nce wrked as..., which makes me experienced in...
我曾经做过 ……, 这使我在 …… 方面有经验。
③ I’m an excellent student, amng the tp 5 in my class f 50 students. My grades are amng the best nes in my department.
我是个优秀的学生，在我班50名学生中名列前五。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。
（3）性格
① Meanwhile, it is my independence that makes it easy fr me t adapt t a new
envirnment.
同时，正是我的独立使我很容易适应新环境。
② Fr my being utging and enthusiastic, it’s relatively easy t get alng with me.
由于我外向热情，和我相处相对容易。
③ Being utging as well as warm-hearted, I’m always ready t help thse in demand, which makes me feel gd in return.
我性格开朗,心地善良，随时准备帮助有需要的人，这让我感觉很好。
④ As an utging... I get alng well with my classmates.
作为一名外向的……，我和同学们相处得很好。
（4）交流
①As a graduate majring in English, I have n difficulty in cmmunicating with thers in
English.
作为英语专业的毕业生,我用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力。
② T be hnest, I have a gift fr cmmunicating with thers.
说实话，我有与别人沟通的天赋。
③ I have been learning English fr mre than 10 years with a gd cmmand f ral and written English, which enables me t cmmunicate/ interact with freign friends fluently.
我已经学了10多年英语，口语和书面语都很好，这使我能够流利地与外国朋友交流。
（5）经验
Furthermre,I have participated in cmmunity activities fr years n end, which makes me cpe with varius emergencies prmptly and efficiently/ mre qualified fr the psitin.
此外，我已经连续多年参加社区活动，这使我能够迅速有效地应对各种紧急情况/更加胜任这个职位。
3、表达感谢，期盼获准
① Shuld yu favr me with the psitin, I am cnvinced that I wuld live up t yur
expectatins.
如果你选择我任职，我坚信我一定不会辜负你的期望。
② I wuld appreciate it if I’m ffered the chance. I will spare n effrt t ffer my best
service.
如果你能给我这个机会，我将不胜感激。我将会不遗余力地提供我的最佳服务。
③ I wuld be grateful / I’d appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int accunt/cnsideratin. Lking frward t yur earliest/earnest reply.
如果您能考虑我的申请,我会不胜感激，期待您可以尽快/认真答复。
④ If yu cnsider me apprpriate fr the jb, please call me at...
如果你们认为我适合这份工作，请致电……
申请信模版

Dear Sir r Madam,
个人简介. I am writing t apply fr the psitin yu advertised in the消息来源.
First, 性格优势1. Besides, 语言能力优势2. What’s mre, 经验优势3. Therefre, I believe I am the right persn fr the jb.
I sincerely hpe that yu will take my applicatin int cnsideratin. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
XX
实用素材
apply fr 申请… apply t d sth. 申请去做某事 apply t be/becme... 申请成为…
applicant n. 申请人 applicatin n. 申请 applicatin frm 申请表
职业：waiter/ waitress, typist, reprter, translatr, engineer, vlunteer, English editr, librarian，teaching assistant, shpping assistant,tutr,hst,cheer leader...
人物有点形容词：excellent, superb, wnderful, active, cnfident, strng-willed, easy-ging, utging, warm-hearted, hard-wrking, cmpetent, respnsible...
Useful expressins:
1.主修……专业 majr in ... 对…的态度 attitude t/tward…
2.(可)胜任…… be qualified/suitable/fit/cmpetent fr…
3.与……相处融洽get alng/n well with…
4. 获得一等奖 win (the) first prize
5. 对……乐观 be ptimistic abut
6.与某人有良好的人际关系 have a gd interpersnal relatinship with sb
7.富有合作精神 be cperative/a gd teamwrk player/with teamwrk spirit
8. 用电话或电子邮件联系我 I can be reached by telephne/email:
9.Yu can call me at 3328190 r send an email t
10. 符合你们的资历要求meet yur qualificatins/ meet yur requirements
11.在..方面有丰富的经验 have rich experience in…/be experienced in…
在你方便的时候进行面谈 have a persnal interview at yur cnvenience
开阔眼界/开阔视野braden ne's visin/hrizns
责任感/成就感 a sense f respnsibility/achievement
过渡句
I am qualified/ fit fr the jb based n the fllwing reasns.
擅长做某事的表达：be gd at / be best at d well in/ d best in
be a master f have a gd cmmand f be skilled at
be expert in... be an expert I knw a lt abut...
消息来源in the newspaper n the website
个人简介
1. I am Li Hua, wh is an exchange student frm China.
I am Li Hua, chairman f the students’ unin in N.1 high schl.
I am Li Hua, a girl f 17 frm N.1 high schl.
I am Li Hua, a girl frm Class 2, Grade 2 in N. 1 high schl.
性格
1. I am nt nly utging but als skilled at rganizing different kinds f activities.
2. I am nt nly easy-ging, but als always ready t help thers.
3. Being a cmmitted and respnsible girl, I am extremely interested in the jb.
语言能力
1.T begin with, I have a gd cmmand f English and I am familiar with Beijing. 2. Equally imprtant, I am fluent in bth English and Chinese. 3. My English cmmunicatin ability can fully meet yur requirements. 4. I have such a gd cmmand f English that I have n truble cmmunicating with thers. 5. I am expert in phtgraphy and
I take wnderful phts.
经验
1. I nce hsted a new year party in middle schl. Therefre I gained rich knwledge and experience abut the stage. 2. I hsted an event like this last year and gained sme related experience. 3. I tk part in a vlunteer activity like this last year and gained sme related experience. 4. My rich experience as a vlunteer is als a big advantage.
考点练透
高考模拟
（一）
（2024·福建漳州·一模）假定你是李华。你得知“大美漳州”推介活动组委会正在招募英语义务讲解员，为来访的外国友人进行讲解，请你给相关负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：
1．介绍相关经验和优势；
2．希望被录用。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am writing t express my keen interest in applying fr the psitin f English vlunteer interpreter fr the upcming “Beautiful Zhangzhu” prmtin event.
I have cnsistently achieved high scres in English prficiency tests, which have equipped me with strng cmmunicative skills acrss linguistic bundaries. Having wrked as a part-time tur guide during my university years, I can effectively cmmunicate with peple frm diverse backgrunds and interests.
I eagerly await the pprtunity t cntribute t the success f the “Beautiful Zhangzhu” prmtin event and lk frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Sincerely Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给相关负责人写一封申请信，申请当“大美漳州”推介活动的英语义务讲解员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→cnvey
即将到来的：upcming→frthcming
担任：wrk as→serve as
为……做贡献：cntribute t→make cntributins t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Hua, and I am writing t express my keen interest in applying fr the psitin f English vlunteer interpreter fr the upcming “Beautiful Zhangzhu” prmtin event.
拓展句：My name is Li Hua, and I am writing t express my keen interest in applying fr the psitin f English vlunteer interpreter fr the “Beautiful Zhangzhu” prmtin event which will be held sn.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have cnsistently achieved high scres in English prficiency tests, which have equipped me with strng cmmunicative skills acrss linguistic bundaries. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Having wrked as a part-time tur guide during my university years, I can effectively cmmunicate with peple frm diverse backgrunds and interests. (运用了现在分词的完成式作原因状语)
（二）
（2024·内蒙古通辽·模拟预测）假如你是李华，正在美国格林中学做交换生。为了让更多学生了解中华文化，你打算向学校申请建立一个关于中华文化的社团。请根据以下提示，用英语给学校负责老师Mr. Lee写一封电子邮件，介绍这个社团的相关情况，并征求他的同意。要点如下：
1. 了解中华文化；
2. 欣赏京剧；
3. 学习中国书法。
参考词汇：Chinese calligraphy中国书法
注意：1. 词数100~120；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mr. Lee,
As an exchange student frm China, I am deeply passinate abut sharing the rich and diverse aspects f Chinese culture with my peers at Green Middle Schl. I am writing t prpse the establishment f a Chinese Culture Club, which I believe will fster a greater understanding and appreciatin fr Chinese traditins amng ur students.
The club’s activities wuld primarily fcus n three key areas. T help members better understand Chinese Culture, we will rganize regular meetings and cultural events t discuss varius facets f Chinese histry, custms, and festivals. Members will als have the pprtunity t watch and learn abut Peking Opera, which is a significant part f ur cultural heritage. Furthermre, we will ffer wrkshps where students can practice Chinese calligraphy, gaining insights int the beauty and philsphy behind Chinese characters.
I sincerely hpe yu will cnsider my prpsal favrably. Thanks fr yur time and cnsideratin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以交换生李华的身份，给学校负责老师Mr. Lee写一封电子邮件，申请建立一个关于中华文化的社团，需介绍社团的情况，涵盖了解中华文化、欣赏京剧、学习中国书法三方面的内容，并征求他的同意。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……充满激情：be passinate abut→be enthusiastic abut→be keen n
培养：fster→cultivate→develp
安排：rganize→arrange
考虑：cnsider→give thught t→take sth. int cnsideratin
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T help members better understand Chinese Culture, we will rganize regular meetings and cultural events t discuss varius facets f Chinese histry, custms, and festivals.
拓展句：We will rganize regular meetings and cultural events t discuss varius facets f Chinese histry, custms, and festivals, s that members can better understand Chinese Culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing t prpse the establishment f a Chinese Culture Club, which I believe will fster a greater understanding and appreciatin fr Chinese traditins amng ur students. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Furthermre, we will ffer wrkshps where students can practice Chinese calligraphy, gaining insights int the beauty and philsphy behind Chinese characters. (运用了where引导限制性定语从句、现在分词作状语)
（三）
（2024·山东·三模）大学生活丰富多彩，令人向往。假如你是李华，即将进入大学学习和生活。请根据以下所给提示，写一封信，申请成为学校英语俱乐部成员。内容主要包括：
1. 申请原因；2. 个人优势。
参考词汇：说英语很流利speak English very fluently
与他人良好沟通cmmunicate well with thers
熟练使用电脑use the cmputers skillfully
有良好的团队精神have gd team spirit
注意：1. 文中不得出现考生个人真实信息；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：词数80~120；
3. 开头以给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing t apply t jin the club fr English learners.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m writing t apply t jin the club fr English learners. My name is Li Hua. English is ne f my favrite subjects. S I want t imprve it by jining the club.
I can speak English very fluently. I wn the first prize in English speaking cmpetitin last year. In additin, I’m an utging persn. I can cmmunicate well with thers. What’s mre, I’m gd at perating cmputers. I can use the cmputers skillfully. S I can help deal with sme things using the cmputers. Since I pssess strng team spirit, I am capable f cperating with ther club members. We can help each ther.
I wuld be appreciated it if I can be a member f the English club.
I lk frward t yur reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信，申请成为学校英语俱乐部成员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高：imprve→enhance
赢得：wn→gained
另外：In additin→Mrever
外向的：utging→utward
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：In additin, I’m an utging persn. I can cmmunicate well with thers.
同义句：Additinally, I am sciable and can effectively interact with thers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since I pssess strng team spirit, I am capable f cperating with ther club members. (运用了Since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I wuld be appreciated it if I can be a member f the English club.(运用了句型I wuld be appreciated it if)
（四）
（2024·四川攀枝花·三模）假定你是攀枝花某中学高三学生李华。美国马斯卡廷中学生代表团（the delegatin frm Muscatine High Schl）将在暑假期间访问中国, 行程包括你的城市。他们将与学生交流，游览特色景点，体验中国文化。你从网上得知你市正在招募从事接待工作的志愿者, 于是决定用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入，要点如下：
1. 写信目的；
2. 自我介绍；
3. 希望获准。
注意: 1. 词数100词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Sir r Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish all my best regards.
Yurs Sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senir 3 student in ur city. Knwing the city is lking fr vlunteers fr hspitality wrk fr the delegatin frm Muscatine High Schl during the summer hliday, I am writing t apply fr the pst advertised n the Internet.
I’m cnvinced I have the right qualificatins fr it. Fr ne thing, with fluent ral English, I have n difficulty in cmmunicating with freign visitrs. Fr anther, nt nly am I familiar with the histry and traditins f ur city, but als I have strng affectin fr them, which enables me t prvide visitrs with mre prfessinal service. In all, I feel prud t prmte and spread ur fine culture.
Shuld yu take my applicatin int cnsideratin and give me a chance, I wuld be grateful. Lking frward t yur early reply.Wish all my best regards.
Yurs Sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件申请成为从事美国马斯卡廷中学生代表团招待工作的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职位：pst→psitin
熟悉……：be familiar with→be acquainted with
总之：in all→in shrt
考虑：take int cnsideratin→take int accunt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Fr ne thing, with fluent ral English, I have n difficulty in cmmunicating with freign visitrs.
拓展句：Fr ne thing, since I can speak fluent ral English, I have n difficulty in cmmunicating with freign visitrs.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Fr anther, nt nly am I familiar with the histry and traditins f ur city, but als I have strng affectin fr them, which enables me t prvide visitrs with mre prfessinal service. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和nt nly置于句首引起的部分倒装)
[高分句型2] Shuld yu take my applicatin int cnsideratin and give me a chance, I wuld be grateful. (运用了虚拟语气的倒装)
（五）
（2024·江苏苏州·三模）假设你是李华，听闻《中国日报》（China Daily）为了宣传中国传统文化，正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点，你很想参加本次宣传活动，请你就此事给报社写一封英文申请信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.自荐理由；
3.申请参与。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m s excited t hear that China Daily is in need f sme vlunteers t intrduce Chinese culture verseas that I can’t wait t apply fr the psitin.
As a citizen, it’s my respnsibility t make Chinese histrical and cultural attractins knwn t the whle wrld. In additin, with an utging and pen-minded persnality, it’s easy fr me t get alng well with thers. Last but nt least, I have been t numerus famus scenic spts and my hmetwn is a famus histrical and cultural city, where I ften act as a vlunteer tur guide t shw freign turists arund, frm which I’ve gained relevant experience.
S, I firmly believe that I’m the very persn yu’re lking fr. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin and reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为《中国日报》宣传活动的志愿者，内容包括：写信目的；自荐理由；申请参与。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
责任：respnsibility→duty
与……和睦相处：get alng well with→get n well with/be n gd terms with
考虑：take…int cnsideratin→take…int accunt
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In additin, with an utging and pen-minded persnality, it’s easy fr me t get alng well with thers.
拓展句：In additin, with an utging and pen-minded persnality, it’s easy that I can get alng well with thers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m s excited t hear that China Daily is in need f sme vlunteers t intrduce Chinese culture verseas that I can’t wait t apply fr the psitin.(使用了s…that…引导结果状语从句，不定式分别作原因状语、目的状语、宾语)
【高分句型2】Last but nt least, I have been t numerus famus scenic spts and my hmetwn is a famus histrical and cultural city, where I ften act as a vlunteer tur guide t shw freign turists arund, frm which I’ve gained relevant experience. (使用了第一个and连接并列句、where引导非限制性定语从句、不定式作目的状语、frm which引导非限制性定语从句)
（六）
（2024·湖南衡阳·模拟预测）假设你是李华，暑假在纽约学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国书法展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。
注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Sir r Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student frm China during this summer vacatin. I’m delighted t learn that vlunteer students are wanted fr a Chinese calligraphy exhibitin t be held in the lcal art gallery. Nw I’m writing t apply fr the psitin.
The reasns fr my applicatin are as fllws. First f all, having been expsed t freign teachers since a yung age, I can cmmunicate freely with thers in English. What’s mre, years f being mnitr makes me a brilliant rganizer, which will help a lt t keep the exhibitin in rder. The mst imprtant factr is that my related knwledge will undubtedly help the audience learn mre abut the unique Chinese calligraphy.
All in all, my sense f respnsibility will make me a qualified vlunteer. I’d appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，暑假在纽约学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国书法展。要求考生写一封信申请做志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
申请：apply fr→ put in fr
此外：What’s mre→ In additin
首先：First f all→ Firstly
总之：All in all→ In a wrd
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, an exchange student frm China during this summer vacatin.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, wh is an exchange student frm China during this summer vacatin.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s mre, years f being mnitr makes me a brilliant rganizer, which will help a lt t keep the exhibitin in rder.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The mst imprtant factr is that my related knwledge will undubtedly help the audience learn mre abut the unique Chinese calligraphy.（运用了that连接的表语从句）
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（2024·天津·二模）假设你是展光中学的学生李津，正在美国一所中学作交换生。你和同学们打算在学校里建一个小型中草药植物园，请根据以下要点提示，写信向校长 Mr. White 申请。
(1)表达想法；
(2)说明理由(至少两点);
(3)介绍打算种植的两个品种(如：茉莉、桔子、薄荷、荷花、菊花等),及其 在日常生活中的作用。
注意： (1)种植品种不限于以上提示；
(2)字数不少于100;
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(4)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中草药植物园 Chinese herbal btanical garden
荣莉 jasmine 薄荷 mint 菊花 chrysanthemum
Dear Mr.White;
I hpe this letter finds yu well
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely:
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Mr.White;
I hpe this letter finds yu well. As an exchange student, I am writing t prpse an initiative f establishing a small Chinese herbal btanical garden n campus.
Firstly, it serves as an educatinal resurce, ffering students the pprtunity t learn abut the cultural heritage f traditinal Chinese herbs. By engaging in hands-n activities such as planting, nurturing, and harvesting, students can develp a deeper appreciatin fr the imprtance f bidiversity and sustainable practices in agriculture. Secndly, the garden will create a green space that enhances the aesthetic appeal f ur campus and imprve lcal air quality.
We have selected jasmine and mint. Jasmine, is used in Chinese medicine t relieve stress and prmte relaxatin. Mint, n the ther hand, is renwned fr its refreshing scent and cling prperties, making it a ppular ingredient in teas.
In cnclusin, I hpe that yu will supprt us in turning this visin int reality.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给校长Mr. White写一封信，申请在学校里建一个小型中草药植物园。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish →set up
机会：pprtunity →chance
参加：engage in→ take part in
著名的：renwned →famus
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, it serves as an educatinal resurce, ffering students the pprtunity t learn abut the cultural heritage f traditinal Chinese herbs.
拓展句：Firstly, it serves as an educatinal resurce, which ffers students the pprtunity t learn abut the cultural heritage f traditinal Chinese herbs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secndly, the garden will create a green space that enhances the aesthetic appeal f ur campus and imprve lcal air quality.（运用了that引导的限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Mint, n the ther hand, is renwned fr its refreshing scent and cling prperties, making it a ppular ingredient in teas.（运用了现在分词作结果状语）
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（2024·天津武清·模拟预测）随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服（Hanfu）作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。内容包括：
1．成立该社团的目的；
2．社团拟开展的活动及原因。
参考词汇：校委会：Schl Cmmittee
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Schl Cmmittee,
I hpe this email finds yu well. My name is Li Hua, a student at Mingqi High Schl, and I am writing t prpse the establishment f a Hanfu Club within ur schl cmmunity with the purpse f the revival f Hanfu clthing.
The activities that the Hanfu Club plans t undertake are as fllws. At first, we will rganize wrkshps t teach interested students abut the histry f Hanfu, its significance in Chinese culture, and hw t wear it crrectly. These sessins will be interactive and infrmative, allwing students t appreciate the beauty and elegance f Hanfu. Besides, the club will hst cultural perfrmances shwcasing varius aspects f traditinal Chinese culture, with a fcus n Hanfu. By engaging in these activities, we believe that the Hanfu Club can cntribute t fstering a greater sense f cultural pride and identity amng ur student bdy.
Thank yu fr cnsidering ur prpsal.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校委会写一封邮件表达准备成立汉服社的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：purpse→aim
重要性：significance→imprtance
得体地：crrectly→prperly
各种各样的：varius→diverse
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：My name is Li Hua, a student at Mingqi High Schl, and I am writing t prpse the establishment f a Hanfu Club within ur schl cmmunity with the purpse f the revival f Hanfu clthing.
拓展句：My name is Li Hua, a student at Mingqi High Schl, and I am writing t prpse the establishment f a Hanfu Club within ur schl cmmunity, the purpse f which is the revival f Hanfu clthing.
【点睛】[高分句型1] These sessins will be interactive and infrmative, allwing students t appreciate the beauty and elegance f Hanfu. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] By engaging in these activities, we believe that the Hanfu Club can cntribute t fstering a greater sense f cultural pride and identity amng ur student bdy. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] The activities that the Hanfu Club plans t undertake are as fllws. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
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（2024·山西晋中·模拟预测）假定你是李华，正在美国留学，得知校街舞社团将组建团队参加市中学生街舞表演，你想报名参加本次活动。请你给活动指导老师Alice写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.自我介绍；2.询问活动相关信息；3.表达意愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student studying in the US nw. Hearing that middle schl students are wanted fr street dance perfrmance, I’m writing t apply t jin it.
I started t learn street dance when I was ten and have been practicing it fr ver seven years. Devted t the energetic and lively style f dance, I try my best t express the vitality f the yung. S I cnsider myself as a perfect fit fr the team. Wuld yu please tell me hw I can sign up fr the event?
I hpe I will be admitted! Lking frward t yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给街舞表演活动指导老师Alice写一封邮件，报名参加社团组建的街舞表演活动，介绍自己，询问活动相关信息并表达意愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
现在：nw→currently
热衷的，投入的：devted→cmmitted
有活力的：energetic→vigrus
认为：cnsider→regard
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that middle schl students are wanted fr street dance perfrmance, I’m writing t apply t jin it.
拓展句：Because I hear that middle schl students are wanted fr street dance perfrmance, I’m writing t apply t jin it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that middle schl students are wanted fr street dance perfrmance, I’m writing t apply t jin it.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I started t learn street dance when I was ten and have been practicing it fr ver seven years.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
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（2024·湖南娄底·一模）假定你是李华，你打算在暑假期间为来华的外国游客当导游。请给某旅游公司写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你为外国游客当导游的申请；
2.你为外国游客当导游的优势；
3.你为外国游客当导游的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high schl student.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high schl student. I’m writing t apply fr the psitin as a tur guide fr freign visitrs during the summer hliday.
Firstly, I have a gd cmmand f English, which means I am able t cmmunicate freely and fluently in English. In additin, in the past three years I have taken part in many scial activities in which I perfrmed well and gained rich experience. Furthermre, my interest and skill in cmmunicatin and teamwrk cntribute t my applicatin fr the jb.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider my applicatin and prvide me with a chance t spread Chinese culture amng freigners.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给旅游公司写一封申请邮件，申请成为暑假来华旅游的外国游客的导游，说明申请目的，自身优势和申请理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
游客：visitr→turist
参加：take part in→participate in
导致：cntribute t→make fr
提供：prvide→supply
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Firstly, I have a gd cmmand f English, which means I am able t cmmunicate freely and fluently in English.
拓展句：Firstly, I have a gd cmmand f English, meaning I am able t cmmunicate freely and fluently in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, I have a gd cmmand f English, which means I am able t cmmunicate freely and fluently in English.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和省略连接词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】In additin, in the past three years I have taken part in many scial activities in which I perfrmed well and gained rich experience.（运用了介词+which引导的限制性定语从句）
高考真题
（一）
（2023·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：
(1)申请参加本次活动；
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
参考词汇：中国工坊 Chinese Wrkshp
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student frm China. Knwing that Chinese Wrkshp will be held in the schl, I am writing t apply fr taking part in the activity.
The theme f the activity invlves Chinese fd, traditinal Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. S I think this activity is very significant, which is cnducive t spreading excellent traditinal Chinese culture and prmting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passin fr making Chinese cuisine, fr example dumplings. Nt nly can I teach participants hw t make dumplings, but als let them fall in lve with Chinese cuisine.
I wuld appreciate it if yu wuld enrll me in the event. Lking frward t yur reply.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：(1)申请参加本次活动；(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hld→hst
参加：take part in→participate in
有助于：be cnducive t→cntribute t
促进、推动：prmte→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I wuld appreciate it if yu wuld enrll me in the event.
拓展句：I wuld be very appreciative if yu wuld enrll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knwing that Chinese Wrkshp will be held in the schl, I am writing t apply fr taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knwing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 S I think this activity is very significant, which is cnducive t spreading excellent traditinal Chinese culture and prmting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Nt nly can I teach participants hw t make dumplings, but als let them fall in lve with Chinese cuisine.(nt als连接句子时，nt nly位于句首引起的部分倒装)
（二）
（2019·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m writing t apply t be a vlunteer fr the Chinese Painting Exhibitin which will be held in yur art gallery. I think I am qualified fr this jb, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhd. Besides, I am fluent in bth Chinese and English, which is beneficial fr intrducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enugh t be chsen as a vlunteer, I can shw visitrs arund the gallery and get them t knw mre abut Chinese painting.
I wuld be very grateful if yu culd ffer me the pprtunity. I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。
【详解】1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：vlunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibitin，advantages，I am gd at…，I can help ’ll devte myself t…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First f all，Besides，t begin with，mrever，as fr me，Last but nt least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be qualified fr，be fluent in，be beneficial fr等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhd此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial fr intrducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enugh t be chsen as a vlunteer, I can shw visitrs arund the gallery and get them t knw mre abut Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。
（三）
（2010·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：
● 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）
●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）
●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hpe Schl
Dear Sir r Madam,
I am Li Hua frm Class One, Senir Tw.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir r Madam，
I am Li Hua frm Class One，Senir Tw．As far as I am cncerned，I believe t teach English fr pupils frm Chenxi Hpe Schl will be gd fr bth the primary-schl students and high-schl student tutrs，which thus will result in substantial scial benefits．
I think I am qualified fr being the pupils’ English cach，because I have gd character，and I'm independent in life and prficient in English．That's why I apply fr the psitin．I hpe I can jin the instructive activity．
My plan fr caching the pupils is t teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's mre imprtant is t stimulate their interests in learning English as a freign language，creating a gd learning envirnment．I hpe yu can ffer the pprtunity．
Yurs sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本文是书信类作文。
【详解】本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，secnd， Besides, What’s mre等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。重要短语：As far as I am cncerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified fr （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）等
【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： As far as I am cncerned据我所知，be qualified fr 合格的。I believe t teach English fr pupils frm Chenxi Hpe Schl will be gd fr bth the primary-schl students and high-schl student tutrs, which thus will result in substantial scial benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， That’s why I apply fr the psitin.这句话用了表语从句， My plan fr caching the pupils is t teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s mre imprtant is t stimulate their interests in learning English as a freign language, creating a gd learning envirnment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。
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（2018·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
（1） 口语能力：
（2） 相关经验；
（3） 应聘目的。注意：
（1） 词数80左右；
（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Sir r Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing t apply fr being a vlunteer f ur schl English assciatin.
I have a gd cmmand f English and have been t the USA twice. S I can cmmunicate well with native speakers f English. What’s mre, I am kind and friendly t ther peple. S I can easily get alng with freign students.
I’m particularly interested in this jb because I want t further imprve my ral English capabilities and interpersnal cmmunicatin skills.
Hpefully I can receive yur acceptance.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing t apply fr…，a gd cmmand f English，cmmunicate with，get alng with等。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
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（2011·上海·高考真题）假如你是启明中学（Ming Qi Middle Schl）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。
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【答案】Dear Wrld Child Fundatin rganizers:
My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Ming Qi Middle Schl. I am writing, n behalf f my classmates, t apply fr the 2000 yuan's wrth f fund in a bid t initiate a prgram aimed at helping thse students wh are financially disadvantaged.
Being raised in families that dn’t have t wrry abut putting fd n the table need nt mean blivin t ur less frtunate peers. On this accunt, we wuld appreciate it if yu culd spnsr ur pverty-relief endeavr. The fllwing is hw we wuld g abut using the mney. We wuld spend 1500 yuan purchasing sme statinery fr the needy students in a pverty-stricken area. It is wrth nting that we wuld infrm them t pick up the schl supplies themselves instead f us “dling ut” the supplies s that we wuldn’t end up embarrassing thse wh we want t help. The remainder f the fund wuld be used t invite a mtivatinal speaker wh was t talk abut hw t lift neself ut f pverty by making right academic and prfessinal decisins.
At the end f the day, ur effrts might nly trigger a ripple in the lives f sme yung peple, but wh knws what butterfly effects these yung minds may have n tmrrw's wrld?
We wuld be much bliged if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据一个扶贫项目的启事，写一封申请信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
代表：n behalf f→represent
创立：initiate→establish
赞助：spnsr→rt fr
使窘迫：embarrass→make ashamed r uneasy
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：On this accunt, we wuld appreciate it if yu culd spnsr ur pverty-relief endeavr.
拓展句：On this accunt, we wuld be very grateful if yu culd spnsr ur pverty-relief endeavr.
【点睛】[高分句型1] On this accunt, we wuld appreciate it if yu culd spnsr ur pverty-relief endeavr. (运用了it作形式宾语)
[高分句型2] It is wrth nting that we wuld infrm them t pick up the schl supplies themselves instead f us “dling ut” the supplies s that we wuldn’t end up embarrassing thse wh we want t help. (运用了s that引导的目的状语从句以及wh引导的定语从句)
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（2016·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（frmat）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing t tell yu smething abut my plan fr the cming summer vacatin and I als want yu t d me a favr.
In rder t get sme practical experience, I am planning t take a part-time jb in a freign capital cmpany. I have already finished my jb applicatin and persnal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an applicatin and the persnal resume, s I dn’t even knw if there are smething t pay attentin t. S, I’m writing yu the letter , hping yu can give me sme help. I will be very grateful if yu can help me.
Lking frward t yur reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。
本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In rder t get sme practical experience, 现在分词短语hping yu can give me sme help, 宾语从句if there are smething t pay attentin t等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an applicatin and the persnal resume也是文章的亮点所在。
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（2015·重庆·高考真题）Bkcrssing. Cm 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享(wild release)，即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享(cntrlled release)，即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：
· 表明写信目的
· 选择一种分享方式
· 简述作出该选择的理由
· 希望了解更多信息
注意：(1)词数不少于80
(2)在答题卡上做答
(3)书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数)
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that yu are rganizing this activity t share bks wrldwide, I am writing t apply fr it fr the simple reasn that I lve reading and I wn a large number f bks.
Yu’ve intrduced tw ways t share bks: wild release and cntrlled release. Of the tw, the latter wins my favr. By the means f cntrlled release, I nly need t deliver bks t ther participants, nt nly are bks shared but it can build up a bridge cnnecting readers frm different parts f the wrld as well.
If yu culd prvide mre specific infrmatin, I wuld be well grateful. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。Bkcrssing.Cm 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享(wild release)，即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享(cntrlled release)，即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：prvide→ffer
方式：way→methd
感谢的：grateful→thankful
回答：reply→respnse
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：If yu culd prvide mre specific infrmatin, I wuld be well grateful.
拓展句：I wuld appreciate it if yu culd prvide mre specific infrmatin.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that yu are rganizing this activity t share bks wrldwide, I am writing t apply fr it fr the simple reasn that I lve reading and I wn a large number f bks. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If yu culd prvide mre specific infrmatin, I wuld be well grateful. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
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（2012·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapre）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3.希望获准。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir r Madam,
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Regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle schl student frm China. I read the annuncement f the summer camp that yu have psted n the Internet and I am interested in it. I knw that yu welcme students frm different cuntries and I’d like t take part in it. I’ve been learning English fr 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is mre, I’ll be able t tell students frm ther cuntries abut China and learn abut their cuntries as well. I hpe I will be accepted as a member f yur summer camp.
Lking frward t yur reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给一个国际中学生组织写信，申请在新加坡举办的夏令营。
【详解】1.词汇积累
公布：pst→publish
感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
不同的：different→varius
能够：be able t =can
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’ve been learning English fr 10 years, and I speak fluent English.
拓展句：Because I’ve been learning English fr 10 years, I speak fluent English.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m Li Hua, a middle schl student frm China. (运用了同位语)
[高分句型2] I read the annuncement f the summer camp that yu have psted n the Internet and I am interested in it. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
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（2011·辽宁·高考真题）假定你是李华，将与今年七月从新星外语学校毕业，你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：
1．年龄；
2．学习情况及英语水平；
3．兴趣和特长；
4．性格特点。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned frm the newspaper that yur cmpany needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this psitin and hpe I can wrk fr yu.
I’m 18 years ld and will be graduating frm Xinxing Freign Language Schl this July. I’m an excellent student, amng the tp 5 in my class f 50 students. I’m gd at English, especially spken English. I ften use the cmputer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lt. Pems are my favrite. I enjy music very much t. Being an active yung persn, I like sprts and utdr activities. Besides, I’m easy t get alng with and I like t make friends.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给B&B公司写一封求职信，申请当一名英文秘书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
需要：require→need
希望：wish→hpe
擅长：d well in→be gd at
口头的：ral→spken
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m an excellent student, amng the tp 5 in my class f 50 students.
拓展句：I’m an excellent student, wh is amng the tp 5 in my class f 50 students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I learned frm the newspaper that yur cmpany needs an English secretary. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Being an active yung persn, I like sprts and utdr activities. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
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（2009·上海·高考真题）Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cking），防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：
1.你感兴趣的课程
2.你期望从这门课程中学到什么
3.为什么想学这些内容
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【答案】Dear leader,
I am very glad that yur schl will hld the English Summer Camp that cntains many curses, such as gardening cking, self-defence, nursing and s n. I want t register t attend a curse abut gardening, because I have liked flwers, grasses etc since I was a little child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjy the beauty f nature. Fr ne thing, I hpe t gain a bit mre knwledge f gardening s that it can help me t majr in the gardening after attending cllege. Besides I wish t get much mre infrmatin abut gardening s as t study it mre easily when I enter the university. What’s mre, I can realize the bitterness f the gardeners t treasure the plants much mre. Fr anther, after graduatin frm cllege I will devte my life t cultivate the flwers and grasses t turn ur cuntry int a mre beautiful state and make many mre freigners cme t visit ur cuntry.
Yurs,
Wang Yue hua
【分析】本文是书信格式，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，属于半开放式作文。
【详解】学生在写作时应注意如下几点：1.先谈自己感兴趣的学科，从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科，这是写作的关键，过渡要自然；2.再写自己希望学到什么，要把握实用性。3. 然后谈出想学这些内容的原因，结合现实，理由合情合理。4. 在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化，适度增加情节
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjy the beauty f nature.句中使用限制性定语从句；Fr ne thing, I hpe t gain a bit mre knwledge f gardening s that it can help me t majr in the gardening after attending cllege.句中包含s that引导的目的状语从句。
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启事
国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。
有意者请来信告知：
1） 你个人的基本情况；
2） 你对申请项目的基本设想；
3） 项目经费的使用计划。
联系方式: 2011hpe@icf.rg
2011年6月7日