2025年高考英语二轮专题复习专题13（课件） 邀请写书评

这是一份2025年高考英语二轮专题复习专题13（课件） 邀请写书评，共50页。PPT课件主要包含了基础写作，写信背景+写信目的，商定时间地点表示感谢，熟能生巧，触类旁通，读后续写等内容，欢迎下载使用。
riginal English bksEnglish riginals
求助信的常用开头句式：(需要熟背)I am writing t yu t ask whether yu can d me a favr.I’m srry t bther yu, but I have sme difficulies here and I need yur help. I have sme difficulty in ding... which bthers me a lt. S I have n chice/alternative but t turn (别无选择只能) t yu fr help. I’m terribly srry t truble yu, but I wnder if yu culd spare sme time t assist me t... Having sme difficulties with my..., I am writing with great eagerness t make a request fr yur help/ request yur valuable help.
求助信常用结尾：I’d appreciate it if yu culd give me sme guidance. Lking frward t yur reply.
I’d feel privileged if yu culd stretch ut yur helping hand. A prmpt reply at yur earliest cnvenience wuld be highly appreciated.
Yur gracius assistance大力协助will be highly appreciated. Lking frward t yur favrable reply.
I’d appreciate the truble yu may take t help me. Keenly anticipating yur prmpt reply.
要点罗列❶ ask yu a favr❷ sign up fr a reading activity and write a bk review❸ help me crrect it /make sme crrectins ❹ meet after class n Friday/ spare me sme time❺ thanks and expectatins
3、依据提纲，扩展成文❶ ask yu a favr I am writing t ask yu a favr.
Cnfrnted with the cnfusin abut hw t make an interesing and perspective/ shrewed cmment n the riginal English bk that I have read, I am writing with great eagerness t make a request fr yur instructive help.
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 ❷ sign up fr a reading activity and write a bk review As a keen lver f English bks, I signed up fr a reading activity during the summer vcatin, where I read sme English riginals and wrte a bk review.
Supprting + Key
nn-restrictive clause
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 ❸ help me crrect it / make sme crrectins I am nt sure whether I have gt my idea acrss, s I sincerely hpe yu can help me t crrect it and give me sme advice n writing. Being pr in writing, I am wrried there might be sme mistakes.Wuld yu be s kind as t help me make sme crrectins?
Using a questin t be plite
3、依据提纲，扩展成文❹ meet after class n Friday/ spare me sme time If yu are avialable/ it is cnvenient fr yu after class n Friday, please infrm me in advance and I will meet yu in yur ffice.
3、依据提纲，扩展成文❺ thanks and expectatin I’d be grateful if yu culd give me a hand. Lking frward t yur kind/ favurable reply. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd d me a favr. It wuld be highly appreciated if yu culd ffer me help. In anticipatin f yur prmpt reply.
Dear Sam, (I am Li Hua, a student frm ur schl.) I am writing t ask a favr f yu. As a keen lver f English bks, I signed up fr a reading activity during the summer vcatin, where I read sme English riginals and wrte a bk review n my favrite bk Jane Eyre. But I am nt sure whether I have gt my idea acrss, s I sincerely hpe yu can help me t make sme crrectins and give me sme advice n writing. Can yu spare me sme time and tell me when s that I can g t meet yu? I’d be grateful if yu culd give me a hand. Lking frward t yur reply. Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
4、核查文章，适度修改
Dear Sam, I hpe this letter finds yu well. I am writing t seek yur assistance with a bk review that I wrte as part f an English riginal bk reading activity rganized by a WeChat public accunt during the summer vacatin. First f all, let me briefly intrduce the reading activity. Participants were required t read English riginal bks f their chice and write bk reviews t share their thughts and insights. It was an excellent pprtunity fr me t imprve my English reading cmprehensin and cmpsitin/ writing skills/ techniques. I was wndering if yu culd kindly spare sme time t help me revise my bk review. Yur expertise(专业知识) and guidance wuld tremendusly (极大地) benefit my language learning jurney. I wuld be grateful if we culd meet in persn t discuss and plish my wrk. Hw abut meeting this Saturday afternn at a cafe near the university campus? Please let me knw if this time is cnvenient fr yu, r suggest an alternative time and place if necessary. Thank yu fr cnsidering my request, and I lk frward t yur psitive respnse.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
t immerse themselves
2020年全国III卷应用文
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。Para 1: Para 2:Para 3:
剧情简介指导内容：①修改语法错误②润色语言
Para 1:写作背景+写作目的① I am writing in sincerity t ask yu a favr regarding a play we adapted accrding t the textbk.② I’m writing with heartfelt sincerity t cnvey my earnest lnging fr yur help/ assistance .I’m Li Hua, a student f yur English class.I’m Li Hua, a student frm class 5.
记得第一句先介绍自己是谁！！！
Para 2:剧情介绍+指导内容① We’d like t cmbine yur culture with urs by adapting the classic nvel The Steambat fr a shrt English play. The play is set n a big strm after midnight. On the raft /ræft/ 筏 dwn the river navigatin, we see a steambat that is ging t sink. We save a scared by. ② The stry fcuses n the relatinship between a wman and a rbt. We are still unsure abut the quality f ur play. As a result, we need sme advices such as hw t use the language prperly.
Para 2:剧情介绍+指导内容③ It is a stry abut Ernest Shackletn, ne f the mst famus explrers in the wrld. He started expeditin t the Suth Ple with sme sailrs. They vercame many difficulties and returned hme sund. ④ Hwever, I am afraid that there might be sme grammar mistakes in the script 手稿. Wuld yu be s kind as t crrect the mistakes and plish the language f it?⑤ As this is ur first try, can yu prvide us with prfessinal guidance n hw t make the play mre natural?
Para 3:商定时间+表示感谢① If it is cnvenient（如果方便的话）, may I pay yu a visit at yur ffice next Tuesday t give yu mre details?②If pssible（如果可以的话）, can we meet this Saturday afternn in the schl library. ③ I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take the truble t help me.Lking frward t yur early reply.
Dear Miss Evans, Hw is everything ging! I am writing in sincerity t ask yu a favr regarding a play we adapted accrding t the textbk. We’d like t cmbine yur culture with urs by adapting the classic nvel The Steambat fr a shrt English play. The play is set n a big strm after midnight. On the raft dwn the river navigatin, we see a steambat that is ging t sink. We save a scared by. Hwever, the adaptin is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dn’t want anything inapprpriate t spil the play. S wuld yu please spare sme time t review the draft script attached t this email and make necessary changes? If it is cnvenient, may I pay yu a visit at yur ffice next Tuesday t give yu mre details? Given yur busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if yu culd ffer t give sme prfessinal advice. Lk frward t yur early reply. Best regards!
Dear Miss Kind, I am a senir three student, I am srry t disturb yu , but _______________________________ (你能帮我一个忙吗？) As the summer vacatin is arund the crner, I am planning t find a part-time jb. ______________(但是), my parents d nt apprve f my plan and think that I shuld ___________________________________________ (花更多的时间来学习而不是浪费宝贵的时间在工作上) I dn’t agree with them , because I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ （做一份工作不仅可以帮我赚到更多的零用钱而且还能帮我获得实用的社会技能）I dn’t want t quarrel with them, but what shuld I d abut their disagreement? __________________________________________________________________(如果你能费心给我一些实用的建议， 我将不胜感激。)
culd yu be s kind as t d me a favr
spend mre time studying
rather than wasting my precius time n a jb
taking a jb cannt nly help
me earn sme extra pcket mney but als help me gain practical scial skills
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take the truble t giveme sme practical advice
假如你是李华， 今年9月将赴美国进修学习4个月， 请给你的美国笔友Peter写一封信， 希望他能帮你找一个合租房， 要点如下： ①对房子的要求;②对室友的要求;③表达感谢。
Dear Peter, I am writing t ask whether yu culd d me a favr. This September, I am ging t have a 4-mnth further study in the USA. I wnder if yu culd help me find prper accmmdatin. Abut the flat, can yu find ne with a kitchen? I am nt quite used t the western fd, s I wuld like t ck myself. Besides, Internet cnnectin is a must. As yu knw, sme assignments have t be submitted thrugh the Internet. T lwer the cst, I prefer t share the flat with a rmmate, hpefully, a native English speaker s that I can practise my spken English. What’s mre, I hpe my rmmate is friendly and easy-ging. I wud appreciate it if yu culd take the truble t help me. Lking frward t yur early reply.
（2016年 全国I）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历 (resume)。给外教Mr. Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 (frmat)。
Dear Ms.jenkins,. (说明写信目的) Hw is everything ging these days? I am writing t ask whether yu culd d me a favr. (说明求助内容) With the summer vacatin arund the crner, I am planning t take a part-time jb in rder t gain sme scial experience and imprve my wrk ability. S interested in a psitin in a freign cmpany am I that I’ve already written an applicatin letter and my resume all in English. Hwever, I am afraid that there might be sme grammar mistakes r inapprpriate frmat in the materials that I prepared. (提出请求) Wuld yu be s kind as t crrect the mistakes and imprve the frmat f the applicatin and the resume fr me ? I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take the truble t help me. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Dear Mr. Jenkins, I’ m Li Hua, a student frm yur class. With an applicatin and a resume badly in need f imprvement, I’m writing with anxiety t see if yu culd d me a favr. . T develp my independence and enrich my experience, I am determined t apply fr a part-time jb in a freign cmpany this summer. I have already prepared an applicatin and a resume. Hwever, a little unsure, I sincerely hpe yu culd help me t enhance them, which will create a gd impressin. Therefre, wuld yu be s kind t help me with attached materials, such as the expressin and frmat? Yur generus help and immediate respnse are enthusiastically expected and shall be truly appreciated.
Dear Mr. Jenkins, I’m Li Hua. I am terribly srry t truble yu, but I wnder if yu culd spare sme time t read and plish my jb applicatin and prfile attached t this letter. (陈述申请工作背景信息) With the summer vacatin apprcaching, I mean t take a part-time jb in a well-established freign trade cmpany, aiming at bradening my hrizns and accumulating my wrk experience (补全目的). T gain access t the pprtunity f wrking in the cmpany (补全目的), I am suppsed t submit an applicatin and a persnal prfile written in English. (陈述问题+寻求帮助) Hwever, I am nt cerain whether the materials prepared can reach their standard. Therefre, I am wndering whether yu culd d me a favr.
Enclsed with this letter are the required materials. (需要对方做什么) On the ne hand, wuld yu please kind enugh t plish my expressins s as t make it mre persuasive and appealing? On the ther hand, lacking in previus experience f writing applicatin and resume, I am nt quite sure whether the frmat is crrect. (为何请他帮忙) Such a patient and helpful teacher are yu (倒装句) that yu are bund t cme t my assistance when I am in desperate need f help. Dreaming t becme a prfessinal and remarkable translatr in the future, I cnsider the jb a rattling(=very) valuable prtunity fr me t enhance my ability. Therefre, I wuld really appreciate it if yu culd ffer me yur generus assistance. In anticipatin f yur favrable reply. Sincerely yurs, Li Hua
An alternative flavuring
《绿山墙的安妮》是加拿大女作家露西·莫德·蒙格马利创作的长篇小说，创作于1904年。《绿山墙的安妮》讲述了纯真善良、热爱生活的女主人公小安妮，自幼失去父母，11岁时被绿山墙的马修和玛丽拉兄妹领养，但她个性鲜明，富于幻想，而且自尊自强，凭借自己的刻苦勤奋，不但得到领养人的喜爱，也赢得老师和同学的关心和友谊。成长与梦想是全书的主题，作者以安妮的故事告诉人们：只要胸怀梦想，不懈努力，生活就会丰富多彩，生命就会美丽多姿。
在美丽的爱德华王子岛上，未娶未嫁的兄妹马修和玛丽拉住在一栋有着绿山墙的房子里，随着年事渐渐转高，准备去孤儿院收养一个男孩，便于将来替他们打理农庄上的活计，可是阴差阳错孤儿院送来了一个满头红发、满脸雀斑，又喋喋不休的女孩儿安妮，一天的相处后，马修和玛丽拉决定留下这个能说会道的女孩儿。后来这对兄妹发现安妮生性倔强勤恳、活泼乐观、酷爱幻想、待人真诚；她有着强烈的好奇心，频繁地闯一些无伤大雅的祸，让人不忍责难，反而忍俊不禁。她不似任何意义上的传统女孩儿，从此马修兄妹刻板的生活被彻底颠覆了。安妮激情洋溢、活力四射、略带叛逆的个性感染了身边的每一个人。她聪明勤奋，很快就在学校崭露头角，并赢得了上大学的奖学金；然而她知恩图报，当马修突然去世，绿山墙农庄面临困境时，她毅然放弃去远处女王学院上大学的机会，在附近当了教师，以便照顾年迈体弱的玛丽拉。
Wednesday mrning came. Anne gt up at sunrise because she was t excited t sleep. She planned t make a cake fr Mrs Allan, the best teacher she had ever met, wh was invited ver fr a tea party. When she finally shut the ven dr, she tk a lng breath. “I’m sure I haven’t frgtten anything this time, Marilla. But d yu think it will rise? What if that cake desn’t rise?” “We’ll have plenty withut it,” was Marilla’s uninterested way f lking at, the subject.
The cake did rise, hwever, and came ut f the ven lking perfect. Anne was red-faced with delight and, in imaginatin, saw Mrs Allan eating it and pssibly asking fr anther piece! Mrs Allan arrived and they all enjyed a lvely tea. Everything went well until Anne’s cake was passed. Mrs Allan, having already been helped t a lt f desserts, declined it. But Marilla, seeing the disappintment n Anne’s face, said smilingly:“Oh, yu must take a piece, Mrs Allan. Anne made it specially fr yu, expecting that yu wuld lve it.”
“In that case I must try it,” laughed Mrs Allan. She tk a muthful and a strange expressin crssed her face; nt a wrd did she say, hwever, but cntinued eating. Marilla saw this and hastened (急忙) t taste the cake. “Anne Shirley!” she shuted, “what n earth did yu put int that cake? What flavring did yu use?” “Vanilla /vəˈnɪlə/ (香草精), nly vanilla.” said Anne.“G and bring me the bttle f vanilla yu used.”Anne returned with a small bttle and Marilla tk it and smelled it.
“Mercy n us. Anne, yu’ve flavred that cake with ANODYNE /ˈænədaɪn/ LINIMENT /ˈlɪnəmənt/ (镇痛剂). Why culdn’t yu have smelled it?” Ashamed f her mistake, Anne burst int tears and fled t her rm.
Read fr Characters
Anne: Marrilla: Mrs. Allan:
a girl wh is lvely, straightfrward and grateful fr life
a caring wman
a teacher wh is cnsiderate and respectable
Cnflict:Anne was happy t make a cake fr her belved teacher and expected her t like it. Hwever, she flavured that cake with andyne /ˈænədaɪn/ liniment (镇痛剂/ˈlɪnəmənt/) instead f vanilla (香草精/vəˈnɪlə/) because f her carelessness, which made her ashamed and sad. What made Anne changed her negative emtin?Mrs Allan’s cmfrt/ She made a perfect cake fr Mrs Allan. What did she learn frm this event?Pay attentin t details.Success depends n every detail that seems insignificant.Theme: self grwth
Para1: Sn a light step sunded n the stairs ahd Mrs Allan entered the rm.1) What did Mrs Allan see/ d? Anne的状态描述 (难过)/ Mrs. Allan 安慰她 (语言、神态、动作)2) Hw did Anne respnd and feel? 看见老师进来很愧疚/ 听到老师安慰很感动/ 自责感减轻/ 加重3) What decisin did Anne make? determined t make anther cake fr Mrs. Allan Mrs. Allan was ready t g
Para 2: When Mrs Allan left, Anne turned t Marilla. 1) Why did Anne turned t Marilla? expressed her desire t make anther cake fr Mrs. Allan 表情/ 动作/ 语言2) What wuld Anne say t Marilla? Marilla 很开心，并为自己的粗鲁感到愧疚/ 尴尬 3) What did they d next? made a cake and succeeded, sent it t Mrs Allan and gt her admiratin4) 主题升华：做事情要注意细节
Para 2: When Mrs Allan left, Anne turned t Marilla. 1) Why did Anne say? 表达对Mrs. Allan 行为的感动和尊重2) Hw did Marilla respnd? 表示认同 3) What did they d next? made a cake and succeeded, sent it t Mrs Allan and gt her admiratin4) 主题升华：做事情要注意细节
Sn a light step sunded n the stairs and Mrs Allan entered the rm. Hearing the ftstep appraching, Anne didn't even dare t watch Mrs Allan in the eye, weeping in regret. “It's just a funny mistake that anybdy wuld make. I appreciate yur kindness and thughtfulness. I’d like t try again next time yu make a cake!” said Allan, as she hugged Anne gently. Smething vital, mtivated, leaped frm Allan t Anne at the tuch f her warm arms. Needless t say, Anne was deeply mved, especially Mrs Allan, the teacher she liked best, wh shwed appreciatin fr her. An inner vice tld Anne that she shuld make a cake again. When Mrs Allan left, Anne turned t Marilla. “ I’ll never make the same mistake twice.” Marilla had been wrried abut Anne and was regretted f her cruel wrds, but hearing this, she breathed a sigh f relief and aplgized t Anne. “S, let's wait fr a perfect cake.” Having made the cake tgether, Allan and Marilla immediately sent it t Mrs Allan. Seeing the cake, Mrs Allan was tuched beynd wrds, with tears welling up in her eyes in a flash. She patted Anne n her shulder and invited her t have dinner tgether. Anne felt like she was flating in an cean f happiness fr she gt her favurite teacher’s invitatin. She als realized frm her experience that the ultimate success depends n every detail that seems insignificant.