备战2025年高考二轮复习英语写作练习3　五育之劳育 意外事件（Word版附解析）

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(2024山东临沂二模)
假如你是李华,请你写一篇短文向校英文报Labr and Health栏目投稿,内容包括:
1.一次难忘的家务劳动经历;
2.你的收获和感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
A Memrable Husewrk Experience



参考范文
A Memrable Husewrk Experience
One memrable husewrk experience fr me was that I decided t clean the entire kitchen n my wn.It was a Sunday afternn,and I saw my mther exhausted after a week f hard wrk.Taking the initiative,I started with the dishes and mved n t the cunters,flrs,and even the cabinets.The prcess was bring,and I encuntered stubbrn stains that required extra effrt t remve.
As I wrked,I realized hw much time and effrt my mther spends n maintaining the huse.It gave me a deeper appreciatin fr her dedicatin and hard wrk.Mrever,the sense f accmplishment after seeing the clean and sparkling kitchen was indescribable.It taught me the value f hard wrk and the imprtance f cntributing t the husehld.I’ll always cherish this experience.
1.词汇积累
决定:decide→determine
疲惫不堪的:exhausted→extremely tired
此外:mrever→in additin
成就:accmplishment→achievement
2.高分句型
(1)The prcess was bring,and I encuntered stubbrn stains that required extra effrt t remve.(that引导的限制性定语从句)
(2)As I wrked,I realized hw much time and effrt my mther spends n maintaining the huse.(as引导的时间状语从句和hw much引导的宾语从句)
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024湖南常德一模)
Brandn,a father f tw and an rdinary wrker in a cmpany,was making his way hme n a typical Thursday evening.The sun had just dipped belw the hrizn,casting a warm glw ver the sky.Brandn’s heart was filled with jy and excitement as he was eager t share the news f his recent prmtin with his belved wife and children.Little did he knw that this particular Thursday wuld be anything but rdinary.All f a sudden,there was a faint minus(不祥的) feeling arund him,but he pushed aside any thughts f ptential danger,fcusing instead n getting hme.Hwever,just as he arrived there,a thunderus nise shattered the peaceful silence f the evening.He lked up just in time t see a train running int a truck,sending debris(残骸) flying in all directins.
It was an accident that he had never witnessed befre.Brandn was frzen in shck.It was a messy scene as peple ran frm the dangerus site,hidden behind flames and thick smke.In an instant,everything arund him seemed t be in chas.Peple were screaming and cracks filled the air with the explsive frce.“Get away frm that train!Dn’t g near it!” warned the train cnductr,as he called 911 fr help.Brandn was abut t run away when he heard a cry fr help.Brandn’s instincts kicked in.Withut a secnd thught,he raced twards the vice,pushing thrugh the panicked crwd.His heart punded in the chest as he apprached the crash site.As he came clser,the cries fr help became clearer.They were cming frm the burning truck stuck n the train tracks.He ran up t the windw and saw the yung driver trapped in his seatbelt and held dwn by the steering wheel as the fire clsed in arund him.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Brandn’s mind was racing when he saw the situatin.



The train cnductr came t Brandn and hugged him tightly.



【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Brandn作为一名普通公司员工和两个孩子的父亲,在回家的路上目睹了一场车祸,火车撞上了一辆卡车并发生爆炸。混乱中,他听到了呼救声,没有犹豫地冲向危险现场,发现一名年轻司机被困在燃烧的卡车内,大火正在向他逼近。
【思路分析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当Brandn看到这种情况时,他的头脑飞快地转动着”可知,第一段可描写Brandn内心在权衡到底是救人还是赶紧离开,以及他决定采取行动,开始营救这名司机,并把司机送到安全的地方。
②由第二段首句内容“列车员走到Brandn跟前,紧紧地拥抱了他”可知,第二段可描写列车员赞扬Brandn的英勇行为,以及Brandn内心觉得自己只是做了一个负责的公民应该做的事。
2.续写线索:Brandn的头脑转动——Brandn内心权衡——Brandn开始营救——列车员拥抱Brandn——列车员赞扬Brandn——Brandn的感受
【参考范文】
Brandn’s mind was racing when he saw the situatin.Thughts f his family flashed thrugh his mind as he realized if he did the rescue,he wuld put his life at risk.Brandn tk a deep breath and stepped back.Suddenly a sense f guilt washed ver him at the sight f the trapped man.Brandn knew he had t act.He reached thrugh the windw,ignring the pain frm the burn n the hands.He tried t untie the seatbelt and helped the panicked yung man break away frm the steering wheel.Thankfully,the train cnductr and sme crew members were nw rushing ver t assist.Tgether,they managed t pull the yung man ut thrugh the brken windw and t safety.What a great relief t everyne at the crash site!
The train cnductr came t Brandn and hugged him tightly.The cnductr put his arms arund Brandn,leading him away frm the chas.“Yu just saved mre than ne life.Yur actin is a great example f the value f bravery.Yu’re a true her.What yu did brught warmth t ur hearts and tears t ur eyes.” All f a sudden,thunderus applause burst ut frm the crwds.Brandn lked at the cnductr,a mixture f emtins sweeping acrss his face.In his eyes,he just did what a respnsible citizen shuld d.He was nt a her,and all he culd think abut was getting hme t his family.He had news t share,and nw he had a stry t tell abut hw an rdinary man had dne smething extrardinary.