人教版八年级英语上册 Unit 1Where did you go on vacation 写作学案

这是一份人教版八年级英语上册 Unit 1Where did you go on vacation 写作学案，共4页。
unit 1 Where did you go on vacation单元写作1.写作话题本单元以“节日与假期”为主题，主要围绕一次出行活动展开，是大家非常熟悉的一个写作话题。2.话题分析在本单元话题作文的命题过程中，命题人通常会让你写一篇日记或一封书信来叙述一次集体活动。写这种记叙文时，多用第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时，行文中注意陈述清楚活动的时间、地点、人物、活动的具体内容以及作者的感想。3.经典例题假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩，你们玩得很快乐。请以“My happy weekend”为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。要求:1.80词左右;2.短文必须包含所给提示，但不得逐条翻译。参考词汇: get together, ride, photo, game, picnicMy happy weekend 思维导图 参考句式(1)I went to … (2) We took quite a few photos.(3) It was wonderful. (4) We all had a good time.高分例文My happy weekendLast weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. We enjoyed ourselves very much.①At 8:00 on Sunday morning ②, we got together ③ at the school gate. When all of us arrived, we started. We liked riding, so we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes' ride. we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took quite a few photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic. Everyone ate a lot. We all had a good time.④例文解析①学习本文“开门见山”的写法，引出上周末做的事情。②文中以时间为主线叙述了上个周末发生的事情。③学习文中词组的恰当运用,如 get together、by bike、have a rest、take photos、quite a few等,让行文更加流畅。④学习文中简练的结尾表达，一句话概括了作者对这次活动的感受。易错提醒：该话题作文通常是描述过去发生的事情，因此时态常为一般过去时，写作时需注意保持通篇时态前后一致。4.实践练习在你的成长历程中，总会有些东西让你感到难忘：也许是一次小小的聚会；也许是一本回味无穷的好书；也许是一次留下美好回忆的旅行……请以“My pleasant trip”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：1. 时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；2.不少于 80 词。My pleasant trip 参考答案My pleasant tripI had a pleasant day last Sunday because my classmates and I went to climb the West Hill.We met at the school gate at six in the morning. It was sunny that day. The air was fresh. We were happy, for we could enjoy a day outside.Soon we started. We rode our bikes, singing, talking and laughing all the way.At about nine o'clock we arrived there. We left our bikes at the foot of the hill. Then we began to climb the hill. After we got to the top, we saw small rivers, green crops in the fields below. How beautiful they were!We came back home at half past five in the afternoon. We were tired but happy.作者友情提示：for we could enjoy a day outside.该句中介词for表示原因，翻译成“因为”时间：星期天早上8点集合地点：学校门口路程：骑自行车到达目的地约30分钟活动：拍照、玩游戏、野餐感受：大家都度过了一个快乐的周末……