人教版中考英语写作高分作文秘籍课件

这是一份人教版中考英语写作高分作文秘籍课件，共27页。PPT课件主要包含了Part One，经典例题，未修改的作文，只会写简单句，Part Two，写作步骤，第一步审题和要点，第二步列作提纲， 分 述 ，加修饰词等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假如你校英语角将开展以“如何提升青少年自我保护能力”为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，以“Hw t Prtect Ourselves”为题写一篇英语演讲稿。要点提示:1.提高自我保护意识; 2.不在网上泄露个人隐私; 3.遇到危险时要保持冷静。写作要求:1.包含提示中的所有要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Self-prtectin is imprtant . But hw can we prtect urselves? Here are sme suggestins. First ，we shuld raise ur awareness f self-prtectin. It can be dangerus t g utside alne . We can g ut with family r friends. Secnd, we shuld stay away frm dangerus places like river. Third, dn’t share ur persnal infrmatin n the Internet. Such as addresses, phne numbers, birth dates and schl names . Last but nt least, we try t keep ur cl when facing danger. Remember t call the plice fr help quickily.
Hw t Prtect Ourselves
那如何写一篇高分作文？
多数同学写作文常见病症！
2.字数总不够，不懂扩写
3.逻辑混乱，想到什么写什么，涂改多，卷面乱
4.病句多，中式英语明显
5.作文平平无奇，没有任何亮点，拿不到高分
前提： 1.基础知识要牢固（词汇、短语、语法）
2.学会整理草稿，理清思路
在此基础上，遵守以下写作六个步骤，写高分作文不是问题！
3.平时有积累、背诵好词好句
审--审题审要点，不漏要点
列--列提纲：拟定提纲
扩--扩句子：充实要点
连--连成文：丰富细节
美--美文章：文质兼美
抄--写工整：卷面整洁
总 述 ：青少年安全的重要性
第三、四步：如何扩写＋美化句子？
加修饰词要注意，名词前用 形容词 修饰。名词后可以用介词短语、分词短语修饰动词前用副词修饰形容词前用副词修饰
原句：Self-prtectin is imprtant.
加修饰词：Self-prtectin is quite imprtant fr teenagers.
原句：Here are sme suggestins.
加修饰词：Here are sme useful and practical suggestins.
加状语：Self-prtectin is quite imprtant fr teenagers in daily life.
原句：It can be dangerus t g utside alne .
加状语：It can be dangerus t g utside alne at night.
Self-prtectin is ne f the mst imprtant skills fr teenagers in daily life.
原句：T raise ur awareness f self-prtectin is imprtant.
It’s imprtant fr us t raise ur awareness f self-prtectin.
原句：Dn’t share yur address,phne numbers, birth dates and schl names n the Internet.
动名词做主语＋最高级句型
Sharing infrmatin such as addresses, phne numbers, birth dates and schl names is ne f the biggest risks nline.
原句：When yu facing danger,remember t call the plice.
When yu facing danger,remember t call the plice as sn as pssible.
When yu facing danger,remember t call the plice as sn as pssible s that yu can get help at nce.
原句：Ging utside with yur friends r family is a gd way t prtect yuself.
I think that ging utside with yur friends r family is a gd way t prtect yuself.
原句： away frm places with warning signs
away frm the places that with warning signs
Safety cmes first. 安全第一
Better safe than srry.小心使得万年船。
巧用过渡语，连接词,连句成文
并列关系：and，r，either ... r，bth ... and，转折关系：but，hwever，条件关系：if, whether，时间关系：when，as，befre，after， while，因果关系：because，as，since，fr，s
写工整：重新抄写文章，卷面整洁
1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。
2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的感觉。
3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。
时态是否正确主谓是否一致要点是否全面人称是否正确语序是否有问题语言是否符合习惯　固定短语是否恰当
Self-prtectin is ne f the mst imprtant skills fr teenagers. But hw can we prtect urselves? Here are sme useful and practical suggestins. First f all, it’s imprtant fr us t raise ur awareness f self-prtectin. It can be dangerus t g utside alne at night. If we have t stay utdrs, make sure there is an adult arund. Besides, we shuld guard against any pssible danger arund us and always stay away frm places with warning signs. Secndly, dn’t let ut ur persnal infrmatin n the Internet. Sharing infrmatin such as addresses, phne numbers, birth dates and schl names is ne f the biggest risks nline. Last but nt least, we’re suppsed t keep ur cl when facing danger. Remember t call the plice fr help as sn as pssible s that yu can get help at nce .
当前，各学校正开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息，以”Grwing up with Gd Bks" 为题，写一篇约80个单词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
要求:1.倡议书应包括所有要点;2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:knwledge知识;pen ne's mind开阔视野;classical经典的
My dear friend, Reading is quite imprtant. If yu ften read bks in yur free time, yu can get mre useful knwledge and pen yur mind. When yu are sad, reading will make yu happy and relax. But these days , mre and mre peple dn’t realize the imprtance f reading. They always spend t much time watching TV and shrt vide r playing cmputer game when they are free. S they dn’t have time t read and imprve themselves . In my pinin, reading likes talking with all kinds f nble peple and it’s a meaningful thing. S, we shuld read mre gd bks and classical bks instead f playing fr fun. All in all, let reading be a part f ur life!